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[Hellfire257]

CptData wrote...

Still need some native speaker. I hate grammar & spelling issues. Think I don't lack spelling but grammar, 'special some tenses are a huge pain in the ass.

I'm happy to help you, Data. Just shoot any questions and I'll answer them as best as I can.

Modifié par Hellfire257, 28 mars 2012 - 12:47 .

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Totally Not Swaggacide wrote...

I'm more scared of an angry Ashley than of Harbinger

I'm more scared of an angry Ash than multiple Banshees on Insanity trying to insta-kill me. *shudders* 

[Helmnath]

Hellfire257 wrote...

CptData wrote...

Still need some native speaker. I hate grammar & spelling issues. Think I don't lack spelling but grammar, 'special some tenses are a huge pain in the ass.

I'm happy to help you, Data. Just shoot any questions and I'll answer them as best as I can.

Native english speaker here, if thats what you are after - Happy to help if I can as well

[CptData]

"A mad hatter had a mad hatter's hat."

Thanks, Hellfire & Helmnath, it's more like reading a portion of the entire story and fix some grammar issues. The "bad job" so to speak ... maybe I'll release the third page today, although I'm not even done with the text nor images.
Maybe it'll contain Ashley, or maybe not, but it definitely will finish the prologue part of the story ...

Now back to Ashley. New images anyone?

Modifié par CptData, 28 mars 2012 - 12:55 .

[Clone 071]

Definitely not the best image, but it'll do:

Edit: Hmm, just now noticed Tali was in this as well.

Modifié par Clone 071, 28 mars 2012 - 12:57 .

[pprrff]

CptData wrote...

pprrff wrote...

In a lot of early scences, Ash comes off better if you pick renegade in conversation. If you go all paragon, then it feels like you just stand there and take crap from her, and also makes Shepard look like a ponce getting chewed out by a controlling girlfriend. The renegade choice actually have him fight back verbally, even out the things in general and make them look like a couple.

I only picked the nice paragon things to say because I was afraid to mess up the romance down the line, which is probably what alot of people did and ending up feeling animosity toward her.

Never felt like that. Ashley is quite dominant in some way - after all, she's an equal in that relationship. If you go down the renegade route you make her less feeling like an equal partner.
Actually, I love paragonizing Ashley. Sure, Shepard takes several blows, but none goes below the belt. However, picking renegade options on Ash can easily jeopardize the entire romance.
It's like in R/L: if you play the nice guy, you might take some sh*t but also may end with the reward. If you fight back, you MIGHT earn some respect and feel less bullied around, but you also might lose that girl.

I prefer the "positive options" first, as long as the relationship isn't running - fighting back verbally works once you're IN a living relationship since both have a better understanding of each other. Would you try a violent argument with a girl you're currently dating? I doubt so.

In case of Shepard and Ashley it's like that: they need to rebuild their romance first. It's more like dating than being in a relationship. And that means Shepard has to take some blows first, rekindle the romance - they can sort things out once they're together again

Well, I feel that there is more dialogue with renegade, more stuff gets aired out. Same thing as Horizon, renegade Shepard has more to say. Paragon just ducks out of the argument with her, I'd think it will infuriate her even more.

Pre-hospital anyway, once there paragon is better.

Shepard is hurt too, it's fair that Ash gets to know his feeling and his frustration<3. 

Modifié par pprrff, 28 mars 2012 - 01:03 .

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Ash: Let's roll out, b*tches!

[CptData]

@pprrff: Dunno if it's worth two extra lines to dish out low blows against Ash.
Her content is just not enough. Ash minus romance = Kasumi. So to speak.

Am I the only one who's missing AshleyMadelineWilliams (AMW)? Hope she's fine ...

While writing that "I miss her" line, she returned out of the sudden

Modifié par CptData, 28 mars 2012 - 01:07 .

[Clone 071]

Reaction to Ash romance in ME3 anyone?:

[Clone 071]

AshleyMadelineWilliams wrote...

