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Aurora313 wrote...

Gotta admit, I like the idea that Kaidan was that sort of 'ugly duckling' kind of kid. Ya know, not impressive or physically imposing in his youth, but when he enlisted, he grew into the sexy, dreamy eyed man we see now.

My Fem!Shep spent most of her childhood on the streets being used and abused for her biotics and other things. Bout the only men who treated her decently were Kaidan, Hackett and Anderson(And her twin brother in my Duet headcanon). And she was highly suspect of all three for a while. Thought they all had seperate agendas - in a way, shes kind of like Jack, but unlike Jack, she wanted to escape the life of crime and managed to join the Alliance.

So when Kaidan fumbled the line 'That's what I lov - Appreciate about you.', that's when she consciously decided 'Yep, I'm gonna love this guy even if it kills me.'


Why have I never read your fic?!

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Is EDI bleeding oil? Or what is that?

I was always put off about Cortez' romance. To me it just felt like Shepard was taking advantage of him. I couldn't do it. I don't really think it's fair to compare it with romances like Kaidan's though since he only shows up in the last game. Would've been nice if it was a one or two game build up. Let him have time to move on.

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txmn1016 wrote...

Kunari801 wrote...
I guess we'll see next chapter of Jungle World how well I do with m/m romance scene.  Don't expect much, I'm just a guy.  :lol: :lol: :D


Is this a promise of "steamy bits"??:lol:   


Yes.  Should be ready to publish Thurs/Fri.   

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Well, (1)Sheploo/Kaidan are pretty much the hottest/most adorable couple to ever exist, (2) women make incredible fanfic writers (not sure why they're so awesome at writing slash fics but I'm sure it has something to do with (most of) them being really attracted to men and thus knowing how they work physically and romantically).

But yeah, glad I'm not alone. Most days I prefer Mshep/Kaidan to Fshep/Kaidan.  And yeah, I know that makes me a traitor to my own gender. And I couldn't give even a single ****.  :lol:

I think it's pretty funny that there are so many good female writers for the Mshenko fics. Especially when they get into the more steamy bits, I'm like wait... how do you know all this you don't even have a pe...!?


I guess we'll see next chapter of Jungle World how well I do with m/m romance scene.  Don't expect much, I'm just a guy.  :lol: :lol: :D


I really like Jungle World too so I'm sure you'll do just fine, my three favs are Jungle World, Tenth Street Reds, and Four Years later.  I like them all for different reasons.  Plus yours is the only one that actually takes place right after the ending to the game and I love reading about what's going on while they're stranded.

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txmn1016 wrote...

Aurora313 wrote...

Gotta admit, I like the idea that Kaidan was that sort of 'ugly duckling' kind of kid. Ya know, not impressive or physically imposing in his youth, but when he enlisted, he grew into the sexy, dreamy eyed man we see now.

My Fem!Shep spent most of her childhood on the streets being used and abused for her biotics and other things. Bout the only men who treated her decently were Kaidan, Hackett and Anderson(And her twin brother in my Duet headcanon). And she was highly suspect of all three for a while. Thought they all had seperate agendas - in a way, shes kind of like Jack, but unlike Jack, she wanted to escape the life of crime and managed to join the Alliance.

So when Kaidan fumbled the line 'That's what I lov - Appreciate about you.', that's when she consciously decided 'Yep, I'm gonna love this guy even if it kills me.'


Why have I never read your fic?!


Because it's not that developed yet. There are only four chapters so far, and only two of them are her perspective... I've started back at Uni so I haven't had time to update them much... if I had started it this time six months ago, it'd be heaps further along. But alas, procrastination.

Its in my signature if you want to read it. Essentially the tag line in my signature describes the main character's dynamic. My Bro!Shep's a vanguard, he's paragade but quite hot-blooded. My FemShep is the ruthlessly effecient Sentinal Renegon. In short, Bro!Shep = brute strength; Femshep = Finesse

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Aurora313 wrote...

txmn1016 wrote...

Aurora313 wrote...

Gotta admit, I like the idea that Kaidan was that sort of 'ugly duckling' kind of kid. Ya know, not impressive or physically imposing in his youth, but when he enlisted, he grew into the sexy, dreamy eyed man we see now.

