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[lil yonce]

dahellraider wrote...

oh nice people, as always. After I finish watching this movie maybe I'll do a dialog. Anyone got any good Ideas for a dialog, probably could come up with one myself, given the time. but been doing so much writing lately I'm fresh out of ideas LOL

Try Ash and Cortez if you want a challenge. That's one dynamic we haven't seen.

[Schmidthappens]

Youth4Ever wrote...
[...]
I don't get the impression Shepard green lit Tali to steal Alliance tech. I understand his line, "Feel free to study the ship." to mean she should investigate the systems and get used to them so she can put her engineering skills to use and help maintain it for the mission. That's a big difference.

That's open to interpretation, I guess ... but the reason I wrote my posting was cor7ana.tumblr.com/post/22576772147/liquid-thought-thepastriestpastry-so-i-was to prove it wrong, which I think I did. Yeah even Paragon Shepard didn't explicitly allow her to steal the tech from the Normandy in the video I posted, but there's not even a hint in ME3 that Shep/the Alliance/anyone blames Tali for stealing something.
If you take a look at the page I re-posted, the author claims Tali stole Normandy tech in ME1 so Ashley was right to mistrust aliens on the ship etc. - but that's just wrong and that's the point. If Tali stole the tech at all - again, no proof afaik in the game - it was from a known terrorist organization a.k.a. Cerberus who stole it from the Alliance. Maybe the quarians acquired it from the salarians - we simply just don't know and assuming Tali betrayed Shepard ( you ) and stole tech from the Normandy is just out of character for her and the only hint ( it's no proof! ) in the game is a codex entry on the quarian ship.

Don't get me wrong, I think it was absolutely right to question Shepards decision to let all those aliens onboard and it adds to Ashleys character that she questions him about that, but as I mentioned before, Tali asks for the geth data you acquire in ME1 and doesn't just steal it, which would be the case if Tali pretended to be Sheps friend and spy on him.

Ash wasn't rubbing Shep's Cerberus stint in his face. She easily
could've but she didn't. She questions a clean break with the
organization because does anyone once integrated leave Cerberus? She
questions what was done to him after viewing a Reaperifed Cerberus
trooper. Is that rubbing it in? Her doubt isn't unsubstantiated and
there's no "I told you so!" moment.
She's on his case because she's concerned. If she wasn't close to
Shepard she wouldn't care. If she'd stopped questioning everything I'd
fear for the relationship. I don't want indifference from Ash. I'd want
her to care.

After the events on Horizon and Shep being on "house arrest" for six months, she didn't even bother to visit him or write an email, but during the mission on Mars seeing all those dead Alliance marines already killed by Cerberus and witnessing an execution by Cerberus soldiers, she questions Shep repeatedly about his connection to Cerberus ... but doesn't seem to bother that Shep's busy killing the Cerberus troopers. Maybe you're right and she's just concerned, but she had six months and did nothing at all to help Shepard!
I don't blame this on Ashleys character as I see it - but on ******-poor writing by Bioware, starting with the events on Horizon.
In my opinion the "real" Ashley would've knocked Shepard out and dragged him away on Horizon if she was really concerned about him/his work with Cerberus - instead she's just pissed off and lets you go on a suicide mission all alone, but hey she writes an email... or nothing if you didn't romance her.

Again, I really like Ashley and perhaps got my own view of her character at all, but someone who says "I'd never stray far from my family, they're everything to me." wouldn't do the things she did - or better : she didn't do in ME2 & 3 if she was in love with Shepard, it just doesn't seem to fit.

Modifié par _Shodan_, 10 mai 2012 - 06:58 .

[Hellfire257]

Don't remind me of Ash's cavewoman impression. That was just...wtf....

[CptData]

Youth4Ever wrote...

CptData wrote...

[snip]

Ash was a bit timid. Seemed burnt out in spirit. She took Jack's comments lying down.

