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Lt. Commander Ashley Williams thread: "Don't 'Ash' me!" We're Back Baby!


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Ashley: ... when did you learn how to dance?
Shepard: I'm a man of many talents.
Ashley: No, but seriously? When did you learn to dance?
Shepard: You're kind of killing the moment.
Ashley: Hey - payback for all the times you've murdered.
Shepard: *chuckles* That's fair. Goddamn it, you're a gorgeous woman.
Ashley: Guilty as charged, you're not halfbad yourself.
Shepard: Only 'half-bad', huh?
*chuckling*
Ashley: 
Thank you, for coming back.
Shepard:
What makes you think I wouldn't?
Ashley: Just... a bad feeling I had.
Shepard: After finally getting you back, you'd think I'd leave again? C'mon Ash, Gimme a little credit. Think I earned it.
Ashley: Just, stop trying to get yourself killed, ok?
Shepard: Hey - I'm just a regular guy in a crapsack galaxy.

*beat*

Ashley: *laughing* I think we thoroughly killed the moment now.
Shepard: Yeah, I think we did.

Modifié par Aurora313, 31 juillet 2012 - 11:29 .


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CptData wrote...

Ushanka wrote...

The worst if you see red dot just below the belt... It's much more worse than forehead...


Garrus:And you -really- broke up with Williams? I'm surprised, Shepard, really ... surprised.
Shepard: Why that, Garrus?
Garrus: Well, it was never a secret she's not forgiving. You must have a hell of a quad giving her up and not fearing the consequences.
Shepard: We're both adults, that's it. She'll understand.
Garrus: Why do you have a red dot at your groin?
Shepard: I don't have ... uh-oh.
Garrus: This is going to be ugly.



Come now we all know that no-one is that stupid, not even Shepard and he does have his moments.

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Arivael wrote...

Come now we all know that no-one is that stupid, not even Shepard and he does have his moments.

You mean ...

Ashley: So, Skipper, what's up?
Shepard:
## BLUE ## I care for you.
## GREY ## Our last mission.
## RED ## I break up.
## INVESTIGATE ## Underwear?

Take your pick :o

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CptData wrote...

Arivael wrote...

Come now we all know that no-one is that stupid, not even Shepard and he does have his moments.

You mean ...

Ashley: So, Skipper, what's up?
Shepard:
## BLUE ## I care for you.
## GREY ## Our last mission.
## RED ## I break up.
## INVESTIGATE ## Underwear?

Take your pick :o



Since when does the dialogue wheel have three choices?

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Yeah, Ashley is a real "The Rifleman of the Voroshilov Regiment"...

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Hey remember that excerpt I posted a while back regarding Shepard's and Ash's activities post Reaper war? Am having trouble with the Wrath of Thunder series, so thought I'd post another excerpt from another work here. Rate, review and comment please.

Take place with a Destroy ending in mind. Negotiations between the quarians and batarians concerning a geth dreadought have gone south.

Shepard hurled himself behind cover, as the hail of fire only seemed to intensify. Seconds later Ashley followed him into cover, albeit more gracefully, her powerful Phalanx pistol firing off two rounds. Shepard could have sworn he heard someone cry out, but it was hard to focus in maelstrom that whirled around them.

“Son of a ****!” he spat, as he heard a grenade go off somewhere. The negotiations had gone rather….badly. The quarian representative had all but snapped and hurled some obscure insult. The batarians had taken it rather badly and one of them slammed a rather sinister blade into the table. That had precipitated pistols being whipped out, more insults exchanged and then someone sneezed.

A simple sneeze was the spark that ignited the powder-key that was the standoff and soon geth dreadnought played host to a furious battle. Those series of unfortunate events had precipitated a shootout and then a major firefight. Around them, quarians marines and batarians soldier fought each other through the corridors and shafts of the derelict geth dreadnought. And both sides seemed to hold a grudge against Shepard; Balak because he hated Shepard personally and Xen because she saw him as an obstacle to quarians's glory.

Ashley had dragged Shepard out of the meeting room, the pair of them hurtling down the corridors as they tried to make their way

“So…” Ashley quietly slid over to him, her tone purposefully kept at the neutral “Who knew that both sides would seed a prized dreadnought with their own troops”

Shepard didn’t respond as he balefully stared back at her. Ashley had recommended that both leaders continue the talks at the Normandy, but Shepard was loathe to invite hostile captains into his prized ship.

Ashley gave one of her infuriating smirks and then rose up and fired another shot at their pursuers. Someone screamed and then was silenced, as a torrent of bullets forced Ashley back into cover.

“Quarian or batarian?” Shepard asked, as the thump of the body echoed across the steel plates that made up the floor of the crosswalk they were on.

“Quarian,” she snapped “Bastard was packing a falcon”

Shepard sighed as one more soul was lost to the madness that gripped the entire dreadnought. Even since the fall of the Reapers, there had been a mad scramble among the civilizations to recover geth technology in order to speed up their own recovery. The quarians and the batarians had been among the most eager in their frenzied search, the former using their knowledge about the synthetics and the latter using the years of black-market experience to find hidden caches.

It had all come to head when fate had conspired to dump a quarian liveship and a batarians destroyer at the same location of one massive geth dreadnought. Wielding enough firepower to put down the Destiny Ascension and still have enough left to wipe the floor with anyone else; both sides had quickly brought the bulk of their fleets to “secure” the dormant dreadnought. The prospect of another galactic war had frightened the galaxy and hence “Shepard the Negotiator” had been dispatched to solve the problem.

To be honest, it was to be Shepard’s last assignment. The hunt for Saren, the Collector base and the Reaper war had all taken their toll on his mind, body and soul. His implants were behaving erratically and sometimes he was wracked with headaches at the most random of moment. The doctor had recommended that he take an extended leave at the minimum. The galaxy begged to differ.

But that was moot as the batarian and quarian fleets moved to firing positions, as the combatants began trading fire with each other.  All of them fighting over this damned dreadnought, their leaders willing to kill or sacrifice their own in order to gain their prized possession, willing to go to any lengths to secure their prize…

“Their prize…”Shepard whispered to himself, as Ashley plucked an inferno grenade from her bandolier and hurled it into an approaching squad of batarian soldiers. Their screams pierced the gloomy atmosphere of the dreadnought, as the flames burned through their armour and melted their flesh.

“We’re clear, Skip.” Ashley reported, as she ducked back down, “About twenty metres to the airlock, I’ll get Joker to bring the Normandy around...”

“Ok you take the Normandy and then bring the Fifth fleet” Shepard replied, as he pulled himself to his feet. For a second he was taken aback as he saw charred batarian corpses and quarians with suit punctures. It never ceased to amaze him, how deadly Ashley was in combat.

“Screw that, Skipper” Ashley, as she rose up beside him, “I’m not going anywhere.”

Hours spent on the battlefield together, stolen moments of privacy, memories of romantic passion had conspired to tell Ashley what Shepard was exactly planning.

“I need you to make sure that the Normandy gets clear and…”Shepard tried to continue, before being cut off by Ashley

“That worked once,” Ashley snapped back at him “Not this time. I’m hanging onto your crippled ass”

A pregnant pause came between them, as Shepard stared into her eyes, trying to intimidate her. What he saw…humbled him. Defiance, love, fear and ardour stared back at him and impulsively Ashley grabbed his face and pulled him into a desperate kiss. For a moment the dreadnought filled with murderous quarians and fanatic batarians faded away, the muffled explosions and roars of gunfire giving way to their private moment.

“Crippled ass?” Shepard finally asked when the pair gently came apart.

“You should see yourself run” Ashley quipped, a grin tugging at the corner of her mouth “I’ve seen turkey’s with better grace”

“I love you Ash”

“Don’t I know it”

Modifié par survivor_686, 01 août 2012 - 12:38 .


#40782
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CptData wrote...

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The middle pic captures Ashley's finest look without any sexy undertone.
She's perfect in that pic. I love her eyes ... I -really- love 'em.

By the way: Ashley already used make-up and eye-liner in ME1 and ME2.
She just added some lipstick & gloss in ME3. And ppl call her the "drag queen". Offending.


I wouldn't use the word "drag queen", but imo they did make Ash look considerably worse in ME3. Posted Image

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at least they fixed that cross-eyed thing she did at times...

