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dahellraider wrote...

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I c, so you're not going to torture us by them never being reunited, your going to torture us by shepard remembering everything (possibly) than he finds Ashley, and she moved on. I don't know which one is worse haha.

If CptData makes me cry, than i might have write my fanfic more than usual to have my semi happy ending sooner rather than later lol


I didn't say anything about "Ashley falls for Vega" ...

:)

And yes, I want making you cry :blush:

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Is Vega twice Ashleys size?

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CptData wrote...

dahellraider wrote...

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you could always make her pregnant, but it maybe a bet late or right on time. there are basically an infinite amount of things you can do. the choice is yours


Dunno - most likely not. I dislike extra drama through pregnancy :happy:

But think I'll add some extra drama - like Vega falling for Ash *g*
Or maybe Adams? Who knows :D

Vega falling for Ash? I could only imagine that if Vega feels 'forced' to get closer to her. Otherwise the situation might feel ... forced. (Good use of words there brain! <_<) I say this because he hasn't really shown such interests. You're the writer though, your call ofcourse.;)

Btw I don't think I mentioned it yet, but I do enjoy this Diary series too.:happy:

Somewhere near the top Ash:

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Well, I always headcanoned some affection of Vega towards Ashley. Wasn't it a rumor before ME3 came out, Ash and Vega could come together in case neither one was romanced? Any romantic content of Vega got cut, maybe that stuff was considered at some point too - but dropped?

Who knows. In my case, I pretend there was a light spark. And technically, I'm extending the drunken scene by a lot ^^

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CptData wrote...
I'm extending the drunken scene by a lot ^^

This is, what i'm think what you think?

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One of the greatest moments in ME3

Modifié par ExorioN PL, 04 mai 2012 - 12:28 .


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No sexy!timez between Vega and Ash, ExorioN. He's not that cheap to make Ash drunk for sex. ^^

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If country do not want to feed her army - she will feed someone else's army. Sounds familiar?

Problem with Military - it is very easy to destroy, but very hard to reconstruct. It took around 2-3 years to grow up proper soldier, just private and about a decade to grow up proper company commander. To create unit cohesion inside that unit - you need around two more years, if they will work together.

And when I speak about company commander - officer, I think of Wehrmacht. I think their system of officers' training was and still is best. Candidate begin his service as private in combat regiment and then served year there. If at the end of this term he served well and got positive report from his commander, candidate received rank Fahnenjunker (equivalent to gefreiter) and after 2-6 months of theoretical studies, being sent to another combat unit where served 4-6 months on gefreiter's post and there he should have temporarly access to section command, to evaluate his abilities to command section. If he wasn't successful, he remained in that unut as gefreiter. If he was successful, then again, he returned to his "school" and after same 2-6 months of "theory" he was sent to third unit as section commander with rank of Fanenjunkerunteroffizier. There he should have temporarly access to post of platoon commander and Kompaniefeldwebel. If he failed, he remained in that unit as unteroffizier, if he succeded, then he returned to his "school" and after another session of theory, with rank of Fähnrich, he was sent to fourth unit to serve as platoon commander. After serving required period he returned to his "School" to pass exams, after which he received rank of Oberfähnrich and was sent to his future "permanent" unit, where he served until he received his Leutnant rank. Generally it took more than 3 years to walk this path, even during war. This helped to sort out unworthy candidates and prevented getting promoted by "protection".
That approach I respect - officers pass through every step from privates, know their life, their craft - because they were there, and every next step required about 4-6 months of "theoretical" and then practical training and learning.
And that's why I was fine with Ash career path until ME3. From Operations Chief to LtCdr in less then 6 months? Sorry, will never believe, will never accept, even if it doesn't matter in game. Because it matters. Devil in details, or what's that saying. There is no "unimportant" parts - you made one part unimportant, then another, then one more - and voila, ME3 Ash and many more.



Seeing how they treat her, I... Well, I can't say I'm glad, but I'm somewhat in peace with my decision to leave Ash on Virmire.


Yes, very good system, but too expensive. And I don't think that our government will change something. Maybe we have bad officers and backward technology, but our soldiers have a strong spirit. That's one of the reasons why they won in WW2. Situation was terrible, it's a miracle how they did it.
 
In difficult times officers growing too fast in ranks. Maybe that's the reason?

So then I hope your Shepard will not see her soon... On the other side, well, you know. (:

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CptData wrote...

No sexy!timez between Vega and Ash, ExorioN. He's not that cheap to make Ash drunk for sex. ^^


Well, I think so. I really don't want to force Vega to eat Frag Grenade. ^^

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[quote]CptData wrote...