Well, sometimes even Ashley can't fight back. 'specially in case she's totally getting caught distracted.
I just can't see her aggressively fighting Jack. Somehow I can see her more defensive than anything else ...

[Arban M]

A new dialogue from me. Hospital dialogue version 1.

Shepard's wounded. He's at the Huerta hospital for treatment after the hard battle against the Reapers. Shepard's sleeping in room 2 and Ashley sits right next to his bed and is thinking to herself.

Ashley: You did a great job out there Shepard. I'm sorry that I came too late. I should have been there when those banshees came and attacked you.
*Ashley's crying*
Ashley: If I was there right next to you, you wouldn't be here. It's my fault skipper. I promise you this Shepard. I'm not going to leave you alone anymore, never again.

Ashley leaves the room for a while to get some water. Shepard wakes up. He looks around in his room and he's confused.

Shepard: What am I doing here? Where's everyone? I think I should leave and try to find Ash and the rest of my crew.

Shepard leaves his room. A few seconds later, Ashley walks back into his room and sees Shepard is not there. She runs out towards the elevator and sees Shepard waiting for the elevator. She calls to him. Shepard turns around and sees Ashley running towards him. She throws herself at him and hugs him very hard.

Ashley: Why did you leave your room!?
Shepard: Ash! I left because............
Ashley: Because of what?
Shepard: Because I wanted to find my crew. I wanted to find you.
Ashley: I was sat right next to you in your room, skipper! I was waiting for you to wake up!
Shepard: You were?
Ashley: Yes. When I was sat next to you, I promised myself that I wasn't going to let anything like that happen to you again.
Shepard: It wasn't your fault , Ash - don't think it was. Somebody had to deal with those Marauders.
Ashley: I felt I could have helped you out there.
*Shepard holds Ashley's head*
Shepard: Listen to me. You're a fine soldier and I'm happy to have you with me. I love you Ash. Now I don't want you to think about the attack anymore. It wasn't your fault.
*Tears flow from Ashley's eyes*
Ashley: Thanks skipper. I really appreciate what you said there. I love you to.
Shepard: Let's leave the hospital.
Ashley: Don't even think about leaving!
Shepard: I don't want to stay.
*Ashley smiles*
Ashley: Do it for me.
*Shepard smiles*
Shepard: Okay Ash.

They return to Shepard's room. Shepard lays back down on his bed while Ashley sits down right next to him, holding his hand and watching him.

Ashley: Wait here skipper. I have something for you. You are not going to think about leaving this place.

Ashley moves to the door and locks it, drawing the curtains so no one can see them. She returns to Shepard and climbs on top of him.

Ashley: So what do you think?
Shepard: Are you sure about this Ash? I mean, in a hospital?
*Ashley smiles*
Ashley: Just kiss me skipper.
*Shepard smiles*
Shepard: Yes ma'am.

Stay tuned for Hospital dialogue version 2 .

Modifié par Arban M, 10 mai 2012 - 07:33 .

[lil yonce]

_Shodan_ wrote...

1. That's open to interpretation, I guess ... but the reason I wrote my posting was cor7ana.tumblr.com/post/22576772147/liquid-thought-thepastriestpastry-so-i-was to prove it wrong, which I think I did. Yeah even Paragon Shepard didn't explicitly allow her to steal the tech from the Normandy in the video I posted, but there's not even a hint in ME3 that Shep/the Alliance/anyone blames Tali for stealing something.

2. If you take a look at the page I re-posted, the author claims Tali stole Normandy tech in ME1 so Ashley was right to mistrust aliens on the ship etc. - but that's just wrong and that's the point. If Tali stole the tech at all - again, no proof afaik in the game - it was from a known terrorist organization a.k.a. Cerberus who stole it from the Alliance. Maybe the quarians acquired it from the salarians - we simply just don't know and assuming Tali betrayed Shepard ( you ) and stole tech from the Normandy is just out of character for her and the only hint ( it's no proof! ) in the game is a codex entry on the quarian ship.