What, we can admit it, she was cross eyed sometimes!

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So...any comments, reviews?

PS: wrt to Ash in ME3....she kinda looks the same, though more in line with her ME2 model. Perhaps its due to the fact that they upgraded the engine between ME1 and ME2?

If you want to see a character whose face model has abruptly changed look at Liara between ME1, ME2, Lair of the Shadow Broker and ME3. The facial features have abruptly changed.

I think Garrus and Kaidan were spared from being drastically remodeled. Even Vandershep's model got changed around.

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@Survivor: That's really good. I really need to sit down and read your stuff some evening when I'm not exhausted.

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TheRealJayDee wrote...

CptData wrote...

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The middle pic captures Ashley's finest look without any sexy undertone.
She's perfect in that pic. I love her eyes ... I -really- love 'em.

By the way: Ashley already used make-up and eye-liner in ME1 and ME2.
She just added some lipstick & gloss in ME3. And ppl call her the "drag queen". Offending.


I wouldn't use the word "drag queen", but imo they did make Ash look considerably worse in ME3. Posted Image

Right so letting her hair down makes her a "drag queen" suggesting she's a Man, wearing womens clothing and a wig. Really?

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Adlegend - You need to learn to not take things so literal. Seems like anytime you post, you're chewing someone out for having an opinion that they are well entitled to have. It gets old.

@Survivor - Thats great stuff. I honestly don't have any critiques. :)

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survivor_686 wrote...

So...any comments, reviews?


Very nice survivor, you write combat very well and I like the banter between the two. Kept it close to what their characters would say in the game and added a little maturity to their relationship.

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ADLegend21 wrote...

TheRealJayDee wrote...

CptData wrote...

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The middle pic captures Ashley's finest look without any sexy undertone.
She's perfect in that pic. I love her eyes ... I -really- love 'em.

By the way: Ashley already used make-up and eye-liner in ME1 and ME2.
She just added some lipstick & gloss in ME3. And ppl call her the "drag queen". Offending.


I wouldn't use the word "drag queen", but imo they did make Ash look considerably worse in ME3. Posted Image

Right so letting her hair down makes her a "drag queen" suggesting she's a Man, wearing womens clothing and a wig. Really?


*sigh*

Like I said, I wouldn't use the word "drag queen". Cause that'd be just nonsensical. I do, however, think that whatever they did with her face makes her look worse. Nothing wrong about letting down the hair, except that it's stupid when on a mission.

And I didn't even start talking about her ridiculous fantasy uniform thingy. Posted Image

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TheRealJayDee wrote...
I wouldn't use the word "drag queen", but imo they did make Ash look considerably worse in ME3. Posted Image


I'm currently attempting to make her look more like her old self.
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I think the face structure was altered a bit, but texture replacement is going a long way.

(Default ME3 on left, revised on right)

Modifié par JeanLuc761, 01 août 2012 - 02:05 .


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Thanks for all the comments, fellow Ashleymancers. The lack of comments on a work can be a little discouraging at times (almost no one comments on deviantart, except if its a drawing)

Am thinking of posting an end to the Post-Reaper excerpts. Sad, bittersweet or happy? Anyone up for some tragedy, complete with some pathos? Or a triumphant ending, with tinge of bitterness to it?

Thanks again

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survivor_686 wrote...

Thanks for all the comments, fellow Ashleymancers. The lack of comments on a work can be a little discouraging at times (almost no one comments on deviantart, except if its a drawing)

Am thinking of posting an end to the Post-Reaper excerpts. Sad, bittersweet or happy? Anyone up for some tragedy, complete with some pathos? Or a triumphant ending, with tinge of bitterness to it?

Thanks again


Well, I'm all about the triumph of Shepley and happily ever after, but really you just gotta write what you feel. Art is very expression of self, you know?

Unless you're Walters/Hudson, then get some help

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krukow wrote...

Well, I'm all about the triumph of Shepley and happily ever after, but really you just gotta write what you feel. Art is very expression of self, you know?

Unless you're Walters/Hudson, then get some help


That made me giggle.

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Why not upload on FanFiction, survivor?

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survivor_686 wrote...