My Fem!Shep spent most of her childhood on the streets being used and abused for her biotics and other things. Bout the only men who treated her decently were Kaidan, Hackett and Anderson(And her twin brother in my Duet headcanon). And she was highly suspect of all three for a while. Thought they all had seperate agendas - in a way, shes kind of like Jack, but unlike Jack, she wanted to escape the life of crime and managed to join the Alliance.

So when Kaidan fumbled the line 'That's what I lov - Appreciate about you.', that's when she consciously decided 'Yep, I'm gonna love this guy even if it kills me.'


Why have I never read your fic?!


Because it's not that developed yet. There are only four chapters so far, and only two of them are her perspective... I've started back at Uni so I haven't had time to update them much... if I had started it this time six months ago, it'd be heaps further along. But alas, procrastination.

Its in my signature if you want to read it. Essentially the tag line in my signature describes the main character's dynamic. My Bro!Shep's a vanguard, he's paragade but quite hot-blooded. My FemShep is the ruthlessly effecient Sentinal Renegon. In short, Bro!Shep = brute strength; Femshep = Finesse


I've already started reading it.  :D

I personally love AU fics where femshep/broshep are twins or brother and sister so I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with that.  "Sister Complex" is really good (although Kaidan is only perpipherally involved so not really relevant to this thread) but I haven't seen a whole lot of other fics that do this. 

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AndreasShepard wrote...

Kunari801 wrote...

AndreasShepard wrote...

txmn1016 wrote...
Well, (1)Sheploo/Kaidan are pretty much the hottest/most adorable couple to ever exist, (2) women make incredible fanfic writers (not sure why they're so awesome at writing slash fics but I'm sure it has something to do with (most of) them being really attracted to men and thus knowing how they work physically and romantically).

But yeah, glad I'm not alone. Most days I prefer Mshep/Kaidan to Fshep/Kaidan.  And yeah, I know that makes me a traitor to my own gender. And I couldn't give even a single ****.  :lol:

I think it's pretty funny that there are so many good female writers for the Mshenko fics. Especially when they get into the more steamy bits, I'm like wait... how do you know all this you don't even have a pe...!?


I guess we'll see next chapter of Jungle World how well I do with m/m romance scene.  Don't expect much, I'm just a guy.  :lol: :lol: :D


I really like Jungle World too so I'm sure you'll do just fine, my three favs are Jungle World, Tenth Street Reds, and Four Years later.  I like them all for different reasons.  Plus yours is the only one that actually takes place right after the ending to the game and I love reading about what's going on while they're stranded.  


Ah, thanks Andreas, I love your artwork!   I'm not going to get too graphic.  The chapter's first draft is done, just cleaning it up and expanding content. 

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txmn1016 wrote...
I've already started reading it.  :D

I personally love AU fics where femshep/broshep are twins or brother and sister so I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with that.  "Sister Complex" is really good (although Kaidan is only perpipherally involved so not really relevant to this thread) but I haven't seen a whole lot of other fics that do this. 


Next Chapter follows him and Katelyn, so Both VSs will be heavily involved in the next two chapters. Don't forget to drop a review. :)

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Kunari801 wrote...

txmn1016 wrote...

Kunari801 wrote...
I guess we'll see next chapter of Jungle World how well I do with m/m romance scene.  Don't expect much, I'm just a guy.  :lol: :lol: :D


Is this a promise of "steamy bits"??:lol:   


Yes.  Should be ready to publish Thurs/Fri.   


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Aurora313 wrote...

txmn1016 wrote...
I've already started reading it.  :D

I personally love AU fics where femshep/broshep are twins or brother and sister so I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with that.  "Sister Complex" is really good (although Kaidan is only perpipherally involved so not really relevant to this thread) but I haven't seen a whole lot of other fics that do this. 


Next Chapter follows him and Katelyn, so Both VSs will be heavily involved in the next two chapters. Don't forget to drop a review. :)


Will do ;)

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missed some night chats due to hard attempts to go to sleep early (almost suceeded) 8P

I don't know if I can express my feelings/opinions in proper English - but to me he was dull: the way he talks, he talks and talks but never say something meaningful or even remotely touching.

