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[alikey00]

android654 wrote...

The 2nd is more true to form, but I'm not fond of the 50's hairstyle she's using there. She looks more like what you'd expect her mother to look like.

She is very nice with a ponytail like Alternative hairstyle

[flemm]

This is the one I meant...

[who would know]

I like the second one, including the hair. It seems more like a tongue in cheek reference to the whole Bond girl/super-spy side to the character. It's still sexy, but it's more tasteful and just flat out more interesting to look at than her current catsuit.

[who would know]

flemm wrote...

This is the one I meant...

This one is harder to like for me because of the non-neutral drawing style. If it was drawn with more of an eye for realism and anatomy like the ones on the last page, I'd be more easily able to compare it. In short, it's fine art, but it doesn't really work as concept art.

[flemm]

who would know wrote...
This one is harder to like for me because of the non-neutral drawing style. If it was drawn with more of an eye for realism and anatomy like the ones on the last page, I'd be more easily able to compare it. In short, it's fine art, but it doesn't really work as concept art.

I see what you mean. Also, I think one could make the case that the uniform design is a bit... busy overall. But still pretty sweet imo.

[viserion]

 These aren't new shots of Miranda, but I hope you guys will enjoy them either way. And the lighting's better this time; none were taken inside the Kodiak! (Unlike last time.) Took these with my Shepard, Neil. (Yes, I play Sheploo.)

[viserion]

flemm wrote...

This is the one I meant...

*picture of Miranda here*

I prefer this one over the other two mostly because it looks like it can offer more protection compared to the first one 'who would know' shared. The second one looked like it was painted on.

Modifié par Wintersect, 31 décembre 2011 - 07:01 .

[trynell]

Wintersect wrote...

 These aren't new shots of Miranda, but I hope you guys will enjoy them either way. And the lighting's better this time; none were taken inside the Kodiak! (Unlike last time.) Took these with my Shepard, Neil. (Yes, I play Sheploo.)

You have very good photos 

[alikey00]

trynell wrote...

Wintersect wrote...

 These aren't new shots of Miranda, but I hope you guys will enjoy them either way. And the lighting's better this time; none were taken inside the Kodiak! (Unlike last time.) Took these with my Shepard, Neil. (Yes, I play Sheploo.)

You have very good photos 

Don't be new images but it's so good. I'm hope in that soon we will have a new image.

[Rdubs]

The second chapter of Aftermath is up.
http://www.fanfictio...ffect_Aftermath

It's becoming clear a big reason why I wanted to start writing this was to explore some of the ME universe technology, I really get a kick out of it.  Future chapters will have firefights and stuff, but this first challenge is more technical.  And I want Shepard and Miranda to be all into each other.

Thanks for those on this forum who offered their support, gave me the boost I needed to do this second chapter.

[android654]

flemm wrote...

This is the one I meant...

If BW hadn't decided on a permanent look for her, this is a good one. Even better if they changed the color scheme a bit and gave her some sort of position within The Alliance.

[flemm]

Rdubs wrote...
Thanks for those on this forum who offered their support, gave me the boost I needed to do this second chapter.

Thanks for posting it. As somebody who has never written fanfic and really doesn't read much of it, I think it's worth pointing out that I think one reason people don't comment is that they are not really sure what to say.

Constructively commenting on these things is almost like a separate skill in and of itself

[AgitatedLemon]

android654 wrote...

flemm wrote...

This is the one I meant...

If BW hadn't decided on a permanent look for her, this is a good one. Even better if they changed the color scheme a bit and gave her some sort of position within The Alliance.

Damn. This is a good look. It fits the right niche between sexy and stylish, without sacrificing taste.

My god, that sounded horrendously fruity.

[JeffZero]

I need to catch up on jtav's and then I'll work on yours, Rdubs.

I don't write fanfiction and I don't read much either, flemm. I do get tempted sometimes, either with Star Trek, or with Mass Effect, or with one of a half a dozen other franchises. Mostly I just keep to my own universes though. No one's toes to step on.

[AgitatedLemon]

flemm wrote...

Rdubs wrote...
Thanks for those on this forum who offered their support, gave me the boost I needed to do this second chapter.

Thanks for posting it. As somebody who has never written fanfic and really doesn't read much of it, I think it's worth pointing out that I think one reason people don't comment is that they are not really sure what to say.

Constructively commenting on these things is almost like a separate skill in and of itself

Constructively commenting on things in general seems to be a seperate skill in of itself, given the general human nature of wanting to **** and moan about everything...

But anyways, jtav, coming from someone who absolutely despises fanfic's and the people who write them (No offense, bad experiences in the past), yours are good to read.

[who would know]

AgitatedLemon wrote...

My god, that sounded horrendously fruity.

[AgitatedLemon]

Wintersect wrote...

 These aren't new shots of Miranda, but I hope you guys will enjoy them either way. And the lighting's better this time; none were taken inside the Kodiak! (Unlike last time.) Took these with my Shepard, Neil. (Yes, I play Sheploo.)


*snip*

Amazing how better lighting can make the difference between "GAHH LOOK AWAY" and "D'aww:wub:"

[alikey00]

AgitatedLemon wrote...

My god, that sounded horrendously fruity.

very good phrase:P

Modifié par alikey00, 31 décembre 2011 - 08:50 .

[AgitatedLemon]

alikey00 wrote...

AgitatedLemon wrote...

My god, that sounded horrendously fruity.

very good phrase:P

IKR. Aren't I a badass?

[flemm]

JeffZero wrote...
 Mostly I just keep to my own universes though. No one's toes to step on.

Well, that's true, but, there's another side to it, that I envy sometimes when talking with people who do write fanfic, because it's almost as if they've taken a given world and its characters, and appropriated them, to the point where what the professional creators do almost becomes irrelevant.

Which can sometimes be a nice mindset to have

[trynell]

flemm wrote...

This is the one I meant...

AWWW She looks very beautiful

Modifié par trynell, 01 janvier 2012 - 12:50 .

[jtav]

flemm wrote...

JeffZero wrote...
 Mostly I just keep to my own universes though. No one's toes to step on.

Well, that's true, but, there's another side to it, that I envy sometimes when talking with people who do write fanfic, because it's almost as if they've taken a given world and its characters, and appropriated them, to the point where what the professional creators do almost becomes irrelevant.

Which can sometimes be a nice mindset to have

That's why I wrote Shadow War. Whatever happens, there's a universe where Miranda's happily married and running humanity's STG. Robert Eldfell is also less easily pigeonholed as a villain than Mr. Lawson. And my version isn't less real than ME3. It just cost less to make.

Actually, I'd like some feedback on my version of Miranda's father if that's all right. His cha[ter is up next, though I don't have much worth posting.

[flemm]

Will do. Looking forward to it!

[jtav]

No excerpt as yet, but the key difference is this: he loves Miranda insofar as he's capable of the emotion. He wanted a superhero, basically, and figured pushing her to the limit was the way to do that. She fought back and succeeded despite the health problems his experiments inflicted. The proudest day of his life was when she ran, only he didn't count on her taking Oriana. So, now, he's rushing to find her before the "coddling" of a normal family renders her useless. He's also sniffing around the idea of another daughter with Shepard's eezo tolerance spliced in.

[AgitatedLemon]

trynell wrote...

flemm wrote...

This is the one I meant...

AWWW She looks very beautiful

Now that I look closer, her nose is strange looking. Like it's kinda lopsided :|