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[Exiledone1]

Terrorize69 wrote...

Tom80 wrote...

Away for 6 or 7 hours.
See you later.

(Terro, have the new chap up then please........)

I'll try :innocent: May cut chapter 8 short and move half of 8 to 9.

Oh yeah, I'll be pm'ing you soon about some stuff about your new fanfic. I left a reply in the thread , but confused about something and wantefd clarity. I';l hit you up when I get to work.

[Terrorize69]

Exiledone1 wrote...

Terrorize69 wrote...

Tom80 wrote...

Away for 6 or 7 hours.
See you later.

(Terro, have the new chap up then please........)

I'll try :innocent: May cut chapter 8 short and move half of 8 to 9.

Oh yeah, I'll be pm'ing you soon about some stuff about your new fanfic. I left a reply in the thread , but confused about something and wantefd clarity. I';l hit you up when I get to work.

Ok look forward to it

*goes back to writing a monologue by TIM* 

[forthary]

Exiledone1 wrote...

Terrorize69 wrote...

Tom80 wrote...

Away for 6 or 7 hours.
See you later.

(Terro, have the new chap up then please........)

I'll try :innocent: May cut chapter 8 short and move half of 8 to 9.

Oh yeah, I'll be pm'ing you soon about some stuff about your new fanfic. I left a reply in the thread , but confused about something and wantefd clarity. I';l hit you up when I get to work.

Oh, by the way Exile, I kinda hate to ask you because we have so much fanfiction flowing around in the thread, and I don't really like to brag or stand out in most ways, but...did you get a chance to read my fan fiction yet?  I don't mind getting any sort of constructive criticism from you, whether its good or bad.

[CmnDwnWrkn]

forthary wrote...

CmnDwnWrkn wrote...

Thanks for the warm welcome everyone.

I actually haven't started playing ME3 yet.  But I have read spoilers, seen the endings, and watched the entire Tali romance.  I couldn't resist, lol.  I'm on my second ME2 playthrough, where of course I'm taking Ms. vas Normandy everywhere I go.

The moment I fell for Tali was the first time she motioned for me to follow her to the drive core on the Normandy.  I love the way she does that.

And I really like the date idea where Shep and Tali go to Six Flags.  I can totally see them walking around with Shep playing games and winning stuffed animals for her.

I imagine by the time Mass Effect takes place, they'll either have gone out of business or they may have changed their name, such as how CNN is ANN, and potentally in this case, Six Flags is Seven Markers.  I do like taking Tali with me wherever I go; I can never get enough of her personality and dialog.

Yeah I think you're right about that.  Seven Markers

Do you get a burst of energy when you see Tali under attack, and jump out of cover to defend her at all costs?  I know I do.  I'm never more determined to kill an enemy than when I see her getting hit.  Nobody messes with my Tali!

[forthary]

CmnDwnWrkn wrote...


Do you get a burst of energy when you see Tali under attack, and jump out of cover to defend her at all costs?  I know I do.  I'm never more determined to kill an enemy than when I see her getting hit.  Nobody messes with my Tali!

I try to keep her out of harm's way, but because of the fact the AI isn't too good in this game, and because Tali really can't 'die' in normal combat, there's no much I can do for her.  If I can spare it, Ill happily revive her with medi-gel.

I kinda have to laugh at the poor AI in this game; whenever I would trap my squadmates behind the door, I would end up rushing down the next hall to get away from them, and as soon as I would open the door, surprise!  Tali'Zorah and Garrus were standing right behind the door.  I can imagine seeing Shepard doing something like this to Tali; he runs off while shopping with her, trying to escape her and get her all worked up, and when he opens the next door he comes across, Tali is standing there, her hand on her hip, and saying, "Surprise, Shepard.", with Shepard having a wide-eyed look on his face.  Then of course, Tali drags Shepard by the ear as punishment for running away from her.  "Your mine, Shepard.  I'll make sure you don't forget it."

Modifié par forthary, 20 avril 2012 - 02:24 .

[bazzag]

For me combat is different than free time. If someone tries to pick on tali, then theyre looking for a kick in the quad. If however, in battle, tali's got herself killed, because she's decided to rush headlong into a group of enemies without thinking about cover or anything, then i'll be damned if i'm gonna use medi gel to bring her back. That goes for any squaddie. The less gel i use, the more money/xp i get.

[Exiledone1]

forthary wrote...

Exiledone1 wrote...

Terrorize69 wrote...

Tom80 wrote...

Away for 6 or 7 hours.
See you later.

(Terro, have the new chap up then please........)

I'll try :innocent: May cut chapter 8 short and move half of 8 to 9.

