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[CptData]

^ Lord Zeel is that you?
And I'm not sure if it meets your expections of "bad" or "good" at all. Depends on your taste.

* no Ash pic here since I'm @ work *

Modifié par CptData, 06 décembre 2011 - 11:27 .

[Zeelx]

CptData wrote...

^ Lord Zeel is that you?
And I'm not sure if it meets your expections of "bad" or "good" at all. Depends on your taste.

* no Ash pic here since I'm @ work *

Yes. King Zeel. I explained my tastes on the previous page.


Bad = Silly romantic crap "Oh your eyes are like da moon"
Good = Very little romantic dialogue. Except little sex puns. Which I find amusing.

Modifié par Zeelx, 06 décembre 2011 - 11:29 .

[who would know]

[MegaBadExample]

Zeelx wrote...

CptData wrote...

MegaBadExample wrote...

Grey34 wrote...

MegaBadExample wrote...

Do you want me to send you just that heartbreaking line Data? *Innocent face*

 

yeah i wouldn't mind reading that just see what you guys are talking about it. don't worry about me i will forget it in a day or 2

Depends on what scene you want, what lines and how many. It really only makes sense if you read the whole conversation. Which would be a big spoiler. As in Data's case, I just sent him ONE LINE of Ashley's. But it says a lot.

You've got PM.
And yes, it says a lot. Actually, it pretty much says the same like most of us more active dialogue writers would let Ash say in our dialogues.

Funny.

Didn't know I have so much understanding about Ashley's feelings, but it looks as if I hit the bullseye ...

You guys have peaked my interest. Without spoiling. Is it bad or good?

Bad = mushy mushy romance crap. "I lube u sheprd 4 eternity"
Good = Realistic lines that don't revolve around "love" "Sex me here Shepard"

None of the romances are "Sex me here Shepard." It all very... heart to heart.

[CptData]

Zeelx wrote...

CptData wrote...

^ Lord Zeel is that you?
And I'm not sure if it meets your expections of "bad" or "good" at all. Depends on your taste.

* no Ash pic here since I'm @ work *

Yes. King Zeel. I explained my tastes on the previous page.


Bad = Silly romantic crap "Oh your eyes are like da moon"
Good = Very little romantic dialogue. Except little sex puns. Which I find amusing.

You should ask the one who got the full spoilers. Lets say, from what I heard of multiple fans, it'll hit Ashley fan's taste, but could include a lot of romantic talk AND a lot of sexy talk.
So I'm still not sure if it hits YOUR particular taste, Sir.

[Zeelx]

MegaBadExample wrote...


None of the romances are "Sex me here Shepard." It all very... heart to heart.

Damn it.


Again  Bioware? Why must you do this silly crap to me.

[Mr. Brainheart]

Missed 500 hundred pages? Aww, still nice Ash-bomb Reed, thank god you didn't post that yesterday though, or my pc would've frozen up XD

I think Ashley's romance should be a mix of very romantic and sexual tension, she can be pretty cheesy, but at the same time a hellcat.

Also no more vague spoiler talk! You're making me to curious for my own good!

[MegaBadExample]

Zeel will be happy. But it won't be romancing Ash, Liara or Kaidan. Who're all very "You mean so much to me, Shepard." I think Zeel wants something along the lines of: "In the back now! quickie, quickie, quickie!"

[Zeelx]

I'm just tired of skipping dialogue because it's some long winded Love confession.


Yeah yeah Shepard died, Ashley mourned. Get over it.

[CptData]

Zeelx wrote...

I'm just tired of skipping dialogue because it's some long winded Love confession.


Yeah yeah Shepard died, Ashley mourned. Get over it.

Would say you should give Ash a chance. After all, the ME series isn't some kind of soft porn with lenghty scenes between (very short) porn scenes

Aaaaaand believe me, it's totally un-Ashley if she can't get it off her tongue. Either she says it directly or she says it via poem, but she won't use the "shy teenager route" to tell Shepard about her feelings. Straight forward she is!

