Tali'Zorah ME3 Thread *MAJOR SPOILER WARNING!*
#45901
Posté 20 avril 2012 - 01:27
#45902
Posté 20 avril 2012 - 01:28
Cheese of Borg wrote...
InLoveWithTaliZorah wrote...
If Shepard commits actions that show that the man Tali fell in love with was an illusion, and Shepard is in reality a different person, do you not think that Tali would stop loving him?
Umm... shepard really cant do that...
Sure he can. Take this for example. In ME2 Shepard acted as or was perceived by Tali as a nice guy. Then in ME3, Shepard acted as or was perceived as an evil man (not necessarily Renegade, just evil) and perhaps killed her entire species, then Tali fell in love with an illusion in her mind or Shepard had a change of heart and became a new man whom Tali did not love.
#45903
Posté 20 avril 2012 - 01:28
Yeah, that's what I mean. You don't necessarily have to trust in order to love, but in order to keep a relationship, trust is necessary. Relationship is different from love is different from trust. Good example.
#45904
Posté 20 avril 2012 - 01:29
#45905
Posté 20 avril 2012 - 01:29
Iclonic wrote...
Exiledone1 wrote...
Well, just finished the rough draft of chapter 2 and boy is it rough. My problem isn't the dialog ,it's the narrative. You know, using things such as...
As Tali sat by the mirror like lake, she briefly walked....and so on. Dialog, I can kill it, but the narrative stuff no so much. Maybe I'll team up with someone. I'll handle the main story, dialog and someone can spice it up lol.
I'm sad though because in my fanfic chapter 2 is when Tali has to come to the realization that commander Shepherd didn't make it out in the last ecape pod. She is crying and...oh so sad. Hate to see Tali cry
Read A section of my story and I can tell you that I can spice up anything.
Illbe reading your story tonight after dinner. When my rough draft is more smoothed out I'll talk with you about maybe helping me spice things up lol
#45906
Posté 20 avril 2012 - 01:29
ICLONIC~!!!!!!Iclonic wrote...
Read A section of my story and I can tell you that I can spice up anything.
YOUR STORY IS TOO LONG!!!!!
BUT SO INTERESTING
y u do dis!?!?!?
#45907
Posté 20 avril 2012 - 01:30
darthrevaninlight wrote...
ICLONIC~!!!!!!Iclonic wrote...
Read A section of my story and I can tell you that I can spice up anything.
YOUR STORY IS TOO LONG!!!!!
BUT SO INTERESTING
y u do dis!?!?!?:crying:
You know what I'm doing? I'm remastering the Original: Mass Effect Degredation: The Vlaues of Organic Life. Is that the one you're reading??? Hmm??
#45908
Posté 20 avril 2012 - 01:31
Really?darthrevaninlight wrote...
gamer_girl wrote...
@revan
You didn't say they would stay broken up though. You said she'd keep crawling back like a pety little high school girl who has a crush on the biggest jerk in the school.
I definitely did not say that.
"I'm not saying she won't break up with him, ever. I'm saying that Tali, even after breaking up with him, if Shepard were to come back to her, apologizing for whatever he did, she would take him back every time, and that the love would remain in her heart even after having broken up. That's the ghist of what I see Tali's feelings as being.
#45909
Posté 20 avril 2012 - 01:31
Exiledone1 wrote...
Iclonic wrote...
Exiledone1 wrote...
Well, just finished the rough draft of chapter 2 and boy is it rough. My problem isn't the dialog ,it's the narrative. You know, using things such as...
As Tali sat by the mirror like lake, she briefly walked....and so on. Dialog, I can kill it, but the narrative stuff no so much. Maybe I'll team up with someone. I'll handle the main story, dialog and someone can spice it up lol.
I'm sad though because in my fanfic chapter 2 is when Tali has to come to the realization that commander Shepherd didn't make it out in the last ecape pod. She is crying and...oh so sad. Hate to see Tali cry
Read A section of my story and I can tell you that I can spice up anything.
Illbe reading your story tonight after dinner. When my rough draft is more smoothed out I'll talk with you about maybe helping me spice things up lol
Yeah, Just message me on Fan Fic and tell me it's you and I'll give you a snippet so you can get an idea of what my writing is like.
#45910
Posté 20 avril 2012 - 01:32
Right now, yes.Iclonic wrote...
You know what I'm doing? I'm remastering the Original: Mass Effect Degredation: The Vlaues of Organic Life. Is that the one you're reading??? Hmm??
Yes, indeed.
Your stories are a trap. A trap. They pull you in and make you want to read more even when you know you have to do stuff RL related!!!!!
Modifié par darthrevaninlight, 20 avril 2012 - 01:32 .