Yeah that was my reaction aswell.... although i wasnt wearing a pink dress, and my hair is brown... close enough.

Yeah, you definitely wouldn't find me doing that. Main reason being a guy.  Nonetheless, I was overjoyed there.

[pprrff]

AshleyMadelineWilliams wrote...

CptData wrote...

@pprrff: Dunno if it's worth two extra lines to dish out low blows against Ash.
Her content is just not enough. Ash minus romance = Kasumi. So to speak.

Am I the only one who's missing AshleyMadelineWilliams (AMW)? Hope she's fine ...

While writing that "I miss her" line, she returned out of the sudden

Awww *BIG HUG* Im here!

True enough, you'd think she and Vega could chat a little when they are both off duty.

[Clone 071]

AshleyMadelineWilliams wrote...

Clone 071 wrote...

AshleyMadelineWilliams wrote...

Yeah that was my reaction aswell.... although i wasnt wearing a pink dress, and my hair is brown... close enough.

Yeah, you definitely wouldn't find me doing that. Main reason being a guy.  Nonetheless, I was overjoyed there.

Well... i wouldnt mind putting you in a pink dress 

I was really glad they brought Ash back, i knew i should have kept faithful to her in ME2 :happy:

 ... You first. 

[Aurora313]

Round about 2190 or so.

Garrus: Ok, Saren, or 10 000 Batarians.
Shepard: The Batarians, easily. Ok. A horde of rampaging Klixen, or a pack or rabid Vorcha.
Garrus: Klixen. Vorcha are almost too easy to drop.
Shepard: Ok, that was an easy one.
Garrus: Now here's a hard one. Harbinger... or a pissed off spouse?
Shepard: Harbinger, any day.
Garrus: You're kidding?
Shepard: I am not. Have you SEEN Ashley when she's angry. She's pregnant right now and when her hormones go out of whack, I wanna catch the next ride into dark space.

Garrus: I'll be damned. The Legendary Commander Shepard is scared of a woman.
Shepard: Not just any woman. My very pregnant wife. Major difference Vakarian.
Garrus: True. I remember how - what was the expression - 'Heads over heels' you were for Williams all the way back on the SR1. Glad to see these last few years haven't changed that.
Shepard: Thanks... I think. What about you?
Garrus: Harbinger or Spouse? Well. Remember that time we played a joke on Tali?
Shepard: Heh - Which one?
Garrus: When we uploaded a geth unit to her combat drone and convinced it to sing the Elcor Phantom of the Opera.
Shepard: We were both VERY drunk at the time, I believe.
Garrus: Yeah. Well. Let's just say, that was a very... insightful experience about what would happened if I got on her bad side.

Shepard: Yeah. I remember. I gotta tell you, I did not envy you Vakarian, not a single bit.
Garrus: Meanwhile, you were hungover from all the Ryncol and stammered out a proposal to Ash in front of the entire crew I believe... after she found the ring in her boot.
Shepard: To this day, I still have no idea how it got there. And not my best moment, but certainly not my worst.
Garrus: Yes. For you personally, it may have been the happiest day of your life. When she said yes, but what about all your fangirls out there. I seem to remember a few Krogans had mating requests for you.
Shepard: Yes, unfortunately, I've only got eyes on one gal. Wouldn't have married her if that was gonna change. Besides, I had to take myself off the market so you could get a fair shot at them.
Garrus: Stealing my lines, Shepard? Have you really stooped that low?
Shepard: Just stating facts, Garrus. And for god's sake, call me by my first name. You've earned that you know.
Garrus: Thanks. But I'll just stick to 'Shepard'. *picks up sniper rifle and locks thermal clip into place* Now are we gonna do this thing or what?
Shepard: Batter up! *picked up bottle and proceeds to toss it.*

Modifié par Aurora313, 28 mars 2012 - 01:27 .

