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BlackHeart891

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Shepard, Tali, and Legion quickly proceeded down the corridor. They quickly ran as at least two dozen Cerberus Troopers followed them shouting and suppressing them with gunfire. Seeing the area in the next large room of the factory he noticed there was a ledge with a severed ladder, as well as a ladder that remained locked in place intact next to it yet covered by solid steel that made it unable to grasp. There was no other routes other than straight towards the Cerberus Troopers, or the ladders.
"Tali I need you to use Chiktikka to get to the Top-half of that broken ladder, then release the other so we can climb up!"
"Got it, Shepard."
Shepard and Legion then started moving to nearby immense scrap piles for cover as they held off the Cerberus Troopers.
Tali reached the broken ladder and jumped on top of Chiktikka's "head" and made a desperate jump towards the top portion of the ladder that remained.
She caught hold of the metal bar with only 2 fingers, then strained to curl her thumb around the bar to pull herself up.
"Tali I need that ladder down now!" Shepard shouted as he saw at least another four Cerberus Troopers Join the large group behind Biotics moving small shields through the long corridor very slowly maintaining their power with less speed yet Troop fire kept coming at a rapid rate.
Shepard quickly snapped his head in the direction of Tali as he saw her kick a latch that made the intact ladder fall down. Then Tali quickly moved to the Terminal to begin hacking the door into the prison block.
Shepard and Legion quickly sprinted to the Ladder trying to avoid gunfire as they climbed the tall ladder. Just as Legion made it up after Shepard Tali bypassed the door's security and they quickly ran through as the immense crowd of Cerberus Troopers at least three to four dozen broke formation and sprinted toward the ladder.
As Tali ran through the door first she quickly closed the door with the nearby terminal and locked it adding a new encryption to unlock the door.
"Good work Tali, we would've easily have been killed if not for you."
Tali then quirked "Better add another dash to your paper then." She giggled silently as Shepard smiled. Legion began scouting down the entrance hallway leading into the prison block. Tali and Shepard then began to follow Legion into the prison block to find their friend.

Like it? I know it doesn't have much to do with Tali other than saving Shepard's life as well as Legion's "Life" It took me a half hour of thinking to think of something that wasn't stolen in any way I that was widely done before. I will be continuing this Fan-Fic in this Forum. (I Know but I'm to lazy to make a page for it.) I like it. You probably don't like it. 50% of the people here will criticize it without giving me anything helpful to add to it. And it was meant to have mystery in the setting and their objective.

Tali has saved Shepard's life countless times? I consider this Tali related because many times Tali has saved Shepard's life, one for instance being Tali pulling up Shepard into the Normandy at the end of the SM. I will not name the other countless incidents. I WILL tell you I'm adding a boot knife part in my next Fan-Fic continuation.

Tali saved my life countless times. Yet she gave me all I wanted in life. Annoying Audience Person: So she has saved herself many times? Me: IT'S SUPPOSED TO EXPRESS FEELING FOR TALI SO SHUT THE HELL UP!!! Annoying Audience Person: >_>

I also apologize for taking up quite a bit of the Page I'm guessing. If your going to criticize any of my Fan-Fic make it something helpful not just. "I. Hate. It." Mkay?

Edit: First Fan-Fic for anyone's information as well.


This is my Fan-Fic. Unedited from what it was.

Edit: Garrus Vakerian once kicked a baby krogan into puberty.
Sorry I had to.
^_^
Edit: The Reapers are called "Reapers" because Garrus Vakerian was taken.
Damn that banner!
<_<
Edit: If you have 5 Credits and Garrus has 5 credits,
Garrus has more money than you.
Gawd I hate that banner.
:pinched:
Edit: Executor Pallin died from Garrus giving him the finger.
Okay, I'm done.
:police:
Edit: Garrus can calibrate a gun so well, it needs a cigarette afterwards.
:bandit:
Edit: Garrus Vakerian can delete his recycle bin.
<3

Modifié par BlackHeart891, 12 août 2011 - 01:42 .


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Alexisonf1re

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I lold at the calibrate 1, what's up with you and garrus all of a sudden?

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BlackHeart891

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It's on Page 2 or if you know Tasha vas nar Rayya it's on his Banner Location Place.
I almost pissed myself on multiple occasions reading all of them.
It's a REALLY great banner.
Also, It's not about Garrus, It's about Humor.

Modifié par BlackHeart891, 12 août 2011 - 01:57 .


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i hope they do some sort of behind the scenes thing for this bug.

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BlackHeart891

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Going behind scenes for a bug they're going to fix? jooz hi broe?

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I hope that, if they do, she looks something like one of these:


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Madre Santisima that last one took ages to find.


Both of these are fantastic. I prefer the latter however, moar alien and less elf is bettar.

On the topic of hiccups, I wish Casey had been more specific. Is it her model jumping around, or voice acting cutting in and out, or colors inversing?

Modifié par Cephalopods, 12 août 2011 - 02:12 .


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BlackHeart891

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Cephalopods don't you dare make fun of Arcian's Prothean Squad mate!

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BlackHeart891 wrote...

Cephalopods don't you dare make fun of Arcian's Prothean Squad mate!


While this isn't the appropriate topic for this discussion...

Prothean Squadmate is the stupidest idea I've heard since "Palin 2012."

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tthe last one looks ugly to me for some reason.

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BlackHeart891

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Alright, If you haven't already, read through all 187 pages, and afterwards give us a Topic.
Prothean Squad mate would be the best thing since you got HIV.