3. Don't get me wrong, I think it was absolutely right to question Shepards decision to let all those aliens onboard and it adds to Ashleys character that she questions him about that, but as I mentioned before, Tali asks for the geth data you acquire in ME1 and doesn't just steal it, which would be the case if Tali pretended to be Sheps friend and spy on him.

4. After the events on Horizon and Shep being on "house arrest" for six months, she didn't even bother to visit him or write an email, but during the mission on Mars seeing all those dead Alliance marines already killed by Cerberus and witnessing an execution by Cerberus soldiers, she questions Shep repeatedly about his connection to Cerberus ... but doesn't seem to bother that Shep's busy killing the Cerberus troopers. Maybe you're right and she's just concerned, but she had six months and did nothing at all to help Shepard!
I don't blame this on Ashleys character as I see it - but on ******-poor writing by Bioware, starting with the events on Horizon.

In my opinion the "real" Ashley would've knocked Shepard out and dragged him away on Horizon if she was really concerned about him/his work with Cerberus - instead she's just pissed off and lets you go on a suicide mission all alone, but hey she writes an email... or nothing if you didn't romance her.

5. Again, I really like Ashley and perhaps got my own view of her character at all, but someone who says "I'd never stray far from my family, they're everything to me." wouldn't do the things she did - or better : she didn't do in ME2 & 3 if she was in love with Shepard, it just doesn't seem to fit.

1. But as cor7ana points out - by the time we find out nobody cares. The Quarians are willing to ally with the Alliance. It's just not the time to get on their case about it.

2. It's unlikely the Quarians stole the design schematics from the Salarians when they had a tech expert aboard the Normandy itself. She knew it intimately. And the Quarians have no STG equivalent. I think it's a strech they stole it from the Salarians.

Two wrongs don't make a right. I certainly don't approve of what Cerberus did and I don't approve of what Tali did either.

3. I don't think she pretended to be friends with Shepard. Neither does cor7ana. But if she stole the schematics was the that action underhanded? Yes. And she asks Shepard for the information on the geth because she has no way other way to secure it. She has to ask him for it.

4. Yes, blame the writers for no contact. But circumstance brings them back together professionally and old doubt surfaces on Mars. And Shepard could be a double agent. Do many really quit Cerberus? She's covering her bases.

I disagree. She's not just pissed off on Horizon. That's how she expresses much deeper and tumultuous emotions. Their blow up was heat of the moment raw emotion and she extends the olive branch with an apology email.

5. You don't let people you love do stupid or questionable things. That may be tough love but it's Ash's style of love and she loves hard.

EDIT: Formatting nightmare.

Modifié par Youth4Ever, 10 mai 2012 - 08:03 .

[CptData]

I found those on N7 Confessions






And I like 'em.

[Hellfire257]

Arban, I'm glad you didn't leave the thread. I'm looking forward to V2!

Good find, Data!

[Arban M]

@Hellfire.
Thanks and I'm glad I'm back. I will probably post the hospital dialogue V2 tomorrow.

[lil yonce]

Perect Shepley anthem after Horizon. Somewhere Love Remains. Lite country hit. Lady A fans will enjoy.

Modifié par Youth4Ever, 10 mai 2012 - 09:57 .

[Schmidthappens]

Youth4Ever wrote...
[...]
1. But as cor7ana points out - by the we find out nobody cares. The Quarians are willing to ally with the Alliance. It's just not the time to get on their case about it.

2. It's unlikely the Quarians stole the design schematics from the
Salarians when they had a tech expert aboard the Normandy itself. She
knew it intimately. And the Quarians have no STG equivilant. I think
it's a strech they stole it from the Salarians.

Think I already said it before : can we agree to disagree on this one? In my opinion there's no ingame proof that the Quarians stole anything from the Alliance, there's simply nothing ingame about it. I just wanted to make clear that in my opinion it would be extremely out of character for Tali to do something like that. On the other hand, the salarians just stole it, but as I mentioned before we don't know how the Quarians acquired the necessary tech ... never said they stole it from the Salarians, maybe they just bought it from them? Maybe they scanned the Normandy in case you did Talis loyalty mission in ME2? Again, we just don't know it.