Question to you - how often do YOU "say something meaningful and remotely touching" to person you've known for 3 years, which knows you (and which you also know)? I mean - in common talks, not at some key points. "Being dull" is totally out of my ME3-Kaidan-related issues list.

Mimitochan:

Kaidan from ME3 is "grown-up" ME1 Kaidan, but mostly, Kaidan caricature and Kaidan fan service (evac scene).

Evac is non Kaidan-specific, so, considering overall romance statistics we could even think about servicing one "I'm-yours" asari fancamp. 8P I know about mshep's ILY, but I doubt those were reason here. And rest of 3rd game hardly can be considered "Kaidanites fanservice". Though I know that Jackolites or Miranda...er..how do they call themselves?..lovers will object.

I... really don't feel BW did care about Kaidan. I don't think they really loved him. And I think it's about the same for Ash.

Bloody VS- syndrom, yes. "On your screens since ME2 Horizon-1". Two hell different characters fit into single slot, supposed to make same things and say much same stuff. Ugly, awful, but saves from extra writing and animation.

Probably, Alenko got more luck here - "VS" role screws him less than Ashley. I believe that within limits of this BW "feature" Kaidan got best he could. On Mars he sounds pretty much same as that very person who once said "A little too extreme" line back on Eden Prime. Cerberus-talk was not bad. Hospital was too neutral, but ok. Coup coud be much better, but the whole mission just..meh. Cereal Killer™, maniac Udina...

For me this "caricature" feeling comes mostly from stupid things like writing reports or playing poker with Vega, barely turning his head to "romance-locked" faightful Shepard after close combating Reaper or Thessia. And Apollo scene sounds not quite right, but, surprisingly, that's more because of femShep. I'm not seeing anything wrong about Kaidan there. But what she sais and how she intonates - I don't like it. Sexy times...ME1 cut is best of the best (sorry for you, msheps). It was much like "let'sbangok".

And, yeah, I remember "in case of emergency - use your imagination".

Just gimme back my dialogue wheel and make long romance(=faithful since ME1) matter, and bring some romance-specific stuff into intermission lines. Will never happen, not even for Liara - I know, but with all mentioned I'd, probably, be happy...more or less...

Modifié par Nrieh, 25 juillet 2012 - 07:52 .


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You know what would've made me happy? If I could've send him to Hackett, let him do things on his own but still continue the romance.

Hey, let's use omnitool video/voice chat, let him give you updates on what's going on out there and give his opinion on things like he used to (I believe that's what most of us were missing, his input after missions). Maybe let him join forces with you for one more mission. But let him be a f***ing Spectre in his own right. Meet him for a "date" (and the obligatory sexytimes) and then in the end say goodbye.

Hm, sounds a bit like Miranda's ME3 character arc ... only done better.

Considering how much Bioware screwed up on many fronts I'm glad we got what we've got.

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klarabella wrote...

You know what would've made me happy? If I could've send him to Hackett, let him do things on his own but still continue the romance.

Hey, let's use omnitool video/voice chat, let him give you updates on what's going on out there and give his opinion on things like he used to (I believe that's what most of us were missing, his input after missions). Maybe let him join forces with you for one more mission. But let him be a f***ing Spectre in his own right. Meet him for a "date" (and the obligatory sexytimes) and then in the end say goodbye.

Hm, sounds a bit like Miranda's ME3 character arc ... only done better.

Considering how much Bioware screwed up on many fronts I'm glad we got what we've got.


Oh, this would have been very cool.

I did think that was odd, suddenly make him a Spectre and then have him... running around with the other human Spectre.  Meet up with each other on the Citadel a couple times, call each other to compare missions/trade info.  I do love having Kaidan in my squad of course, but this would have been a fun alternative.

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Kaidan is the only romance option I can see my John with (maybe Liara). Kaidan is so damn sweet in ME3 he gave me diabetes.

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You know what would've made me happy? If I could've send him to Hackett, let him do things on his own but still continue the romance.

