It's all in the execution.gamer_girl wrote...
I agree it comes off trashy, and that starts to get into erotic fiction territory. I think people get the hint that if people are dating they're likely going to do things. But I guess if you really want something like that in your fanfic, go right ahead.
Modifié par exelsis, 15 avril 2012 - 01:14 .
bazzag wrote...
Dilandau3000 wrote...
The problem I have with that kind of writing is that it sounds like one of those trashy romance paperbacks.bazzag wrote...
'She gasped as she felt Shepards warm breath against the cold nape of her neck...'
True, but i'm just trying to think of an example to write about having sex without making it porno...
I think Hinting to the audience that its about To Happen Is a good Way To end a scene.gamer_girl wrote...
I honestly think with what is written sex is already implied well enough. It doesn't need another push - that would just be a bit excessive.
Modifié par skwisgaarthegod, 15 avril 2012 - 01:24 .
skwisgaarthegod wrote...
I think Hinting to the audience that its about To Happen Is a good Way To end a scene.gamer_girl wrote...
I honestly think with what is written sex is already implied well enough. It doesn't need another push - that would just be a bit excessive.
Your posts are a pure agony to my eyes. That random capitalization could bring down harbinger pretty quickly.skwisgaarthegod wrote...
I think Hinting to the audience that its about To Happen Is a good Way To end a scene.gamer_girl wrote...
I honestly think with what is written sex is already implied well enough. It doesn't need another push - that would just be a bit excessive.
Yeah sorry about that, its my stupid phone which feels like auto capitalising every second word or so :/exelsis wrote...
Your posts are a pure agony to my eyes. That random capitalization could bring down harbinger pretty quickly.skwisgaarthegod wrote...
I think Hinting to the audience that its about To Happen Is a good Way To end a scene.gamer_girl wrote...
I honestly think with what is written sex is already implied well enough. It doesn't need another push - that would just be a bit excessive.
bazzag wrote...
skwisgaarthegod wrote...
I think Hinting to the audience that its about To Happen Is a good Way To end a scene.gamer_girl wrote...
I honestly think with what is written sex is already implied well enough. It doesn't need another push - that would just be a bit excessive.
Well, it puts a stop to potential awkwardness
Modifié par IElitePredatorI, 15 avril 2012 - 01:41 .
Ah yeah well I agree with that.gamer_girl wrote...
^
Yes and that's already been done in the scene that was written by him.
To dwell on the implication is overkill.
Modifié par skwisgaarthegod, 15 avril 2012 - 01:35 .
Modifié par BigglesFlysAgain, 15 avril 2012 - 01:36 .
IElitePredatorI wrote...
I am not sure if you guys and girls saw what I posted a minute ago before you didn't respond due to thinking it being off-topic then please just say but:
I know it took more than 1 Quarian to make a Geth but if Tali was to make one then what do you think it would be like?
Personality, Appearance, Style etc...
bazzag wrote...
IElitePredatorI wrote...
I am not sure if you guys and girls saw what I posted a minute ago before you didn't respond due to thinking it being off-topic then please just say but:
I know it took more than 1 Quarian to make a Geth but if Tali was to make one then what do you think it would be like?
Personality, Appearance, Style etc...
The greatest geth in existence!
Yeah, but the big advantage is that they're not in a cave, but have a daylight cycle. We know that a human's internal clock will reset itself based on daylight (that's how you get over jetlag), so hopefully that will help a bit. Though it will probably be hard. A human's internal clock is on a 24.5 hour cycle, we're really built for something close to that.BigglesFlysAgain wrote...
Good Morning Ladies and Jellybeans, or afternoon or evening where applicable. Probably thinking two much but if Rannoch has a roughly 30 hour day, then how do you think Shepard will adapt, given that studies on people living in caves in isolation find that its really hard to break out of a 24 hour cycle despite their best efforts.
skwisgaarthegod wrote...
Well I have to sleep now. I'll try to check in before school tomorrow, but if not I'll be here around the same time tomorrow. Going to be hard finding times to be here when you also are now :/
Well see ya!
32.3 hours actually. It would be wierd. But a 24 hour cycle could work, rotating 8 hours per day.BigglesFlysAgain wrote...
Good Morning Ladies and Jellybeans, or afternoon or evening where applicable. Probably thinking two much but if Rannoch has a roughly 30 hour day, then how do you think Shepard will adapt, given that studies on people living in caves in isolation find that its really hard to break out of a 24 hour cycle despite their best efforts.
Then again we can assume if Shepard is living on the homeworld he will be basically retired anyway so he can sleep as much/structure his day as he wants I suppose.
Dilandau3000 wrote...
Yeah, but the big advantage is that they're not in a cave, but have a daylight cycle. We know that a human's internal clock will reset itself based on daylight (that's how you get over jetlag), so hopefully that will help a bit. Though it will probably be hard. A human's internal clock is on a 24.5 hour cycle, we're really built for something close to that.BigglesFlysAgain wrote...
Good Morning Ladies and Jellybeans, or afternoon or evening where applicable. Probably thinking two much but if Rannoch has a roughly 30 hour day, then how do you think Shepard will adapt, given that studies on people living in caves in isolation find that its really hard to break out of a 24 hour cycle despite their best efforts.
Yeah, I can imagine them dreaming of living on a planet at one of those dots. They might actually be disappointed by the limited starfield you get from within a planetary atmosphere.Fenrisfil wrote...
Hmm, well, compared to the likely drab interiors they have to put up with the stars may be the only environmental beauty they get to regularly enjoy. I can imagine a lot of them spend time gazing out to the stars longingly.
It's not actually too bad as long as you're not in the middle of Shinjuku or Shibuya or one of the other big neon-filled districts. Planets tend to fairly easily visible, and at the moment we've got Mars chasing Venus chasing Jupiter. Jupiter is usually one of the brightest objects in the sky, but Venus is outshining it by a long shot at the moment.Yeah, I spotted the Venus thing. Though not as much light pollution where I am, I'm impressed it was that visible in Tokyo.
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