[....]
Two wrongs don't make a right. I certainly don't approve of what Cerberus did and I don't approve of what Tali did either.

I think I made clear what my interpretation of the ME2 video "feel free to study the ship" is. If your fleet has been attacked by a known terrorist organization and you're actually on one of their ships AND Shepard tells you something like that, I guess it's a viable assumption that Tali passed information to the Quarians with Shepards accordance - well at least Paragon Shepard.

3. I don't think she pretended to be friends with Shepard. Neither does
cor7ana. But if she stole the schematics was the that action
underhanded? Yes. And she asks Shepard for the information on the geth
because she has no way other way to secure it. She has to ask him for
it.

Maybe my english is actually that bad, but cor7ana wrote : "Tali - pretending to be your friend so she can spy on you and steal humanity's most secret military tech. Who cares if Shepard gets court martialed over that."
Maybe that does just translate differently in my language
How do you know Tali - the tech expert - has no other way to secure the geth data? But on the other hand she has no problem to secure "humanity's most secret military tech" ( ... do I really have to explain why this is bullsh... )? 

4. Yes, blame the writers for no contact. But circumstance brings them back
together professionally and old doubt surfaces on Mars. And Shepard
could be a double agent. Do many really quit Cerberus? She's covering
her bases.

Do many really quit Cerberus? You mean like Jacob & his scientists, Miranda Lawson .... and all the others who worked for them ( at least temporary in ME2 )? Maybe I've gotten it wrong, but I can't remember Ashley expressed any doubts concerning Jacob & the scientists in ME3 and their work at the Crucible, but hey that's just the galaxy's best hope to win the reaper wars.

I disagree. She's not just pissed off on Horizon.
That's how she expresses much deeper and tumultuous emotions. Their blow
up was heat of the moment raw emotion and she extends the olive branch
with an apology email.

5. You don't let people you love do stupid or questionable things. That may be tough love but it's Ash's style of love and she loves hard.
[...]

Sorry but I disagree with you, the "Horizon-incident" was just poor writing as well as her email afterwards, in my opinion someone like Ashley wouldn't react like that and just left Shepard on Horizon.
You wrote it yourself, "You don't let people you love do stupid or questionable things." - the exact opposite happens on Horizon, Ashley just leaves on Horizon despite her love to Shepard, despite her hatred vs Cerberus, despite .... everything. As I mentioned before, poor writing and out of character, nothing else.

Modifié par _Shodan_, 10 mai 2012 - 08:35 .

[Dannycni]

@Arban M, good dialogue, I really like reading what people post about Ash and Shepard after the reapers.

@Dahellraider, how about Ash and Shepard about remaining loyal to her, I was trying earlier but just could not get it to flow so I went for convo with Garrus instead.

[lil yonce]

_Shodan_ wrote...

1.Think I already said it before : can we agree to disagree on this one? In my opinion there's no ingame proof that the Quarians stole anything from the Alliance, there's simply nothing ingame about it. I just wanted to make clear that in my opinion it would be extremely out of character for Tali to do something like that. On the other hand, the salarians just stole it, but as I mentioned before we don't know how the Quarians acquired the necessary tech ... never said they stole it from the Salarians, maybe they just bought it from them? Maybe they scanned the Normandy in case you did Talis loyalty mission in ME2? Again, we just don't know it.

2. I think I made clear what my interpretation of the ME2 video "feel free to study the ship" is. If your fleet has been attacked by a known terrorist organization and you're actually on one of their ships AND Shepard tells you something like that, I guess it's a viable assumption that Tali passed information to the Quarians with Shepards accordance - well at least Paragon Shepard.