#45911
Posté 20 avril 2012 - 01:32
Exiledone1 wrote...
Iclonic wrote...
Exiledone1 wrote...
Well, just finished the rough draft of chapter 2 and boy is it rough. My problem isn't the dialog ,it's the narrative. You know, using things such as...
As Tali sat by the mirror like lake, she briefly walked....and so on. Dialog, I can kill it, but the narrative stuff no so much. Maybe I'll team up with someone. I'll handle the main story, dialog and someone can spice it up lol.
I'm sad though because in my fanfic chapter 2 is when Tali has to come to the realization that commander Shepherd didn't make it out in the last ecape pod. She is crying and...oh so sad. Hate to see Tali cry
Read A section of my story and I can tell you that I can spice up anything.
Illbe reading your story tonight after dinner. When my rough draft is more smoothed out I'll talk with you about maybe helping me spice things up lol
This one is also available for assistance
#45912
Posté 20 avril 2012 - 01:32
darthrevaninlight wrote...
In that case, it would not really be Shepard that she loved in the first place, right? So she didnt really stop loving him, she just didn't know him to begin with.InLoveWithTaliZorah wrote...
If Shepard commits actions that show that the man Tali fell in love with was an illusion, and Shepard is in reality a different person, do you not think that Tali would stop loving him?
Thats like saying, if someone gives you a strawberry cake and you eat it, eyes closed, and you taste kiwi.
It can only mean one of two things.
1) your tastebuds screwed up
2) it's not strawberry cake
So Tali would have to figure out which one of these is true.
1) her perception of Shepard's actions is mistaken
2) She never knew Shepard to begin with.
The THING THAT MUST NOT BE NAMED is a direct emotional response to a heart-wrenching situation rather than a choice between loving and not loving Shepard.
Of course it is an act of despair, but the despair is caused by Tali's realization that (as you accurately stated) her love was misplaced because she did not actually know Shepard. This realization made her realize that this love was not real. Her love for the illusion may not end, but the love for the actual Shepard would probably stop. This could cause her to... well... do THAT THING.
#45913
Posté 20 avril 2012 - 01:32
#45914
Posté 20 avril 2012 - 01:34
darthrevaninlight wrote...
@Exiledone1
Yeah, that's what I mean. You don't necessarily have to trust in order to love, but in order to keep a relationship, trust is necessary. Relationship is different from love is different from trust. Good example.
As I said I sort of know what your trying to say. I loved her, I really did, but the relationship had to end because of the lack of trust and in my heart I know now, she didn't really love me if she did cheat on me. Emotions always override conscious thinking, at least for a time. I mean, I so wanted to take her back, but there would have been no way I could.
I couldn't erase the time we did spend together, for me, it was real. For her, who knows, but...yeah, hard to talk about this a little, but I just thought maybe that story would help flesh out what I wanted to say. I want to say more, but my mind is mush.
Still at the end of the day, I had my breaking point and more self respect for myself to not go back to someone who would spit on my love.
#45915
Posté 20 avril 2012 - 01:34
gamer_girl wrote...
Really?
"I'm not saying she won't break up with him, ever. I'm saying that Tali, even after breaking up with him, if Shepard were to come back to her, apologizing for whatever he did, she would take him back every time, and that the love would remain in her heart even after having broken up. That's the ghist of what I see Tali's feelings as being.
I don't see it as the same thing as that "petty school girl" you mentioned!!!!
There were certain nuances to what I was saying that were not communicated properly.
#45916
Posté 20 avril 2012 - 01:34
darthrevaninlight wrote...
Right now, yes.Iclonic wrote...
You know what I'm doing? I'm remastering the Original: Mass Effect Degredation: The Vlaues of Organic Life. Is that the one you're reading??? Hmm??
Yes, indeed.
Your stories are a trap. A trap.
http://t0.gstatic.co...O5PQHe6oXocgL9g
#45917
Posté 20 avril 2012 - 01:35
bazzag wrote...
Exiledone1 wrote...
Iclonic wrote...
Exiledone1 wrote...
Well, just finished the rough draft of chapter 2 and boy is it rough. My problem isn't the dialog ,it's the narrative. You know, using things such as...
As Tali sat by the mirror like lake, she briefly walked....and so on. Dialog, I can kill it, but the narrative stuff no so much. Maybe I'll team up with someone. I'll handle the main story, dialog and someone can spice it up lol.
I'm sad though because in my fanfic chapter 2 is when Tali has to come to the realization that commander Shepherd didn't make it out in the last ecape pod. She is crying and...oh so sad. Hate to see Tali cry
Read A section of my story and I can tell you that I can spice up anything.
