Helmnath wrote...
hope you enjoy.... it ended up being quite a bit longer than my last chapter
18 pages doesn't seem a lot when its all condensed and put into plain text lol
Well I certainly enjoyed it! My only criticism is that a new speaker should really go on a new line - it makes the dialogue a little easier to follow.
Everything else though was top-notch. Your representation of the characters matches the lore really well. If you can hear yourself saying it in the VA's voice, then you know it's good!

I have to ask, was Grima a Lord of the Rings reference?
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Regarding armaments, you've got the best combo right there, but also try out the particle rifle with her. That thing deals huge damage during sustained fire.
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Well, my download is now finished and I think I can go to bed without the fear of burning the house down. Whatever helps you sleep at night, right?
Modifié par Hellfire257, 13 avril 2012 - 12:52 .