Sorry @ Brain ... Ash is already disappointed ... because I did the deed :crying:

[Mr. Brainheart]

MegaBadExample wrote...

Zeel will be happy. But it won't be romancing Ash, Liara or Kaidan. Who're all very "You mean so much to me, Shepard." I think Zeel wants something along the lines of: "In the back now! quickie, quickie, quickie!"

Lol

Ashley: Skipper...There's something I need to say
Shepard: Oh really? Maybe you wanna talk about...somewhere more comfy?
Ashley: Remember the night before Ilos?
Shepard:  Yes, let's make it forty then!
Ashley: Wh-what? No, I mean that there was something I wanted to tell you back then..
Shepard: Sit on the bed. Let's discuss it... in body language.
Ashley: Oh Captain, my-
Shepard: Poetry again? C'mon, cut the crap and let's get to it!
Ashley: Damnit Shepard! *slaps him in the face and walks away*
Shepard: Hey, angel! Your Captain orders you to come back an-
Ashley: Go to hell! Ask Harbinger for a cheap time, he's clearly interested in you.

^silly, silly dialogue, why did I create you
Dialogue: because you're one crazy person..
Me: That'd explain it..*ahem*...right.

[Phobius9]

CptData wrote...


Aaaaaand believe me, it's totally un-Ashley if she can't get it off her tongue.

Wow, did I mis-read that particular line the first time around 

[CptData]

Mr. Brainheart wrote...

MegaBadExample wrote...

Zeel will be happy. But it won't be romancing Ash, Liara or Kaidan. Who're all very "You mean so much to me, Shepard." I think Zeel wants something along the lines of: "In the back now! quickie, quickie, quickie!"

Lol

Ashley: Skipper...There's something I need to say
Shepard: Oh really? Maybe you wanna talk about...somewhere more comfy?
Ashley: Remember the night before Ilos?
Shepard:  Yes, let's make it forty then!
Ashley: Wh-what? No, I mean that there was something I wanted to tell you back then..
Shepard: Sit on the bed. Let's discuss it... in body language.
Ashley: Oh Captain, my-
Shepard: Poetry again? C'mon, cut the crap and let's get to it!
Ashley: Damnit Shepard! *slaps him in the face and walks away*
Shepard: Hey, angel! Your Captain orders you to come back an-
Ashley: Go to hell! Ask Harbinger for a cheap time, he's clearly interested in you.

^silly, silly dialogue, why did I create you
Dialogue: because you're one crazy person..
Me: That'd explain it..*ahem*...right.

:lol:

Ashley: Welcome back, Shepard.
Shepard: Ashley ... we need to pick up Anderson.
Anderson: I won't go with you. I'll stay here and you need to bring as many fleets as possible!
Shepard: I won't go without you!
Anderson: That's an order, Shepard.
Shepard: I don't take your orders anymore!
Anderson: Consider you as reinstated, Commander!
... 5 seconds later
Ashley: Oh Captain, my ...
Shepard: Ah nevermind, Ash. Here and now?
Ashley: What?
Shepard: Make up sex for Horizon?
Ashley: No way you ass ...
Shepard: Okay. Anderson - I stay with you!
Ashley: What?!
Anderson: No you go!
Shepard: No make up sex, no mission.
Anderson: Williams, have make up sex with Shepard. That's an order.
Ashley: I hate you both.
Vega: Do you mind, Ashley?
Ashley: Kick him off my ship, Vega.
Vega: With pleassure ...

[Mr. Brainheart]

^ Haha, and so as it turns out, the romance has real impact on the story

[CptData]

I wonder what Zeel is thinking right now about that ...

However, I just read parts of the dialogues and must say ... it could have been written by Aurora313. Seriously, I asked if that stuff is real, since it sounds like some of the best dialogues we had here lately.

[Aurora313]

*sigh.* Writing Shepley dialogue... talk about a dream job....

I wish I could have written it.

[Zeelx]

You guys misunderstand me. I don't want a "quickie"

There are two things I DEMAND to have in my Ashley romance.

