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[CptData]

Aurora313 wrote...

She didn't get punched, she got false charges brought up against her. 'Cause Ashley is Kaine's favourite daughter (She's obviously not his daughter, but you get the sentiment.) I'll write their conversation a little later during my next break. Pulling another all-nighter tonight. I got some work done, but no where near as much as I wanted. And I'm not confident that I'll pass this assessment.

Aww man, that sucks. I know you'll do it ... I support ya *thumbs up*
Nethertheless, nice story. You definitely should become an author one day. A real one. Writing bestsellers ^^

MegaBadExample wrote...

I'm 18. Is it possible? Because if it is, I'm running for the hills =P

Lemme do the math:
Me: 29
You: 18
29 - 18 - 0.75 (pregnancy time) = 10.25

Okay, I'll turn 30 in March, so it could be 10.5 or something. However, quite early to become a dad. Or do the deed.
So, no, can't be my son, son [smilie]../../../images/forum/emoticons/lol.png[/smilie]

TOP ASH:

Modifié par CptData, 26 janvier 2012 - 10:18 .

[Aurora313]

Ah what the hell.

Kaine: Admiral Kaine her - Oh, Ashley. How are you, lass?
Ashley: I'm fine sir. And John's good as well. You may have heard that he's been promoted.
Kaine: Yes, send him my congratulations later.
Ashley: I will sir.
Kaine: Obviously you're calling for something else.
Ashley: Have you seen the latest news broadcasts sir?
Kaine: The ones from the Al-Jilani b!tch? They're hard to ignore. Journalists blows everything out of proportion. And they're making no bones about this.
Ashley: I don't suppose you could do anything?
Kaine: Just who are you talking to, Lass?
Ashley: You have a point sir. Thank you.
Kaine: Anything for my children.
Ashley: *chuckles* That's really cheesy, Admiral.
Kaine: Just sit back and enjoy the show, Commander. Kaine out.

[MegaBadExample]

That's too bad, Dad. I was really looking forward to kickng some ball around the yard later on. =L

And I just had a pretty big idea for Ash and my Shepard after the war. But just the dialogue wouldn't really do it any justice. Then I thought, maybe I should dive in with the fanfiction? Then I thought naaaah, because it ain't really my style. And THEEEEEEN, I thought I'm hungry and want some good hearty breakfast instead.

[CptData]

Lets give it a try ^^

Al-Jilani: Hello? Wait - please. You're Commander Williams, right? The second human Spectre.
Ashley: Uhh, yes, that's me.
Al-Jilani: Khalisah al-Jilani, Westerlund News. Do you mind to attend an interview?
Ashley: Sure ...
Al-Jilani: Great. Now, since the war is over, the people start to ask questions: what happened to Commander Shepard? Who's the woman at his side? And why did he never update his profile on Humanbook?
Ashley: Ahh okay ... did you ever tried to ask him?
Al-Jilani: We have a history, Commander Williams. And he's not nearby, so I'm asking you.
Ashley: I see. The Commander is currently in a meeting with the Council. I don't know the details and I'm sure whatever they talk about, it's not meant to be released to publicity.
Al-Jilani: I'm sure it is. Any guesses?
Ashley: I have no idea, Mrs. Al-Jilani.
Al-Jilani: Too bad. Now, the next question is about the woman at Shepard's side. Who is she? What did she do to get his attention? And why are billions of women jealous?
Ashley: This is private stuff, Mrs. Al-Jilani. I won't answer any of those questions.
Al-Jilani: Oh, please answer those questions - the people deserve a full portrait of the savior of the galaxy. And you're part of this portrait.
Ashley: "Deserve"? Commander Shepard and his crew saved this galaxy. I was part of that mission, we both saw friends dying. We had to do sacrifices. We saved everyone still taking breath today. If anyone deserves something, then it's Shepard. He needs some rest. That's what he deserves.
Al-Jilani: So you're not going to answer that question? Millions of young women -
Ashley: I don't care if half of the female galaxy wants to get into John Shepard's pants. And you shouldn't either. Good day, Mrs. Al-Jilani. This interview is over.
Al-Jilani: Wait, Commander, one more question!
Ashley: One more question and I'll make sure you'll lose your license. For not respecting Shepard and what he achieved. For not respecting the dead ...
Al-Jilani: You can't do that!
Ashley: I'm a Spectre.