Well, no one dragged him aboard, it was his decision, he came to docking bay, and he asked first. And who am I to reject Kaidan Alenko?! ;)

I understand what you mean, but I see no problem here. Shepard stilll has options to set him free and all independant...but it's wartime, so there are litle chances they will ever meet again. By the way, just curious - you don't have him in London if you send him away, do you? Can you at least call him?

Also, as I mentioned - it was his own initiative after all. He'd been on his own long enough. It's not like he's sneaking into Shep's shadow to become humble Lt once again to me. He knows Shep might use him (no, you, dirty! I was talking about his combat experience 8P).

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Nrieh wrote...
Can you at least call him?


I've also always wondered this.  I'm guessing not though.  I'm thinking that the option to send them to Hackett was an out for players who hated these characters and never wanted to see them again. 

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I'm thinking that the option to send them to Hackett was an out for players who hated these characters and never wanted to see them again.

Don't you think that coup moment suit those better?

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Some people might not want them around, but also might not want to kill them.

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txmn1016 wrote...

Kunari801 wrote...

txmn1016 wrote...

Kunari801 wrote...
I guess we'll see next chapter of Jungle World how well I do with m/m romance scene.  Don't expect much, I'm just a guy.  :lol: :lol: :D


Is this a promise of "steamy bits"??:lol:   


Yes.  Should be ready to publish Thurs/Fri.   


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Reading smut during my lunch break ftw


On my proof read there is a section in the middle that got dropped somehow.   So I've outlined it and will hopefully have that secton done in time for the Thurs/Fri.  

This next chapter continues the emotional swing Kaidan was thrown into the last few chapters, but also begins the upswing.  It also starts a romance between two of the characters. 

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I'm not seeing anything wrong about Kaidan there. But what she sais and how she intonates - I don't like it. Sexy times...ME1 cut is best of the best (sorry for you, msheps). It was much like "let'sbangok".

If you modify the play-through, the initial scene is simply rendered character models. Thus.. the hottest part of the romance is fully experienceable with Mshep. It's only the CGI afterwards that reminds you this is all an illusion, and to that I simply alt-Tab and make-believe it never happened Posted Image

That scene (and it is HOT) was always enough for me, because the CGI was short and dark anyway. So I have no regrets.

Kaidan still wakes up in shepard's bed with him dressed (meh..) starring at him too, so it works.

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blmlozz wrote...

I'm not seeing anything wrong about Kaidan there. But what she sais and how she intonates - I don't like it. Sexy times...ME1 cut is best of the best (sorry for you, msheps). It was much like "let'sbangok".

If you modify the play-through, the initial scene is simply rendered character models. Thus.. the hottest part of the romance is fully experienceable with Mshep. It's only the CGI afterwards that reminds you this is all an illusion, and to that I simply alt-Tab and make-believe it never happened Posted Image

That scene (and it is HOT) was always enough for me, because the CGI was short and dark anyway. So I have no regrets.

Kaidan still wakes up in shepard's bed with him dressed (meh..) starring at him too, so it works.


Yeah a Mod'ed ME1 still works and yes, the ME1 romance nice was great!  

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Mimitochan wrote...

I want know what you guys think about Cortez' romance!! But I need to go to bed... Goodnight! Sweet Kaidan dreams... Also, i never thought I would be staring at so many fish tank light shed scenes in my whole life. Cheers.

Loveeeeeeee Steve and his romance <333 Of course I would always want more, same with Kaidan (the lack of full romance conversation between the date and pre-Cronos sex scene bugs me with all new ME3 romances) but he such a great guy :wub:

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If you modify the play-through, the initial scene is simply rendered character models. Thus.. the hottest part of the romance is fully experienceable with Mshep. It's only the CGI afterwards that reminds you this is all an illusion, and to that I simply alt-Tab and make-believe it never happened

well...then good for you, though you have to deal with some prerendered femshep anyway. But that was not the point, I just wanted to say how much I lo...appreciate all of ME1 romance. <-)

ps: and I just found a link for free "bring down the sky"...what a wonderful coincidence...hehe. As if I needed any "official" reason to replay... Only question is - can I keep my career and shep model, but drop down all the skills and powers? I'd like to keep my current femshep, and start "fresh" run at the same time...I hope you understand what I'm talking about...