Thanks for all the comments, fellow Ashleymancers. The lack of comments on a work can be a little discouraging at times (almost no one comments on deviantart, except if its a drawing)

Am thinking of posting an end to the Post-Reaper excerpts. Sad, bittersweet or happy? Anyone up for some tragedy, complete with some pathos? Or a triumphant ending, with tinge of bitterness to it?

Thanks again

How the hell do you post writings to DA? I wanted to put Officially Unofficially on my DA to go with some drawings I was mucking around with, but it insisted I edit it as HTML code and it wasn't even worth the hassle. You must have a secret or be an ace at development.

I'm sorry no one is reading or commenting. I read a couple chapters of your Ash fic and it's really well written. I'd also recommend FanFiction.net since its a lot easier to search for writing there, especially with character criteria.

Tragedy all the way :devil:

- Ren

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TheRealJayDee wrote...

ADLegend21 wrote...

TheRealJayDee wrote...

CptData wrote...

Posted Image
The middle pic captures Ashley's finest look without any sexy undertone.
She's perfect in that pic. I love her eyes ... I -really- love 'em.

By the way: Ashley already used make-up and eye-liner in ME1 and ME2.
She just added some lipstick & gloss in ME3. And ppl call her the "drag queen". Offending.


I wouldn't use the word "drag queen", but imo they did make Ash look considerably worse in ME3. Posted Image

Right so letting her hair down makes her a "drag queen" suggesting she's a Man, wearing womens clothing and a wig. Really?


*sigh*

Like I said, I wouldn't use the word "drag queen". Cause that'd be just nonsensical. I do, however, think that whatever they did with her face makes her look worse. Nothing wrong about letting down the hair, except that it's stupid when on a mission.

And I didn't even start talking about her ridiculous fantasy uniform thingy. Posted Image


I actually think her ME 2 face was the one that was altered and ME 1 and 3 are more in sync. It's because it seems to me her nose was somehow changed in ME 2. Also, the endges of her skull seem a bit sharper and deeper in ME 2. It's hard to say can't really pinpoint it :blush:

You have to take in considaration that only games where we can really indulge in Ash (no pun intended) are ME1 and ME 3 and there is a huge texture difference in those two which also adds to characters look.

Don't know, I am overall happy whit how she looks in ME 3. my problem is that they gave her some idiotic, cerberus style latex clothing

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I think she is hot in me3, they just should have combined her hairstyle so that she had the bun once in a while ;-)

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TheRealJayDee wrote...

CptData wrote...

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The middle pic captures Ashley's finest look without any sexy undertone.
She's perfect in that pic. I love her eyes ... I -really- love 'em.

By the way: Ashley already used make-up and eye-liner in ME1 and ME2.
She just added some lipstick & gloss in ME3. And ppl call her the "drag queen". Offending.


I wouldn't use the word "drag queen", but imo they did make Ash look considerably worse in ME3. Posted Image


I dunno. The right picture is just not Ashley's "finest moment" in the game, she looks angry. If you use a picture from ME3, she looks as beautiful as the Ash we know. It highly depends on her facial expression.

When I do the comparison, I'd say, Ashley's appearance changed only in some details: she seem to tug her beautiful eyebrows, which is a shame. She's one of few women I love with natural brows - especially since hers are shaped perfectly.

Next big detail change, obviously, is her hairdo. I like her open hair, but I think it should have been one of the "rewarding features" for those romancing her (and staying loyal). So in fact I believe Ash should have used her ol' bun but on board of the Normandy and in the field - and let her hair down only in appropriate moments: hospital scenes, the date on the Citadel, the romantic climax scene.

And Ash uses lip gloss now.

Besides that, I can't see "tons of make-up that make her looking like a hooker". Her special outfit isn't "hooker-like" either 'though it's no combat dress.

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I dont see anything wrong with her using make up, a lot of women in the army does that, it makes her more feminin, yeah her boyish side I like too but a woman should also know how to be feminin and look like a "woman" sometimesPosted Image Her armor looks good but maybe not so realistic....

Lol Data, yeah in that pic she looks more angry but hey she is more angry in me3 lol

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Ashley: Mine is bigger than yours!
Shephard: No! Mine is bigger...
Ashley: I said mine is bigger!
Shephard: Ashley! You are squeezing my hand....

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