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[-N7-Seeker]

Loved the new chapter! A bit too short, but it was very good. Have you considered nameing the chapters? It's more easy to tell that they are short or not.

Modifié par -N7-Seeker, 29 avril 2012 - 02:01 .

[Maderek]

TrueMadayar wrote...

Terrorize69 wrote...

Going to finish reading when its done?

Why would I read something where you kill Tali? Tsk. I'm a talimancer!

Shh, you know you're still curious.

[Terrorize69]

Short? compared to the rest you mean? As when compared to the rest its the 3rd longest

[-N7-Seeker]

Terrorize69 wrote...

Short? compared to the rest you mean? As when compared to the rest its the 3rd longest

Not comprared to the other chapter. Maybe it was long, and I was reading too fast. I learned that thing when you guys started writing FFs.It took me 5 minutes to read it and fully understand it.

[skwisgaarthegod]

Just finished, damnnn so good and I want to find out what happens next sooo bad haha. Well i really have to sleep now. Night guys.

Modifié par skwisgaarthegod, 29 avril 2012 - 02:04 .

[-N7-Seeker]

skwisgaarthegod wrote...

Just finished, damnnn so good and I want to find out what happens next sooo bad haha. Well i really have to sleep now. Night guys.

Nigth Gaar! It's just 16:05 here.

[Terrorize69]

Night Gaar

[Fattness132]

Another great chapter, Terror. Looking forward to the next one

[bazzag]

Hi guys! How are we?

[Terrorize69]

Silence will fall.. think Ch15 made people run away and hide under there duvets :3


Guess i'll make 20odd sheps in ME2 lol

[Deoku]

Terrorize69 wrote...

TrueMadayar wrote...

TheWerdna wrote...

No don't fall into his trap...the suspense contained in his fic will kill you.

I agree, I myself have stopped myself from reading it. It takes self-control since the whole thread is writhing under his cruelty. But I cannot give them relief by trying to guess the ending...however I guess he'll create three differently coloured endings, killing Tali in all of them.

Going to finish reading when its done?

Am I still the only person reading your fic as it goes and not being tortured at all?  Hmm that's interesting.

[Terrorize69]

Ahhh people! Heys Fatts! Hey Bazz!

[bazzag]

Howdy Terror!

[Terrorize69]

Deoku wrote...

Terrorize69 wrote...

TrueMadayar wrote...

TheWerdna wrote...

No don't fall into his trap...the suspense contained in his fic will kill you.

I agree, I myself have stopped myself from reading it. It takes self-control since the whole thread is writhing under his cruelty. But I cannot give them relief by trying to guess the ending...however I guess he'll create three differently coloured endings, killing Tali in all of them.

Going to finish reading when its done?

Am I still the only person reading your fic as it goes and not being tortured at all?  Hmm that's interesting.

Seems so lol

[-N7-Seeker]

You do not like Tali as much as we do. But she is free now. I am not turtured. Hope it stays that way.

EDIT. I am going to read it again because it is just plain awesome. Gonna leave a review too.

Modifié par -N7-Seeker, 29 avril 2012 - 02:51 .

[Maderek]

Terrorize69 wrote...

Deoku wrote...

Terrorize69 wrote...

TrueMadayar wrote...

TheWerdna wrote...

No don't fall into his trap...the suspense contained in his fic will kill you.

I agree, I myself have stopped myself from reading it. It takes self-control since the whole thread is writhing under his cruelty. But I cannot give them relief by trying to guess the ending...however I guess he'll create three differently coloured endings, killing Tali in all of them.

Going to finish reading when its done?

Am I still the only person reading your fic as it goes and not being tortured at all?  Hmm that's interesting.

Seems so lol

Honestly I don't see why people have such a reaction to your fanfic, not that I'm insulting your work or anything. As much as I love Tali, it's still intriguing to see her this way. So far, it's an enjoyable read. Keep up the good work, Terror.

[Terrorize69]

Lol what makes you think I dont like her as much as anyone else? (no spoilers) lol

[Terrorize69]

Maderek wrote...
Honestly I don't see why people have such a reaction to your fanfic, not that I'm insulting your work or anything. As much as I love Tali, it's still intriguing to see her this way. So far, it's an enjoyable read. Keep up the good work, Terror.

A negative reaction you mean? 


And didnt find your comment insulting at all or anything like that glad you enjoy it, I did feel a urge to do something different with Tali then everyone else does.

[-N7-Seeker]

Terrorize69 wrote...

Maderek wrote...
Honestly I don't see why people have such a reaction to your fanfic, not that I'm insulting your work or anything. As much as I love Tali, it's still intriguing to see her this way. So far, it's an enjoyable read. Keep up the good work, Terror.

A negative reaction you mean? 


And didnt find your comment insulting at all or anything like that glad you enjoy it, I did feel a urge to do something different with Tali then everyone else does.

Your feelings were right. If you do another "how they defeated the reapers and then built  ahouse on Rannoch" FF, it would be boring. You made a very good twist to your story and so far It's the best I read. And looking foward to the next chapter.

[Ponei]

 @Terror
Been reading your FF, stopped at chapter 6. It's amazingly well written, though I'm psychologically preparing for the worse after what they did to my little quarian LOL

Keep it up! 

[forthary]

-N7-Seeker wrote...

Your feelings were right. If you do another "how they defeated the reapers and then built  ahouse on Rannoch" FF, it would be boring.

Well...that explains a lot for me.

[-N7-Seeker]

Ponei wrote...

 @Terror
Been reading your FF, stopped at chapter 6. It's amazingly well written, though I'm psychologically preparing for the worse after what they did to my little quarian LOL

Keep it up! 

Don't stop! It's the best after-events FF! Where you stopped to prepare for the worse, I felt an urge to continue. To find out what will happen. You won't regret it.

Forthary, your FF is good. I love these kind of FFs too, but all of them were about peace. Needed a little twist. If I see a FanFic posted or in someone's signature I will read it. I found all of them amazing. Shame that mine is not sucessful.

Modifié par -N7-Seeker, 29 avril 2012 - 03:07 .

[bazzag]

Ponei wrote...

 @Terror
Been reading your FF, stopped at chapter 6. It's amazingly well written, though I'm psychologically preparing for the worse after what they did to my little quarian LOL

Keep it up! 

Read mine if you havent, and let me know what you think!

There in the sig

[Tom80]

-N7-Seeker wrote...

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It's the best after-events FF !
...

If it would be, than it wouldn't have been that dark.

[forthary]

-N7-Seeker wrote...

Shame that mine is not sucessful.

I think the best advice I can give you is to take your time when writing these.  Try not to give out any dates unless your certain you can get it out on that date.  It would greatly help if you use a product such as Microsoft Word to help reduce errors in your fan fiction, and if you upload it to a site such as fanfiction, double check what you upload just in case you find that some things didn't go through.  And if you start a new fanfiction, while it would be nice to give players the whole story, it's best to give them a few chapters instead of 1 or 2, that way they're more likely to get hooked onto your story.

As for grammar and stuff like that, well...I think it would be best to look such things up on google, I could easily get carried away with stuff such as this.  Plus, it would be kind of difficult for me to explain as these things come to me naturally, although I can correct it.  Oh, and scrub the commas that are in the beginning of each sentence of your fanfiction, it doesn't look too good.  

Anyways, back to Tali...

Modifié par forthary, 29 avril 2012 - 03:28 .