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[CptData]

Need a native speaker for my project - Brainheart just found some issues in my text.

At least he likes the layout.

Thiz English haz a strange german akzent!

Modifié par CptData, 25 mars 2012 - 12:05 .

[Clone 071]

CptData wrote...

Need a native speaker for my project - Brainheart just found some issues in my text.

At least he likes the layout.

Thiz English haz a strange german akzent!

Haha, alright, I'm on it.

Edit: Bah, DeviantArt has only delayed the inevitable! I have to create an account to bypass the mature content filter. <_<

Modifié par Clone 071, 25 mars 2012 - 12:13 .

[Helmnath]

soz busy working on chapter 2 of my fic... I miss anything?

[CptData]

As promised ...

Vega: LC, huh?
Ashley: That's "Lieutenant Commander" for you, Lieutenant.
Vega: Uh-huh. We're off-duty, LC - Ma'am.
Ashley: Right. As long as you don't call me "Lulu" or something, I'll accept "LC".
Vega: *smirks* Loco was right.
Ashley: About what?
Vega: About you. From what I heard, you used to be less formal on the old Normandy.
Ashley: That's private stuff, Lieutenant.
Vega: I know, I know, okay? I won't bother you about that anymore. Hmm ... but hey, I never saw you taking a drink or so. Mind to check out the ship's bar?
Ashley: Go ahead, Lieutenant. One drink.
Vega: Just one, I promise.
Ashley: Fine.

... a little later ...

Ashley: ... and then he came and took out a full squad of Geth ... Shepard. ... now that I think about, we had great times. Hunting down Saren was ... quite fun ... compared against the hell we're now facing.
Vega: I bet. And that's how you met Loco?
Ashley: Yup. Was the best thing in my entire life. Getting found by him. Do ... you have any idea how long I had to wait 'till him? Four goddamn years without a singl ... single lover.
Vega: Yeah, military life is hard.
Ashley: Hard? You've no idea, Liel..lieutenlant.
Vega: And you had enough, LC. A full bottle of that stuff ...
Ashley: Donn ...t make me pull my rank, Vega. I'll ..ll tell you' as ... *headdesk*
Vega: Good night, LC. *picks her up & carries Ashley to her cabin*

(Okay. I officially failed this time) ^^

[Clone 071]

... Oh, hell no, Vega. You're going down now. 

[CptData]

Clone 071 wrote...

... Oh, hell no, Vega. You're going down now. 

Nah. He didn't take advantage of a drunk Ashley. He just did what every good gentleman would do: take care of a friend.

I also need a dialogue with drunk Ash & Shepard. Maybe a drinking contest?

[Mr. Brainheart]

AshleyMadelineWilliams wrote...

Hehehe... i love me... Umm Ashley i mean

You're going to make me think you're really Ashley spying on us, one day..
Don't judge, I learned not to be too quick to trust from a certain someone with a suspiciously similar name.


@Data;  I think I'm gonna do the same thing as Ash and pass out (facedesk) if I don't go get some sleep soon.

[Clone 071]

CptData wrote...

Clone 071 wrote...

... Oh, hell no, Vega. You're going down now. 

Nah. He didn't take advantage of a drunk Ashley. He just did what every good gentleman would do: take care of a friend.

I also need a dialogue with drunk Ash & Shepard. Maybe a drinking contest?

In the words of Joker: "Yeah, that's the official story. But only an idiot believes the official story." 

Hah, yes! The only one strong-willed enough to outdrink Shepard is Ash.

Modifié par Clone 071, 25 mars 2012 - 12:29 .

[CptData]

Mr. Brainheart wrote...

AshleyMadelineWilliams wrote...

Hehehe... i love me... Umm Ashley i mean

You're going to make me think you're really Ashley spying on us, one day..
Don't judge, I learned not to be too quick to trust from a certain someone with a suspiciously similar name.


@Data;  I think I'm gonna do the same thing as Ash and pass out (facedesk) if I don't go get some sleep soon.

My girl isn't with me tonight, so I can stay awake as long as I want ...
(Man ... I wish my girl would have the same passion for ME like I have ... dreams, huh?)

Good night, Brain
And I'd love if AMW is REAL Ashley. It won't happen 'though <_<

@ AMW - lets find out if I can pull a good Shepley-drinking-dialogue. ..

Modifié par CptData, 25 mars 2012 - 12:30 .

[Mr. Brainheart]

@AMW; *twitches* I'm just getting paranoid...nothing to worry about, just getting paranoid. What are the names of your sisters, oldest to youngest?

@Data; Haha, Pretty sure we would all like someone with the same passion Data, I'd do a Shep/ash drinking-logue, but I'm choosing to hit the hay instead. (if with hay I mean bed, and with hitting I mean laying myself down onto..)
G'night all.

