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[MegaBadExample]

CptData wrote...

Seems it's "medics day".

Part II (a short Part II) - Ashley took a hit in her liver.

Shepard: Joker! Where's the Normandy?!
Joker: Hang on ... EDI, more ECM! They almost got us -static- hullbreach! One more and the war is over for us -static- lost port engine 2. We're almost through -static-
Shepard: Joker, come in. Come in. Can you hear me?
Mordin: She's stabilized now. Need medbay for emergency surgery.
Shepard: Great, just great. JOKER!
Wrex: We have to fall back, Shepard. Vega got hit too.
Pierce: You son of a ... cover me, Miranda. I'll carry Vega.
Miranda: Will do. Where's the Normandy?
Shepard: I have no idea, Miranda. Lost connection.
Mordin: Life signs are fading.
Shepard: JOKER!
Pierce: Ouch! What am I? A target?
Miranda: Pierce got hit.
Wrex: They're coming. Good day to die.
Shepard: Not yet ... *picks up gun* ... make sure they don't get Ashley. I'll lure them away ...
Wrex: That's my job. The Normandy needs you.
Shepard: You stay. I have to do this - for Ashley ... *storms into crowd with his assault rifle firing*
Wrex: Stupid. Shepard. Stupid.
Mordin: Can't keep her alive any longer ...
Miranda: Guess it's over. Doesn't matter anymore, Mordin ...
Pierce: Hope they'll make it quick ...
Wrex: As I said, it's a good day to die.
Pierce: There they come again ... make ready!

Why are you killing everybody!? Why!?

[Mr. Brainheart]

Aurora313 wrote...

Again, I ask - have I cursed people into thinking Shepard is a whipped mama's boy?

I think I tend to interpret every Shepard in the dialogue's too strongly with my own Canon Shep, so to be honest only very slightly.

You'll need to work even harder if you want to achieve that I hold that believe!

Modifié par Mr. Brainheart, 14 octobre 2011 - 02:39 .

[Aurora313]

ZOMG! No killing Vega! 


At least not until Pierce has had her way with him!

[CptData]

I'm not done yet.
... killing ... you.

Okay, we need a top Ash and I'll check if I can write a part III.


Ashley: I know there is something I wanted to do ... come on, Ash ... think!

Modifié par CptData, 14 octobre 2011 - 02:38 .

[Aurora313]

Mr. Brainheart wrote...

Aurora313 wrote...

Again, I ask - have I cursed people into thinking Shepard is a whipped mama's boy?

I think I tend to interpret every Shepard in the dialogue's too strongly with my own Canon Shep, so to be honest only very slightly.

You'll need to work even harder if you want to achieve that!

Bugga. Gotta work harder. But in the worlds of the biotic god 'I'm tired. Nap now.... destroy universe later....'

[Aurora313]

CptData wrote...

*zip*

Ash does not approve of Shepard drinking all the guinness and having a beach-side BBQ without her.

[Mr. Brainheart]

Hate to say it, but don't get Pierce too involved please, Whilst I like the character, remember that some people on the thread didn't like the additional OC's. I think a little side role is fine, but just wanted to say it, before you get too carried away.

Modifié par Mr. Brainheart, 14 octobre 2011 - 02:40 .

[UrusVerra]

Car and women for Shepard

[Aurora313]

Yea. Cpt. Please tone down her involvement some. Even I - the person who created her - am a little sick of her at the moment. It's ok to keep her a support role, but don't go overboard please.

[Aurora313]

UrusVerra wrote...

Shepard: I knew it. You can TOTALLY pick up chicks in a Mako.
Ashley: Wanna be picking up your teeth in the Mako?<_<
Shepard: I withdraw the previous statement. 
Ashley: Good boy. 

Modifié par Aurora313, 14 octobre 2011 - 02:44 .

[MegaBadExample]

Aurora313 wrote...

CptData wrote...

*zip*

Ash does not approve of Shepard drinking all the guinness and having a beach-side BBQ without her.

Now that's livin!

[Aurora313]

MegaBadExample wrote...

Aurora313 wrote...

CptData wrote...

*zip*

Ash does not approve of Shepard drinking all the guinness and having a beach-side BBQ without her.

Now that's livin!

Shepard: I didn't even know you were on this planet!
Ashley: Where the hell else would I be?! The moon?
Shepard: ... maybe as a drill instructor.
Ashley: Just gimme the tongs and the guinness then walk away and comeback with my swimsuit, alright?
Shepard: Yes ma'am. *walks off*
Ashley: *Scoffs* Men....

[Cypher0020]

hello people

Did I miss anything?

[MegaBadExample]

@Aurora

Lol, it seems like Ash has your Shepard trained well already. I know if it was my Shepard, he'd put up more fight than that

[Aurora313]

Indeed she does. lol. Shepard learnt a long time ago - no obeying the Ashley means: no sex, making out or any of the fun flintiness in-between.

