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[jameshawking]

Screw the hyphens for dialogue.

Seriously. Just don't use that shill.

You have quotation marks on your keyboard. Use them. The only acceptable time to use hyphens for dialogue is if its a message like an e-mail or IM service.



Also, there is no plural form of "gunfire".

Modifié par jameshawking, 13 avril 2012 - 05:54 .

[bazzag]

Bfler wrote...

You ever noticed that in ME2 of the three jury members Gerrel is the one who defends Tali and Koris is the one who wants to damn her.
In ME3 Gerrel is the warmonger and Koris is the one who is needed to achieve peace.

In me2 its a different situation. Its about geth experimentation, and bringing live geth to the fleet. Gerrel supports tali because her father is his friend. Koris doesn't because he doesn't agree with what rael was doing

[78stonewobble]

jameshawking wrote...

Screw the hyphens for dialogue.

Seriously. Just don't use that shill.

You have quotation marks on your keyboard. Use them. The only acceptable time to use hyphens for dialogue is if its a message like an e-mail or IM service.



Also, there is no plural form of "gunfire".

Sure there is. It's called "MOARgunfire". *snicker* 

[bazzag]

darthrevaninlight wrote...

Cheese of Borg wrote...

I read a fanfic once in whice that turrian was actually a rapist. It was... graphic ...

Uh.
I've heard about that.
I really hope I never stumble upon that fanfic.
Ever.

I'd probably read it, but i'd imagine id be spooked by it.

Altho i do think hes got unchivalrous ideas in his mind...the way he puts his hand on tali. It makes me wanna


edit: Good so far seeka.

Modifié par bazzag, 13 avril 2012 - 05:56 .

[-N7-Seeker]

No one gives a **** about what I wrote. Expect Bazzag. Well I take it as a bad critic...
Koris never hated Tali, it was the diplomatic war between the two. He had no choice.

Modifié par -N7-Seeker, 13 avril 2012 - 05:57 .

[Unschuld]

Bfler wrote...

You ever noticed that in ME2 of the three jury members Gerrel is the one who defends Tali and Koris is the one who wants to damn her.
In ME3 Gerrel is the warmonger and Koris is the one who is needed to achieve peace.

Gerrel isn't a warmonger, he's a calculating military officer who sees an opportunity to strike and take back the homeworld. He's not unique in this, either. Legion says in ME2 that (paraphrase) "when the creators see the opportunity of an assured victory, they attack us 100% of the time". Given the general Quarian mindset regarding the Geth, this is completely understandable. Now... about that ship I was on while you started firing... *punch*

Koris is against Tali in ME2 because  he wants peace, and sees the actions of her and her father as provoking conflict. His viewpoint is in the minority in regards to most Quarians. Can't say that I blame him, either.

Modifié par Unschuld, 13 avril 2012 - 06:00 .

[lmxar]

BigglesFlysAgain wrote...

Bfler wrote...

Is that Xen dialog cut or ingame?

Its a cut or never came to fruition mission on the citadel where you have a choice to kill or capture xen, From the dialogue it seems it would have happened if you made peace. I think you could have got her to work on the cruicible,  but that might not work out in as a good choice

That mission would have been so awesome.

[Unschuld]

lmxar wrote...

That mission would have been so awesome.

Yeah, I wanted that one so bad... 

[TrueMadayar]

-N7-Seeker wrote...

No one gives a **** about what I wrote. Expect Bazzag. Well I take it as a bad critic...
Koris never hated Tali, it was the diplomatic war between the two. He had no choice.

I am napping...I need to...too tired...s'okay, will tell you some minor things later...

Nobody hates Tali, too cute...

[78stonewobble]

-N7-Seeker wrote...

No one gives a **** about what I wrote. Expect Bazzag. Well I take it as a bad critic...
Koris never hated Tali, it was the diplomatic war between the two. He had no choice.

Well it isn't that bad.

But it needs context or "badassness" to intrigue.

[bazzag]

maybe a quarian dlc?

[Cheese of Borg]

darthrevaninlight wrote...

Cheese of Borg wrote...

I read a fanfic once in whice that turrian was actually a rapist. It was... graphic ...

Uh.
I've heard about that.
I really hope I never stumble upon that fanfic.
Ever.

There is also one with rapist geth on haestrom... dear god some people are just messed up!

[78stonewobble]

lmxar wrote...

BigglesFlysAgain wrote...

Bfler wrote...

Is that Xen dialog cut or ingame?

Its a cut or never came to fruition mission on the citadel where you have a choice to kill or capture xen, From the dialogue it seems it would have happened if you made peace. I think you could have got her to work on the cruicible,  but that might not work out in as a good choice

That mission would have been so awesome.

Heck the conversation alone and Tali's knuckles to her face would have made it worth it.

[forthary]

Cheese of Borg wrote...

