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[Exiledone1]

TheWerdna wrote...

Awhile back I wrote a rough draft for a alternate ending fanfic, but ended up not publishing it due to there being about a billion others, and thus my story would have been very redundant. Thus it is kinda just sitting there in a unfinished state.

However about a week or so ago I started thinking about what could happen after that story, and from this train of thought came up with a idea for a fanfic-series. Since summer break starts for me in a little over a month and i am not going to be doing much this summer, I think I am going to attempt to write it.

This would be my first attempt at writing my own story (beyond what I have done in tabletop RPGs); and am worried i will screw it up badly. As such I am going to be spending the next month or so planning and getting the details figured out before I go ahead and write the story (such as the state of the galaxy after the war, plot details, etc). Thus far I have a 13pg rough outline of the story, but am no where near to the point I want it to be. I am thinking of posting my progress with the planning to get feedback and suggestions as I work, since I really want to make sure I don't screw anything up.

The basic summry of my story concept this thus: The story takes place 23 years after the end of the Reaper war, and will follow two separate intertwined storyline. One story-chain would follow Shepard & Tali's adopted daughter (and a bunch of new characters), while the other would follow Shepard as he receives his first big Spectre assignment in over 3 years. Both of these plotchains would be dealing with a newly-reemerged thread...

So do you guys think I should go ahead with this? Any suggestions and feedback would be appreciated.

yeah, go forward with it. You never know what cool stuff could come from it. The story sounds interesting to me.

[TrueMadayar]

TheWerdna wrote...

Awhile back I wrote a rough draft for a alternate ending fanfic, but ended up not publishing it due to there being about a billion others, and thus my story would have been very redundant. Thus it is kinda just sitting there in a unfinished state.

However about a week or so ago I started thinking about what could happen after that story, and from this train of thought came up with a idea for a fanfic-series. Since summer break starts for me in a little over a month and i am not going to be doing much this summer, I think I am going to attempt to write it.

This would be my first attempt at writing my own story (beyond what I have done in tabletop RPGs); and am worried i will screw it up badly. As such I am going to be spending the next month or so planning and getting the details figured out before I go ahead and write the story (such as the state of the galaxy after the war, plot details, etc). Thus far I have a 13pg rough outline of the story, but am no where near to the point I want it to be. I am thinking of posting my progress with the planning to get feedback and suggestions as I work, since I really want to make sure I don't screw anything up.

The basic summry of my story concept this thus: The story takes place 23 years after the end of the Reaper war, and will follow two separate intertwined storyline. One story-chain would follow Shepard & Tali's adopted daughter (and a bunch of new characters), while the other would follow Shepard as he receives his first big Spectre assignment in over 3 years. Both of these plotchains would be dealing with a newly-reemerged thread...

So do you guys think I should go ahead with this? Any suggestions and feedback would be appreciated.

Sure, others (meenoy6 for example) have drawn the daughter and son, for example, and most right now focus on alternative ending. Plus, nobody knows if you're not the one that just gets it right. And we'll never know until you try.

[Terrorize69]

TheWerdna wrote...

Awhile back I wrote a rough draft for a alternate ending fanfic, but ended up not publishing it due to there being about a billion others, and thus my story would have been very redundant. Thus it is kinda just sitting there in a unfinished state.

However about a week or so ago I started thinking about what could happen after that story, and from this train of thought came up with a idea for a fanfic-series. Since summer break starts for me in a little over a month and i am not going to be doing much this summer, I think I am going to attempt to write it.

This would be my first attempt at writing my own story (beyond what I have done in tabletop RPGs); and am worried i will screw it up badly. As such I am going to be spending the next month or so planning and getting the details figured out before I go ahead and write the story (such as the state of the galaxy after the war, plot details, etc). Thus far I have a 13pg rough outline of the story, but am no where near to the point I want it to be. I am thinking of posting my progress with the planning to get feedback and suggestions as I work, since I really want to make sure I don't screw anything up.

The basic summry of my story concept this thus: The story takes place 23 years after the end of the Reaper war, and will follow two separate intertwined storyline. One story-chain would follow Shepard & Tali's adopted daughter (and a bunch of new characters), while the other would follow Shepard as he receives his first big Spectre assignment in over 3 years. Both of these plotchains would be dealing with a newly-reemerged thread...

So do you guys think I should go ahead with this? Any suggestions and feedback would be appreciated.

Go for it the ending you made will be handy, will help support your future universe, also the further you go forward (23years in this case) the easier it will be to make your own and harder to "screw up". No one can tell you if your story is right or wrong, only you can.

[CmnDwnWrkn]

CoMo290 wrote...

about to order myself a Tali action figure!

Thanks for reminding me that I pre-ordered one!  LOL, I had completely forgotten.  Supposed to have shipped today, I think *checks Amazon

[Terrorize69]

Going back to your comment earlier mad, yeah. Anyone that does a comic strip deserves alot of respect, I would say its alot harder then writing, but then I guess it depends on what your strengths are. Some people like Revan, drawing comes naturally.

Hmm I wonder how "vile and sadism" will help me into turning Aftermath into a comic strip once the written fic is done lol

[TrueMadayar]

Terrorize69 wrote...

