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[Thalorin1919]

AshleyMadelineWilliams wrote...

Thalorin1919 wrote...

I don't know, I felt like there was a lot of interaction with her.

Granted, most of it was on the Citadel - you had unique conversations with her in the hospital, the date, the memorial, getting her back on the Normandy, the drunk scene...

I don't know. I wasn't expecting that much, so I was really pleased with what I got.

I still want more Normandy convos for Ashley... its like half of her dialogue was missing... very annoying.

Yeah, I was surprised to see that there wasn't much dialogue with her on the ship - especially after the Thessia mission where Shepard needed support most.

However, I made up for it by bringing her on most of the missions with me. I found she had a good amount of dialogue for each one, especially Thessia. 

[Helmnath]

MadJordan wrote...

Can anyone recommend some Shep and Ash fan fictions for me?

Badpie's one is epic, I have started writing one available at http://www.fanfictio...ts_not_over_yet

I would love some more honest critique's over it, almost got second chapter written.

[CptData]

AshleyMadelineWilliams wrote...

Yeah im British  so its nearly 8:30 pm over here. Long day !  

Gunna read a few fan fics. Wish i could have had more time on here today.

Hey, one of my co-workers comes from a town nearby of London. He has that typical British accent - I love it. Hope you have that one too (seriously - one of the reasons my first real GF was from USA was I love English language more than German ^^).

And definitely - will do a pic with wounded Skip & Ash, but may take a while since I'm not even close to that scene. Also started to write the basic plotline for the entire story - which isn't essential for the prologue yet.

[CptData]

Thalorin1919 wrote...

Yeah, I was surprised to see that there wasn't much dialogue with her on the ship - especially after the Thessia mission where Shepard needed support most.

However, I made up for it by bringing her on most of the missions with me. I found she had a good amount of dialogue for each one, especially Thessia. 

Definitely. Ashley should have been more supportive in the game. Same for Kaidan. She, Kaidan and Liara are basically the closest friends Shepard has (+ Garrus and since beginning of ME3, Vega). That should be shown in the game.

[TERASQUE]

Clone 071 wrote...


Yep, so far I have 6 ME3 ringtones: ME3 Main Menu, Escape From Earth, A Cerberus Agent (The sad theme with the injured VS), Sur'Kesh Combat Theme, A Future for the Krogan, and Stand Strong Stand Together.

I thought that "A cerberus Agent" was from Thessia, when you lose to Leng and the Reapers pwn Lt Kurin and Thessia, could be in both sequences thou

[Clone 071]

CptData wrote...

Thalorin1919 wrote...

Yeah, I was surprised to see that there wasn't much dialogue with her on the ship - especially after the Thessia mission where Shepard needed support most.

However, I made up for it by bringing her on most of the missions with me. I found she had a good amount of dialogue for each one, especially Thessia. 

Definitely. Ashley should have been more supportive in the game. Same for Kaidan. She, Kaidan and Liara are basically the closest friends Shepard has (+ Garrus and since beginning of ME3, Vega). That should be shown in the game.

Indeed.
Eh, I always thought of Garrus as a bro from the start of the series. Especially if you play as a renegade Shep, then two minds really do think alike in that case.

[MadJordan]

Helmnath wrote...

MadJordan wrote...

Can anyone recommend some Shep and Ash fan fictions for me?

Badpie's one is epic, I have started writing one available at http://www.fanfictio...ts_not_over_yet

I would love some more honest critique's over it, almost got second chapter written.

I really like it, how long till the second chapter is up?

I dont really know what feedback to give since im not much of a writer myself. 

[Clone 071]

TERASQUE wrote...

Clone 071 wrote...


Yep, so far I have 6 ME3 ringtones: ME3 Main Menu, Escape From Earth, A Cerberus Agent (The sad theme with the injured VS), Sur'Kesh Combat Theme, A Future for the Krogan, and Stand Strong Stand Together.

I thought that "A cerberus Agent" was from Thessia, when you lose to Leng and the Reapers pwn Lt Kurin and Thessia, could be in both sequences thou

Yeah, it's in both scenes, but only the sad part. The whole song was from the point you started chasing Dr. Eva Core up until the part after the Normandy leaves Mars. The version I have on the ringtone is just the sad part of it.

[Helmnath]

MadJordan wrote...

Helmnath wrote...

MadJordan wrote...

Can anyone recommend some Shep and Ash fan fictions for me?

Badpie's one is epic, I have started writing one available at http://www.fanfictio...ts_not_over_yet

I would love some more honest critique's over it, almost got second chapter written.

I really like it, how long till the second chapter is up?

I dont really know what feedback to give since im not much of a writer myself. 

Second chapter is almost ready to go but a lot of dialogue which isn't progressing the story along, either rewriting bits of it or trying to link it in to what I had already written but didn't use in chapter one.

