darthrevaninlight wrote...
AND you would get more romance dialogue!!! Win Win!!! 
I can see it now.
(Play this while you read)On the Normandy, Shepard sees Tali sitting in a corner of the crew deck eating alone near the mess hall, away from the rest of the crew. She sighs while playing with her food, lost in thought. Shepard politely asks, "Mind if I sit here?" Tali replies, "Sure." He then sits down and asks her another question. "You okay? You seem to be distracted a little," as he points to the food that now looks nothing like it originally did. She looks up, staring blankly across the room. "Yeah...well, maybe. I don't know really," she says. "I just...I'm not so sure of anything anymore, Shepard. What if this mission is our last? I feel like I haven't really experienced everything I can in life yet. I've never even had a boyfriend...and...well..."
Shepard gently smiles and looks at Tali's hands. She had been poking and prodding her food the whole time he'd been speaking with her. He leans back to the wall and says, "Well, Tali, you never know what tomorrow brings. You can only hope that you live life with no regrets." Shepard reaches out and touches Tali's left hand and she quickly snaps out of her blank stare, looks down at his hand and allows him to couple his right hand with hers. She looks up at him, seeing his piercing gaze as he says, "Tali...I don't know how you feel about me, but I care about you. I don't know whether or not we'll live through this mission, but I'm telling you now that I'd regret it every second for the rest of my life if I never told you how I felt about you."
Tali jumps a little bit with a shocked expression on her face. She starts to blush a little, tighening her grip with Shepard's right hand. "Shepard...I had no idea you felt that way. I never even considered it. I mean...what are the chances that you would like me? My immune system's frail and I can't be with you like other girls could." She looks down at her food and sighs. She then says, "I thought with Garrus it might work a little better since the DNA's more similar." She then turns back to him, "Would we really work? Could we? What if I get sick? I would compromise the mission."
Shepard stands and Tali does as well. He gestures towards the lounge, saying, "Here. Let's go someplace else and talk for a bit." She looks at him with a worrying look and agrees. They enter the lounge and Shepard turns towards Tali, gently grabbing her hands and as he holds them, he looks at her like she's never seen before. With a genuine show of affection, he leans closer towards her and says, "Listen to me, Tali. I know you're afraid of what might happen, but I've always cared about you ever since I first met you. There was something different I saw, like nothing I've ever seen before. I don't know how you feel about all this, but regardless, if you ever need me, I'm here for you. Always."
Tali's blushing is fairly obvious at this point and she starts to tear up a little. She looks down at her hands that are touching Shepard's and gently caresses his. She smiles and says, "Shepard. If you were to tell me that someone who I thought would never care about me like that would come up to me and say what you just did, I wouldn't believe it." Shepard frowns a little and begins to let go of Tali's hands. She grips his tightly and reassures him, saying, "At first." Tali then looks up at Shepard's deep blue eyes and grins, saying, "You don't know what you just said means to me, Shepard." She lets go of his hands and embraces him, gripping him tightly. She smiles gently and says, "Thank you."
I'll add more later methinks. Lemme know what you think of that though.
Edit: Not necessarily the Normandy BUT it fits:
http://desmond.image...jpg&res=landing
Modifié par Ryuji2, 10 avril 2012 - 06:34 .
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Sorry, it's late over here.... or it feels late.
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, no offense lol), so I'm kind of like "solve the first part of this problem, think for about an hour to figure out one variable, start the next part, check the forum and completely lose focus, spend the next 30 mins rethinking what I just figured out, repeat"
