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Terrorize69

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skwisgaarthegod wrote...

I wish I could do that, Terror. When I'm unable to write and I get good ideas for what to do I've forgotten them by the time I'm in a position to actually write them down. I'm taking a lot of time with this fanfic (currently stuck on how I'll make ME3 end) so I don't make it another version of crap. Every time I come up with something I just end up saying "no that doesn't work either", so progress is slow.

Oh man making the ME3 ending work is hard, cant tell you how many times I redid chapter 2. I totally understand how that will be slowing you down.

Even thoe I published most my chapters recently within the space of a few days, Chapter 1 and 2 were done nearly 2 weeks ago lol, spent most that time redoing 2, and writing 3-5 in my head. 6-7 came while writing 3-5 down lol.

Modifié par Terrorize69, 20 avril 2012 - 10:02 .


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Goddammit, Terrorize. Aftermath is certainly interesting, I look forward(I think) to upcoming chapters.

GOHDUMIT TALLEH HOW COULD U DO THAT

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Terrorize69 wrote...

Ok, checked it through.. Chapter 7 is up,,, *hides from the hate mail*


Oh man, I'm not going to survive this......
Now I not only fear what it takes her to be freed, but also what she will do before that !!!

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skwisgaarthegod wrote...

I wish I could do that, Terror. When I'm unable to write and I get good ideas for what to do I've forgotten them by the time I'm in a position to actually write them down. I'm taking a lot of time with this fanfic (currently stuck on how I'll make ME3 end) so I don't make it another version of crap. Every time I come up with something I just end up saying "no that doesn't work either", so progress is slow.


I used to suffer the same thing, and forget really good ideas. Jot them down on a piece of paper, a new word doc or sumptin. Write them down in bullet point form, explaining all the points, bits of dialogue that you want to add, if any springs to mind. And above all, when stuck, don't be afraid to completely change that segement, or cut ideas out.

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terroriz69s fanfic made me so depressed i had to go for a long drive on a gravel road

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Terrorize69 wrote...

skwisgaarthegod wrote...

I wish I could do that, Terror. When I'm unable to write and I get good ideas for what to do I've forgotten them by the time I'm in a position to actually write them down. I'm taking a lot of time with this fanfic (currently stuck on how I'll make ME3 end) so I don't make it another version of crap. Every time I come up with something I just end up saying "no that doesn't work either", so progress is slow.

Oh man making the ME3 ending work is hard, cant tell you how many times I redid chapter 2. I totally understand how that will be slowing you down.

Even thoe I published most my chapters recently within the space of a few days, Chapter 1 and 2 were done nearly 2 weeks ago lol, spent most that time redoing 2, and writing 3-5 in my head. 6-7 came while writing 3-5 down lol.


I wasn't too bad with my ending fanfic. I think it was because i knew what i wanted from the end of it, and a key aspect near the beginning, so it all linked together nicely. The origin of the reapers was pretty much the last thing i wrote, as i decided it would be nice to include it, and try to make sense of why the reaps are such meanies. The hardest part for me to write was how to get shep off the citadel.

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ichi9181 wrote...

terroriz69s fanfic made me so depressed i had to go for a long drive on a gravel road

Heeey its not that bad! lol :crying:

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Maderek wrote...

Goddammit, Terrorize. Aftermath is certainly interesting, I look forward(I think) to upcoming chapters.

GOHDUMIT TALLEH HOW COULD U DO THAT

Haha, I know right! Bet you didnt see that coming ;)

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Terrorize69 wrote...

Ok, checked it through.. Chapter 7 is up,,, *hides from the hate mail*


Oh man, I'm not going to survive this......
Now I not only fear what it takes her to be freed, but also what she will do before that !!!


"The night is darkest before the dawn" :whistle: Or is it :ph34r:

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i didn't mean it was bad

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ichi9181 wrote...

i didn't mean it was bad

Haha I know :P I felt abit depressed writing it, and thats with me knowing whats still yet to come...

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Terrorize69 wrote...

"The night is darkest before the dawn" :whistle: Or is it :ph34r:


Is this now meant good or bad ?
I'M SO ****ED UP RIGHT NOW !!!Image IPB

Modifié par Tom80, 20 avril 2012 - 10:27 .