[dahellraider]

MadJordan wrote...

Can anyone recommend some Shep and Ash fan fictions for me?

you can also check out mine if you want been working on rediting chapters chapter 1 is eddited but sitll fixing 2 and 3 and will have 4 up after.

http://www.fanfictio..._stones_in_life

[Helmnath]

read yours a few times mate, think there are three of us from this thread on front page of shepley mass effect fanfiction filter :-D

[CptData]

AshleyMadelineWilliams wrote...


Yeah i have the "cockney accent", however i sometimes slip into "Geordie" aswell (the north east of england) because my dad is from Newcastle England. Well, im glad you like the accent! 

Keep me posted Data, im in the mood for some creativity and reading tonight!

Eyy, that's just teasing

I fear I have a quite strong US English accent ... stupid shows from USA
Dunno if that's better than "zztrong German akzzent!"

Clone 071 wrote...

Indeed.
Eh, I always thought of
Garrus as a bro from the start of the series. Especially if you play as a
renegade Shep, then two minds really do think alike in that
case.

Yeah, BW did a great job this time: Garrus feels like the best buddy of Shepard.
Liara seems to be his/her beacon of light in the darkness, regardless if romanced or not.
Vega is pretty much a fellow soldier and kinda fills the role Ashley had in ME1. At least in some ways, Vega reminds me of ME1!Ashley - at least his marine attitude.

Man. Wish BW would give us ME1 Ashley back.
Alternatively: let me write Ashley's romance & story in ME reboot. I can do it.
Even better: make a writer team dealing with Ash. Aurora should be in that team, Badpie too ... maybe Brainheart. Lets put the best of her fans in one team, huh, and get Kimberly Brooks back - I love this woman's voice :wub:

Modifié par CptData, 25 mars 2012 - 08:58 .

[dahellraider]

i got into reading Lycanwolff story and its really good

[dahellraider]

AshleyMadelineWilliams wrote...

 @CptData I actually find the USA accent cool, I have a mate from Mississippi and his accent is so strong, sometimes i cannot even understand him!  Makes me laugh actually. Did not mean to tease you data  

 even though its funny 

think thats bad you should hear my Texas accent lol

Modifié par dahellraider, 25 mars 2012 - 09:02 .

[Helmnath]

Can't be any worse than my accent Data, from the valleys of south wales in the UK mixed in with mongrel english I picked up in my university days.

[Clone 071]

I'm with you on that, Data! Ash fan-writers unite! 
USA accent, huh? Maybe I should give it a try once. 

[CptData]

AshleyMadelineWilliams wrote...

 @CptData I actually find the USA accent cool, I have a mate from Mississippi and his accent is so strong, sometimes i cannot even understand him!  Makes me laugh actually. Did not mean to tease you data  [smilie]http://social.bioware.com/images/forum/emoticons/wink.png[/smilie]..... even though its funny 

Believe me or not, flirting with Ashley -is- great.
Wait ... that sounds so horribly wrong that ... nevermind.

Yeah, my ex is from Texas. When I visited her I couldn't really understand her - she was talking so incredible fast. Especially @ phone. Ouch ^^

Funny part: I dunno why, but Ashley's accent isn't that strong. It's of course not British, not a bit, but it pretty much sounds like a standard East Coast accent if you ask me. Maybe I'm just wrong here, since I'm not THAT experienced in that field.
Remind me to visit you next vacation in GB. It's one of my top locations for the next five years.

[dahellraider]

arg well off to work again i bet everything in here will get interesting when im gone like always lol

Modifié par dahellraider, 25 mars 2012 - 09:07 .

[Helmnath]

AshleyMadelineWilliams wrote...

@Helmnath Cannot wait to see what you have done with the second chapter!

sent you a brief excerpt of what I have done so far, enjoy

[Clone 071]

dahellraider wrote...

AshleyMadelineWilliams wrote...

 @CptData I actually find the USA accent cool, I have a mate from Mississippi and his accent is so strong, sometimes i cannot even understand him!  Makes me laugh actually. Did not mean to tease you data  

 even though its funny 

think thats bad you should hear my Texas accent lol

Sweet, someone else besides me who currently lives in Texas. Though I was born in New York.

[CptData]

Clone: My ex is from Texas.
And she talked so fast, I couldn't understand her sometimes ... ^^

It's kinda funny my first real GF lives 4000km away. Had to go around the world to find her. Okay, technically, I found her in a community - fandom ... had some great time.
If I remember correctly, her dad was a soldier ...



Need to repost my selfmade Ash

Modifié par CptData, 25 mars 2012 - 09:12 .

[ADLegend21]

USA accent, which one? Thogh I'm sure all accents are appreciated by the LC.