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[Totally Not Swaggacide]

Great dialogue

[Sgt Reed 24]

Mr. Brainheart wrote...

CptData wrote...

Do it.

We Ash fans are a bit underrepresented, therefore, everyone, write down why you love Ash so much or draw fanart. Brainheart, you're usually doing a great fanart job, same to Badpie, AD and the guys I didn't name *g*. For the writing stuff, I definitely want to see Aurora.

Keep it at a page length maximum.

Make it happen, fellow Ashleymancers
Ash is worth it.

So it's gotta be Ash Shepard focussed right? I'll have a brainstorm...

What is this about?

[Rudy Lis]

Transcript from conversation with friend, on one of possible "missing" dialogues. after Ash return to Normandy. Several parts are lost in translation (idioms mostly):

Shepard approaches bulkhead, mirrors Ash's pose and turns his head to Ash.
Ash, confused: What?
Shepard silently look at her. T-zone only. Could be done via camera zoom.
Ash, even more confused: What?
Shepard continues to silently look at her and perform fast scan, from head to feet then back to head.
Ash, still confused, slightly more irritated: Why you staring at me?
Now Shepard stares at her eyes.
Ash unable to widthstand it, turns her eyes away. With broken voice, barely audible (dry throat and all that): Skipper...
Shepard, comforting tone: Ash... It's been years...
Ash interrupts, attempting to clear throat, but sore throat and breaking voice are still present: Years?! We've talked just several minutes ago on the Ci...
Shepard stikes "mentor's" pose (a-la Ash's hangover scene), extremely politely, yet with barely hidden irony: If I recall correctly, someone - brown-eyed brunette human spectre, in very that docking cradle on Citadel asked me to forget events from not so distance past. And, since not long before that we decided to forget events from a little bit more distant past, that leaves our last meeting back on old Normandy when I gave you order to evacuate. If my basic arithmetic skills are still present *mumbles under his breath, not loud, yet distinctive, with barely hidden smile and humor* - I don't know, I was dead for two years, maybe I forget something - that happened several years ago.
Ash, crushed, almost whisper/moans: Whaddya want?
Shepard crosses his arms across his chest and supports bulkhead again: Hug.
Ash jumps up, irritated, angered, if not infuriated: Hug?!
Shepard lowers his arms, makes few steps toward Ash, speaks calmly, like he did back in ME1, after Virmire: Hug. It's been years, don't I deserve one small hug?
Ash opens mouth, but can't say anything, just shakes her head.
Shepard shows index finger: One hug, Ash. Not kiss, not lapdance (Shepard mimics Ash's dance moves from ME1, pointing out that he actually can dance, just don't like/wants). Just. One. Hug.
Ash: I... I need some time... Alone.
Shepard, mimic checking wrist watch: 1 hug 60 seconds ago and 55 seconds ago I'd been long gone.
Ash speechlessly feel on couch, wraps her hands around her temples.
Shepard smirks, snorts, moves to door, near door, before it's opens, he stops, turns his head toward Ashley: Ash?
Ashley shows no reaction.
Shepard adding some steel into voice: Ash!
Ashley turns her head, on her face we could see sadness, anger and confusion, yet tone is totally killed: What?!
Shepard mimics famous female look over the shoulder, with playfully moving brows and staring eyes (I don't know how you westernes call it, but if you saw one (especially if it was targeted at you, you know what I mean), playfully flaps his eyes several times and playfully and softly says: Hellcat, eh?
Shepard then smiles, winks and make step toward door. While door is opening, Ash springs up from her places, rushes toward Shepard, catches his arm and pulls him back into observation room.

Hug, kiss, tears, silent whispers "Shepard/Ashley" on demand.

"Don't shoot the piano player; he's doing the best he can."

P.S. Local cursebuster is soooo funny...

Modifié par Rudy Lis, 14 avril 2012 - 09:06 .

[Arban M]

@Rudy Lis

WOW. That's amazing!! Great dialogue:D:wub:.

[Rudy Lis]

Arban M wrote...

@Rudy Lis

WOW. That's amazing!! Great dialogue:D:wub:.

Really? I'm blushed.

[Arban M]

I liked that last part very much "While door is opening, Ash springs up from her places, rushes toward Shepard, catches his arm and pulls him back into observation room. "

[Rudy Lis]

I like hellcat part more.
I just used it several times to cheer my ladies up.