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EDIT> This one needs to pe on ToP!!!!

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Yes Kaidan, raise your hands up.

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blmlozz wrote...

Mimitochan wrote...

Well, I agree with you, I have a lot to complain about ME3, but I have yet enough energy/motivation to b*tch about it here.

My "oh this thread again" time may come, but in the meantime, I feel satisfied on the overall about the way Kaidan was treated (everything IsaacShep said), actually, I feel somehow relieved about it compared to a lot of other aspects of the game and characters.
Still, the Mars part fits perfectly with my headcanon, and it must be my favourite Shenko moment.
I won't lie, I loved romantic times with Kaidan, but they just feel aloof or very predictable.

I agree 100%.

I believe it would be nothing new to say ME3 felt on the whole as a less polished product than it's precedessors, Perhapes that's because they had to stuff so much more content in there and quality suffers in the reality of vast amounts of quantity.

That said, compared to the ME2 Characters, we got the better part of the deal. I expected we would given we got nothing at all in ME2, but if we had a time to hold out for a better cut of the writter's time, ME3 would be it. How pissed do you think any of the ME2 L/I's are? Espically Thane, or Jacob L/I'ers? We get to be with Kaidan from the get go- Tali people don't get to see her until half-way through and then they had to settle for a stock photo? <_<

The only people that got a decent deal were Liara, Garrus, and the VS's.. and if you didn't romance Garrus in ME2? you're SOL. 

Cortez the only other romance worth mentioning, and I've discussed my view of that arc and why I dislike it. 


You know guys, i think i haven't the slightest idea what the Italian chick really meant Posted ImagePosted ImagePosted Image 

About the caricature and fan service part, I suppose that all sequels have the same issues.
What I meant about "fan service", and then, maybe it's the wrong word, is that ME1 was something offered to the player, an experience, an interactive story, a journey you could take part in. Something... elaborate, yes "polished"!
I won't talk about ME2, because ME2 & ME3 really work as a pair in my mind. If ME3 had been a genuine conclusion, a real 3rd chapter, i would have said otherwise.

I'll just give an example to explain my view, for instance, take the Shrek series. To me, Shrek was really refreshing, something very consistent and well executed which absolutely didn't need any sequel. From Shrek 2 on, even though it kept technically improving, I felt all the fun was lost and the originality, because instead of telling us a story, giving us a new look on the well-known characters, you blatantly feel they really thought hard about what people would like to see and put it on screen. So it's really more more more, but not really quality, and nothing new, not actual work on the story and the characters.

I feel the same about ME2 & ME3. To be honest, I thought that ME1 was such a satisfying and perfect experience, I feel that it really didn't need a sequel. So that set the expectations pretty high for me.
I feel the reason for this is not the character writing at all, nor the v/o, that's why it's difficult to explain why Kaidan is somewhat... satisfyingly disappointing if that makes sense?

To me, this dumbed down feeling comes from the problem with the two main components of the game :
  > storytelling: it is weak. I mean, I really couldn't care less what happens in ME2 or ME3, seriously. And also, endings. ME2 is a joke in that aspect, a long string of Pokemon missions to collect them all squad members.
  > gameplay: ME3 is hardly the same type of game as ME1! Can it even still be called a RPG??? And the auto-dialogue hurt the characters, a lot!

So the character writing, and the dialogues actually, that's propably the best part from Kaidan in ME3 - and that include Sbarge's voice. I think the execution was rather well done, it's the intent that's faulty. The very content of the scenes, as elements of the gameplay mechanics, the way they articulate, that's what somewhat awkward, what feels artifical.
 
@Nrieh: I quite liked "seeing" Kaidan play poker and other boring stuff, it was refreshing, and also... he swears > it's a human being! If there's something I feel they really did good in ME3, is showing all the little pictures that fit in the big one. With the war going on, you have that feeling of emergency, and yet, your Shep takes the time to solve small problems for people, and also to relax a bit. I think the same can be said about every character - the shore leaves are really nice on the overall. (I LOVED the Garrus' one!)

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