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QUIT TOYING WITH MY EMOTIONS, TERRORIZE

EDIT: LOOK WHAT YOU MADE ME DO. TOP OF THE MORNING TO Y'ALL. OR SHOULD I SAY PAGE
ok fine i fixed my caps lock button

Image IPB

Modifié par Maderek, 20 avril 2012 - 10:35 .


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ichi9181

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the fanfics out there are still really good

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They certainly are ichi.

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Epic....win.
We all should leave this artist a line of respect.

Modifié par EmperorZorn, 20 avril 2012 - 10:47 .


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Its good, but i prefer Revanart meself.

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Maderek wrote...

QUIT TOYING WITH MY EMOTIONS, TERRORIZE

EDIT: LOOK WHAT YOU MADE ME DO. TOP OF THE MORNING TO Y'ALL. OR SHOULD I SAY PAGE
ok fine i fixed my caps lock button

*snip*


:D:lol:

I should get someone to draw the "new" Tali lol im no good at art

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bazzag wrote...

Terrorize69 wrote...

skwisgaarthegod wrote...

*snip*

*snip*


*snip*

Sorry I've been gone a while, got sidetracked haha. Yeah I've got a basic outline of what I want to happen. I solved the getting off the citadel problem by using the indoctrination theory and having Shep wake up at the end in the rubble after being Harbinger'd, waking up from the "dream", so he was never on the citadel at first. I'm solving the teleporting squadmates thing by just making them stay on the Normandy while Shep does the final run on his own, and Joker doesn't randomly bugger off into oblivion. One of my main problems at the moment is writing it well. I'm generally a good writer, but I'm pretty awful at explaining whats in my mind, similar to my inability to draw art (awesome stuff in my mind, can't translate it to paper). My other main problem is figuring out how to do the citadel/crucible working. I don't want just a generic "FIAR TEH LAZORR" and that be that, I want to fit Harbinger into it as well as some other stuff. After I work that out then I can get the Tali/Rannoch jazz happening.

Fun times ahead :D

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Terrorize69 wrote...

I should get someone to draw the "new" Tali lol im no good at art


I'm not sure if I want to see that one....Image IPB

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bazzag wrote...

Its good, but i prefer Revanart meself.


I'm a big fan of Revanart myself too :)

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i wish i could draw or write the only thing i am good at is fixing things or taking them apart

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@ gaar

I'm sure it'll all work itself out in the end :)

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ichi9181 wrote...

i wish i could draw or write the only thing i am good at is fixing things or taking them apart


Then build yourself a machine to draw for you ! 
Something like the geth, but less rebellious...

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EmperorZorn wrote...

bazzag wrote...

Its good, but i prefer Revanart meself.


I'm a big fan of Revanart myself too :)

I'd put that with Revanart in terms of win, myself...

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skwisgaarthegod wrote...

bazzag wrote...

Terrorize69 wrote...

skwisgaarthegod wrote...

*snip*

*snip*


*snip*

Sorry I've been gone a while, got sidetracked haha. Yeah I've got a basic outline of what I want to happen. I solved the getting off the citadel problem by using the indoctrination theory and having Shep wake up at the end in the rubble after being Harbinger'd, waking up from the "dream", so he was never on the citadel at first. I'm solving the teleporting squadmates thing by just making them stay on the Normandy while Shep does the final run on his own, and Joker doesn't randomly bugger off into oblivion. One of my main problems at the moment is writing it well. I'm generally a good writer, but I'm pretty awful at explaining whats in my mind, similar to my inability to draw art (awesome stuff in my mind, can't translate it to paper). My other main problem is figuring out how to do the citadel/crucible working. I don't want just a generic "FIAR TEH LAZORR" and that be that, I want to fit Harbinger into it as well as some other stuff. After I work that out then I can get the Tali/Rannoch jazz happening.

Fun times ahead :D


Keep at it! ;)

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Terrorize69 wrote...

I should get someone to draw the "new" Tali lol im no good at art


I'm not sure if I want to see that one....../../../images/forum/emoticons/unsure.png

Aww  cmon, even *spoiler* Tali needs love <3:wub: