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[Exiledone1]

darthrevaninlight wrote...

Tali begins to cry, the emotion wracking her body and scrunching her face. Her three-fingered hands race to cover the expression but the liquid of tears escapes through the cracks.

"I'm sorry, I," She manages to say between sobs. "Sometimes it's just too much and I," Her voice breaks.

Shepard reaches out to her, pulls her close to him. "Shhh, shhh. It's okay. Everything's going to be alright." Soothingly, he strokes her hair with one hand. The other firmly but gently presses against her back. Tali buries her head into Shepard's shoulder, wetting it. As her sobs slowly die down, her hands lift themselves and rest against his back, and she squeezes.

Shepard drops his head to her shoulder, closing his eyes as he grips her tighter, enjoying the feel of her. Tali's lips begin to move, and her head, first kissing his shoulder, then tracing a line up his neck, up and around his jaw, over the wrinkles of his brow, down his nose, and stopping to hover just above his lips.

Shepard opens his eyes.

He meets Tali's fiercely shining orbs.

"Never forget." She breathes. "That you're mine."

Then her mouth crashes into his and the lights turn out.

Its Revan! Love what you wrote  I left MP just to say this

[ichi9181]

Exiledone1 wrote...

darthrevaninlight wrote...

Tali begins to cry, the emotion wracking her body and scrunching her face. Her three-fingered hands race to cover the expression but the liquid of tears escapes through the cracks.

"I'm sorry, I," She manages to say between sobs. "Sometimes it's just too much and I," Her voice breaks.

Shepard reaches out to her, pulls her close to him. "Shhh, shhh. It's okay. Everything's going to be alright." Soothingly, he strokes her hair with one hand. The other firmly but gently presses against her back. Tali buries her head into Shepard's shoulder, wetting it. As her sobs slowly die down, her hands lift themselves and rest against his back, and she squeezes.

Shepard drops his head to her shoulder, closing his eyes as he grips her tighter, enjoying the feel of her. Tali's lips begin to move, and her head, first kissing his shoulder, then tracing a line up his neck, up and around his jaw, over the wrinkles of his brow, down his nose, and stopping to hover just above his lips.

Shepard opens his eyes.

He meets Tali's fiercely shining orbs.

"Never forget." She breathes. "That you're mine."

Then her mouth crashes into his and the lights turn out.

Its Revan! Love what you wrote  I left MP just to say this

i love it sis

[darthrevaninlight]

^^
:D
Thanks, buddies!!!!:D

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Because waffles show her love for him. And they taste delicious. They're the staple breakfast that the stereotypical human wife cooks for her husband. Tali wouldn't have it any other way.

But she's definitely never cooked before.

This is where lots and lots of maple syrup comes in.

Modifié par darthrevaninlight, 04 mai 2012 - 04:04 .

[ichi9181]

darthrevaninlight wrote...

^^
:D
Thanks, buddies!!!!:D

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Because waffles show her love for him. And they taste delicious.

But she's definitely never cooked before.

sis you gave ne some ideas

[darthrevaninlight]

^
to cook waffles? 8D gimme some!!!

[Dilandau3000]

darthrevaninlight wrote...

They're the staple breakfast that the stereotypical human wife cooks for her husband.

Stereotypical American wife, more like. I've never had waffles for breakfast.

[ichi9181]

darthrevaninlight wrote...

^
to cook waffles? 8D gimme some!!!

no your little pice

[forthary]

darthrevaninlight wrote...

Because waffles show her love for him. And they taste delicious.

But she's definitely never cooked before.

That's true, but...ah, she's a quarian, she probably doesn't understand.

I guess the next time the lights go out for them, Shepard will have to cook Tali a delicous dextro breakfast.  I'd serve her some katarian eggs with toast and bacon.  Gotta have that bacon!  Oh and dextro orange-juice, for that immune system.

Modifié par forthary, 04 mai 2012 - 04:11 .

[darthrevaninlight]

^
BAAAACON

Dilandau3000 wrote...

Stereotypical American wife, more like. I've never had waffles for breakfast.

In the future, american culture is human culture ;) haha, but yeah I guess I'll take your word for it.  I've only ever experienced american culture, so lol

ichi9181 wrote...
no your little pice

Oh, cool!!! Can't wait to see what you come up with!!!:happy:

Modifié par darthrevaninlight, 04 mai 2012 - 05:19 .

[ichi9181]

im in mp sis

[ryder500]

You give me inspiration to cook waffles darthrevan. I have not had waffles for very long time maybe it is because I am poor uni student. I am happy to come to Australia with enough money to buy myself a house with no debt...

Maybe I should cook something nice, I'm sure that my girlfriend will appreciate it! I also like to cook nice things... I wonder if Tali would like my cooking?