Oh yeah, I'll be pm'ing you soon about some stuff about your new fanfic. I left a reply in the thread , but confused about something and wantefd clarity. I';l hit you up when I get to work.

Oh, by the way Exile, I kinda hate to ask you because we have so much fanfiction flowing around in the thread, and I don't really like to brag or stand out in most ways, but...did you get a chance to read my fan fiction yet?  I don't mind getting any sort of constructive criticism from you, whether its good or bad.

Okay, I made it out the shower and now heading to works, but wanted to touch base with you before I left. I have your fanfic in my bookmark tab, but haven't got to it yet. I'm finishing up one more from another member and your next on my list. Been reading so many the last few days, but you'll have some feedback from me by tonight. my word is my bond okay, off to the office. Now, the fanfic is the one in your sig correct? Just wanted to make sure that is the one you want me to read right?

Modifié par Exiledone1, 20 avril 2012 - 02:28 .

[Exiledone1]

CmnDwnWrkn wrote...

Thanks for the warm welcome everyone.

I actually haven't started playing ME3 yet.  But I have read spoilers, seen the endings, and watched the entire Tali romance.  I couldn't resist, lol.  I'm on my second ME2 playthrough, where of course I'm taking Ms. vas Normandy everywhere I go.

The moment I fell for Tali was the first time she motioned for me to follow her to the drive core on the Normandy.  I love the way she does that.

And I really like the date idea where Shep and Tali go to Six Flags.  I can totally see them walking around with Shep playing games and winning stuffed animals for her.

Welcome and yeah, I think I'm the one who posed the Six Flag date, I think. That would be so awesome Tali and Shepherd would have so much fun Glad to have you here new friend

[forthary]

Exiledone1 wrote...

Now, the fanfic is the one in your sig correct? Just wanted to make sure that is the one you want me to read right?

Yes, that is correct.  It's not the one i have in my blog, its the one on fanfiction.net.  I'm glad I don't use the blog anymore, it's a mess.  But, I think its great for posting extras that normally wouldn't make it into my chapter.  I'll have to think about that when I somehow reach a end to a major plot of my story...

Modifié par forthary, 20 avril 2012 - 02:35 .

[bazzag]

As a little spoiler for you all, i've decided to introduce a character early in my pilgrimage fanfic. Who you might ask?

Only everyones favourite drone...

[Cheese of Borg]

CmnDwnWrkn wrote...


I actually haven't started playing ME3 yet.  But I have read spoilers, seen the endings, and watched the entire Tali romance.  I couldn't resist, lol.  I'm on my second ME2 playthrough, where of course I'm taking Ms. vas Normandy everywhere I go.

The moment I fell for Tali was the first time she motioned for me to follow her to the drive core on the Normandy.  I love the way she does that.

And I really like the date idea where Shep and Tali go to Six Flags.  I can totally see them walking around with Shep playing games and winning stuffed animals for her.

Welcome! Yah, that is one of herbest traits...

[Exiledone1]

forthary wrote...

Exiledone1 wrote...

Now, the fanfic is the one in your sig correct? Just wanted to make sure that is the one you want me to read right?

Yes, that is correct.  It's not the one i have in my blog, its the one on fanfiction.net.  I'm glad I don't use the blog anymore, it's a mess.  But, I think its great for posting extras that normally wouldn't make it into my chapter.  I'll have to think about that when I somehow reach a end to a major plot of my story...

Okay, I'm back everyone.....yay for Exile lol 

Cool Forthary. Look forward to reading it after a nice dinner tonight

Modifié par Exiledone1, 20 avril 2012 - 02:51 .

[EmperorZorn]

Awwww... no more emergency induction port required.

[Exiledone1]

CmnDwnWrkn wrote...

forthary wrote...

CmnDwnWrkn wrote...

Thanks for the warm welcome everyone.

I actually haven't started playing ME3 yet.  But I have read spoilers, seen the endings, and watched the entire Tali romance.  I couldn't resist, lol.  I'm on my second ME2 playthrough, where of course I'm taking Ms. vas Normandy everywhere I go.

The moment I fell for Tali was the first time she motioned for me to follow her to the drive core on the Normandy.  I love the way she does that.

And I really like the date idea where Shep and Tali go to Six Flags.  I can totally see them walking around with Shep playing games and winning stuffed animals for her.

I imagine by the time Mass Effect takes place, they'll either have gone out of business or they may have changed their name, such as how CNN is ANN, and potentally in this case, Six Flags is Seven Markers.  I do like taking Tali with me wherever I go; I can never get enough of her personality and dialog.

Yeah I think you're right about that.  Seven Markers

Do you get a burst of energy when you see Tali under attack, and jump out of cover to defend her at all costs?  I know I do.  I'm never more determined to kill an enemy than when I see her getting hit.  Nobody messes with my Tali!