MegaBadExample wrote...

That's too bad, Dad. I was really looking forward to kickng some ball around the yard later on. =L

And
I just had a pretty big idea for Ash and my Shepard after the war. But just the dialogue wouldn't really do it any justice. Then I thought, maybe I should dive in with the fanfiction? Then I thought naaaah, because it ain't really my style. And THEEEEEEN, I thought I'm hungry and want some good hearty breakfast instead.

Write a dialogue with thoughts, son

Modifié par CptData, 26 janvier 2012 - 02:39 .

[Aurora313]

*Stand alone*

Shepard: Ash, you have plans?
Ashley: Uh, just a date with the new weapons mods.
Shepard: Yeah, cancel them. Pack an overnight bag.
Ashley: Why? What's the matter?
Shepard: Mum had a stroke yesterday. She's in a hospital on Arcturus. Joker's set a course. So pack a bag.
Ashley: Oh god, do they know how it happened?
Shepard: They're saying it was stress, but Mum's heart has always been a little weak.
Ashley: Are you alright?
Shepard: I'm just a little pissed off that the first time I visit my mother after dying is when she's ill.
Ashley: And where's Admiral Kaine in this?
Shepard: He's stationed at Arcturus anyway, so he'll probably be glued to mum's bed side when he's not working. Or eating.
Ashley: When do we arrive?
Shepard: In about half an hour.
Ashley: Ok, I'll get a few things packed. Do you need anything?
Shepard: No, we've got a penthouse-ish apartment there. I've got a few spare cloths there.
Ashley: As 'penthouse' as military housing gets, right?
Shepard: Yeah. Get packed please.
Ashley: Right. But what about you? Do you...?
Shepard: Ash. One - I'm a cyborg. Two - I recieved gene therapy. And the biggest source of my stress is gone. If anything, I'm healther now than I was a year ago. Got a doc's certificate to prove it. 
Ashley: Good to know.

Modifié par Aurora313, 26 janvier 2012 - 12:58 .

[CptData]

Ouch. Poor Hannah - you definitely need to tell us if she makes it.
And continue that Shepard's rebirth place too. Seriously.

BTW what happened to the gut-shoot Ashley? I missed that dialogue too


Sorry for pestering ... just ... yeah. You know. ^^

Modifié par CptData, 26 janvier 2012 - 12:58 .

[Aurora313]

My mind's all over the place. Tomorrow evening, I promise I'll resolve all of them.

[CptData]

Aurora313 wrote...

My mind's all over the place. Tomorrow evening, I promise I'll resolve all of them.

Thank you

Hope you can manage all the work you still have to do. And I hope posting here clears up your mind so you can do your work even better. It works for me at least. Then again, I was drawing every single class back in school. Helped me to get better marks

Ashley: Look, what I've found ...
Shepard: What's that?
Ashley: One of your school notepads ... "John Malcolm Shepard - class 9b." Fascinating.
Shepard: Don't open it, Ash.
Ashley: Why not? It's just your "Biology" pad.
Shepard: Exactly.
Ashley: Whatever, Skip. I found it, it's mine. *opens pad*
Shepard: ...
Ashley: *eye twitches*
Shepard:
Ashley: Lets close this one and never talk about it again. *eye still twitches*

Modifié par CptData, 26 janvier 2012 - 01:12 .

[Aurora313]

I am honestly thinning that I might fail the course, I don't want to but that's where I think I am. It hurts but it's true.

Anyway, based on your little dialogue.

Ashley: Ah! That's so cute!
Pierce: I know, isn't it!
Shepard: ... I have a bad feeling about this.
Pierce: Pardon?
Ashley: Excuse me.
Shepard: You two, both sitting and agreeing something is cute. That NEVER happens.
Ashley: Oh, don't worry. It's nothing bad.
Pierce: Yeah. In fact its cute.
Shepard: What's cute? Why are you two smirking like that.
Ashley: Baby photos.
Pierce: More specifically... yours.
Shepard: No.
Pierce: Oh yes.
Ashley: And you're so adorable in that little outfit.
Shepard: Give them here!
Pierce: Uh-uh!
Ashley: You want this back, you're just gonna have to chase us.
Shepard: Give them back, girls. I will not ask again.
Ashley and Roxanna look at each other.
Pierce: Nah!! *vaults over the table with the photos.*
Shepard: Roxanna! *runs after her.*
Pierce: Ash! Go! Run! *tosses the book past Shepard and Ash catches it, bolting off while laughing hysterically.*
Shepard: Goddamn Ashley!

*else where*

Vega: So then I said, 'You think I'm crazy. The sh!t you've done? Makes me look sane'.
Joker: I know, it's stupid - Why is Ashley running this way?
Vega: Huh?
Ashley: Hi-bye-guys! *sprinting out the airlock into the docking bay still laughing hysterically*
Vega: ... that was awkward.
Joker: No, but I think this is -
Shepard: *bolts past, trips almost on his way out the airlock.* Get back here, Williams!!
Vega: Do we want to know what hat was about?
Joker: I'm not sure. EDI, do we want to know what that was about?
EDI: Commander Williams has somehow obtained information that Shepard considers embarrassing. Events suggest that Major Pierce had given the information to Commander Williams. She is highly amused by this, in fact she is on the mess hall floor laughing hysterically.
Joker+Vega: 0.0
EDI: That is not a joke.

Modifié par Aurora313, 26 janvier 2012 - 01:33 .

[CptData]

You're not failing, young lady!
(Sh*t. Now I do sound like a dad again.)

Okay, Aurora, you won't fail this course. At least not that hard. What is it, by the way? ^^

Uhh and poor Shepard *g*

[Aurora313]

Constructing a CD album, creating a package, writing a 1500 word rationale, creating a booklet filled with electronic artworks and finishing off classwork.

Package is designed and ready for final copy. Booklet is nearly complete, just touching up. classwork in nearly complete. CD is only 30%. Only have the Table of Content for the Rationale. (maybe 100 words).


I gots a lot of work to do. And quite frankly, I don't mind if I fail this CD thing. It's not my best work.

Shepard: I'm so glad I'm not a designer, learning how to play the guitar was hard enough for me.
Ashley: What? Aurora's b!tching again?
Shepard: Yeah. I mean come on, I've saved the galaxy half a dozen times over, and she's complaining about an assignment due tomorrow afternoon?
Ashley: To be fair, it's her last day. I'm sure she's not the only person whose been in this situation before.
Shepard: Yeah, fair enough. Aurora, if I may offer some advice? Get off your ass and get your little Aussie butt into gear. It'd take a real badass to get it done.
Aurora: I've never failed to deliver on time.
Shepard: I said 'a BADASS'. Not a whiny little girl!
Aurora: Fine! You can kiss my ass, and tomorrow I'm starting a new run-through on ME!
Shepard: Fine!
Aurora: Fine!
Shepard: Good!
Aurora: Indeed!
Shepard: Go!
Ashley: ... that was so cute.
Shepard: Eh, she's basically an 18 year old version of Roxanna, she's not that hard to talk to.
Ashley: That's still very cute. You'd make a cute dad.
Shepard: Think so?
Ashley: I know so.
Shepard: Thank you. 

Modifié par Aurora313, 26 janvier 2012 - 02:02 .

[CptData]

Awwww ^^
That's cute.
Wait, you're a 18y old version of Roxy? Uhh ... nevermind. XD
Guess we all have a tendency to make a OC that's like us. More or less.

Nevertheless, have an Ashley:

[Clone 071]

Wow, I've certainly missed a lot of dialogues here in my 9 hours of absence. My favorite dialogue since then had to be with al-Jilani interviewing Ash. She just put al-Jilani in her place, textbook takedown, you name it.

[Aurora313]

Yeah, motivational stuff for me today. My last day of college tomorrow... and I'm nervous as all hell.

[Deelane]

Vertigo_1 wrote...

twitter.com/#!/macwalterslives/status/162378014187991041
"Aaaand maybe an Ashley follow-up, if you have the time #greedyfans Many thanks regardless!"

"Hmm... Ashley's grown up too. And she seems to be trusting her head, as much as her instincts now. #ME3"

[Complistic]

wellactually12 wrote...

Another thing I was thinking about, (and this is more theoretical than anything) its what would be the intial reaction of Shepard and Ashley's relationship by the public?

I mean the two are the first and currently only human spectres and they are dating. The media would have a love affair with that!

Maybe after the reapers are stopped. Plus they saved the universe  together? ya they're perfect.

[CptData]

Deelane wrote...

Vertigo_1 wrote...

twitter.com/#!/macwalterslives/status/162378014187991041
"Aaaand maybe an Ashley follow-up, if you have the time #greedyfans Many thanks regardless!"