[CptData]

Gn8 Brain. Don't miss the pillow - your head may thank you. ^^

AMW: Hey, now I feel flattered. I'm not that good - Aurora is a much better writer than I am.
Still can't make up a drinking contest with Shepard ... scrapped my third dialogue 'cause it fails. Maybe my brain is tired while my body is awake?

Wait. That sounds wrong. Sorry, Brain ^^

[Mr. Brainheart]

@AMW: Damn! If you had just gotten it wrong it would've made things a lot easier! I've already run out of good questions...

@Data; Well, I am tired...that part's correct..My nickname does sometimes sound rather awkward when abbreviated though, yeaah. I'll take care not to miss the pillow ^^

[Aurora313]

Ashley: Why Lieutenant Commander, I do believe that is a challenge.
Shepard: Yes it is, Lieutenant.
Ashley: Whatever happened to 'I'm staying sober'?
Shepard: Ash, do you honestly think I'm gonna be able to stay sober through this war? With all the sh!t I've had to deal with.
Ashley: No, I don't suppose I'd be able to keep it together without a quick breather or two.
Shepard: Yeah. I'm drinking no matter what. I thought I could have a little fun while I did...
Ashley: Oh, trust me Skip. I can take you.
Shepard: Uh huh. I've got an Irish liver, Ash. I'll drink you under the table first.
Ashley: Game. On.

*Later*

Garrus: Shepard, are you... *walks in. Shepard's on the ground passed out. Ash is still tossing back shots*
Ashley H... hey! Gar-gar!
Garrus: Williams? What... exactly happened here?
Ashley: Drunk 'im under the table! Irish bastard thought he could take me!
Garrus: I don't know what an 'Irish' is, Williams.
Ashley: Ya'know, he's home country, back'n Earth.
Garrus: Is he ok?
Ashley: I d'nno. Passed out.
Garrus: ...He looks dead, Williams.
Shepard: *muffled* Wish I was....

Modifié par Aurora313, 25 mars 2012 - 12:52 .

[Clone 071]

Haha, after that, I bet Shepard would wish he was dead. Garrus should've questioned why he wasn't invited for the drinking contest. He probably wrote the book on that, too.

[Aurora313]

SPOILER... ish.



You know it's sad. I was looking on TV tropes about Shepard. It's sad to realise that he has in fact been labled as a 'Death Seeker'. It's blotted out for 'spoilers', but it's true. There's even a quote from him/her subtly implying s/he wants to die. 'Goodbye Thane. You won't be alone, long.'

It's sad. He does want to die on some level, and just about the only things that are really keeping him going inverse is Willpower and moral support from his teammates.

Modifié par Aurora313, 25 mars 2012 - 12:59 .

[CptData]

AshleyMadelineWilliams wrote...

@CptData Its ok, its pretty late over here too, and my brain isn't functioning like it should at the moment XD Like I said, I have read your work and it is fantastic! how can I not be excited?

It's not even containing Ash yet?

Shepard: You drink too much, Ashley.
Ashley: No, Sir, I'm sober. Perf .. fectly sober.
Shepard: You're drunk. *smiles*
Ashley: I'm not.
Shepard: You are.
Ashley: And you had a full bottle of Ryncol. Why aren't you ... drunk, Sir?
Shepard: I got upgrades, I guess.
Ashley: Cheatin' freak ... ouch ... my head. I didn't say that loud, right?
Shepard: You did. C'mon Ash, you had enough.
Ashley: Just one more ... Skip .. one more.
Shepard: Ash. That's not you-
Ashley: Shut up and kiss me, Captain.
Shepard: Hey, stop - I won't take advance of your state, Ash ... c'mon. Let's put down the glass. I'll get you to your cabin.
Ashley: "Your cabin" he says ... right. My Captain never gets what I want. Never ... never ...
Shepard: No, not another one - put that bottle down, Ash!
Ashley: Only if you get me to YOUR cabin ... ohh Captain, my Captain ...
Shepard: Sheesh - you're not just drunk. 
Ashley: Who cares? All I want is you ... you and ... your fine ass.
Shepard: Aaaash ... stop groping me ...
Ashley: Why? You're my lover ... my property ... mine!
Shepard: God, where's Joker when you need him? Ash, c'mon. You're totally wasted. I should call Dr. Chakwas ...
Ashley: This woman doesn't need a doctor, Shepard ... get that in your head. Now ... want you. Here.
Shepard: Would you ... hey! Aaash ... that's not funny. You ... get off me!
Ashley: He ... get off me?! What? God ... my Captain doesn't love me anymore ... I ... I need to face Mr. Airlock. Get out of my way, Shepard ... need to find airlock ...
Shepard: Of course, Ash, I want you. If it helps, you may sleep in my cabin tonight. Just don't open that airlock!
Ashley: Fine. Just show me the .. bed ... tired ... feel tired ...*falls on ground, snoring*
Shepard: *sigh* sleep well, Ashley. 


Mine is quite Aurora's opposite :innocent:

Modifié par CptData, 25 mars 2012 - 01:01 .