[Mr. Brainheart]

@Aurora; You're doing this deliberately aren't you? ..evil.

@Cypher; Not anything particularly important I think.

[MegaBadExample]

Aurora313 wrote...

Indeed she does. lol. Shepard learnt a long time ago - no obeying the Ashley means: no sex, making out or any of the fun flintiness in-between.

But she took his guiness! A man has gotta stand up for his rights!

Though...Just doing what she says, is the quickest way to get her in the swimsuit.... But still!

[Aurora313]

me: I'm sorry, what am I doing?

Shepard: turning me into Ash's pet SpecTRe

me: Oh? You've got a problem with that?

Shepard: Yes I do! I have my dignity, you know!

Me: *force persuade +hand wave gesture* You will follow my every command.

Shepard: Hell no!

Me: *again with the force persuade* You will follow my command.

Shepard: Do you seriously think you're some kind of Jedi, or something?

Me: Put it another way. Do what I say and I won't get Ash to kick your ass from hear to kingdom come, understood?

Shepard: *sigh* Fiiine.

me: Good. Now find Ashley's swimsuit. I got plans.... *evil laugh*

[CptData]

Hehe nice one

Okay, last part.

Wrex: So it's over ...
Miranda: Yes. Didn't thought I would die next to a Krogan.
Wrex: And what about a friend?
Miranda: That's ... the same. Didn't thought I would die next to a friend.
Vega: How's Pierce doing?
Mordin: Got hit three times, but will make it. Can't say that for Williams.
Vega: How is she?
Mordin: Barely alive.
Miranda: Wait ... is that ... the Normandy?
Wrex: No way. I heard how she got hit.
Vega: Nope, it's the Normandy.
Joker: ... away team, come in. Are you okay? Prepare for evac!
Miranda: Affirmative. Shepard's not here.
Joker: Don't have him on my sensors as well. The medbay is ready for any wounded.
Mordin: Perfect. Williams has top priority.
Wrex: Lets go, we have not much time to waste.

*after the battle*

Mordin: Williams is stable now. Liver got punctured, but can fix it. Pierce got light wounds and won't need my assistance anymore. Vega is treated by Chakwas - doing a great job.
Ashley: ... hnngg ..
Mordin: Williams seems to gain consciousness.
Ashley ... John ... I'm sorry, John ...
Mordin: Can you hear me?
Ashley: Skipper ... ? Where is Shepard?
Mordin: It's me. Status of Shepard is unknown.
EDI: Shepard, John. MIA.
Ashley: No ... that's not fair ... John! Come back! Don't dare to leave me ...

*some time before that*

Joker: ... away team, come in. Are you okay? Prepare for evac!
Miranda: Affirmative. Shepard's not here.
Joker: Don't have him on my sensors as well. The medbay is ready for any wounded.
Shepard: Joker, do you hear me? Sh ... my com is broken. And I bet they can't pick up my life signs ... to much radiation here. Need to go to that radio tower ... could be still intact.

Soo ... still no "last part" - must say, I feel "dry" ... :
However, need to finish this. Last part will be Shepley exclusive. No other characters.

Modifié par CptData, 14 octobre 2011 - 02:58 .

[Aurora313]

MegaBadExample wrote...

Aurora313 wrote...

Indeed she does. lol. Shepard learnt a long time ago - no obeying the Ashley means: no sex, making out or any of the fun flintiness in-between.

But she took his guiness! A man has gotta stand up for his rights!

Though...Just doing what she says, is the quickest way to get her in the swimsuit.... But still!

I know. But it's for lols.

[Aurora313]

Please have more! John needs to get back to Ashley! Pleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease!!!!

[Cypher0020]

say.... well... would anyone mind If I did another Shepley fic?

It'd be with Ash and Ron this time

[Complistic]

Aurora313 wrote...

Ok if there is another female squadmate, i'm gonna be pissed

It was hinted at in a tweet a few weeks ago. I dunno why it'd make you angry. Unless you were banking on Ashley becoming bi.

Modifié par Complistic, 14 octobre 2011 - 03:04 .

[Aurora313]

Complistic wrote...

Aurora313 wrote...

Ok if there is another female squadmate, i'm gonna be pissed

It was hinted at in a tweet a few weeks ago.

*facepalm* Alright. But they better be a redshirt.

edit: Oh - a bi female teammate? 

Second thought: Not so pissed, more annoyed. They could have announced her the same time they did Vega. Otherwise - whatever, maybe it'll be fine, but I ain't banking on it.

Modifié par Aurora313, 14 octobre 2011 - 03:06 .

[Cypher0020]

Wouldn't it be hilarious if said new female squaddie said

"Hi I"m ________. You knew my brother, Jenkins?"