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[DWH1982]

@BadExamp1e: I like!

Modifié par DWH1982, 17 juin 2012 - 11:41 .

[Dannycni]

Ah thanks Td, i'll look in future lol

Good stuff Example, pity it's not a few hundred words longer but still lol
No it was very good, not too sappy but still had enough to make me happy. I wonder how either of them would get any work done when they get to Shepards cabin!




Sappy pic

Modifié par Dannycni, 17 juin 2012 - 11:44 .

[BP93]

BadExamp1e wrote...


Ashley: I can be quiet and sit on your desk if that's what you're looking for.
Shepard: How 'bout my knee?
Ashley: Works for me. Besides, someone has to make sure you're doing your homework.

It was sappy until I got to this part. lol

For some reason I just got the mental image of a nun smacking Shepard on the wrist with a ruler.

Modifié par BP93, 17 juin 2012 - 11:44 .

[BadExamp1e]

Thanks guys.

@Danny; I could have made it longer, but... do you know what time it is, young man? Time for bed! And FYI, they both get a little work done, but eventually Ashley gets bored and starts playing with Shepard to amuse herself and pass the time.

[BadExamp1e]

BP93 wrote...

BadExamp1e wrote...


Ashley: I can be quiet and sit on your desk if that's what you're looking for.
Shepard: How 'bout my knee?
Ashley: Works for me. Besides, someone has to make sure you're doing your homework.

It was sappy until I got to this part. lol

For some reason I just got the mental image of a nun smacking Shepard on the wrist with a ruler.

Lol! Oh man.

When you say 'nun' how come I picture doctor Chakwas!?

[Spitfire017]

@BadExamp1e: Thanks, that hit the spot.

[Dannycni]

Example, I do know what time it is but I am your superior (age wise anyway) lol. Plus I'm not proud to admit I'm staying up to watch the wrestling. Plus I'm hoping my fellow country man Graeme McDowell can win the US Open and keep the title in Northern Ireland for the 3rd year in a row!

But back to Ash!

Erm...hmm...Ash is great, that is all!

Modifié par Dannycni, 17 juin 2012 - 11:58 .

[SweShadow90]

Guys!

What ya'll didn' know is that I produce music! And I actually have been working on a song that would sound similar to nightwish.. just for fun, nothing I'm gonna release or anything. But please listen to it, I thing you gonna here something familiar in the beginning. And I thought I fit perfectly to my ide of what the song is gonna be about later when it's done!

soundcloud.com/fuel_n_fire/live-an-eternity-work-in#

Enjoy! 

[BP93]

BadExamp1e wrote...

BP93 wrote...

BadExamp1e wrote...


Ashley: I can be quiet and sit on your desk if that's what you're looking for.
Shepard: How 'bout my knee?
Ashley: Works for me. Besides, someone has to make sure you're doing your homework.

It was sappy until I got to this part. lol

For some reason I just got the mental image of a nun smacking Shepard on the wrist with a ruler.

Lol! Oh man.

When you say 'nun' how come I picture doctor Chakwas!?

LOL!

Instead of star kid, that could be one of Shepard's nightmares.

[SweShadow90]

You might also give me some thoughts about the writing.. I know there's no vocals yet.. but be patient. I have alot of other music-stuff going on so it may take a while..

[SweShadow90]

Dannycni wrote...

Ah thanks Td, i'll look in future lol

Good stuff Example, pity it's not a few hundred words longer but still lol
No it was very good, not too sappy but still had enough to make me happy. I wonder how either of them would get any work done when they get to Shepards cabin!




Sappy pic

I love that picture!

[BadExamp1e]

SweShadow90 wrote...

Guys!

What ya'll didn' know is that I produce music! And I actually have been working on a song that would sound similar to nightwish.. just for fun, nothing I'm gonna release or anything. But please listen to it, I thing you gonna here something familiar in the beginning. And I thought I fit perfectly to my ide of what the song is gonna be about later when it's done!

soundcloud.com/fuel_n_fire/live-an-eternity-work-in#

Enjoy! 

You're awesomeness just went through the roof, good sir. But I think your link is broken, so I can't check it out.

I'm a big music fan, of all kinds. I've been listening to the same song practically all day. I can't stop listening to it.

@BP; lol yeah it would be pretty scary nightmare *shudders*

[SweShadow90]

ok, try just copying it then http://www.soundclou...ternity-work-in

[Spitfire017]

SweShadow90 wrote...