1. Cheating thing consequence = catfight or b1tchfest, whatever! something hilarious.
2. An apology for the horizon shenanigan. I play as a Renegade and even I thought she was being outrageous.

Whoever is writing her now better not screw this up. This isn't a talimance, with Ashley gushing over how awesome Shepard. That crap is boring. Stay away from my Ashley romance.

Modifié par Zeelx, 06 décembre 2011 - 12:16 .

[AllianceN7Marine]

CptData wrote...

Mr. Brainheart wrote...

MegaBadExample wrote...

Zeel will be happy. But it won't be romancing Ash, Liara or Kaidan. Who're all very "You mean so much to me, Shepard." I think Zeel wants something along the lines of: "In the back now! quickie, quickie, quickie!"

Lol

Ashley: Skipper...There's something I need to say
Shepard: Oh really? Maybe you wanna talk about...somewhere more comfy?
Ashley: Remember the night before Ilos?
Shepard:  Yes, let's make it forty then!
Ashley: Wh-what? No, I mean that there was something I wanted to tell you back then..
Shepard: Sit on the bed. Let's discuss it... in body language.
Ashley: Oh Captain, my-
Shepard: Poetry again? C'mon, cut the crap and let's get to it!
Ashley: Damnit Shepard! *slaps him in the face and walks away*
Shepard: Hey, angel! Your Captain orders you to come back an-
Ashley: Go to hell! Ask Harbinger for a cheap time, he's clearly interested in you.

^silly, silly dialogue, why did I create you
Dialogue: because you're one crazy person..
Me: That'd explain it..*ahem*...right.

:lol:

Ashley: Welcome back, Shepard.
Shepard: Ashley ... we need to pick up Anderson.
Anderson: I won't go with you. I'll stay here and you need to bring as many fleets as possible!
Shepard: I won't go without you!
Anderson: That's an order, Shepard.
Shepard: I don't take your orders anymore!
Anderson: Consider you as reinstated, Commander!
... 5 seconds later
Ashley: Oh Captain, my ...
Shepard: Ah nevermind, Ash. Here and now?
Ashley: What?
Shepard: Make up sex for Horizon?
Ashley: No way you ass ...
Shepard: Okay. Anderson - I stay with you!
Ashley: What?!
Anderson: No you go!
Shepard: No make up sex, no mission.
Anderson: Williams, have make up sex with Shepard. That's an order.
Ashley: I hate you both.
Vega: Do you mind, Ashley?
Ashley: Kick him off my ship, Vega.
Vega: With pleassure ...

Great dialogues. There's just no way you can fast track Ashley for a quick one for old times sake. It took the hole of ME to get her to open up. If you try it you're on a one way ticket to Hell.

P.S. What did you think of my Christmas Day Dialogoue? http://social.biowar...942/500#8790131

[CptData]

Aurora313 wrote...

*sigh.* Writing Shepley dialogue... talk about a dream job....

I wish I could have written it.

You're not the only one.
But actually, I wanna rewrite the entire story ^^

Seriously, I would say the "official" dialogues look pretty much like something you could have written. Some of my better dialogues fit there as well, but ... wait, something is smelling. Oh, that's me

Zeelx wrote...

You guys misunderstand me. I don't want a "quickie"

There are two things I DEMAND to have in my Ashley romance.

1. Cheating thing consequence = catfight or b1tchfest, whatever! something hilarious.
2. An apology for the horizon shenanigan. I play as a Renegade and even I thought she was being outrageous.

Whoever
is writing her now better not screw this up. This isn't a talimance,
with Ashley gushing over how awesome Shepard. That crap is boring. Stay
away from my Ashley romance.

I think we've got you.
And I'm sure you won't see any "Tali" lines in Ashley's romance. Oh yes, I'm sure.

AllianceN7Marine wrote...
Great dialogues. There's just no way
you can fast track Ashley for a quick one for old times sake. It took
the hole of ME to get her to open up. If you try it you're on a one way
ticket to Hell.