Haha...I do actually. I actually move from cover and duck next to her where ever she is under cover at so it looks like I'm coming to her aid and were fighting side by side. I enjoy the role playing lol. The other day I was being swamped by Cerebus troops and was on my last leg on Insanity and out of nowhere I see three cerbeus soliders get put to rest by none other than....Tali.

It was so Epic. I wish I could have recorded it. I thought she was dead cause it seemed to just be me on the battlefield and when I needed her the most she was there for me Love Tali

BTW: Did everyone vanish??????? 

Modifié par Exiledone1, 20 avril 2012 - 03:07 .

[Terrorize69]

Back also, took a walk in the rain to get my creative juices flowing lol

[bazzag]

Right guys, i be off for a bit. I'll either be back in a couple of hours, or later tonight.
But Tali fanfic has been started, and hopefully, chapter one will be up today or early tomorrow.

So i shall c u later.

[Exiledone1]

Terrorize69 wrote...

Back also, took a walk in the rain to get my creative juices flowing lol

Welcome back my friend. I was wondering where everyone went. I'm curious, did you plan out your whole story before writing or do you do it chapter by chapter. Still crying about you know who at the end of Chapter 7, well two people

[Exiledone1]

bazzag wrote...

Right guys, i be off for a bit. I'll either be back in a couple of hours, or later tonight.
But Tali fanfic has been started, and hopefully, chapter one will be up today or early tomorrow.

So i shall c u later.

Later Bazz!!!!

We'll hold the line for you

[Terrorize69]

Exiledone1 wrote...

Terrorize69 wrote...

Back also, took a walk in the rain to get my creative juices flowing lol

Welcome back my friend. I was wondering where everyone went. I'm curious, did you plan out your whole story before writing or do you do it chapter by chapter. Still crying about you know who at the end of Chapter 7, well two people

I planned out the key plot points, but the sub-plots and fillers are wirtten in my head about 2 chapters at a time

Modifié par Terrorize69, 20 avril 2012 - 03:20 .

[Cheese of Borg]

EmperorZorn wrote...



Awwww... no more emergency induction port required.

Shepard comander; do you require assistance in construction of your dewlling?

[Exiledone1]

Cheese of Borg wrote...

EmperorZorn wrote...



Awwww... no more emergency induction port required.

Shepard comander; do you require assistance in construction of your dewlling?

Lol, Shepherd and Tali established peace with the geth and their reward....indentured servitude hahaha. Shall I add an olive to your Martini  Creator Tali Zorah???

Modifié par Exiledone1, 20 avril 2012 - 03:19 .

[Exiledone1]

Terrorize69 wrote...

Exiledone1 wrote...

Terrorize69 wrote...

Back also, took a walk in the rain to get my creative juices flowing lol

Welcome back my friend. I was wondering where everyone went. I'm curious, did you plan out your whole story before writing or do you do it chapter by chapter. Still crying about you know who at the end of Chapter 7, well two people

I planned out the key plot points, but the sub-plots and fillers are wirtten in my head about 2 chapters at a time

PM Sent and btw, I looked at your profile after I sent the message so I know your a bro now hahaha. You'll see when you read the message. haha

[Neverwinter_Knight77]

18 Brains wrote...




And with that, I'm off.  3:00 a.m. is late enough.

Ah, now I finally see that third toe you guys were talking about last night.  Hmm... Nah, I don't think it'd be dangerous to Shepard (as in a claw).  Of course, I can only guess.

Modifié par Neverwinter_Knight77, 20 avril 2012 - 03:27 .

[Cheese of Borg]

Exiledone1 wrote...

Cheese of Borg wrote...

EmperorZorn wrote...



Awwww... no more emergency induction port required.

Shepard comander; do you require assistance in construction of your dewlling?

Lol, Shepherd and Tali established peace with the geth and their reward....indentured servitude hahaha. Shall I add an olive to your Martini  Creator Tali Zorah???

All is well untill it gets creepy...


"Creator Zorah, we wish to observe interspecies copulation for scientific purposes."


Tali: "get...out..."

[Exiledone1]

Cheese of Borg wrote...

Exiledone1 wrote...

Cheese of Borg wrote...

EmperorZorn wrote...

Awwww... no more emergency induction port required.

Shepard comander; do you require assistance in construction of your dewlling?

Lol, Shepherd and Tali established peace with the geth and their reward....indentured servitude hahaha. Shall I add an olive to your Martini  Creator Tali Zorah???

All is well untill it gets creepy...


"Creator Zorah, we wish to observe interspecies copulation for scientific purposes."


Tali: "get...out..."

LMAO...........and with that one statement, the war between the Quarians and The Geth is back on lol.