Too bad she cannot eat human food though

[Unschuld]

darthrevaninlight wrote...

Tali begins to cry, the emotion wracking her body and scrunching her face. Her three-fingered hands race to cover the expression but the liquid of tears escapes through the cracks.

"I'm sorry, I," She manages to say between sobs. "Sometimes it's just too much and I," Her voice breaks.

Shepard reaches out to her, pulls her close to him. "Shhh, shhh. It's okay. Everything's going to be alright." Soothingly, he strokes her hair with one hand. The other firmly but gently presses against her back. Tali buries her head into Shepard's shoulder, wetting it. As her sobs slowly die down, her hands lift themselves and rest against his back, and she squeezes.

Shepard drops his head to her shoulder, closing his eyes as he grips her tighter, enjoying the feel of her. Tali's lips begin to move, and her head, first kissing his shoulder, then tracing a line up his neck, up and around his jaw, over the wrinkles of his brow, down his nose, and stopping to hover just above his lips.

Shepard opens his eyes.

He meets Tali's fiercely shining orbs.

"Never forget." She breathes. "That you're mine."

Then her mouth crashes into his and the lights turn out.

So... from what I gather this is Tali's reaction to overcooking waffles? 






... I'm of course kidding by the way. Very nicely written.

Modifié par Unschuld, 04 mai 2012 - 04:25 .

[Dilandau3000]

Shepard: these waffles are awful!
Tali: Ehm... It wasn't me! Chiktikka made them!
Chiktikka: 

[ryder500]

Hey Dilandau, do you have any more gmod creations with Tali?

[Dilandau3000]

Not at present. I wish I could find a gmod model of a combat drone so I could do one with Chiktikka. Or even a gmod model of a straw (I seriously can't find any).

[Unschuld]

Dilandau3000 wrote...

Not at present. I wish I could find a gmod model of a combat drone so I could do one with Chiktikka. Or even a gmod model of a straw (I seriously can't find any).

Just use one of GLaDOS's little orbs. Preferably the angry red one that snarles and twitches about.

[Unschuld]

 Night everyone! I leave you with this:




<3

[darthrevaninlight]

^
PURE EVIL

ryder500 wrote...

You give me inspiration to cook waffles darthrevan. I have not had waffles for very long time maybe it is because I am poor uni student. I am happy to come to Australia with enough money to buy myself a house with no debt...

Maybe I should cook something nice, I'm sure that my girlfriend will appreciate it! I also like to cook nice things... I wonder if Tali would like my cooking?

Too bad she cannot eat human food though

good! waffles are da best!! 

Hmmm I imagine it would be hard to cook for someone for whom their food is not edible for you... but in the end, its the thought that counds, right?B)

Modifié par darthrevaninlight, 04 mai 2012 - 05:01 .

[darthrevaninlight]

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THATS JUST PURE EVIL, UNS

Unschuld wrote...


So... from what I gather this is Tali's reaction to overcooking waffles? {smilie}






... I'm of course kidding by the way. Very nicely written.

bwahahaha!!

this comic is amazing

Modifié par darthrevaninlight, 04 mai 2012 - 05:06 .

[Ryuji2]

Garrus and Tali-mance didn't happen. DIDN'T HAPPEN I TELL YOU!

Also Revan, sorry for being away for basically...all of today. Will have update on chapter tomorrow most likely!

Modifié par Ryuji2, 04 mai 2012 - 05:07 .

[darthrevaninlight]

^
its all good bro
get cho writer cap on while you sleep and have tali dreams!!

Modifié par darthrevaninlight, 04 mai 2012 - 05:10 .

[zapphoman24]

I went through the Rannoch missions again today.

Still the best part of the game to me. I just wish it didn't end so fast.

[Dilandau3000]

Tali: If you get your mandibles stuck on my helmet one more time I will blow them off!

Modifié par Dilandau3000, 04 mai 2012 - 05:12 .

[darthrevaninlight]

^
haha
what really happened after that "romance" scene if Shepard hadnt interrupted

zapphoman24 wrote...

I went through the Rannoch missions again today.

Still the best part of the game to me. I just wish it didn't end so fast.

agreed, bro

its the one part of the game that made me sit back and say "this is why I payed 70 lousy bucks for this."

Modifié par darthrevaninlight, 04 mai 2012 - 05:16 .

[ryder500]

Garrus is my bro, but he best not be touching my Tali!!!

Yes revan, maybe thought is what counts. I think Tali would love to eat Asian food if she was able. It is my favourite type of food to cook, so many good flavours! Dish like honey soy chicken, ramen noodle, beef stir fry and thing like spring roll and dumpling.