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[lil yonce]

@DWH1982;

Here you are, sir. I like the mini speech he gives Ash before they hug. It's better than Ash doing all of the talking and apologizing all over the place in the already-romanced equivalent.

[DWH1982]

At least the date scene isn't bugged, like with the carry over romance.

Still prefer to start the romance in 1, though. Ash and Shepard should always be together.

[survivor_686]

DWH1982 wrote...

At least the date scene isn't bugged, like with the carry over romance.

Still prefer to start the romance in 1, though. Ash and Shepard should always be together.

Bugged? As far as I know its working fine for me.

[lil yonce]

Her dialogue is bugged. She begins to say a line meant only for a newly initiated romance and then she's cut off mid sentence.

And Shepard sucks her eyes out of her face before the fade to black.

ME3 was sloppy.

[Dannycni]

I was close to romancing Liara in ME1 the first time I played it and I think I used that line, something like 'Can't I have you both?' lol. As soon as that was shot down I choose Ashley and never looked back. Now when I play ME1, as DWH said, I just can't see me romancing anyone else, I suppose maybe I should sometime just to see the different character relationships but I could not go through ME1 and not romance Ashley, it just couldn't happen.

[BP93]

Td1984 wrote...

Youth4Ever wrote...

BP93 wrote...

Well, I wouldn't qualify that as "getting rusty". lol

Not to discredit anyone else here, because they're all great, but your dialogues are always the most fun to read. =)

Thanks! I do feel like I'm getting rusty though. Haven't written many dialogues in a while. Too busy trying to figure out Ash's Service History, which is a nightmare in the ME Universe by the way. You know any other posters with a military background who could help us resolve her background?

I plan on joining the Navy once I reach my target weight, but that won't help now.

Do you have to lose or gain? It's pretty strict for the Marines but I don't know the Navy requirements. I don't have to worry because I'm pretty much in the middle of the minimum and maximum weight for my height.

And yeah, I've played ME1 twice and the second time through I thought I would give Liara a shot...and well let's just say that didn't go as planned.

[DWH1982]

The end of the date scene seems to skip over an entire section of dialouge. Didn't you notice how Shepard just seems to jump to saying "remind me"? Ash doesn't say anything to set him up for that. It's like an entire section is cut, either intentionally or due to a bug.

EDIT: I wrote an... "unpleasant" dialouge, but I can't post it now because my pizza arrived. Time for dinner and an episode or two of DS9.

Modifié par DWH1982, 02 juin 2012 - 10:51 .

[BP93]

Unpleasant implications?

[CptData]

DWH1982 wrote...

The end of the date scene seems to skip over an entire section of dialouge. Didn't you notice how Shepard just seems to jump to saying "remind me"? Ash doesn't say anything to set him up for that. It's like an entire section is cut, either intentionally or due to a bug.

EDIT: I wrote an... "unpleasant" dialouge, but I can't post it now because my pizza arrived. Time for dinner and an episode or two of DS9.

Well, let's hope for a bug and they fix it with the upcoming EC DLC.

Doubt it. But hope dies last, right?

[MegaBadExample]

Youth4Ever wrote...

@DWH1982;

Here you are, sir. I like the mini speech he gives Ash before they hug. It's better than Ash doing all of the talking and apologizing all over the place in the already-romanced equivalent.

Hmmm...I like that. But I'm fond of Ashley giving Shepard the mini speech if you romance her in ME1 and stayed faithful. Seems to me, that Shepard is always giving the speeches to her, so it's a nice change of pace, for me anyway. It gives me the sense that Ashley's is pushing for it, and wants the relationship back, too.

I'm confused, does it go like this:
If you don't romance her in ME1 you get just a hug?
If you romance her in ME1, then cheat in ME2 you get a weird kiss?
If you remain faithful, you get a weird kiss?

But no matter what... you get Shepard's rape eyes? *shudders*

The faithful date scene was supposed to go something like this:

Shepard: Remind me.
Ashley: How quickly you forget.

But either way, it doesn't make much sense for Shepard just to blurt out, "remind me." What idiot on the writing team wrote that? The end of that date scene is completely careless.

Modifié par MegaBadExample, 02 juin 2012 - 11:02 .

[lil yonce]

MegaBadExample wrote...

Youth4Ever wrote...

@DWH1982;

Here you are, sir. I like the mini speech he gives Ash before they hug. It's better than Ash doing all of the talking and apologizing all over the place in the already-romanced equivalent.

