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[Ryuji2]

Dilandau3000 wrote...

The number of syllables in the third line is right, but for some reason I just can't sing it in the rythm of the original modern major general. I kind of want to sing "omni-tool" in place of "england" even though they're not the same number of syllables.

How about this:

I am the very model of a great machinist quarian,
I've mended ships of turians, asari and batarian
I'm quite good too with omni-tools (and I screw up very rarely)
And you know I've got a shotgun (which some regard quite warily)

Still stuck for a rhyme on the penultimate line, though.

Hmm...sounds good, although the omni-tools line does seem hard to count out. Mordin's was "I'm quite good at genetics(as a subset of biology)" which is easy to time but omni-tool messes with me for some reason. Also DERP! Forgot about the shotgun...could incorporate that. The last lines were the hardest for me cause I couldn't find anything involving engineering ending in -arian.

Modifié par Ryuji2, 06 avril 2012 - 07:15 .

[darthrevaninlight]

Dilandau3000 wrote...

The number of syllables in the third line is right, but for some reason I just can't sing it in the rythm of the original modern major general. I kind of want to sing "omni-tool" in place of "england" even though they're not the same number of syllables.

How about this:

I am the very model of a great machinist quarian,
I've mended ships of turians, asari and batarian
I'm quite good too with omni-tools (and I screw up secondarily) or my wrist glows all merrily idklol
And you know I've got a shotgun (which some regard quite warily)

Still stuck for a rhyme on the penultimate line, though.

editted
in bold

Modifié par darthrevaninlight, 06 avril 2012 - 07:18 .

[Sirithariel]

Morning all, I like the Tali version of that song.

[Ryuji2]

Wrist glows merrily, heh, interesting. Meh, I'm more of a story-type writer. Never was quite good at rhyming. *cough* I'll keep at it though, try to improve it a bit.

Btw Revan, did you still wanna do that FF thing? Been getting the itch to type out some happier stories than the "art" BW's going for. Then again I might wait till the DLC and decide from there. Leaning more towards DLC at the moment and there's also MP to help keep my mind off the piddly endings.

Modifié par Ryuji2, 06 avril 2012 - 07:22 .

[darthrevaninlight]

Ryuji2 wrote...

Wrist glows merrily, heh, interesting. Meh, I'm more of a story-type writer. Never was quite good at rhyming. *cough* I'll keep at it though, try to improve it a bit.

Btw Revan, did you still wanna do that FF thing? Been getting the itch to type out some happier stories than the "art" BW's going for. Then again I might wait till the DLC and decide from there.

Heck yes I do.
Idea-planning is my favorite part! Whatever's good for you though :0



on a sidenote

This started out as more of an epic thing, then I redid it and it ended up like this XP

[Dilandau3000]

darthrevaninlight wrote...

Dilandau3000 wrote...

The number of syllables in the third line is right, but for some reason I just can't sing it in the rythm of the original modern major general. I kind of want to sing "omni-tool" in place of "england" even though they're not the same number of syllables.

How about this:

I am the very model of a great machinist quarian,
I've mended ships of turians, asari and batarian
I'm quite good too with omni-tools (and I screw up secondarily) or my wrist glows all merrily idklol
And you know I've got a shotgun (which some regard quite warily)

Still stuck for a rhyme on the penultimate line, though.

editted
in bold

Yeah, my version requires a deliberate mispronounciation of rarely.

Another alternative: I'm quite good too with omni-tools (and I use them customarily)

(Still going back and forth whether that  "too" belongs there; it's technically wrong for the patter but it just doesn't sound right without).

Modifié par Dilandau3000, 06 avril 2012 - 07:25 .

[Cro730]

^ DLC where i can be with Tali!!!!!!!

[Sirithariel]

Ryuji2 wrote...

Well, here's a first draft. Gonna work on it some more but lemme know what you think(also borrowed a few lines from the original):

I am the very model of a great machinist quarian
I've fixed up ships of turians, asari and batarian
I'm quite good at Omni-tools(and I screw up very rarely)
You know I have a shotgun(which geth should regard quite warily)
My engineering studies range from FTL to engines batarian
I am the very model of a great machinist quarian

How about that?

Modifié par Sirithariel, 06 avril 2012 - 07:26 .

[Sirithariel]

I know my song idea ^ is rubbish...
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Modifié par Sirithariel, 06 avril 2012 - 07:30 .

[GipsyDangeresque]

Here's my try...

I am the very model of an Admiralty quarian,
I've mended ships of turians, asari and batarian
I'm quite good too with omni-tools (I use them customarily)
I've also got a shotgun (which some fear with regularity)
Although the rest of the board thinks that I am quite contrarian,
I am the very model of an Admiralty quarian.

Modifié par Atemeus, 06 avril 2012 - 07:33 .

[Ryuji2]

darthrevaninlight wrote...
Heck yes I do.
Idea-planning is my favorite part! Whatever's good for you though :0

on a sidenote

*milady&demhipslolsnip*

This started out as more of an epic thing, then I redid it and it ended up like this XP

Wait, who is that sobbing? Miranda or Ashley? Can't tell.