Going back to your comment earlier mad, yeah. Anyone that does a comic strip deserves alot of respect, I would say its alot harder then writing, but then I guess it depends on what your strengths are. Some people like Revan, drawing comes naturally.

Hmm I wonder how "vile and sadism" will help me into turning Aftermath into a comic strip once the written fic is done lol

Most work very well utilizing "vile and sadism", if not downright hatred.

Yes, Revan is a phenomenon, if focusing on comics, we would be able to have one once a week, 50 pages. I just hope Revan goes into creative arts and gets contracted by a publisher very soon, first helping with other comic artists, then going solo.

[Terrorize69]

Hmm... *hires revan to do the Aftermath comic*

[Exiledone1]

Terrorize69 wrote...

Hmm... *hires revan to do the Aftermath comic*

That would be too awesome!!!:D

[Jull3]

That would be awesome Terror.

[Cheese of Borg]

I'm locked out of my car what's happening here?

[Jull3]

General discussion of how difficult it is to provide good art such as Revan's art, or Terrors writing. Also, how awesome it would be if Revan did an Aftermath comic.

[darthrevaninlight]

TrueMadayar wrote...

Terrorize69 wrote...

Going back to your comment earlier mad, yeah. Anyone that does a comic strip deserves alot of respect, I would say its alot harder then writing, but then I guess it depends on what your strengths are. Some people like Revan, drawing comes naturally.

Hmm I wonder how "vile and sadism" will help me into turning Aftermath into a comic strip once the written fic is done lol

Most work very well utilizing "vile and sadism", if not downright hatred.

Yes, Revan is a phenomenon, if focusing on comics, we would be able to have one once a week, 50 pages. I just hope Revan goes into creative arts and gets contracted by a publisher very soon, first helping with other comic artists, then going solo.

Comics are so much fun... and thanks... but I'm really not that good at it .__. I just do it a lot. It's the most expressive form of art imo. No way I'd make a living.... >__>

anyway HI Mad!!! 

Was drawing some face sketches for the RANNOCH PRIVATE INVESTIGATORS. Watchu think?

[XenoAlbedo]

Cheese of Borg wrote...

I'm locked out of my car what's happening here?

[exelsis]

[darthrevaninlight]

^
QUARIANS R INDOCTRINATEDDDDDD

[TheWerdna]

amazing

[Jull3]

exelsis wrote...

made me lul

[darthrevaninlight]

TheWerdna wrote...

Awhile back I wrote a rough draft for a alternate ending fanfic, but ended up not publishing it due to there being about a billion others, and thus my story would have been very redundant. Thus it is kinda just sitting there in a unfinished state.

However about a week or so ago I started thinking about what could happen after that story, and from this train of thought came up with a idea for a fanfic-series. Since summer break starts for me in a little over a month and i am not going to be doing much this summer, I think I am going to attempt to write it.

This would be my first attempt at writing my own story (beyond what I have done in tabletop RPGs); and am worried i will screw it up badly. As such I am going to be spending the next month or so planning and getting the details figured out before I go ahead and write the story (such as the state of the galaxy after the war, plot details, etc). Thus far I have a 13pg rough outline of the story, but am no where near to the point I want it to be. I am thinking of posting my progress with the planning to get feedback and suggestions as I work, since I really want to make sure I don't screw anything up.

The basic summry of my story concept this thus: The story takes place 23 years after the end of the Reaper war, and will follow two separate intertwined storyline. One story-chain would follow Shepard & Tali's adopted daughter (and a bunch of new characters), while the other would follow Shepard as he receives his first big Spectre assignment in over 3 years. Both of these plotchains would be dealing with a newly-reemerged thread...

So do you guys think I should go ahead with this? Any suggestions and feedback would be appreciated.

I would love to read it.
I can proofread it for you too if you like english major ftw!

[exelsis]

"emotionally deranged client"

What.

[bazzag]

Hey Rev! Lovin the detective piccie

[Ponei]

 Terror you magnificent bastard, read chapter 16 last night.

This is for you

http://desmond.image...jpg&res=landing

I still picture your Tali this way, dark and sexy.

Can't wait for last chapter 


Edit: Note that nothing I posted here is my work, I just browse the internet for images to edit, adding cool effects. Still totally worth it <3

Modifié par Ponei, 02 mai 2012 - 05:51 .

[Jull3]

That picture is done so well, and then to add such an awesome effect to it. Amazing Ponei lol

Modifié par Jull3, 02 mai 2012 - 05:43 .

[darthrevaninlight]

exelsis wrote...

"emotionally deranged client"

What.

ah exelsis

you missed the amazing scriptwriting done by the amazing TrueMadayar?

[Ponei]

 Jull  also read your FF, so entertaining I had to read it during class at university lol. Too bad that I couldn't have that as my persoal FF sinse in my game that bosh'tet Ashley is nothing but a crater on Virmire :devil:

[exelsis]

darthrevaninlight wrote...

exelsis wrote...

"emotionally deranged client"

What.

ah exelsis

you missed the amazing scriptwriting done by the amazing TrueMadayar?

Detectives zorah and shepard? But mad is male, isn't he?