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Rats, hate getting up in the morning, but have to. So have fun with Ashley (not in the wrong way).
Modifié par CptData, 03 octobre 2011 - 07:54 .

Modifié par CptData, 03 octobre 2011 - 07:54 .
Modifié par Mr. Brainheart, 03 octobre 2011 - 08:03 .
Aurora313 wrote...
Anyone feel like a Shepley snippet?
I feel like writing a bunch of consecutive snippets every night before going to sleep.
Anyone wanna read em?
Aurora313 wrote...
Here's a snippet. Character-building for Shep.
Shepard finally found a moment to sit down and play his guitar. It had been a long time since he was able to play. Nearly eight years. He reminded himself with a sad smile on his lips. He set himself up on his bed, carefully strumming chords until he could make something that vaguely resembled music.
"That's a moldy-oldy if I ever heard one." Ashley's voice startled him and he stopped mid-chord.
"Yeah." Shepard answered, starting to play again. Ash watched his face, there was no outward change, but she could tell by that look in his eyes. When he played the guitar - Vera, he called it - the very rare instance that Ash caught him playing, his eyes looked like they were lost in a distant memory.
"You don't really like playing that in front of me, do you?" She asked, not sure if she was bitter or not. Shepard was very private when it came to that guitar, even with Ash.
Shepard stopped playing, his strumming hand falling limp. "No - it's not that." He placed the instrament on the bed and leant on his knees, elbows on his knees. "Playing it just brings back some old memories. Some of 'em are pretty painful."
Ash walked over and sat down next to him, resting her cheek on his shoulder. "You know you can talk to me about it, if it helps."
"It's... " Shepard scoffed shaking his head, "... sentimental - stupid."
"If it has you this far down in the dumps, then its probably not as stupid as you think."
"I was engaged," The statement came after a few long moments of silence. It was a huge blow to the gut for Ash. "Ages before I met you. All the way back when I just finished the N7 training."
"Why didn't you tell me?" Ash asked, sitting up straight and staring at his profile. He looked guilty, ashamed even, but continued none the less pretending he didn't hear the question.
"We were on Elysium, visiting her realtives before the wedding. I remember thinking that this girl was the one I wanted to spend my life with. She was smart, like crazy-intellegent, cultured. Almost ridiculously gorgeous and I would have gone to hell and back again for her and she used to love watching me play." He shrugged, his voice faltered only slightly, but Ash caught it. "She was - for lack of better way to say it - my high-school sweetheart."
"What happened?" Ash asked gently, the stoic, serious Shepard she had known was gone, all of his emotional armor was gone and she heard him sniffle, a tear forming in his eye.
"The batarian attack happened. I was at the military barrack - I think I was drinking with a few guys from basic, I really don't remember - and she was at her family farm on the outskirts. First place that got hit. They weren't even taking prisoners. She survived the attack barely but - " Shepard's left hand brushed past the artery on his neck. "A piece of sharpnel caught her neck and she bled to death."
"God - John. I'm so sorry." Ash whispered softly, unable to say anything else.
Shepard jerked his head towards the guitar. "She gave me that as an eighteen present. Year later I gave her a ring for hers." Shepard reached for the guitar and flipped it over, showing the inscription on the back. 'Mal - love you always and forever. Verity.'
"I don't know what to say." Ash said, shaking her head. Shepard nodded.
"It's all the past now." He said with finality, whipping the tears off his face. "That was then." He carrassed her cheek. "This is now, and I'm not letting you go anyway."
Hurray for deep emotional angle.
CptData wrote...
Poor Shep.
Hmmm, I think it's a bit "meaningless" to die like that. After all, it's just the last of the Reapers - I'm sure there is another way to kill that one. No need for Shepard to die with it ...
Anyhow, it's your snippet *g*
In my "Shepard-dies"-idea, he's steering a frighter with a huge payload of eezo into a sun. He wants to destroy this sun (supernova) to kill most of the Reaperfleet flying through the system ...
(It makes more sense in my eyes to do that)
ah I love Chinon's work.CptData wrote...
Here you go with a good-night-Ash.
http://browse.devian...set=96#/d38c010
Rats, hate getting up in the morning, but have to. So have fun with Ashley (not in the wrong way).
Mr. Brainheart wrote...
'She's walking a part of the path of her life. That part being: from meeting up with Shepard and the rest of the Normandy SR-1 crew to being one of them and recruiting the other squaddies. The Collectorship is there because that's the point that she briefly reunites with Shepard and, in my mind atleast, Garrus and Tali.
The Snippet of poetry is from Ulysses (Since she knows it by heart) and is kind of reminiscing. That is atleast what I intendet it to be...You could interpret it otherwise.
(Btw, did you have any kind of lettertype in mind..stylisticly I mean)
Aurora313 wrote...
@reed
But I do so enjoy teasing you. And maybe Badpie can use them if they really want. I don't have time to write anymore. I'm back at school.
xxSgt_Reed_24xx wrote...
short answer.
Awesomeness... and dem lips.
draken-heart wrote...
xxSgt_Reed_24xx wrote...
short answer.
Awesomeness... and dem lips.
i kinda ment in the skills department, for fighting the reapers.
draken-heart wrote...
^well my fem!shep is an infiltrator, so i might pick ash, for the lethality tank that she'll be in ME3, i guess.

draken-heart wrote...
^well my fem!shep is an infiltrator, so i might pick ash, for the lethality tank that she'll be in ME3, i guess.
pprrff wrote...
I can't believe they are going to promote her, I thought her Non-commission status was to give her a aura of tough-gal gun-ho marine sorta of feel, which was a pretty good contrast with Kaiden's reserved and more subtle approach. Now that she is a officer ...., I don't know, in war fictions, I tend to like the tough seasoned NCO character rather than the new fresh commissioned Lt. That's just me.
Modifié par CptData, 04 octobre 2011 - 06:37 .