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[CptData]

Rudy Lis wrote...

CptData wrote...

Writer's lesson #1
Beat down your reader before giving them some joy. That keeps 'em reading.

So, you agree with my idea that ME3 Ending was done bad on purpose?

No. They did the rule in a wrong way: giving joy first, beating down last.

If you give a more or less positive story with an awful ending, you're doing it wrong.

CptData wrote...

And makes you sexy for the other gender.

Not working for ugly guys IRL.

Half of the girls I gave a picture within the last 5 years were quite positive.
Which is much better then when I was at school and a nerd. F*ck yes :happy:

CptData wrote...

Writer's lesson #2
Be an Ash fan.

Have a heart.

Which means the same

[Dannycni]

CptData wrote...

Dannycni wrote...

As great as they are CptData your work on these journal entries are really starting to get me down lol, I'm gonna be in floods of tears soon

Writer's lesson #1
Beat down your reader before giving them some joy. That keeps 'em reading.
And makes you sexy for the other gender.

Writer's lesson #2
Be an Ash fan.

Noted, thanks for the advice

[Dannycni]

The thing that's sad for me is that unlike the head canons which are imagination, and fun to read, what you are writing is very possibly exactly how'd they be feeling, sitting on an unknown planet just praying Shepard is gonna come and save the day like he so often does but alas now can't, in my game anyway...

Modifié par Dannycni, 25 avril 2012 - 02:00 .

[Hellfire257]

Instance wrote...

I always feel bad for Kaiden whenever I see him so i start to get second thoughts about leaving him but then I relize I would have to leave Ash and I'm all "f that"

I'm thinking the same....

I like Kaidan but if I left Ash I would just feel absolutely awful and very, very guilty. 

[Rudy Lis]

CptData wrote...

No. They did the rule in a wrong way: giving joy first, beating down last.

If you give a more or less positive story with an awful ending, you're doing it wrong.

There is no joy in ME3 story, it was awful from very beginning. Few brilliant or, as you said, "positive" sparks were on the way, but, well, they were few.

CptData wrote...

Half of the girls I gave a picture within the last 5 years were quite positive.

He-he. Back in army I won contests "guy whose ID photo doesn't resembles him in a iota" and "ugliest guy of our regiment ever, since day of foundation".

CptData wrote...

Which is much better then when I was at school and a nerd. F*ck yes :happy:

Nah, I was "popular" only when somebody needed something from me. Now I'm dumb and nobody needs me all! ****ing perfect!

CptData wrote...

Which means the same

Not really.

Hellfire257 wrote...

I'm thinking the same....

I like Kaidan but if I left Ash I would just feel absolutely awful and very, very guilty.

Heh. I save Kaidan, but feel the same.

Modifié par Rudy Lis, 25 avril 2012 - 03:03 .

[CptData]

Rudy: For met the "have a heart" stuff means the same like "love Ashley":

Think she simply has a big spot in my heart (for a fictional character) and only the spots for my fiancee, my family and some RL friends are similar in size or bigger. ^^

[Rudy Lis]

CptData wrote...

Rudy: For met the "have a heart" stuff means the same like "love Ashley":

Think she simply has a big spot in my heart (for a fictional character) and only the spots for my fiancee, my family and some RL friends are similar in size or bigger. ^^

I like that approach. But what you can say about me? Have I heart?

[CptData]

Rudy Lis wrote...

CptData wrote...

Rudy: For met the "have a heart" stuff means the same like "love Ashley":

Think she simply has a big spot in my heart (for a fictional character) and only the spots for my fiancee, my family and some RL friends are similar in size or bigger. ^^

I like that approach. But what you can say about me? Have I heart?

I don't know.
Biological PoV - yes. Or you're a bot.
Emotional PoV - can you love?



Ashley. Because this thread is about Ashley.

Modifié par CptData, 25 avril 2012 - 03:33 .

[Rudy Lis]

CptData wrote...

Biological PoV - yes. Or you're a bot.

Gah, if it wasn't for bandwidth, I'd add some screens from FNV on that.

CptData wrote...

Emotional PoV - can you love?
Ashley. Because this thread is about Ashley.

I already voiced my actions and my reasons for them. Now I ask your opinion.

Modifié par Rudy Lis, 25 avril 2012 - 03:38 .

[ExorioN PL]

@CptData
Wth is PoV?
And when will be reunion?

[Hellfire257]

PoV = Point of view.

[ExorioN PL]

Thank you.


I'm the only one, who want to person like Ashley exist? Or i'm just crazy?

Modifié par ExorioN PL, 25 avril 2012 - 05:03 .

[Clone 071]

ExorioN PL wrote...

I'm the only one, who want to person like Ashley exist? Or i'm just crazy?

Many pages back ago and you would have your answer. But to save you time, you're definitely not the only one. CptData seems to be the most interested in a RL Ashley here.