3. Maybe my english is actually that bad, but cor7ana wrote : "Tali - pretending to be your friend so she can spy on you and steal humanity's most secret military tech. Who cares if Shepard gets court martialed over that."
Maybe that does just translate differently in my language
How do you know Tali - the tech expert - has no other way to secure the geth data? But on the other hand she has no problem to secure "humanity's most secret military tech" ( ... do I really have to explain why this is bullsh... )? 

4. Do many really quit Cerberus? You mean like Jacob & his scientists, Miranda Lawson .... and all the others who worked for them ( at least temporary in ME2 )? Maybe I've gotten it wrong, but I can't remember Ashley expressed any doubts concerning Jacob & the scientists in ME3 and their work at the Crucible, but hey that's just the galaxy's best hope to win the reaper wars.

5. Sorry but I disagree with you, the "Horizon-incident" was just poor writing as well as her email afterwards, in my opinion someone like Ashley wouldn't react like that and just left Shepard on Horizon.
You wrote it yourself, "You don't let people you love do stupid or questionable things." - the exact opposite happens on Horizon, Ashley just leaves on Horizon despite her love to Shepard, despite her hatred vs Cerberus, despite .... everything. As I mentioned before, poor writing and out of character, nothing else.

1. Why? Let's embrace debate.

I don't believe you can learn how to build a complicated piece of tech like the SR-2 from a scan. It's flat out unlikely the Quarians bought or stole the schematics from the Salarians. The Quarians have no STG equivalent. They aren't well regarded in Council space and a special type of stealth tech the Salarians had to steal is not something they'd sell to a group of vagabonds. And I don't think a storied Council race would make a backroom deal with an exiled race. Imagine if they got caught.

2. The codex entry does not indicate schematics from the SR-2 design. She could've taken the stealth system designs from the SR-1. The Salarians copied both stealth designs and algorithms behind the Reaper IFF signal. Wouldn't Tali have given the Quarian fleet both aboard the SR-2? I think she did do this while aboard the SR-1 and she proved herself a legitimate security risk.

I think Tali passed along the schematics when she returned to the Flotilla after the destruction of the SR-1. It would explain the lack of Reaper IFF signal algorithms she inexpilcably failed to pass on aboard the SR-2 in your interpretation. She may not have thought it significant because the Normandy was no more. But, even in death, this reflects badly on Shepard. She stole schematics from the most advanced warship in the Alliance Navy. Something the Alliance would want to spread or share.

3. You didn't scroll down far enough. Cortana's comments start after the second GIF image and she didn't make the Tali poster. She says, "Not everything is black and white. Just because Tali stole your technology and didn’t tell you, doesn’t mean that she “pretended” to be your friend. Just because Ashley called Shepard out on his decision doesn’t mean she’s a racist."

I believe the data is on Shepard's omni-tool and he can decide against giving it to her. How else is she going to get it? Are you suggesting she'd hack his omni-tool and swipe it after an explict "No."? And Tali the tech expert has had plenty of time to "study" the Normandy unhindered.

4. Can you name an individual pre-Reaperized Cerberus that quits the organization? No. Their agents live and die by the sword. Once branded Cerberus - they're Cerberus for life. Once intergrated there is no leaving. And you have to consider Alliance bias toward Cerberus personnel to understand this from Ash's perspective. Cerberus agents are painted as staunchly Cerberus. Completely behind everything the organization does and stands for by just being part of or associated with them. Shepard should expect the line of questioning he recieves on Mars and keep his sensitivity in check.

And she does comment on Jacob during the Ex-Cerberus scientists mission. I believe she says something about "More Cerberus." Can't remember exactly but she does speak up.

5. I think Shepard's response was bad writting. But I'm fine with Ash's reaction considering her background. And she can't make Shepard leave Cerberus. She can't hand-hold him back to the Alliance. He's a grown man. He's making a mistake but he's an adult. And she doesn't give him lisence to do it. She voices disapproval. She reminds him who Cerberus is and marches off after an unexpected and shocking reunion.