@ Rudy Lis: I wouldn't go for positive points @ Wehrmacht stuff. It's still a touchy chapter in my ppl history.[/quote]
 
I'm aware of that. But that's my opinion and that's my trait - I'm saying what I'm thinking.
However, if it makes you feel better, I can point on mistakes they made.


[quote]CptData wrote...

Not sure if it was that efficient - and at some point (especially in late war) it was quite inefficient since the higher ranks had to be filled with inexperienced soldiers [/quote]

Nope. It was efficient. Not many countries could affort fighting on multiple fronts, with limited reserves, yet hold on for so long and maintain quality of training through most of the period.
What you stating is strategical mistake - hopes that every campaing will end fast.


[quote]CptData wrote...

Think today armies in the western world are quite efficient - but far too expensive.[/quote]

They efficient because they fight weak. They've yet to meet adequate adversary. Adequate in all aspects.


[quote]CptData wrote...

It doesn't matter if you spend full five years for education - or just five months. A single bullet still can kill the "Soldier of the 21st Century" - but to get one you need more time and far more money.[/quote]

But it doesn't mean you shouldn't train them at all, because bullet can fly nearby and not kill anyone and properly trained officer could save a lot of lives of his subordinates. Or, at least, "exchange them for highest bidder", if you get my meaning.


[quote]CptData wrote...

So our modern soldiers are simply not the best choice for extended campaigns where manpower is more needed than specialization.
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That's correct - any adequate conflict will deplete resourses fast and with modern politicians few countries have those reserves. They too busy trying to keep their chairs so in attempts to please "electorate" they went far in this denial.


[quote]Ushanka wrote...

Yes, very good system, but too expensive. [/quote]

Nope. It's not expensive. Of course, having "field schools" to train 20 y.o. guys and give then leitenant's stars in six months could be cheaper, unless you start calculating things on long run.


[quote]Ushanka wrote...

And I don't think that our government will change something. [/quote]

On that - we agree.


[quote]Ushanka wrote...

Maybe we have bad officers and backward technology, but our soldiers have a strong spirit.[/quote]

With all due respect (and I don't mean "kiss my ass") - I think "had strong spirit" is more appropriate.


[quote]Ushanka wrote...

That's one of the reasons why they won in WW2. Situation was terrible, it's a miracle how they did it.[/quote]

It wasn't miracle.


[quote]Ushanka wrote...

In difficult times officers growing too fast in ranks. Maybe that's the reason?[/quote]

Not that fast. Even Hartmann with all his allegedly 352 victories had one fast promotion - from Oberleutnant to Hauptmann in two months. But he was promoted to Oberleutnant rank in more that two years and he got his Major at last day of war (almost).

Ash jumped from OC to LtCdr in six months? Nah. Unless she singlehandedly beat couple of Sovereign class Reapers in melee...


[quote]Ushanka wrote...

So then I hope your Shepard will not see her soon... On the other side, well, you know. (:[/quote]

Well, that's the reason why I'm fine with Shepard's death. I'm not fine with way he died.


[quote]ExorioN PL wrote...

Well, I think so. I really don't want to force Vega to eat Frag Grenade. ^^

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Incendiary. Ash use incendiary.

Modifié par Rudy Lis, 04 mai 2012 - 01:03 .


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Please keep this on topic, gentleman. I like your discussion but this isn't the place for it I'm afraid. :)

Modifié par Hellfire257, 04 mai 2012 - 01:18 .


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Writing some Ashley content for my next fanfict chapter, introduces her family. Hopefully you guys will like it, since I read through most the dialogues everyone likes and took inspiration from it. Hopefully I've made Lynn an interesting character because she has quite a role in my fanfiction.

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Rudy Lis wrote...

 





Ushanka wrote...

Yes, very good system, but too expensive.


Nope. It's not expensive. Of course, having "field schools" to train 20 y.o. guys and give then leitenant's stars in six months could be cheaper, unless you start calculating things on long run.


Ushanka wrote...

And I don't think that our government will change something.


On that - we agree.


Ushanka wrote...

Maybe we have bad officers and backward technology, but our soldiers have a strong spirit.



With all due respect (and I don't mean "kiss my ass") - I think "had strong spirit" is more appropriate.


Ushanka wrote...

That's one of the reasons why they won in WW2. Situation was terrible, it's a miracle how they did it.


It wasn't miracle.


Ushanka wrote...

In difficult times officers growing too fast in ranks. Maybe that's the reason?


Not that fast. Even Hartmann with all his allegedly 352 victories had one fast promotion - from Oberleutnant to Hauptmann in two months. But he was promoted to Oberleutnant rank in more that two years and he got his Major at last day of war (almost).