"Hmm... Ashley's grown up too. And she seems to be trusting her head, as much as her instincts now. #ME3"

What "Ashley follow-up"? What does it mean ^^

[Complistic]

he answered a question about kaidan and someone asked him to say something about ashley.

[Silver77nz]

Ok I just made my 1st mshep and I want to romance Ashley. I do want spacer background for sure. I just notice it opens up a whole different dialouge about family. The question is do some of you paragon her or renegade her? What is that like on each one? I know if you Renegade Kaidan you can make him not like aliens as much. Paragon he pretty much stays the same. See I lean heavy towards paragon. So any advice on the Ashley romance seeing how I know nothing about it

[Clone 071]

Aurora313 wrote...

Yeah, motivational stuff for me today. My last day of college tomorrow... and I'm nervous as all hell.

Bah, lucky you. I'm currently in college as a freshman. It's amazing to me how I make so much time on here despite my studies.

And "Ashley follow-up"? Sounds quite interesting because I'll definitely make the time for that. 

[Complistic]

Silverpearl1977 wrote...

Ok I just made my 1st mshep and I want to romance Ashley. I do want spacer background for sure. I just notice it opens up a whole different dialouge about family. The question is do some of you paragon her or renegade her? What is that like on each one? I know if you Renegade Kaidan you can make him not like aliens as much. Paragon he pretty much stays the same. See I lean heavy towards paragon. So any advice on the Ashley romance seeing how I know nothing about it

Paragon is the way to go as it'll make her like aliens and the council more. Though she occasionally has some funny combebacks if you go a little renegade on her in her romance conversations. Just don't go overly renegade.

[Silver77nz]

Complistic wrote...

Silverpearl1977 wrote...

Ok I just made my 1st mshep and I want to romance Ashley. I do want spacer background for sure. I just notice it opens up a whole different dialouge about family. The question is do some of you paragon her or renegade her? What is that like on each one? I know if you Renegade Kaidan you can make him not like aliens as much. Paragon he pretty much stays the same. See I lean heavy towards paragon. So any advice on the Ashley romance seeing how I know nothing about it

Paragon is the way to go as it'll make her like aliens and the council more. Though she occasionally has some funny combebacks if you go a little renegade on her in her romance conversations. Just don't go overly renegade.

Ok ty

[CptData]

Silverpearl1977 wrote...

Ok I just made my 1st mshep and I want to romance Ashley. I do want spacer background for sure. I just notice it opens up a whole different dialouge about family. The question is do some of you paragon her or renegade her? What is that like on each one? I know if you Renegade Kaidan you can make him not like aliens as much. Paragon he pretty much stays the same. See I lean heavy towards paragon. So any advice on the Ashley romance seeing how I know nothing about it

Uhhmm ... lets say, Ashley is a pragmatist. That's a good thing since pragmatists are pretty much balanced between "paragon" and "renegade". I enjoy paragonized Ashley more than renegadized Ash, therefore I'd go for the paragon lines. Shepard is pulling some really cheesy stuff.

I'll pick paragon always for Ash. Fits better to her ...

[Silver77nz]

CptData wrote...

Silverpearl1977 wrote...

Ok I just made my 1st mshep and I want to romance Ashley. I do want spacer background for sure. I just notice it opens up a whole different dialouge about family. The question is do some of you paragon her or renegade her? What is that like on each one? I know if you Renegade Kaidan you can make him not like aliens as much. Paragon he pretty much stays the same. See I lean heavy towards paragon. So any advice on the Ashley romance seeing how I know nothing about it

Uhhmm ... lets say, Ashley is a pragmatist. That's a good thing since pragmatists are pretty much balanced between "paragon" and "renegade". I enjoy paragonized Ashley more than renegadized Ash, therefore I'd go for the paragon lines. Shepard is pulling some really cheesy stuff.

I'll pick paragon always for Ash. Fits better to her ...

Shepard pulls some cheesy lines with paragon? If so I'm all for cheesy:D Ok so paragon so far seems to be the verdict. Which is good seeing how renegade just really isn't me. Now I have to go thru Horizion with Ashley ugh! Well at least I know and I'm prepared this time:blush: Can't wait to experiences both the VS arcs!!

[ADLegend21]

There's a fair share of cheesiness in the romance on both sides lol.