Tali'Zorah ME3 Thread *MAJOR SPOILER WARNING!*
#55826
Posté 01 mai 2012 - 06:37
*Tali and Shepard are standing at a docking station, close to a shuttle ramp and the runway leading to the transporter docks. They're talking to the Quarian supervisor for the section, checking the datapads with the shipments listed. Shepard is standing a bit aside, reading labels on crates and shipping containers*
Supervisor *checking his own datapad*: Food supplies, basically. Nothing unusual. Nothing of large worth.
Tali: What food?
Supervisor: Mostly nutrition paste.
Tali *disgusted*: Why would somebody steal that?
Supervisor: I have no idea, inspector Zorah. We didn't even notice them missing.
Shepard *walking over*: How is that possible? Don't you check shipping lists?
Supervisor *to him*: Of course we do. They were delivered, checked in, and processed. Just not checked out. They should be here, but nobody claimed them, either.
Shepard: Weren't they listed to be transported somewhere?
Supervisor *straving datapad*: No, they were on hold until picked up.
Tali: Who was the recipient?
Supervisor: The Rannoch agricultural department.
Tali: So, donation or something?
Supervisor: We can't say for sure. The department didn't expect them, which is why they never picked them up, I guess.
Shepard *to Tali*: Seems like somebody's using the turmoil of the recolonization here.
Tali *reading her datapad*: Probably...this is disturbing. You cannot track the crates?
Supervisor: They have no tracking devices. They were emergency rations, low grade.
Tali: And you're sure about that?
Supervisor *scans datapad*: They passed weapons and contraband scanner as well as varren scent control...
Tali: Okay...thank you for your time.
Supervisor: Please notify me immediately if you learn more. Rodan...he was a good man.
Tali: Sure.
*Supervisor leaves*
Shepard: That's the dead worker?
Tali: Yes...Kael'Rodan, 33 earth years old, logistics specialist.
Shepard: Basic dockhand, then?
Tali: Yes...nothing unusual in his records. Used to work in logistics on the fleet, came here with the life ships left before Earth, volunteered to rehabilitation...
Shepard: Volunteered?
Tali: Hundreds of thousands volunteered, Shepard. This is home, after all.
Shepard: Makes it easy to come here under false pretenses.
Tali *checking datapad, lifting one hand*: I can't see that in the data. And he tipped off commerce, so he probably was a decent guy.
Shepard: Yeah, but why commerce? If it's just missing crates of nutrient pastes, he could've just told the supervisor.
Tali: You have a point there. Especially since the two seemed to get along.
Shepard *checking another crate*: Something's odd here.
*A Quarian dockworker comes down the runway*
Dockworker: Inspector Zorah? You asked about the nutrition paste deliveries?
Tali *looking up*: Yes?
Dockworker: We have two more crates from that delivery back in storage B.
Tali: Oh! Great! *looks at Shepard* We should definitely have a look at them.
Shepard: Right behind ya, Inspector Zorah.
Tali *embarassed*: Stop that... *to dockworker* Lead the way.
#55827
Posté 01 mai 2012 - 06:42
CoMo290 wrote...
-N7-Seeker wrote...
Anybody know a good fanfic writer? I read everything that was posted in this thread. And still waiting for Ch16, so I want to pass the time with reading.
Madayar, I saw that you wrote on me in Origin about an invite. Sorry I was asleep.
I'll plug my own Talimancing fic
www.fanfiction.net/s/7980630/1/bBirthdays_b_and_bAnniversaries_b
Nice thanks.
For a second I was afraid it was that weird threesome fanfic.
#55828
Posté 01 mai 2012 - 06:47
Apathy1989 wrote...
CoMo290 wrote...
-N7-Seeker wrote...
Anybody know a good fanfic writer? I read everything that was posted in this thread. And still waiting for Ch16, so I want to pass the time with reading.
Madayar, I saw that you wrote on me in Origin about an invite. Sorry I was asleep.
I'll plug my own Talimancing fic
www.fanfiction.net/s/7980630/1/bBirthdays_b_and_bAnniversaries_b
Nice thanks.
For a second I was afraid it was that weird threesome fanfic.
There's a threesome fanfic?
#55829
Posté 01 mai 2012 - 06:48
#55830
Posté 01 mai 2012 - 06:54
The post ending comic strip of ME3 started great and funny. But that last comic strip really shoot me down.
#55831
Posté 01 mai 2012 - 06:58
Photonkun wrote...
http://sketch-bgi.deviantart.com/
The post ending comic strip of ME3 started great and funny. But that last comic strip really shoot me down.
Yeah, I follow it. It's not over yet, he's still working on it. Also, he seems to disagree with the endings (heavily) but willing to give another chance to Bioware. So...well, not completely my line, but still.
#55832
Posté 01 mai 2012 - 06:59
TrueMadayar wrote...
*snip*
Dockworker: Inspector Zorah? You asked about the nutrition paste deliveries?
Tali *looking up*: Yes?
Dockworker: We have two more crates from that delivery back in storage B.
Tali: Oh! Great! *looks at Shepard* We should definitely have a look at them.
Shepard: Right behind ya, Inspector Zorah.