[shinobi602]

Mdoggy1214 wrote...

Did anyone else let Ash take the shot on Udina? I thought it was fitting to have her moment of glory

You can do that!? o__O

[Aurora313]

@ Shinobi. Don't take the interrupt and Ashley will take the shot for you.

It's almost like the 'final test' for Ash. She's killing the person who 'employed' her yes, but for the sake of the greater galactic good and she'll live with the concequences. Which is what the SpecTRes are about. Don't pull the trigger and Ash will.

Symbolically, it's her initiation and she passes.

Modifié par Aurora313, 28 mars 2012 - 01:30 .

[Clone 071]

Ah, good times and bad.
 
 
Curse you Virmire for being so emotionally realistic that I loved it, yet hated it at the same time. 

Modifié par Clone 071, 28 mars 2012 - 01:31 .

[Clone 071]

Well, time for another academic day in college. Pardon me if I'm not jumping for joy there.

In the mean time... To all you Ash fans out there, we salute you!
 

[CptData]

Aurora313 wrote...

Round about 2190 or so.

Garrus: Ok, Saren, or 10 000 Batarians.
Shepard: The Batarians, easily. Ok. A horde of rampaging Klixen, or a pack or rabid Vorcha.
Garrus: Klixen. Vorcha are almost too easy to drop.
Shepard: Ok, that was an easy one.
Garrus: Now here's a hard one. Harbinger... or a pissed off spouse?
Shepard: Harbinger, any day.
Garrus: You're kidding?
Shepard: I am not. Have you SEEN Ashley when she's angry. She's pregnant right now and when her hormones go out of whack, I wanna catch the next ride into dark space.

Garrus: I'll be damned. The Legendary Commander Shepard is scared of a woman.
Shepard: Not just any woman. My very pregnant wife. Major difference Vakarian.
Garrus: True. I remember how - what was the expression - 'Heads over heels' you were for Williams all the way back on the SR1. Glad to see these last few years haven't changed that.
Shepard: Thanks... I think. What about you?
Garrus: Harbinger or Spouse? Well. Remember that time we played a joke on Tali?
Shepard: Heh - Which one?
Garrus: When we uploaded a geth unit to her combat drone and convinced it to sing the Elcor Phantom of the Opera.
Shepard: We were both VERY drunk at the time, I believe.
Garrus: Yeah. Well. Let's just say, that was a very... insightful experience about what would happened if I got on her bad side.
Shepard: Yeah. I remember. I gotta tell you, I did not envy you Vakarian, not a single bit.
Garrus: Meanwhile, you were hungover from all the Ryncol and stammered out a proposal to Ash in front of the entire crew I believe... after she found the ring in her boot.
Shepard: To this day, I still have no idea how it got there. And not my best moment, but certainly not my worst.
Garrus: Yes. For you personally, it may have been the happiest day of your life. When she said yes, but what about all your fangirls out there. I seem to remember a few Krogans had mating requests for you.
Shepard: Yes, unfortunately, I've only got eyes on one gal. Wouldn't have married her if that was gonna change. Besides, I had to take myself off the market so you could get a fair shot at them.
Garrus: Stealing my lines, Shepard? Have you really stooped that low?
Shepard: Just stating facts, Garrus. And for god's sake, call me by my first name. You've earned that you know.
Garrus: Thanks. But I'll just stick to 'Shepard'. *picks up sniper rifle and locks thermal clip into place* Now are we gonna do this thing or what?
Shepard: Batter up! *picked up bottle and proceeds to toss it.*

Full of win :wub:

'special proposal of Ash. Hey, Shep is STILL heads over heels for Ash

[Clone 071]

AshleyMadelineWilliams wrote...

Clone 071 wrote...

Well, time for another academic day in college. Pardon me if I'm not jumping for joy there.

In the mean time... To all you Ash fans out there, we salute you!
 

When did she salute?

Upon being allowed to return to the Normandy after being granted permission by Shepard.