There is also one with rapist geth on haestrom... dear god some people are just messed up!

I didn't know geth could do that...

[bazzag]

forthary wrote...

Cheese of Borg wrote...

There is also one with rapist geth on haestrom... dear god some people are just messed up!

I didn't know geth could do that...

hmmm...i think this one i'd avoid...

[lmxar]

Speaking of Xen, I saw a fanfic somewhere about why she is so messed up. I bookmarked it on my computer at home, but I forgot to bookmark it on my college computer and wanted to finally read it. Anybody know what I am talking about? Give me a name of the series/author.

Also I hope there isn't strange Turian/Geth rapists in the series I am asking about. That would just be awkward.

[darthrevaninlight]

-N7-Seeker wrote...

Leaked script form my fanfic. Just to see your reaction.

The prision was cold. She felt a shadow over her. It was one of the guards who checked on the prisioners. He wore blue medium armor, the helmet was white and a Union logo was engraved into the forehead of it. The dark room gave a colder feeling to the cell.

-Why won''t you just kill me?
-We have plans. I cannot tell them. I will get executed.
-Why? I am imprisioned. I wouldn't tell anyone.
-You will tell it to the first guard you see, just to get rid of me.
Then he punched her in the stomach. She crawled back to a corner of the cell, and started crying.
-The big, glorious Federation will fall. Just watch.
(^it is confusing to tell who is talking here, perhaps consider revising )
After a few minutes, an explosion blasted off the whole east wing. and gunfires are blazed in the end of the hallway. Victory or Death! Yelled one of the federal soldier as they rushed the building, killing everyone without a second doubt. The federal soldier was wearing a black armor with red stripes on it. It was a bulky, heavy armor.(rather than brief description, it's better to talk about the feel of it, as in, the thick chilly metal of the armor weighed his shoulders down and slowed his movements.) Standard federal uniform. After they passed another man came through the hallway. An officer. He was wearing a black coat, with the federation logo on the left side of the chest. A Tartarus pistol was attached to the belt.
He opened the cell, and looked at the woman.
-Adrian!
She hugged the man, and they kissed
-Where have you been? I.... I.
-Long story, I'll tell it, when we get back to the camp. The war has just begun.

Then a soldier's voice was heard across the prision.
-Sir! Union soldiers supported by heavy armor are en route! Ten minutes out!
-You got the loudspeakers working already?
-Yes sir. We gave weapons to the prisioners and ready to move out.
-All units move out! The camp is 2 miles to the south! We need to go before the backup gets here.

It seems pretty interesting so far, would like to see where you go with it. Certainly what you have so far intrigues me, I'd like to know more. With more exposition on the state of the universe as it is, character development and role definition, it'll grow in the interesting department.
You definitely have a vision for it. Show us more when you write more and Thanks for showing us what you have so far! 

[TrueMadayar]

forthary wrote...

I didn't know geth could do that...

*yawns* Deed's about power and humiliation, not actual pleasure...so if sentient machine would want to inflict that, could befit definition...the least said about that, the better, warcrimes are what's absent for a reason from the game...

[darthrevaninlight]

Unschuld wrote...

lmxar wrote...

That mission would have been so awesome.

Yeah, I wanted that one so bad... 

I really wish they made it, too.

[darthrevaninlight]

bazzag wrote...

maybe a quarian dlc?

Or a Tali dlc? *0*

[Cheese of Borg]

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forthary wrote...

Cheese of Borg wrote...

There is also one with rapist geth on haestrom... dear god some people are just messed up!

I didn't know geth could do that...

They aparantly have atachments... Full of that nasty white geth stuff.

[darthrevaninlight]

Cheese of Borg wrote...

darthrevaninlight wrote...

Uh.
I've heard about that.
I really hope I never stumble upon that fanfic.
Ever.

There is also one with rapist geth on haestrom... dear god some people are just messed up!

lol and you read them, sucking in the words even as they revile you.

[bazzag]

darthrevaninlight wrote...

Unschuld wrote...

lmxar wrote...

That mission would have been so awesome.

Yeah, I wanted that one so bad... 

I really wish they made it, too.

Likewise. Xen deserves it. She is my fave quarian after tali, and maybe that one in the club on illium, whos just split from her boyfriend or sumptin

[bazzag]

darthrevaninlight wrote...

bazzag wrote...

maybe a quarian dlc?

Or a Tali dlc? *0*

Yes. Specifically tali, but involving the quarian race in general. A mish of epic proportions.

[forthary]

Cheese of Borg wrote...

They aparantly have atachments... Full of that nasty white geth stuff.

I never was too sure what exactly those fluids are that geth 'bleed' out when attacked and such.  Maybe grease or oil?  Ah, but im not sure...

And as someone stated above, there is a good reason war crimes are not covered in detail in this game; not that I would expect the geth to do such horrendus things, but still...some things are best left unmentioned.