Tali is the best thing since...Well since nothing, she's been the best thing ever since anything.

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Cephalopods wrote...


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Both of these are fantastic. I prefer the latter however, moar alien and less elf is bettar.

I like that one too.
The neck, jawline and hair seem perfect to me. The nose could stick out a little more and not look like she took a paddle to the face, and the eyes could use a little work.
But even with those imperfections, it's still my favorite concept.

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Spartanburger wrote...

Cephalopods wrote...


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Both of these are fantastic. I prefer the latter however, moar alien and less elf is bettar.

I like that one too.
The neck, jawline and hair seem perfect to me. The nose could stick out a little more and not look like she took a paddle to the face, and the eyes could use a little work.
But even with those imperfections, it's still my favorite concept.

It's good but her face isn't that wide... Quarians have pretty narrow faces compared to humans I'd think.

Gah!  Need a TOTPT:
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Modifié par StellarMagic, 12 août 2011 - 02:32 .


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StellarMagic wrote...

It's good but her face isn't that wide... Quarians have pretty narrow faces compared to humans I'd think.

Yeah, that too.

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The head is too big, but is ok.

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StellarMagic wrote...

Spartanburger wrote...

Cephalopods wrote...


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Both of these are fantastic. I prefer the latter however, moar alien and less elf is bettar.

I like that one too.
The neck, jawline and hair seem perfect to me. The nose could stick out a little more and not look like she took a paddle to the face, and the eyes could use a little work.
But even with those imperfections, it's still my favorite concept.

It's good but her face isn't that wide... Quarians have pretty narrow faces compared to humans I'd think.

Gah!  Need a TOTPT:
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Both top art is well done cool concept! The bottom has always been my fav ( the originals ), its the eyes i think, just gorgeous.

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Posted Image

Gaara tali!

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Alexisonf1re wrote...


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Gaara tali!

To be honest here.... I hate that one. It was a well done piece of art though .

Modifié par Quole, 12 août 2011 - 05:30 .


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I'm still waiting for someone else to tell me that that grey haired "drow like" Tali, looks like a cross between a Dark elf, Geralt of Rivia and a Quarian... hand.

I mean really, its a Drow Geralt.

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Well no other alien has hair, I don't think the Quarians would be the first.

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Sepewrath wrote...

Well no other alien has hair, I don't think the Quarians would be the first.

Thats definitely up for debate. Many want to see her with hair some don't, me i could care less. If you see her whole head in 3 and she's as bald as me I wouldn't care. I just don't see quarians with hair. We just don't know enough to say for certain.

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I HOPe tali has hair, just to break the mold. Enough with those tumorgirls from star wars. Dx

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Jonttu1 wrote...

StellarMagic wrote...

Spartanburger wrote...

S.A.K wrote...

From twitter...
CaseyDHudson Cutest bug ever. We're trying to figure out why Tali keeps hiccuping.

:D

I snapped a pic for archiving. 
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Damn it Casey! That's not a bug, that's a design feature!

Yes! We demand hiccupping Tali in ME3! :wub:


Whilst this may be a bug, it got me thinking. It would be an idea for ME3 to add a few things like this, to add even more realism to the characters. For example, in addition to the dialogue exchanges between squadmates that you get when exploring, there could be a few more 'fallible' or 'human' traits. For example, in addition to things like Tali's 'bouncing up and down' animation, she could actually get hiccups or sneeze! Here is another example; imagine Shepard, Tali and Garrus in a lift.

Shepard; What was that sound...? Posted Image
Garrus: What sound? I didn't hear anything Posted Image
(Shepard sniffs the air): Bloody hell Garrus, is that you? Posted Image
GarrusPosted Image You must excuse me Shepard. I tried eating one of your human 'curries' last night. No-one mentioned it has certain....interesting side effects. Besides, I thought you wouldn't be able to smell it considering you are Amino based.
Shepard: Well, I guess theory is well and truly disproved! Posted Image  Tali, I can see that there are a few advantages of always having to wear a helmet. Posted Image
(Garrus looks at Tali):
Garrus: Why are you shaking Tali. Are you laughing!!!!!
Tali: ......no....! Posted Image
Garrus: Damn it. If I could only see your face!!! Posted Image
Tali: ...and there we have another advantage of always wearing a helmet...Posted Image


Also, I think one area for improvement is having your squadmates do a little more than simply standing behind you, equal distance apart during dialogue scenes. Imagine the scene in ME2 where Shepard meets Aria. It would have been fun if (for example) Tali, turns and looks at one of the bodyguards in such a way as if to say "you're standing too close. Back off!!". Or Garrus leans against the wall, or even takes a seat and orders himself a drink.

I think little things like this would add a lot to the game, and make the characters look like thinking and independent people.

Modifié par T.Attwood, 12 août 2011 - 10:22 .


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I personally think that Quarian should have hair , in the ME universe only humans have hair , and,also, i don't want a cute Jack , i want a cute Tali .
I like the two images posted previos (no , not the Gaara one ,it's disturbing IMHO) the first he have the perfect head for a Quarian in my opinion , the second have a better face ; they are both a good point to start for the concept but i trust Bioware

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Alexisonf1re wrote...


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Gaara tali!

I like it. I for one don't necessarily want a pinup faced Tali. I don't to care much for mainstream aesthetics for faces, for example I really like how Aveline in DA2 looks.

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Cultic-Jacopo N7

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For me , anyway , the face face should be pretty , he is not a basic principle because the character is already almost perfect but she could be even better with an appropiate face .