Sorry, My Bad. Opps top of the page Heres Ashley (I've moved Ashley to top, she always likes to be on top)CptData wrote...
AllianceN7Marine wrote...
Heres another shepley dialouge for you all, been trying to write this one for a while now see what you think:
SSV Normandy SR2 - En Route to Citadel from Earth
Deck 1 The Loft
17.30hrs
*cut epic dialogue*
Perfectly done. Just one thing - Earth has 11 Billion people in 22nd century
I'll throw in my own dialogue ... here it comes:
SPOILER FREE
SSV Normandy SR2 - En Route to Citadel from Earth (passing Arcturus gate)
Deck 2 CIC
4:00pm board time
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EDI: Arriving Arcturus System.
Shepard: Report.
Joker: Looks like the Reapers went through here too. Damnit, commander, the sixth and the eigth fleet was stationed here, if they got them too ...
Shepard: I know. That's almost a fifth of our entire Armada.
Joker: Aye. Did you ever got the feeling this could be the end of our days lately?
Shepard: We can't give up now, Jeff. Everyone is counting on us - either we'll find a way to stop the Reapers or no one will. Sure, it sounds like another suicide mission, but we went through two already, I'm sure we can do the hattrick. Hope is everything we have left. Let that be a beacon of light in our darkest hour.
Joker: I'll keep that in mind, Commander.
Ashley: Well spoken, Shepard. A bit sappy ... but that always was your flaw: pulling cheesy lines.
Shepard: Hey Ashley - we hadn't any time to talk yet.
Ashley: You wanted those reports of the last month since they got you grounded.
Shepard: Thank you. I'll read them later, in the loft.
Ashley: Anything else, Sir?
Shepard: Yes. We need to talk.
Ashley: *sigh* Okay ... where should I begin? Horizon? Bahak-System? Tela Vasir? The way how half of the Galaxy sees the "Hero of the Citadel" now?
Shepard: it doesn't matter, Ash ...
Ashley: It does. You're not the man you were two years ago. You're wading in a stream of blood since you came back from the dead. The man I knew could never kill hundreds of thousands ... I'm not a fan of the Batarians, but blowing up an entire system? Is that you? Do you know how they call you? The "Scourge of Bahak", a Terrorist. Taking you down will earn any headhunter 50 million credits dead and tenfold if you're alive. They all will going after your head.
Shepard: Ashley, I tried to warn them, but there was no time ... ask Hackett ... he sent me on that mission. I couldn't do anything else ...
Ashley: And Vasir, a fellow Spectre? You killed her for no good reason. She was on your trail, am I right? The council re-activated your status, but also sent her to observe you, am I right?
Shepard: Vasir was working for the Shadowbroker and tried to take me down. I had to defend Liara and myself and ...
Ashley: Nonsense. Vasir was a loyal Spectre, one of the best. I knew her ... she was one of my trainers.
Shepard: I'm sorry.
Ashley: Shepard, that's not the point. You did a lot of sh*t ... you're becoming Saren, don't you see that? With every innocent killed you become more and more like him. And you destroyed an entire star system ...
Shepard: I tried to warn the Batarians! I saw no other way to stall the Invasion. We needed more time to prepare - and even now that time was far too short. We had hoped for at least another year, not just two months!
Ashley: I just try to understand you, Shepard. I can't ... not now.
Shepard: Then there's nothing to talk for now. I'm in the loft, reading those reports.
Ashley: That's it, that's all what you can say?
Shepard: As long as you're not listening nothing I say will change your opinion. It's as you said: I'm not the same anymore. Things have changed, feelings have changed. And there's a lot of stuff to do before arriving Citadel. I promised Anderson I'll make the Council listen. They have to send help.
Ashley: They won't help you.
Shepard: If that's the case I'll do it on my own. Like I always did. I'm in the loft, reading reports.
Ashley: Wait ...
Kelly: Let him go, Ashley.
Ashley: Any idea why he's like that?
Kelly: That's a question only you can answer.
@CptData Changed Earth population to 11 billion instead of 8. Poor Shepard he just can't catch a break.
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