Hmmm...I like that. But I'm fond of Ashley giving Shepard the mini speech if you romance her in ME1 and stayed faithful. Seems to me, that Shepard is always giving the speeches to her, so it's a nice change of pace, for me anyway. It gives me the sense that Ashley's is pushing for it, and wants the relationship back, too.

I'm confused, does it go like this:
If you don't romance her in ME1 you get just a hug?
If you romance her in ME1, then cheat in ME2 you get a weird kiss?
If you remain faithful, you get a weird kiss?

But no matter what... you get Shepard's rape eyes? *shudders*

The faithful date scene was supposed to go something like this:

Shepard: Remind me.
Ashley: How quickly you forget.
Shepard: You're kind of pushy, Williams.

I'd just like it if Shepard said something more than, "Maybe." after Ash hints about getting back together. >.>

Modifié par Youth4Ever, 02 juin 2012 - 11:13 .

[SJNKD]

I think there was a lot of sloppy and careless work done, they were rushed and it's why their are so many mistakes.

In the Ashley romance scene, a fish floats outside the tank. I started laughing.

Modifié par SJNKD, 02 juin 2012 - 11:16 .

[MegaBadExample]

Heh. Yeah. "Maybe." ...... -.-t

You know what? I think we should get that scene double-checked by a dev, just to be sure. If that's the way it was supposed to go, then that's just plain terrible.

Ashley: Get over here.
Shepard: Remind me.
Me: WTF?

Is everyone aware of that Ashley bug which doesn't allow some coversations on the Normandy to happen unless she's alive, romanced, or is a friend? Maybe, just maybeeee some of Ashley's dialogue also got bugged? Perhaps some of that cut dialogue is still in the game, but it just never plays?

Modifié par MegaBadExample, 02 juin 2012 - 11:12 .

[BP93]

SJNKD wrote...

I think there was a lot of sloppy and careless work done, they were rushed and it's why teir are so many mistakes.

In the Ashley romance scene, a fish floats outside the tank. I started laughing.

The fish got fed up with the VI. He had enough of the fish support group, tired of all the whiners. So he left.

(Sorry, that was lame but when I first read the description about the VI, that's exactly what I thought. It talks to them? What the hell is that? A support group for fish? )

And have you ever considered that Shepard kisses her eye on purpose? Maybe Ash has a weird fetish or something...

[SJNKD]

Ash was the only major romance to have lots of cut content. Liara got the best Romance and she hits on shepard lots. It annoys me, I only wanted to be her friend. Ash was always the one for my Shepard.

Modifié par SJNKD, 02 juin 2012 - 11:14 .

[SJNKD]

BP93 wrote...

SJNKD wrote...

I think there was a lot of sloppy and careless work done, they were rushed and it's why teir are so many mistakes.

In the Ashley romance scene, a fish floats outside the tank. I started laughing.

The fish got fed up with the VI. He had enough of the fish support group, tired of all the whiners. So he left.

(Sorry, that was lame but when I first read the description about the VI, that's exactly what I thought. It talks to them? What the hell is that? A support group for fish? )

And have you ever considered that Shepard kisses her eye on purpose? Maybe Ash has a weird fetish or something...

Maybe.

[MegaBadExample]

SJNKD wrote...

BP93 wrote...

SJNKD wrote...

I think there was a lot of sloppy and careless work done, they were rushed and it's why teir are so many mistakes.

In the Ashley romance scene, a fish floats outside the tank. I started laughing.

The fish got fed up with the VI. He had enough of the fish support group, tired of all the whiners. So he left.

(Sorry, that was lame but when I first read the description about the VI, that's exactly what I thought. It talks to them? What the hell is that? A support group for fish? )

And have you ever considered that Shepard kisses her eye on purpose? Maybe Ash has a weird fetish or something...

Maybe.

I see what you did there.

[LoneStarJedi]

Just finished playing ME1 again last night, my second ever Liara romance. Maybe I missed something because I was kinda just going through the motions, not really enjoying it too much, but that romance seemed kinda flat. Mostly Shep saying "Hey there..." and Liara going "Gee, I don't know...". Honestly thought the romance might not have triggered until the scene where you almost kiss after the Normandy gets locked down. Just wasn't much there. Gonna replay the next two games, see how the romance goes.

The Ash romance though, night and day. She flirts just as much as Shep does. She's got a life and a past and interesting personality quirks. Actually feels like she's slowly falling for Shep, it feels like real romance progression, as well as building a friendship. Can't wait to replay ME1 again, just for her.

[DWH1982]

MegaBadExample wrote...


Ashley: Get over here.
Shepard: Remind me.

Ash and Shepard at the dinner table

Ash: So, Hannah had a nice playdate with Debbie Smith, today. I was thinking that we...

