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[ichi9181]

Terrorize69 wrote...

Fattness132 wrote...

Liked ch. 13 Terror, but i have to agree that Shep is acting kinda like a doofus at this point. Make him a bit more effective next time so he doesnt seem completely incompetent lol.

Remember ch13 carrys on right after 12 Shep was intoxicated, don't know many people who remain competent while drunk

ok i feel better now that was good

[Exiledone1]

Your stories are like Crack terror. I know it's bad for me to read, but I just can't stop hahaha

[Terrorize69]

-N7-Seeker wrote...

Nice job. Reviwed under the name "WhiteDawn".

Ah I just saw thanks!


And to those that are worried about sheps behaviour (not counting him being drunk) The events of ch13 are a wakeup call to shep, he now knows this is far bigger then just a war against him.

[forthary]

Exiledone1 wrote...

Your stories are like Crack terror. I know it's bad for me to read, but I just can't stop hahaha

Exile is suffering withdrawl symptoms!  Quick Terror, make another chapter, Exile is going into cardiac arrest!

[Terrorize69]

forthary wrote...

Exiledone1 wrote...

Your stories are like Crack terror. I know it's bad for me to read, but I just can't stop hahaha

Exile is suffering withdrawl symptoms!  Quick Terror, make another chapter, Exile is going into cardiac arrest!

*waits a few days* Ok


If people feel I should, I'll make a small change in ch13 to recap his "condition" from the end of ch12. Wouldnt be needed if going from 12 to 13 without a break, but since people have been waiting a couple days I guess that lil detail has slipped the mind

[Exiledone1]

forthary wrote...

Exiledone1 wrote...

Your stories are like Crack terror. I know it's bad for me to read, but I just can't stop hahaha

Exile is suffering withdrawl symptoms!  Quick Terror, make another chapter, Exile is going into cardiac arrest!

Hahah....I can't stop shaking, just a taste terror, just a taste.....

[Litany of Fury]

Argh, that idea for a Mass Effect RTS a few pages back has completely taken over my imagination! Over the past few hours I've drawn up a complete set of units, buldings, upgrades and abilities for a Quarian faction, and now I can't help but think about a Turian faction as well...

And Alliance.

And Cerberus.

And Geth.

Modifié par Litany of Fury, 25 avril 2012 - 08:45 .

[Fattness132]

Terrorize69 wrote...

forthary wrote...

Exiledone1 wrote...

Your stories are like Crack terror. I know it's bad for me to read, but I just can't stop hahaha

Exile is suffering withdrawl symptoms!  Quick Terror, make another chapter, Exile is going into cardiac arrest!

*waits a few days* Ok


If people feel I should, I'll make a small change in ch13 to recap his "condition" from the end of ch12. Wouldnt be needed if going from 12 to 13 without a break, but since people have been waiting a couple days I guess that lil detail has slipped the mind

Probably would be a good idea - i had honestly forgotten, since i read them right when they come out and haven't re-read any of the chapters yet. A line or two saying shep still felt dizzy or something would be fine.

[exelsis]

Litany of Fury wrote...

Argh, that idea for a Mass Effect RTS a few pages back has completely taken over my imagination! Over the past few hours I've drawn up a complete set of units, buldings, upgrades and abilities for a Quarian faction, and now I can't help but think about a Turian faction as well...

And Alliance.

And Cerberus.

And Geth.

Post EVERYTHING!!

[Grimez7]

Started reading the beginning of ch. 13 of terrorize's fanfic, perhaps i should start from ch.1 O_o

[Maderek]

Oh, come on. I missed 2052? Well there goes all my Deus Ex jokes.

Aftermath chapter 13? WHO, HUH, WHUA. READ, I MUST!

[lmxar]

Exiledone1 wrote...

forthary wrote...

Exiledone1 wrote...

Your stories are like Crack terror. I know it's bad for me to read, but I just can't stop hahaha

Exile is suffering withdrawl symptoms!  Quick Terror, make another chapter, Exile is going into cardiac arrest!

Hahah....I can't stop shaking, just a taste terror, just a taste.....

Do we need to have an intervention? 

"I don't have a problem!!"

edit: TotP

Modifié par lmxar, 25 avril 2012 - 08:49 .

[Litany of Fury]

exelsis wrote...

Litany of Fury wrote...

Argh, that idea for a Mass Effect RTS a few pages back has completely taken over my imagination! Over the past few hours I've drawn up a complete set of units, buldings, upgrades and abilities for a Quarian faction, and now I can't help but think about a Turian faction as well...

And Alliance.

And Cerberus.

And Geth.

Post EVERYTHING!!

Very well. Quarians comin' up!

[Terrorize69]

Its ok Fatts I can understand that some details can slip the mind in a space of a few days. Normally I do release chapters within 12hrs of each other so I dont normally need to recap, but I will make that change now

And grimez... would be a good idea lol

[Draining Dragon]

I'm confused about people who say that they hate Tali but then don't explain why. Can somebody explain the thought process of such people?

[TrueMadayar]

I see the talk is back to either letting Terrorize burn at the stake or bury him alive.

I love coming home to mob rule.

[Tom80]

Terrorize69 wrote...

Its ok Fatts I can understand that some details can slip the mind in a space of a few days. Normally I do release chapters within 12hrs of each other so I dont normally need to recap, but I will make that change now

And grimez... would be a good idea lol

Say when it's done !

[ichi9181]

there will be no killing

[Terrorize69]

Ok folks, I've edited ch13 slightly to remind readers of that detail from ch12. sorry for the confusion.

[Exiledone1]

Well heading home from work to go and read terrors fanfic and Bazzag's. My cravings shall be satisfied....for now. I'll talk to all of you a little later when I get back.

[ichi9181]

bye exile

[Fattness132]

Cya later exile.

[TheWerdna]

Hey Terror. if you are going to keep killing major charecters in your fic, do you think you can kill Jacob? Because no one really cares about him, and i figure if he dies that means one less charecter i like will.

[Terrorize69]

Cya exile

[Fattness132]

TheWerdna wrote...

Hey Terror. if you are going to keep killing major charecters in your fic, do you think you can kill Jacob? Because no one really cares about him, and i figure if he dies that means one less charecter i like will.

I would have to disagree on this - unless it was a really important role that Jacob plays to get him killed. He is going to be a father and killing him before his son / daughter is even born is kind of jerkish IMO. But it is terror's story so he can do whatever he wants lol.