Ash jumped from OC to LtCdr in six months? Nah. Unless she singlehandedly beat couple of Sovereign class Reapers in melee...


Ushanka wrote...

So then I hope your Shepard will not see her soon... On the other side, well, you know. (:


Well, that's the reason why I'm fine with Shepard's death. I'm not fine with way he died.


But it means that need to change something, but they won't...

Yes, "had strong spirit"... We are more like krogans now...

Well, it was luck and dedication of soldiers.

Maybe Alliance needs heroes to motivate soldires, and they promoted her?

Sometimes death is better option...

Ok, Hellfire, as you say, that was last.(:

Modifié par Ushanka, 04 mai 2012 - 01:31 .


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I have a soft spot for this particular piece.

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Sarah: Sis? What are you doing out here in the middle of the night?
Ashley: Nothing, Just sitting, drinking. Thinking.
Sarah: That's obvious, you've been doing nothing but thinking since you got home from your last assignment.
Ashley: A lot of things when down there, and - I'm just confused, Sar'.
Sarah: *sits down next to her.* Do you wanna talk about it?
Ashley: I wouldn't even know where to start. *starts fiddling with ring on her finger before sliding it off.*
Sarah: Y'know, you never told me who gave you that ring.
Ashley: It was from a Captain at my CO's funeral.
Sarah: Oh, that Commander Shepard. The one that was...
Ashley: Declared missing yes.
Sarah: It looks beautiful. The pattern is so gorgerous.
Ashley: It's a celtic band. John loved things like this. He used to have a celtic armband tattoo as well.
Sarah: Sorry sis. I didn't mean to make you upset.
Ashley: Its fine. I'm not sad about it, at least not for the same reasons anymore. I'm sad that I may have to give this back, I always thought of it as keeping a little piece of him with me.
Sarah: The way you're talking sis, it almost sounds like he's come back.
Ashley: More like he found me. But I can't pretend the last two years didn't happen. He's... different. Changed.
Sarah: Sounds like he fell in with a bad crowd.
Ashley: More like the bad crowd found him. They blackmailed him, or coerced him or something. He spent two years with very bad people, Sar. Its the same face, the same voice but -
Sarah: God has a twisted sense of humour, but I'm sure there's a plan for all of this sis. You know I'm not as devoted as you, but I believe that there's a reason behind this. And who knows, maybe you'll find a way back to each other.
Ashley: That's the thing... I'm not sure if I want him back.
Sarah: Are you sure it's not the other way around, Ashie?
Ashley: ... You've got an annoying way of prying into my romantic life, kidster.
Sarah: Hehe. I'm just telling it like it is, Ashley.
Ashley: The truth is, I know who the man was and I loved him. But I don't know if I could love the man John is now.
Sarah: Well, sis. You don't know until you try. C'mon. You got an early flight to catch tomorrow. To the Citadel, isn't it?
Ashley: Yeah. Councilor Anderson and the rest of 'em want me to make my report in person. But I have an inkling that something else is up.
Sarah: Expecting the worst?
Ashley: Occupational hazard, Sar'. And with our family name, it's not exactly unrealistic either.
Sarah: You're such a pessimist. C'mon. On your feet. I'm tucking you in.
Ashley: Being bossed around by my baby sister, what has the universe come to?



#29864
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Whoa, next great dialogue. But it was here or on dialogue group forum.

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CptData wrote...

No sexy!timez between Vega and Ash, ExorioN. He's not that cheap to make Ash drunk for sex. ^^

You're right. Vega would treat her to a nice dinner and a blasto movie. Then Sexytimes!Image IPB

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Hellfire257 wrote...

Please keep this on topic, gentleman. I like your discussion but this isn't the place for it I'm afraid. Image IPB


It is, because Ash collaterally involved. But we will end soon, since, ehm, most topic already covered.



Ushanka wrote...

But it means that need to change something, but they won't...


Of course they won't: "too expensive" and "let's leave it to professionals".


Ushanka wrote...

Yes, "had strong spirit"... We are more like krogans now...


Yeah. But remember Eve and don't lose hope.


Ushanka wrote...

Well, it was luck and dedication of soldiers.


It wasn't luck. It was dedication, skill, sometimes paid in blood and learnt the hard way and wish to fight with enemy who comes to destroy you, not just conquer.


Ushanka wrote...

Maybe Alliance needs heroes to motivate soldires, and they promoted her?


Strange way to motivate soldiers. I see no reason behind her promotion. Kaidan, on other hand, is more "reasonable". His jump is quite fast too - from Staff Lt in ME1 to Staff Cdr in ME2 and then Major in ME3. But at least one jump - between ME1 and ME2, through LtCdr rank could be explained via, sort of "extraordinary" promotion or he could be promoted to LtCdr during events of ME1, but due all that fuss order lost in traffic. So if he was promoted right after Battle at Citadel or even after Normandy demise, that's fine - two years from LtCdr to Staff Cdr is Ok. Major could be just next step. Ash, on the other hand is "off the damn charts" - because she jumped 3 officers' ranks in 6 months. Nah.
Plus you, of all people, should know price of such "premature promotion" - it devaules whole meaning of rank and casts doubt on all officer's system. So should she remain OC or be promoted to 2nd Lt, I'd respect her greater.


Ushanka wrote...

Sometimes death is better option...


Yeah, I spared her of ending horrors. Image IPB

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ExorioN PL wrote...

Whoa, next great dialogue. But it was here or on dialogue group forum.


I wrote it about 3/4 months ago. It's on page 615 if you want to read the companion pieces. It was back when my headcanon was still a baby, and I developed a father for my Shepard... right before I tossed the damn thing away in favour of a less screwed up history.

Seriously, I put my Jon-Mal Shepard through the sh!ts even before he joined the Alliance. And even more after he joined and when ME1 started. Basically, he's just finished pulling his act together and finally becomes satisfied with his reformed life by the time ME1 starts, then the Prothean Beacon and the SpecTRe gig throws it all to hell.

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Rudy Lis wrote...


Yeah. But remember Eve and don't lose hope.



It wasn't luck. It was dedication, skill, sometimes paid in blood and learnt the hard way and wish to fight with enemy who comes to destroy you, not just conquer.


Strange way to motivate soldiers. I see no reason behind her promotion. Kaidan, on other hand, is more "reasonable". His jump is quite fast too - from Staff Lt in ME1 to Staff Cdr in ME2 and then Major in ME3. But at least one jump - between ME1 and ME2, through LtCdr rank could be explained via, sort of "extraordinary" promotion or he could be promoted to LtCdr during events of ME1, but due all that fuss order lost in traffic. So if he was promoted right after Battle at Citadel or even after Normandy demise, that's fine - two years from LtCdr to Staff Cdr is Ok. Major could be just next step. Ash, on the other hand is "off the damn charts" - because she jumped 3 officers' ranks in 6 months. Nah.
Plus you, of all people, should know price of such "premature promotion" - it devaules whole meaning of rank and casts doubt on all officer's system. So should she remain OC or be promoted to 2nd Lt, I'd respect her greater.



Yeah, I spared her of ending horrors. Image IPB


I never losing hope. (:

Yes, your formulation sounds much better. I know it's heresy, but this reminds me a Reaper War. (:

Hmm, now I see that she jumped 3 ranks! That's too much! Yeah, something wrong with that...

I don't even know what's better for Shepard, death or life in this "new" world.

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ADLegend21 wrote...

CptData wrote...

No sexy!timez between Vega and Ash, ExorioN. He's not that cheap to make Ash drunk for sex. ^^

You're right. Vega would treat her to a nice dinner and a blasto movie. Then Sexytimes!Image IPB


Somehow I get jealous when thinking of non-Shepard Ashley!love :blush:

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CptData wrote...


Somehow I get jealous when thinking of non-Shepard Ashley!love :blush:


I just can't see Ashley with anyone else, only with Sheploo. (=

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Ushanka wrote...

CptData wrote...


Somehow I get jealous when thinking of non-Shepard Ashley!love :blush:


I just can't see Ashley with anyone else, only with Sheploo. (=


Maybe because that's the only option she has

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CptData wrote...

ADLegend21 wrote...

CptData wrote...

No sexy!timez between Vega and Ash, ExorioN. He's not that cheap to make Ash drunk for sex. ^^

You're right. Vega would treat her to a nice dinner and a blasto movie. Then Sexytimes!Image IPB


Somehow I get jealous when thinking of non-Shepard Ashley!love :blush:

And not when thinking of Shepley love? ;)
Don't know about Vega and Ash, they share some similarities which might attract them to each other, but...I don't know, somehow I cant see them together.

Now if we're talking Kaishley on the other hand :whistle:
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Maybe because that's the only option she has

I should say that this is pretty good option. (=
But I think that there was something between Kaiden and Ash, but then was Virmire...

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Ushanka wrote...

iHorizons wrote...

Maybe because that's the only option she has

I should say that this is pretty good option. (=
But I think that there was something between Kaiden and Ash, but then was Virmire...


I doubt it

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iHorizons wrote...

I doubt it

Well, Ashley and Kaiden looking good together too, in my opinion.