darthrevaninlight wrote...
It also rains less here.Unschuld wrote...
Fenrisfil wrote...
According to some random survey thing I saw recently the USA has a much higher "Happiness rating" then the UK. But you know, the grass is always greener and all that.
That's because we have a growing quotient of dumb people. Ignorance is bliss.
Would Rannoch have a higher happiness rating because of the heat? hmmm
Neverwinter_Knight77 wrote...
darthrevaninlight wrote...
It's a good concept, but could use more... feel. you know? A bit of editing, and it'll be really nice. It's best to just get your concept out before all that though.Neverwinter_Knight77 wrote...
Unsatisfied with the Tali romance, I wrote... something. Not quite the end of the ending, but it's a start. I warn you, most of it is dialog, and quite sappy. I'm the sentimental type. Created a DeviantArt account just to share this.
http://neverwinterkn...ter-1-294097102
Good job
I... think I know what you mean. Never been very good at expressing myself.
darthrevaninlight wrote...
writing and I have never had the best relationship either, but it gets better.
Unschuld wrote...
I like rain. That being said, I wouldn't mind living on Rannoch, a giant desert with NO BUGS.
forthary wrote...
Unschuld wrote...
I like rain. That being said, I wouldn't mind living on Rannoch, a giant desert with NO BUGS.
But there's spiders there...
I think it's more because I never change my socks and it takes that very personally.WizenSlinky0 wrote...
darthrevaninlight wrote...
writing and I have never had the best relationship either, but it gets better.
That's because you keep taking money from its wallet and eating all its pudding.
Which includes,Unschuld wrote...
I like rain. That being said, I wouldn't mind living on Rannoch, a giant desert with NO BUGS.
darthrevaninlight wrote...
I think it's more because I never change my socks and it takes that very personally.WizenSlinky0 wrote...
darthrevaninlight wrote...
writing and I have never had the best relationship either, but it gets better.
That's because you keep taking money from its wallet and eating all its pudding.
WelpXenoAlbedo wrote...
Ugh those cops broke my mandible.
darthrevaninlight wrote...
WelpXenoAlbedo wrote...
Ugh those cops broke my mandible.
Ryuji and Doc arent here.
Would you like an amputation?
Agreed, that wrex.shepard part was very well done. I could see it happening and they all stayed very true to their characters.bazzag wrote...
Neverwinter_Knight77 wrote...
I... think I know what you mean. Never been very good at expressing myself.
Its a good start
Wrex
Shepard
lol
Nah, I'd just be more holy. And that would only be cause for more bitterness.WizenSlinky0 wrote...
Well, maybe if you had more holes in your socks it'd feel more confident.
My medi-gel looks like a knife and is only good for cutting things.bazzag wrote...
darthrevaninlight wrote...
WelpXenoAlbedo wrote...
Ugh those cops broke my mandible.
Ryuji and Doc arent here.
Would you like an amputation?
No need, just use Medi-gel!
Cheese of Borg wrote...
I love the way tali and shepard rely on each other for support in ME3.
bazzag wrote...
Its a good start
Wrex
Shepard
lol
darthrevaninlight wrote...
Well,Neverwinter_Knight77 wrote...
I... think I know what you mean. Never been very good at expressing myself.
that, and there's a lack of exposition, so it's hard to visualize the
place. But just do what comes naturally for now, the concept is what is
important; writing visually is like that, it'll come and go and come
and go and come and go... =-= writing and I have never had the best
relationship either, but it gets better.
darthrevaninlight wrote...
Nah, I'd just be more holy. And that would only be cause for more bitterness.WizenSlinky0 wrote...
Well, maybe if you had more holes in your socks it'd feel more confident.
forthary wrote...
Unschuld wrote...
I like rain. That being said, I wouldn't mind living on Rannoch, a giant desert with NO BUGS.
But there's spiders there...
darthrevaninlight wrote...
My medi-gel looks like a knife and is only good for cutting things.bazzag wrote...
darthrevaninlight wrote...
WelpXenoAlbedo wrote...
Ugh those cops broke my mandible.
Ryuji and Doc arent here.
Would you like an amputation?
No need, just use Medi-gel!
Tali loves Shepardforthary wrote...
Cheese of Borg wrote...
I love the way tali and shepard rely on each other for support in ME3.
They're two pieces of the puzzle that fit perfectly.
WizenSlinky0 wrote...
darthrevaninlight wrote...
Nah, I'd just be more holy. And that would only be cause for more bitterness.WizenSlinky0 wrote...
Well, maybe if you had more holes in your socks it'd feel more confident.
Or it could mean your personality is full of holes!
Little holes, big holes, fun holes.
Unschuld wrote...
forthary wrote...
Unschuld wrote...
I like rain. That being said, I wouldn't mind living on Rannoch, a giant desert with NO BUGS.
But there's spiders there...
Rannoch's description said it had no insect-like lifeforms, if I remember correctly. Tali's fear of spiders doesn't necessarily mean she grew up with them on Rannoch (because she didn't, at all), but it IS something completely foreign, alien, and absolutely creepy for her. I think there was also a line (cut dialogue, maybe?) where Tali explains to Shepard that she once had a nightmare about a male Quarian removing his mask and spiders started pouring out. There's also an interesting comic someone made of the same thing happening to Tali.
OoooOOoooOOOoh!WizenSlinky0 wrote...
Or it could mean your personality is full of holes!
Little holes, big holes, fun holes.
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