Shepard: Remind me.

Ash:...What?

Shepard: Remind me.

Ash: *sighs* Shepard, you can't do that every time you want a kiss. I let that slide years ago, but even then it was just... weird. Remind you of what? How does that make any sense?

Shepard: Hey, my love is an art. Respect my artistic integrity.

Ash: *facepalm*

(No, this isn't the dialouge I mentioned earlier. Still finishing that)

Modifié par DWH1982, 03 juin 2012 - 12:13 .

[Td1984]

BP93 wrote...

Td1984 wrote...

Youth4Ever wrote...

BP93 wrote...

Well, I wouldn't qualify that as "getting rusty". lol

Not to discredit anyone else here, because they're all great, but your dialogues are always the most fun to read. =)

Thanks! I do feel like I'm getting rusty though. Haven't written many dialogues in a while. Too busy trying to figure out Ash's Service History, which is a nightmare in the ME Universe by the way. You know any other posters with a military background who could help us resolve her background?

I plan on joining the Navy once I reach my target weight, but that won't help now.

Do you have to lose or gain? It's pretty strict for the Marines but I don't know the Navy requirements. I don't have to worry because I'm pretty much in the middle of the minimum and maximum weight for my height.

And yeah, I've played ME1 twice and the second time through I thought I would give Liara a shot...and well let's just say that didn't go as planned.

Lose it. I'm about 5'11" and the Navy wants me at 210 lbs. When I started, I was around 275. I've managed to get down to probably around 250 (I won't go near a scale to check as I don't trust them lol), but I appear to have stalled out. I want to ultimately get down to 200, just to have some margin for error. If I could afford to go back to school without enlisting, I would. That's mainly why I'm doing it.

[DWH1982]

So, that "unpleasant" dialouge.

Anyone ever think that Ash's mother might actually take issue to her daughter being in a relationship with her commanding officer?


Ash: This is nice. Mom, why don’t you talk with Shepard a bit? I haven’t seen Lynn in ages, and I want to catch up.

*walks away*

Shepard: So…

Mrs. Williams: So. “Commander.” What, exactly, are your intentions with my daughter?

Shepard: Mrs. Williams, I love your daughter a great deal…

Mrs. Williams: Do you always seduce the women under your command?

Shepard: I… I’m sorry? “Seduce?” Ash and I are in a relationship…

Mrs. Williams: A “relationship.” Yes. If you can call it that. You are aware that there are regulations against fraternization, aren’t you?

Shepard: Well. Yes. But we’re both Spectres…

Mrs. Williams: Which means that you’re above the same rules that you expect your crew to follow?

Shepard: The Normandy engages in high risk missions on a regular basis. We’re all professionals, and I feel that loosening military restrictions a bit helps to keep too much tension from—

Mrs. Williams: So you encourage your crew members to sleep around? To take advantage of their subordinates?

Shepard: I… Did I do something wrong, Mrs. Williams?

Mrs. Williams: You mean aside from seducing my daughter, threatening everything she’s worked for, then putting her through sheer hell when you “died” and then turned up in a terror cell?

Shepard: Mrs. Williams, it’s clear you don’t think very much of me. But could you just give me a chance? I love Ash. She’s important to me, and that means her family is important to me, too. She’s already told me about her father. She says he would have liked me…

Mrs. Williams: Young man, Ashley’s father was career military. He believed in following the regs. He spent his life fighting the black mark against the Williams name. He would have hated you for risking his daughter’s career like this.

Shepard: I… I’m sorry you feel that way. But Ash can make her own decisions…

Mrs. Williams: That assumes she’s thinking clearly. When it comes to you, it’s obvious that she’s not. If you love Ashley, do her a favor. Leave her. Stop risking her career. Let her take her own command, instead of feeling the need to stay with you. Can’t you see how you’re hurting her?

Shepard: I don’t think I’m doing that. I’m not doing that. Look, Mrs. Williams, I love your daughter, and even if you don’t care for me, I’d at least like your respect…

Mrs. Williams: You don’t have it. And you never will.

Modifié par DWH1982, 03 juin 2012 - 12:40 .

[SJNKD]

Good dialogue DWH1982, always enjoy reading the stuff you write.

[DWH1982]

Thanks SJNKD!

Don't think Ash would react well if she found out about that conversation. Not sure Edwin Shepard would even tell her, though...

[SJNKD]

I don't think they would tell her, just think the two would continue their argument whenever ash isn't around.

[DWH1982]

Huh, I hadn't even thought of that. I think I like it, though.

Poor Shepard is going to dread the holidays...