Modifié par Youth4Ever, 11 mai 2012 - 03:58 .

[dahellraider]

Normandy's observation Deck, Late game

Shepard walks Into the observation deck, looking for Ashley. He see's her reading in the corner, Ashley catches his gaze on her.

Ashley: Checking up on me skipper?
Shepard: No...I uh was just um going.
Ashley:Going, where?
Shepard:Nowhere in particular.
Ashley: Skipper you don't need an excuss to come see me, you know that right?
Shepard: Yeah, I know (walks over to seat on couch next to her)
Ashley: So whats on your mind Shepard?
Shepard (slight laugh) You ofcourse.
Ashley: well obvisusly, anything In particular. (Giggles)
Shepard: I...well, just happy to have you here ash, with me.
Ashley: I'm just happy to be here for you, to see us through this ordeal.
Shepard: Ash, seeing you hurt like that, back on mars....It..
Ashley places a finger on his lip.
Ashley: You don't have to say anything skipper, I've been there I know what it's like, losing you those years ago was hard on me.
Shepard: Did you still love me? after knowing I was still alive ofcourse.
Ashley: Skipper i never stopped loving you.
Shepard: it just...after horizon it seemed like you might have moved on.
Ashley: Shepard, I'm sorry for what happend. If I can go back and change what I said, knowing everything now. I would in an instant.
Shepard: I know you're sorry ash.
Ashley: I take it you got my email.
Shepard: I reed it every night ash.
Ashley: really, after what I did. you still loved me as well?
Shepard: I could never move on. I thought long and hard after Horizon, until i truly understood why you said what you said.
Ashley:Still, I would have understood if you had moved on.
Shepard: I would have died at the hands of the collectors, If it wasn't for just the thought of making it back to you.
Ashley:Skipper, I really wish I was there.
Shepard: I know, but now we have another job to do.
Ashley: yeah, guess the reapers will make the collectors look like a cake walk.
Shepard: you can say that again.
Ashley: thank you skipper.
Shepard: for what ash?
Ashley: for staying faithfull to me. It really means alot.
Shepard: I should be thanking you ash, two years is along time.
Ashley: you don't know the half of it.
Shepard:guess we have two years to make up than (Smirk)
Ashley: (gives a playfull punch on his shoulder) jeez skipper take me out first.
Shepard: It's a date.

Modifié par dahellraider, 10 mai 2012 - 09:37 .

[BP93]

Just a quick c&c, some of you guys seem to over do the "Skipper" IMO. It's no biggie, but seeing it every other line diminishes the effect.

Other than that, they're all great.

[CptData]

BP93 wrote...

Just a quick c&c, some of you guys seem to over do the "Skipper" IMO. It's no biggie, but seeing it every other line diminishes the effect.

Other than that, they're all great.

Ashley: Skipper?
Shepard: Ash!
Ashley: Skipper. *smiles*
Shepard: Ashley. *smiles back*
Ashley: Skip ...
Shepard: Ash?
Wrex: You two are annoying.

[Mr. Brainheart]

One thing I'd like to add to Shodan and Youth's discussion about Horizon and how I see "I'd never stray far from my family" in relation to Shepard: I think the question is, who strayed far from who? During the years of Shepard's death and after that Ashley stayed very close to who Shepard was and kept him in mind. Then Shepard returns and on first sight he strayed far from the person he was and Ashley. Naturally this causes a clash between the two and thus they go seperate ways. BUT. Big but, then Ashley sends the letter, emotional and understanding, showing that he still means a lot to her and that she hasn't abandoned him.

Just because she isn't physically close to him doesn't mean she strayed far from him.

[lil yonce]

Mr. Brainheart wrote...

