Ieldra2 wrote...
What gives me a little hope is that the missing-but-implied-to-be-present parts of Miranda's story are all heavily plot-related. Possibly things weren't quite clear at the time when the leaked version was produced. I can even imagine those parts being written by a different writer.
All of the above is certainly possible. I guess that would be the "critical path" and so handled by Mac Walters?
The main plausible hope for improvement is that Miranda has something significant going on in the background that will make its presence felt in the endgame, but that hadn't been ironed out yet at the time of the leak. There's definitely something missing there, and the general lack of focus as to what Miranda is actually doing, beyond the personal, stands out as very different from the way the other characters are handled.
Another possibility, I suppose (though this is perhaps more a stretch), is that the "professional" side of things is going to be different depending on a big choice somewhere, such as the CB choice. In which case it might be missing here for other reasons.
Xilizhra wrote...
I don't think it's that out of character for Miranda to seek out the personal at this point. She's just realized, presumably, that she ran from her father to a group that turned out to be just as bad, and she'd been fooled by it for decades. What does human advancement mean when the advancers are helping the Reapers burn the galaxy? How much that was taught to her was ever true? It's not an easy series of questions, and it doesn't surprise me that she'd seek out that which she can rely on.
It's not out of character for the personal to be dealt with, but it is out of character for the other stuff to be ignored. None of the questions you're describing are addressed in the leak. By which I don't mean they aren't resolved (one can imagine that they would be difficult to resolve). I mean they are never raised.
What you are describing (Miranda being faced with a difficult series of questions) is exactly what should be present in the script, but isn't.
For example, has she realized, as you suggest, that Cerberus is not what she believed it to be? Is that bothering her? The problem is: there's no way to tell from the script if any of this has crossed her mind at all.
Modifié par flemm, 27 novembre 2011 - 06:38 .