Tali *embarassed*: Stop that... *to dockworker* Lead the way.
feels very much like a detective show :0
set-up starts up... soon the plot will thicken like a well-cooked broth
#55833
Posté 01 mai 2012 - 07:08
darthrevaninlight wrote...
feels very much like a detective show :0
set-up starts up... soon the plot will thicken like a well-cooked broth
Actually, I'm thinking about three differently coloured crates with exactly the same shape, size and content, and an inconclusive, thus closed, investigation.
But since you'll draw the comic line for it, I believe I can't do that, can I?
#55834
Posté 01 mai 2012 - 07:13
TrueMadayar wrote...
Photonkun wrote...
http://sketch-bgi.deviantart.com/
The post ending comic strip of ME3 started great and funny. But that last comic strip really shoot me down.
Yeah, I follow it. It's not over yet, he's still working on it. Also, he seems to disagree with the endings (heavily) but willing to give another chance to Bioware. So...well, not completely my line, but still.
I agree with you two !
#55835
Posté 01 mai 2012 - 07:14
Modifié par Gen Petitt, 01 mai 2012 - 07:15 .
#55836
Posté 01 mai 2012 - 07:19
#55837
Posté 01 mai 2012 - 07:20
And Chapter 16 is almost done! finally lol... I blame FemShep/Talimance distracting me
Modifié par Terrorize69, 01 mai 2012 - 07:22 .
#55838
Posté 01 mai 2012 - 07:23
Tom80 wrote...
TrueMadayar wrote...
Photonkun wrote...
http://sketch-bgi.deviantart.com/
The post ending comic strip of ME3 started great and funny. But that last comic strip really shoot me down.
Yeah, I follow it. It's not over yet, he's still working on it. Also, he seems to disagree with the endings (heavily) but willing to give another chance to Bioware. So...well, not completely my line, but still.
I agree with you two !
JIMMY NO LIKE TO BE ALONE
Best line all of the comics
#55839
Posté 01 mai 2012 - 07:27
bazzag wrote...
i'm Off guys, bye-eeee!
Later bazz
#55840
Posté 01 mai 2012 - 07:28
Gen Petitt wrote...
Ah yes I have returned with vengeance and popcorn:P
No muffins?
#55841
Posté 01 mai 2012 - 07:32
#55842
Posté 01 mai 2012 - 07:34
Gameguy154 wrote...
I kinda wish i hadn't read everything since yesterday...You guys are making some very weird stories. Love the Post ending comic, though...
Whats up Gameguy,
How are things?
#55843
Posté 01 mai 2012 - 07:35
Just another adventure in the Tali threadB)Gameguy154 wrote...
I kinda wish i hadn't read everything since yesterday...You guys are making some very weird stories. Love the Post ending comic, though...
#55844
Posté 01 mai 2012 - 07:35
That's a distraction you brought upon yourself Mr.Terrorize69 wrote...
Cya bazz!
And Chapter 16 is almost done! finally lol... I blame FemShep/Talimance distracting me
#55845
Posté 01 mai 2012 - 07:39
Weird stories? I didn't see any :sGameguy154 wrote...
I kinda wish i hadn't read everything since yesterday...You guys are making some very weird stories. Love the Post ending comic, though...
#55846
Posté 01 mai 2012 - 07:42
Terrorize69 wrote...
Weird stories? I didn't see any :sGameguy154 wrote...
I kinda wish i hadn't read everything since yesterday...You guys are making some very weird stories. Love the Post ending comic, though...
Omg, Terror doesn't remember....that must mean he have a evil clone that plays femshep. Its the only logical conclusion.
#55847
Posté 01 mai 2012 - 07:47
Wut!!! I was hoping for a twisty turny murrrrder investigation with the emotionally deranged client!!
#55848
Posté 01 mai 2012 - 07:47
Terrorize69 wrote...
Weird stories? I didn't see any :sGameguy154 wrote...
I kinda wish i hadn't read everything since yesterday...You guys are making some very weird stories. Love the Post ending comic, though...
<_<<_<
#55849
Posté 01 mai 2012 - 07:55
darthrevaninlight wrote...
@mad
Wut!!! I was hoping for a twisty turny murrrrder investigation with the emotionally deranged client!!
Pity we aren't family. You remind me of the many "the family that slays together, stays together" quotes on notalwaysrelated. Also reason why Tali and Shepard will be inseperable forever.
#55850
Posté 01 mai 2012 - 08:00
Exiledone1 wrote...
Terrorize69 wrote...
Weird stories? I didn't see any :sGameguy154 wrote...
I kinda wish i hadn't read everything since yesterday...You guys are making some very weird stories. Love the Post ending comic, though...
<_<<_<
...
~~~
*Garrus, FemShep and Grunt listen to a recording*
Tali: *talking on a video recording* "All this space.. walls of stone, its amazing.. I wish my friends could see it, but I'm so happy Shepard isn't here... she'd blow something up, the bosh'tet.. or sit her ****** down on something important..."
*Garrus and Grunt giggle*
FemShep: "..."
FemShep: "......"
FemShep: "Why you all such jerks to me?!"





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