Ajna wrote...
Kyria Nyriese wrote...
Yeah, I'll try to read a story that has a lot of mistakes but I just can't get the immersion there.Ajna wrote...
Nah I liked being outranked by him, LOVED it even!TamiBx wrote...
I know!! Mistakes all over the place, no commas, no periods...I couldn't keep on reading itPhoenix NL wrote...
That's always the issue, you can't lose yourself in the story if there are too many mistakes.
Btw, am I the only one who did not really appreciate it that Kaidan became a Major? I don't know, I liked being his superior officer...
I'm with Ajna I loved the fact that he outranked Shepard. I thought it was great.
I think me and Kyria are on the same page here
You guys are just...yeah...I'l just...excuse me while I go over there and blush a little...





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