Also, if you like, I think I'm gonna wait till after trying out the DLC. Till then I'll be brainstorming some idea and I'll throw them at you if I get any goodun's. Or even ideas for drawings/art as well.

Edit: I love how we're all trying to parody the modern major general song now!

Sirithariel wrote...

I know my song idea ^ is rubbish...
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Nah it's not rubbish, it's just hard to get the -arian bit to mix with quarian.

Modifié par Ryuji2, 06 avril 2012 - 07:31 .

[Dilandau3000]

Idea for the last line:

I am the very model of a great machinist quarian,
I've mended ships of turians, asari and batarian
I'm quite good too with omni-tools (and I use them customarily)
And you know I've got a shotgun (which some regard quite warily)
Although the admiralty thinks that I am quite contrarian,
I am the very model of a great machinist quarian.

Not great, but maybe it will spark some idea from the rest of you.

EDIT: top

Modifié par Dilandau3000, 06 avril 2012 - 07:34 .

[Sirithariel]

I am the very model of a great machinist quarian
I've fixed up ships of turians, asari and batarian
I'm quite good with Omni-tools (and I screw up very rarely)
You know I have a shotgun (which geth should regard quite warily)
My engineering studies range from FTL to engines batarian
I am the very model of a great machinist quarian

Modifié par Sirithariel, 06 avril 2012 - 07:35 .

[Cro730]

last two lines -
I stole Shepard for myself, I am very sorry and
I am the very model of an engineer Quarian

[Sirithariel]

Sirithariel wrote...

I am the very model of a great machinist quarian
I've fixed up ships of turians, asari and batarian
I'm quite good with Omni-tools (and I screw up very rarely)
You know I have a shotgun (which geth should regard quite warily)
My engineering studies range from FTL to engines batarian
I am the very model of a great machinist quarian

How about this?

[darthrevaninlight]

@ryuji Sounds awesome. Let's do it!!

I like atemius' shotgun addition. Last line seems to be... numbah five...ummm nope i got nothung. sleep time. cyafolks

[Cro730]

^ bye

darthrevaninlight wrote...

Heck yes I do.
Idea-planning is my favorite part! Whatever's good for you though :0



on a sidenote

This started out as more of an epic thing, then I redid it and it ended up like this XP

I would snip it, but it's too cool to snip. beginning my response -

WAT?

I could comment on each figure because theres so many funny things!
I'll just say lol at grunt and wrex being rocks hahah

Modifié par Cro730, 06 avril 2012 - 07:40 .

[GipsyDangeresque]

Mine's completely different now, LOL

I am the very model of quarian Admirality,
There's much food that I can't eat due to my reverse chirality,
I'm quite good too with omni-tools (I use them customarily)
I've also got a shotgun (which some fear with regularity)
Although I view this war for home as a mistake, a tragedy,
I am the very model of quarian Admirality.


What do you think? I like Admiralty because it's a military position just like Major General is

[Ryuji2]

darthrevaninlight wrote...

@ryuji Sounds awesome. Let's do it!!

I like atemius' shotgun addition. Last line seems to be... numbah five...ummm nope i got nothung. sleep time. cyafolks

Mmkay, will do! and goodnight, sleep well. Hold the line(well...not sure if it's needed anymore since the DLC announcement but I'ma still say hold the line).
Keelah Se'lai.

Cro730 wrote...

last two lines -
I stole Shepard for myself, I am very sorry and
I am the very model of an engineer Quarian

Sounds neat. But looking back, it seems she might be better off explaining her quirks instead of saying sorry. Idunno. Hard to think of new stuff involving engineer and I'm STILL stuck on the -arian bit.

Modifié par Ryuji2, 06 avril 2012 - 07:42 .

[Dilandau3000]

How about a haiku:

A geth passes by
The sound of a shotgun rings
Tali strikes again

I suck at haiku.

[Cro730]

I like the top picture. It's... smooth looking.

Ryuji2 wrote...

Sounds neat. But looking back, it seems she might be better off explaining her quirks instead of saying sorry. Idunno. Hard to think of new stuff involving engineer and I'm STILL stuck on the -arian bit.

uhhhh.
agrarian
dolorian
variant...?
ugh so difficult

[Sirithariel]

This is my best one:

I am the very model of admiralty Quarian
I've mended things turian, asari and batarian
I'm very good with omni-tools (with which I screw up rarely)
You know I have a shotgun (which some should regard warily)
My engineering studies range from asari to batarian
I am the very model of admiralty Quarian

Modifié par Sirithariel, 06 avril 2012 - 07:49 .

[Cro730]

Dilandau3000 wrote...

How about a haiku:

A geth passes by
The sound of a shotgun rings
Tali strikes again

I suck at haiku.

hopefully thats before I made peace!

[Dilandau3000]

I want to stay with Shepard until I am a centenarian?

EDIT: I'm grasping at emergency induction ports, here...

Modifié par Dilandau3000, 06 avril 2012 - 07:50 .

[Dilandau3000]

Cro730 wrote...

Dilandau3000 wrote...

How about a haiku:

A geth passes by
The sound of a shotgun rings
Tali strikes again

I suck at haiku.

hopefully thats before I made peace!

It was a heretic.