[earovin]

So, a question; does Ashley ever mention Kaidan in me3? I think I heard Kaidan talk about Ash 2-3 times. Maybe it's because its because I interacted more with Kaidan. I hope this is the case, because otherwise, it seems pretty cold of her.

[Totally Not Swaggacide]

@Rudy Lis
Very nice. More of that please?

[Totally Not Swaggacide]

Rudy Lis wrote...

I like hellcat part more.
I just used it several times to cheer my ladies up.

You forgot the pancakes

[Rudy Lis]

earovin wrote...

So, a question; does Ashley ever mention Kaidan in me3? I think I heard Kaidan talk about Ash 2-3 times. Maybe it's because its because I interacted more with Kaidan. I hope this is the case, because otherwise, it seems pretty cold of her.

I don't remember that. Garrus and Liara do, IIRC.
But I never played full game with Ash, only few saves from friend, maybe he missed some conversations.

Totally Not Swaggacide wrote...

@Rudy Lis
Very nice. More of that please?

Thanks.
"More" will take time, I have to adopt it to English, I don't just load all that to google-translate and slap it here.
Plus, don't forget, my Shepards has her dead, that adds problems, since I don't know what personality model template use for Ash, I used something softer/loving/caring (openly), not like those scene I've seen in ME3.

Totally Not Swaggacide wrote...

You forgot the pancakes

I did not.
I have one galley's scene with Shepard and Ashley meeting there for surprise cooking for each other in the middle of the night - Ash wanted to do something to Shep's BD, Shep wanted some practice before Ash's. Now I need to adopt jokes, gibes and some other stuff to English.

Upd. LOL - Gallows.  I mean galleys of course.

Modifié par Rudy Lis, 14 avril 2012 - 09:39 .

[Totally Not Swaggacide]

She doesn't mention Kaidan at all

[Sgt Reed 24]

Totally Not Swaggacide wrote...

She doesn't mention Kaidan at all

You sure about that?

[CptData]

Sgt Reed 24 wrote...

Totally Not Swaggacide wrote...

She doesn't mention Kaidan at all

You sure about that?

Same here. I think she does mention him at least once.
Shepard mentions Kaidan three times.

[Rudy Lis]

CptData wrote...

Same here. I think she does mention him at least once.
Shepard mentions Kaidan three times.

When? Kaidan mentions Ash at least in hospital and during "sanity check" at least.
Shepard remember Virmire Victim after his "nightmares" twice to Liara and VS to Garrus near memorial wall at Normandy after coup. That's all I remember.

[Totally Not Swaggacide]

Ashley doesn't mention Kaidan not in the hospital, not on the citadel, not on the Normandy, not on Earth

[Arban M]

For me Ashley didn't mention Kaidan.
Today is Ashleys birthday right?

[Rudy Lis]

Arban M wrote...

For me Ashley didn't mention Kaidan.
Today is Ashleys birthday right?

Looks like it.

[Arban M]

Rudy Lis wrote...

Arban M wrote...

For me Ashley didn't mention Kaidan.
Today is Ashleys birthday right?

Looks like it.

Great. I might try to create some Happy birthday pictures later but it's going to be hard without photoshop

[Totally Not Swaggacide]

I'll make her some pancakes then I'll eat them myself

[Rudy Lis]

Arban M wrote...

Great. I might try to create some Happy birthday pictures later but it's going to be hard without photoshop

Gimp?

[Hellfire257]

Totally Not Swaggacide wrote...

Ashley doesn't mention Kaidan not in the hospital, not on the citadel, not on the Normandy, not on Earth

The primary dialoge for this occurs after the Tuchanka bomb mission. She stands at the memorial.

[Rudy Lis]

Hellfire257 wrote...

The primary dialoge for this occurs after the Tuchanka bomb mission. She stands at the memorial.

Tuchanka bomb? Isn't that mission has timer and expire if you do other missions before it?
Or I just chose such order so this mission expires?

[SJNKD]

Do the part where you rescue the turians, then cure the geno and do the coup. Make sure you don't any missions in between or it won't work. Then after the coup, go and complete the second half of the mission. (take Ashley with you, gives you some interesting dialogue on the way back).

[Rudy Lis]

SJNKD wrote...

Do the part where you rescue the turians, then cure the geno and do the coup. Make sure you don't any missions in between or it won't work. Then after the coup, go and complete the second half of the mission. (take Ashley with you, gives you some interesting dialogue on the way back).

If I will give 6th try to ME3, then I will.
Many thanks.