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[TheWerdna]

Just read chapter 13....gaaaaahhhhhh

**Spoilers after this point**



What the heck Shepard, you were so close to capturing Tali

[exelsis]

Ch 13? I'm happier than the one female ultramarine in the galaxy!

[forthary]

Exiledone1 wrote...

Cant wait to read chapter 13 and BAZZ fanfic and Forthary fanfic. Should be a good night of reading.

I look forward to your review.  I'm currently writing the 10th chapter in the series, which is going to be the biggest chapter yet, mostly because of its importance.  I can't really say too much, but...it'll be worth the wait (Almost said weight there, curse you Gabe Newell!) when it's released.

Modifié par forthary, 25 avril 2012 - 07:58 .

[TheWerdna]

Terror, i offically want to punch your Shepard in the face and tell him to stop being such a idiot. Come on Shepard, you are better then this. Quit being so stupid!

Besides my rage at a fictional charecter, good chapter as always.

Modifié par TheWerdna, 25 avril 2012 - 07:59 .

[Exiledone1]

TheWerdna wrote...

Just read chapter 13....gaaaaahhhhhh

**Spoilers after this point**



What the heck Shepard, you were so close to capturing Tali

Oh god....you got me worried now 

[TheWerdna]

Exiledone1 wrote...

TheWerdna wrote...

Just read chapter 13....gaaaaahhhhhh

**Spoilers after this point**



What the heck Shepard, you were so close to capturing Tali

Oh god....you got me worried now 

Don't worrry, its not bad...

I am more angry at Shepard really dropping the ball on this one.

[ichi9181]

ok i don't know what to say terroize:o:(

[forthary]

TheWerdna wrote...

Don't worrry, its not bad...

I am more angry at Shepard really dropping the ball on this one.

Oh, Shepard...first the bad dancing, and now this...

[Exiledone1]

TheWerdna wrote...

Exiledone1 wrote...

TheWerdna wrote...

Just read chapter 13....gaaaaahhhhhh

**Spoilers after this point**



What the heck Shepard, you were so close to capturing Tali

Oh god....you got me worried now 

Don't worrry, its not bad...

I am more angry at Shepard really dropping the ball on this one.

Oh okay, you had me worried. I'm hoping for some good tali or Shepard and her reuniting when it's not under the guise of her killing someone lol

[Tom80]

TheWerdna wrote...

Terror, i offically want to punch your Shepard in the face and tell him to stop being such a idiot. Come on Shepard, you are better then this. Quit being so stupid!
...

Ah yes, "capture", we dismissed that claim !

[exelsis]

"She pulled him close and nipped his neck..."

What? No breaking skin? I am dissapoint. I'd have liked:

[Terrorize69]

:lol:I'd rather not be staked people lol

So I have a unhappy audience? ;D

[Exiledone1]

Terrorize69 wrote...

:lol:I'd rather not be staked people lol

So I have a unhappy audience? ;D

Hahaha....I love that logic. In that case I rather not pay bills so I just won't work  Lol

Modifié par Exiledone1, 25 avril 2012 - 08:15 .

[forthary]

Terrorize69 wrote...

:lol:I'd rather not be staked people lol

So I have a unhappy audience? ;D

Terrorize is indoctrinated!  Burnnnnnnn him!

No, but being serious, well...im not gonna lie, I never found much appeal to reading your story apart from the first few chapters, not necessicarily because of you, but because it just doesn't catch my attention.  You'd have to ask a better critic.

[exelsis]

Lack of claw and fang use makes me sad.



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[Deoku]

Terrorize69 wrote...

:lol:I'd rather not be staked people lol

So I have a unhappy audience? ;D

 Not at all, I rather enjoyed the beginning it was done well without being overly graphic.   I also like the way the others were warned of the IFF. I was wondering how that info would be released to other ships; now I know. lol 

[Terrorize69]

forthary wrote...

Terrorize69 wrote...

:lol:I'd rather not be staked people lol

So I have a unhappy audience? ;D

Terrorize is indoctrinated!  Burnnnnnnn him!

No, but being serious, well...im not gonna lie, I never found much appeal to reading your story apart from the first few chapters, not necessicarily because of you, but because it just doesn't catch my attention.  You'd have to ask a better critic.

I dont blame you the story dosnt appeal to everyone, If i could write stories that appealed to everyone I'd be rich 

[Fattness132]

Liked ch. 13 Terror, but i have to agree that Shep is acting kinda like a doofus at this point. Make him a bit more effective next time so he doesnt seem completely incompetent lol.

[Terrorize69]

*corrects minor error* lol

[TheWerdna]

I like the story Terror....just your Shepard is starting to anger me with his incompetence. Shepard needs to get off his ass and be the badass Shepard we all know he can be and fix this danm problem. Come on Shepard, you beat the Reapers, you can do this, I know you can.

[Terrorize69]

Fattness132 wrote...

Liked ch. 13 Terror, but i have to agree that Shep is acting kinda like a doofus at this point. Make him a bit more effective next time so he doesnt seem completely incompetent lol.

Remember ch13 carrys on right after 12 Shep was intoxicated, don't know many people who remain competent while drunk

Modifié par Terrorize69, 25 avril 2012 - 08:25 .

[L. Han]

That fanfiction is... disturbing.

[Darman]

Don't wanna spoiler on chpt 13 here, just read my comment in your blog

[-N7-Seeker]

Nice job. Reviwed under the name "WhiteDawn".

[Terrorize69]

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I'll happily answer any questions in PM, some answers obviously i'll know because they are still to come, well when i say answer, the answer will be "that would be a spoiler" if they are spoilers