Guys!

What ya'll didn' know is that I produce music! And I actually have been working on a song that would sound similar to nightwish.. just for fun, nothing I'm gonna release or anything. But please listen to it, I thing you gonna here something familiar in the beginning. And I thought I fit perfectly to my ide of what the song is gonna be about later when it's done!

soundcloud.com/fuel_n_fire/live-an-eternity-work-in#

Enjoy! 

sorry, your link doesn't work.

Also, you said that you started with ME3. What made you start with it, and not ME1? Simply curious.

Modifié par Spitfire017, 18 juin 2012 - 12:11 .

[BadExamp1e]

SweShadow90 wrote...

ok, try just copying it then http://www.soundclou...ternity-work-in

Still won't work. I'm curious now too.

[survivor_686]

Funny thing is that I started out with ME2...then went back to ME1.

[SweShadow90]

Spitfire017 wrote...

SweShadow90 wrote...

Guys!

What ya'll didn' know is that I produce music! And I actually have been working on a song that would sound similar to nightwish.. just for fun, nothing I'm gonna release or anything. But please listen to it, I thing you gonna here something familiar in the beginning. And I thought I fit perfectly to my ide of what the song is gonna be about later when it's done!

soundcloud.com/fuel_n_fire/live-an-eternity-work-in#

Enjoy! 

sorry, your link doesn't work. Could just be my laptop though.

Also, you said that you started with ME3. What made you start with it, and not ME1? Simply curious.

I started with ME3 because I had heard and seen so much about it. All the vids on youtube and stuff.. So I didn't realise how much more it becomes when you have all the games and import a save from the previous games.

Call it ignorens.. but I didn't know better until I saw that you could have a totally different story after seeing the walkthrough-vids when I had already played half of the game

[lil yonce]

@Survivor

I read your fan-fic. Good job. Kinda short. I was hoping for a half hour huddled with my laptop in the library. And no conversation with Hannah Shepard? I was hoping you'd explore that, but maybe in another chapter, or maybe it's just not in your plans. And I see ME3 wasn't the first time Ashley got herself blind drunk.

Cliff hanger has left me wanting more.

[SweShadow90]

oh I see now, It was only private mode.. it should work now!

[SweShadow90]

does it work?

[BadExamp1e]

survivor_686 wrote...

Funny thing is that I started out with ME2...then went back to ME1.

I'm the same. Romanced Miranda first, but that relationship never clicked with me, it was all very "meh" and I hated how Shepard acted around her. Thought it was pathetic on my second playthrough. None of the ME2 women really clicked with me. When I played ME1, it was different. Ashley clicked with me the most, followed by Liara. I liked Jack, but I can't see any motivation to start anything on my Shepard's part... so yeah. When it comes down to Liara or Ashley in ME1... I'm obviously going to pick Ash because she fits better with my Shep.

I wish there was a new HUMAN female love interest for Shepard in ME3. Would have been interesting, and it would put a little bit more on the market, if you know what I mean.

[BadExamp1e]

SweShadow90 wrote...

does it work?

Yes! LMAO. I really wasn't expecting Ash to be on the track. That's neat. You've got skills my man.

[Dannycni]

But Example how could you ever move on from Ash???
A new human female LI could have been very interesting

SweShadow, well played good sir! I applaud you. I really enjoyed that music, very very good!!!

Modifié par Dannycni, 18 juin 2012 - 12:28 .

[BadExamp1e]

Dannycni wrote...

But Example how could you ever move on from Ash???
A new human female LI could have been very interesting

What am I talking about? We got a new human female love interest in ME3.

Allers or Ash? You choose!

Ashley>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Liara>>>>>>>>>Tali>>Jack>>Miranda>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Kaidan>>>>>>Allers.

Modifié par BadExamp1e, 18 juin 2012 - 12:30 .

[SweShadow90]

BadExamp1e wrote...

SweShadow90 wrote...

does it work?

Yes! LMAO. I really wasn't expecting Ash to be on the track. That's neat. You've got skills my man.

haha, thanx! Nice to hear that you like it

On my profile page on soundcloud I got some more songs. They vary in genre all of them, but might be fun to check out

EDIT: oh, and there's one rap song in swedish.. never mind that one.. or well if you think that's intressting then go ahead

Modifié par SweShadow90, 18 juin 2012 - 12:32 .