[Rudy Lis]

Clone 071 wrote...

Many pages back ago and you would have your answer. But to save you time, you're definitely not the only one. CptData seems to be the most interested in a RL Ashley here.

Okay, who is "RL Ashley"? Brown-eyed brunette looking like Ashley, or just some generic girl who shoots well, loves her family, love poetry and believes in greater powers? Or combination of both?
If second - there are plenty of those girls.

[ExorioN PL]

Ha, może pierwsze, a może drugie, albo i trzecie... lub wszystko na raz.

How you can be sure that he's the most interested? Maaany players of ME 3 wish to it (i know few people), but for them this is shame.

[Dannycni]

If I found a RL Ashley I'd marry them tomorrow, but there aren't many lookers where I come from, pity

[Dannycni]

BP93 wrote...

Whoever's running that rejected my submission so whatever. Can't say I didn't try.

They probably discriminated against Ashley so they can fit in more Liara and Tali, booo

Ash>Liara+Tali

[BP93]

Dannycni wrote...

If I found a RL Ashley I'd marry them tomorrow, but there aren't many lookers where I come from, pity

Well don't believe the Florida hype I'll tell you that.

For every good looking girl, there's 10 white trash, 20 old people and 30 who don't even speak a lick of English. The ratios aren't as what they make them out to be on the Travel channel. And I even live 10-15 minutes from the beach, so I know what I'm talking about. lol

And to keep this post on topic:

[Rudy Lis]

ExorioN PL wrote...

Ha, może pierwsze, a może drugie, albo i trzecie... lub wszystko na raz.

Wszystko na raz?
I like. Practically veni, vedi, vic... wait, how it'll be "married" on Latin?

Dannycni wrote...

If I found a RL Ashley I'd marry them tomorrow, but there aren't many lookers where I come from, pity

Guys, wake up, even if RL Ashley is exist, she is alive person and it'll be she who will decide who she'll marry and when.

[Dannycni]

I wasn't suggesting forced marriage or anything Rudy

There's an 'Ash' for everyone out there

[ExorioN PL]

Nooo... Jedna z wyglądu, jedna z zachowania i jedna z połączenia dwóch poprzednich. Ten świat jest czasem tak dziwny, że wszystko jest możliwe.

If I found a RL Ashley I'd marry them tomorrow, but there aren't many lookers where I come from, pity

If she is real person (I doubt it), she'll have a husband who don't sitting in forum and spam about it.

[Dannycni]

ExorioN PL wrote...

Nooo... Jedna z wyglądu, jedna z zachowania i jedna z połączenia dwóch poprzednich. Ten świat jest czasem tak dziwny, że wszystko jest możliwe.

If I found a RL Ashley I'd marry them tomorrow, but there aren't many lookers where I come from, pity

If she is real person (I doubt it), she'll have a husband who don't sitting in forum and spam about it.

I would sit on forums talking about it if I was her husband 

Modifié par Dannycni, 25 avril 2012 - 06:06 .

[Rudy Lis]

Dannycni wrote...

I wasn't suggesting forced marriage or anything Rudy

Love makes us doing strangiest things.

Dannycni wrote...

There's an 'Ash' for everyone out there

Yeah, It depends on what part of Ash you want. Ehm. I mean what part of character - it's not culinary show, after all.  

ExorioN PL wrote...

Nooo... Jedna z wyglądu, jedna z zachowania i jedna z połączenia dwóch poprzednich. Ten świat jest czasem tak dziwny, że wszystko jest możliwe.

Life is full of surprises.
But I'd took behavior.
For all those decades I got used to that ugly mug I had to shave in the mirror every morning. I even stop laughing at it - just smiling.
I mean you'll got used to face, but it is nearly impossible to got used to non-fitting character.

ExorioN PL wrote...

If she is real person (I doubt it), she'll have a husband who don't sitting in forum and spam about it.

Well, you absolutely right about spamming. But I doubt RL Ash will chain her husband to herself. She could let him walk on his own. But carefully watch. Via telescopic sight.

Dannycni wrote...

I would sit on forums talking about it if I was her husband

Not for long, I guess. Remember - she can drill your head at 100 metres with iron sights.
Plus, what kind of her husband you are if you bragging about her, but not with her? Well, unless she let you walk.

Modifié par Rudy Lis, 25 avril 2012 - 06:11 .

[Dannycni]

^You've got a very valid point there

*I would insert a pic here to keep on topic but still can't, woooo*

Modifié par Dannycni, 25 avril 2012 - 06:23 .

[BP93]

Kannst du nicht Deustch sprechen?

Einige von euch scheinen zu sehr wie Ashley...

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Sorry, but I'm sure that's terrible German on my part. It's been awhile and I don't exactly practice much anymore either. I think my verbs aren't in the correct order. lol

Modifié par BP93, 25 avril 2012 - 06:23 .