One thing I'd like to add to Shodan and Youth's discussion about Horizon and how I see "I'd never stray far from my family" in relation to Shepard: I think the question is, who strayed far from who? During the years of Shepard's death and after that Ashley stayed very close to who Shepard was and kept him in mind. Then Shepard returns and on first sight he strayed far from the person he was and Ashley. Naturally this causes a clash between the two and thus they go seperate ways. BUT. Big but, then Ashley sends the letter, emotional and understanding, showing that he still means a lot to her and that she hasn't abandoned him.

Just because she isn't physically close to him doesn't mean she strayed far from him.

Excellent point Brain.

[dahellraider]

BP93 wrote...

Just a quick c&c, some of you guys seem to over do the "Skipper" IMO. It's no biggie, but seeing it every other line diminishes the effect.

Other than that, they're all great.

I someitmes do it to avoid using first name, cus more people apperntly hate that.

[CptData]

One last goody for you - need to go to bed ...



Shepard: I know what you're trying, Ashley. It's just not the right time.
Ashley: When IS the right time then? I was waiting ... for more than two long years. I don't want to wait until it's too late.
Shepard: Ash ...
Ashley: "There is no morning following this night; the soldier knows prior the fight; regardless he puts up his sword; realizing, his life was short."
Shepard: Raphael Barge*, right?
Ashley: Yeah. "The Last of Thousand" - from 2123. I'm surprised you know of him.
Shepard: Well, I used to read his books when I was younger. Ashley, this isn't our last day.
Ashley: You can't be sure. We're staking everything on one card - if we fail, the war is lost and the Reapers wipe us out, one after another.
Shepard: Do you think I don't know that? Ashley ...
Ashley: No. But I know there's no time for optimism. Things could go wrong. We don't even know how many Reapers are protecting the Citadel currently. What if we can't defeat them alll? What if the Crucible destroyed ... John. This isn't like the old times anymore. This is it.
Shepard: It's the day I was fearing for three years now, Ashley.
Ashley: I just want to make sure we don't waste the last moments of our life. Skipper ... please ...
Shepard: Ashley ... I can't.
Ashley: Please ...
Shepard: I can't lose you again, Ash. And neither you can.
Ashley: No - just want to make sure you won't forget those words. And if we both have to die, I want this night being the last memory in the end ...
Shepard: ... Ash ...
Ashley: "Death closes all: but something ere the end; Some work of noble note, may yet be done; Not unbecoming men that strove with Gods."

-.-


* Raphael Barge - Hommage to Raphael Sbarge

Modifié par CptData, 10 mai 2012 - 10:51 .

[Instance]

I want write a something but don't feel like continuing the ones I said I would lol.

[Dannycni]

Alot of words on this page so I thought I'd add some Ash

[kalikilic]

okay guys. so here is something i've been working on for a while. it's about 3700 words in length so due to it's length i have not posted it here. if you feel you're up for it, please check the Ashley and friends group led by CptData. it was posted in the "The Captain's Cabin" thread.

http://social.biowar...1/#post_2532161

that link is supposed to take you straight there if you are already joined to that group. do enjoy. thanks.

[BP93]

CptData wrote...

BP93 wrote...

Just a quick c&c, some of you guys seem to over do the "Skipper" IMO. It's no biggie, but seeing it every other line diminishes the effect.

Other than that, they're all great.

Ashley: Skipper?
Shepard: Ash!
Ashley: Skipper. *smiles*
Shepard: Ashley. *smiles back*
Ashley: Skip ...
Shepard: Ash?
Wrex: You two are annoying.

This made me LOL IRL.

I didn't mean to sound harsh, I was just posting an observation is all. Sorry if you all interpreted it as such.

[Rudy Lis]

DWH1982 wrote...

I suppose the quarians could have gotten it anywhere. I just think it's most likely they got it through the quarian who was, you know - actually working on a stealth ship.

"Pics or didn't happened".
I mean without solid proofs that's just one more "speculation".

DWH1982 wrote...

Wedding band = wedding ring. Look at her hand.

I noticed ring, but a) haven't heard it called "band", c) we wore them on right hands, so I didn't paid much attention to it.