Illbe reading your story tonight after dinner. When my rough draft is more smoothed out I'll talk with you about maybe helping me spice things up lol
This one is also available for assistance
Dont worry you'll be one of the first I ask for help.
#45918
Posté 20 avril 2012 - 01:36
I cant go look it up....Fenrisfil wrote...
What happens in the game if you romance Tali in ME2 then drop her for your ME1 love interest? I would never do that, but I heard she is just kinda cool with it. Would it make her stop loving him? Not noticeably I'm betting.
#45919
Posté 20 avril 2012 - 01:36
darthrevaninlight wrote...
Right now, yes.Iclonic wrote...
You know what I'm doing? I'm remastering the Original: Mass Effect Degredation: The Vlaues of Organic Life. Is that the one you're reading??? Hmm??
Yes, indeed.
Your stories are a trap. A trap. They pull you in and make you want to read more even when you know you have to do stuff RL related!!!!!
Haha. That story sounds crappy compared to my sequel. trust me. My remastered version will be TEN times better. It sounds so much more personal.
I'm so sorry my story traps. You can tell I deviated a little bit from the main story line. Where are you exactly in the series?
#45920
Posté 20 avril 2012 - 01:36
Iclonic wrote...
Exiledone1 wrote...
Iclonic wrote...
Exiledone1 wrote...
Well, just finished the rough draft of chapter 2 and boy is it rough. My problem isn't the dialog ,it's the narrative. You know, using things such as...
As Tali sat by the mirror like lake, she briefly walked....and so on. Dialog, I can kill it, but the narrative stuff no so much. Maybe I'll team up with someone. I'll handle the main story, dialog and someone can spice it up lol.
I'm sad though because in my fanfic chapter 2 is when Tali has to come to the realization that commander Shepherd didn't make it out in the last ecape pod. She is crying and...oh so sad. Hate to see Tali cry
Read A section of my story and I can tell you that I can spice up anything.
Illbe reading your story tonight after dinner. When my rough draft is more smoothed out I'll talk with you about maybe helping me spice things up lol
Yeah, Just message me on Fan Fic and tell me it's you and I'll give you a snippet so you can get an idea of what my writing is like.
I will, but isn't your story with your writing story write in our sig? Or are you talking about sharing something you haven't showed to the public to me.?
#45921
Posté 20 avril 2012 - 01:37
darthrevaninlight wrote...
I cant go look it up....Fenrisfil wrote...
What happens in the game if you romance Tali in ME2 then drop her for your ME1 love interest? I would never do that, but I heard she is just kinda cool with it. Would it make her stop loving him? Not noticeably I'm betting.someone else say what happenz!
Your game explodes into a buzzilion little pieces and your eyes melt
#45922
Posté 20 avril 2012 - 01:37
Tali is not that stupid.
#45923
Posté 20 avril 2012 - 01:38
Fenrisfil wrote...
Calinstel wrote...
The real issue is just how do quarians view love.
What traits signal their minds to associate that person with what we call love.
So far, all we have done is paste human emotions and feelings on Tali. Since we know very little about quarians (face it, BW really dropped the ball here) then all we can do is assign human standards but, are they correct?
That is a very good point. We are really largely debating a humanized Tali's point of view.
What we know about Quarians is their sense of duty and sacrifice for the good of the many. That and the effect on intimacy living inside a suit has.
But that is all the Fleet based Quarians. I'm sure they wouldn't have totally changed their ideals on love since leaving their homeworld and we know nothing about that.
The evolutionary purpos of love cant be that diffrent...
#45924
Posté 20 avril 2012 - 01:39
darthrevaninlight wrote...
I cant go look it up....Fenrisfil wrote...
What happens in the game if you romance Tali in ME2 then drop her for your ME1 love interest? I would never do that, but I heard she is just kinda cool with it. Would it make her stop loving him? Not noticeably I'm betting.someone else say what happenz!
I can tell you Darth. It is not worth even thinking about. I felt like....
It was just terrible. Besides that the fact the 'she was cool' with it.....YUCK. I just. no. I could never do that to Tali.
#45925
Posté 20 avril 2012 - 01:39
Yep.
I could in no way even watch the videos. I don't want to see Tali in pain
every single time is meant solely in the hypothetical universe wherein Tali has "spirit eyes" that can perceive Shepard's heart and tell if he is sincere or not.gamer_girl wrote...
If she would take him back every single time simply because an apology that in most likely insincere and just a ploy to get her into bed, then she is a complete numbskull and not worthy of anyone's respect.
Tali is not that stupid.
Modifié par darthrevaninlight, 20 avril 2012 - 01:46 .





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