P.S. What did you think of my Christmas Day Dialogoue? http://social.biowar...942/500#8790131

Me like ^^
And Ash confesses she wants to marry Shepard. Unexpected

Modifié par CptData, 06 décembre 2011 - 12:22 .

[Aurora313]

Shepard: So you're a SpecTRe now.
Ashley: Yea.
Shepard: You have my sympathy. It's a sh!t job.
Ashley: For some reason I find it difficult to accept your false sympathies while you're groping my chest.
Shepard: But it's so beautiful.
Ashley: Do you want to get slapped?
Shepard: Depending on who's doing the slapping and where.
Ashley: Stupid question.
Shepard: Serious answer.
Ashley: .... *one sledge hammer punch to the stomach and he's down on the ground.*
Shepard: God Ash! I was kidding! *groans in pain*
Ashley: *kicks him onto his back.* We will not have this coversation again. Or I'll aim below the belt next time.
Shepard: ... you wouldn't.
Ashley: *pulls fist back* Try me, just try me.

Modifié par Aurora313, 06 décembre 2011 - 12:35 .

[AllianceN7Marine]

CptData wrote...

AllianceN7Marine wrote...
Great dialogues. There's just no way
you can fast track Ashley for a quick one for old times sake. It took
the hole of ME to get her to open up. If you try it you're on a one way
ticket to Hell.

P.S. What did you think of my Christmas Day Dialogoue? http://social.biowar...942/500#8790131

Me like ^^
And Ash confesses she wants to marry Shepard. Unexpected

Well after only a couple of hours sleep and no coffee Ashley's bound to let something slip that you would normally need a Cain round to break through to. That's what I thought when I wrote the dialogue anyway. And I can't believe CptData that you've been tempted by the Darkside, looking at script spoilers........oh the shame.

Modifié par AllianceN7Marine, 06 décembre 2011 - 12:30 .

[CptData]

I'll survive. And since I know me I'm sure I won't remember anything at release day of ME3.
Didn't get spoiled that hard, and that's a good thing.

Did I mention I miss Ashley a lot? Fighting without her like doing a walk with only one boot. And Miranda - I like her much - cannot fill her spot.

Modifié par CptData, 06 décembre 2011 - 12:33 .

[AllianceN7Marine]

CptData wrote...

I'll survive. And since I know me I'm sure I won't remember anything at release day of ME3.
Didn't get spoiled that hard, and that's a good thing.

Did I mention I miss Ashley a lot? Fighting without her like doing a walk with only one boot. And Miranda - I like her much - cannot fill her spot.

I know what you mean. I bought the Re mastered Halo game a couple of weeks ago to take my mind of ME and Ashley until the demo release in Jan. But I've already completed the entire game and got all the achievements dam it. So now I'm putting together the ME Fansite I've been working on and playing ME1 again. I'm just hoping we get the demo at the start of Jan otherwise I don't think I'll be able to take much more.

[Fiery Knight]

I'm sure this has been asked a hundred time already, but I couldn't find my answer so I'll ask you guys:

Those who have read the leaked files, are people who romanced Ashley gonna be satisfied? Is her romance good in any way? Are there any good dialogs with her as a whole?

[CptData]

@Alliance
Uhh, I can distract myself quite well from Ash as long as I am not at work (lots of time for thinking) or playing ME2. I even started to name Ships in "Galactic Civilizations" "SSV Williams", "SSV Normandy" etc - and try to edit them so they look like the Normandy ...

Uhh yes. So much for "I can distract myself".

Sh*t. I'm a pathetic old man. ^^

Hawke_12 wrote...

I'm sure this has been asked a hundred time already, but I couldn't find my answer so I'll ask you guys:

Those
who have read the leaked files, are people who romanced Ashley gonna be
satisfied? Is her romance good in any way? Are there any good dialogs
with her as a whole?

I'm sure you'll find her romance satisfying, but you should start it from scratch (ME1) and stay faithful (ME2).
Don't need to say more.

Modifié par CptData, 06 décembre 2011 - 12:46 .