Rudy Lis wrote...
Transcript from conversation with friend, on one of possible "missing" dialogues. after Ash return to Normandy. Several parts are lost in translation (idioms mostly):
Shepard approaches bulkhead, mirrors Ash's pose and turns his head to Ash.
Ash, confused: What?
Shepard silently look at her. T-zone only. Could be done via camera zoom.
Ash, even more confused: What?
Shepard continues to silently look at her and perform fast scan, from head to feet then back to head.
Ash, still confused, slightly more irritated: Why you staring at me?
Now Shepard stares at her eyes.
Ash unable to widthstand it, turns her eyes away. With broken voice, barely audible (dry throat and all that): Skipper...
Shepard, comforting tone: Ash... It's been years...
Ash interrupts, attempting to clear throat, but sore throat and breaking voice are still present: Years?! We've talked just several minutes ago on the Ci...
Shepard stikes "mentor's" pose (a-la Ash's hangover scene), extremely politely, yet with barely hidden irony: If I recall correctly, someone - brown-eyed brunette human spectre, in very that docking cradle on Citadel asked me to forget events from not so distance past. And, since not long before that we decided to forget events from a little bit more distant past, that leaves our last meeting back on old Normandy when I gave you order to evacuate. If my basic arithmetic skills are still present *mumbles under his breath, not loud, yet distinctive, with barely hidden smile and humor* - I don't know, I was dead for two years, maybe I forget something - that happened several years ago.
Ash, crushed, almost whisper/moans: Whaddya want?
Shepard crosses his arms across his chest and supports bulkhead again: Hug.
Ash jumps up, irritated, angered, if not infuriated: Hug?!
Shepard lowers his arms, makes few steps toward Ash, speaks calmly, like he did back in ME1, after Virmire: Hug. It's been years, don't I deserve one small hug?
Ash opens mouth, but can't say anything, just shakes her head.
Shepard shows index finger: One hug, Ash. Not kiss, not lapdance (Shepard mimics Ash's dance moves from ME1, pointing out that he actually can dance, just don't like/wants). Just. One. Hug.
Ash: I... I need some time... Alone.
Shepard, mimic checking wrist watch: 1 hug 60 seconds ago and 55 seconds ago I'd been long gone.
Ash speechlessly feel on couch, wraps her hands around her temples.
Shepard smirks, snorts, moves to door, near door, before it's opens, he stops, turns his head toward Ashley: Ash?
Ashley shows no reaction.
Shepard adding some steel into voice: Ash!
Ashley turns her head, on her face we could see sadness, anger and confusion, yet tone is totally killed: What?!
Shepard mimics famous female look over the shoulder, with playfully moving brows and staring eyes (I don't know how you westernes call it, but if you saw one (especially if it was targeted at you, you know what I mean), playfully flaps his eyes several times and playfully and softly says: Hellcat, eh?
Shepard then smiles, winks and make step toward door. While door is opening, Ash springs up from her places, rushes toward Shepard, catches his arm and pulls him back into observation room.
Hug, kiss, tears, silent whispers "Shepard/Ashley" on demand.
"Don't shoot the piano player; he's doing the best he can."
P.S. Local cursebuster is soooo funny...
That was just pure awesomeness! Very good scene, basically like every one, wirten in the last 300 pages [what, i am sick and bored!
]. And it powers my imagination... 
Makes me wonder what would look a a me3-new-story fanfick written by all, Ash fans :-D!
Modifié par Telepek, 14 avril 2012 - 11:49 .
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