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[Gen Petitt]

I did though ^^

Modifié par Gen Petitt, 04 mai 2012 - 09:27 .

[exelsis]

[bazzag]

Hey chaps and chapettes!

[Gen Petitt]

I am Garrus Vakarian and this is now my favorite thread on the BSN!

Modifié par Gen Petitt, 04 mai 2012 - 09:46 .

[Gen Petitt]

The thread is dieing quick we need a Tali question here what would Tali think about someone with two eye colors

[exelsis]

Gen Petitt wrote...

The thread is dieing quick we need a Tali question here what would Tali think about someone with two eye colors

"That person has a different colored iris in each eye. This is interesting, as this occurs infrequently/frequently/often/never in quarian populations."

[bazzag]

She probly wouldnt care...unless they were bright red or sumptin

[Gen Petitt]

bazzag wrote...

She probly wouldnt care...unless they were bright red or sumptin

What about light blue and dark green with the dark green eye have a spot of brown in the iris

Modifié par Gen Petitt, 04 mai 2012 - 09:56 .

[iSpaz]

Gen Petitt wrote...

The thread is dieing quick we need a Tali question here what would Tali think about someone with two eye colors

This question just makes me think of Yuna from Final Fantasy X....Hmm what would Tali think of her? ;p

I can see it now Tali and Yuna flying on Bahamut! While dancing and singing... :x

Ok now I think I just lost myself. >_>;;

[exelsis]

Gen Petitt wrote...

bazzag wrote...

She probly wouldnt care...unless they were bright red or sumptin

What about light blue and dark green with the dark green eye have a spot of brown in the iris

Are you describing your own eyes? I'm pretty sure tali would be fine with your mutant eye colors. After all, you are both xenophiles.

[darthrevaninlight]

@exelsis
LOL boobies

TrueMadayar wrote...

Tali is very noble. An Inshield like that...is not good. You need to make it an undivided shield to show highest nobility. An Inshield mostly represents a mix or lower, common shield. For example the French Royal Shield is the golden Fleur de Liles on blue, and Biggles shield is the Three Red Lions on White. So the shotgun and straw crossed on the golden back of brandy would be simple enough.

Also, your shield is french. Tali would probably be represented by a Lozenge.

you know so much cool stuff, Mad!!! Guess I gotta go research then x)

Modifié par darthrevaninlight, 04 mai 2012 - 10:06 .

[Gen Petitt]

exelsis wrote...

Gen Petitt wrote...

bazzag wrote...

She probly wouldnt care...unless they were bright red or sumptin

What about light blue and dark green with the dark green eye have a spot of brown in the iris

Are you describing your own eyes? I'm pretty sure tali would be fine with your mutant eye colors. After all, you are both xenophiles.

I can neither conform nor deny this

[AVPen]

I'm really not sure why I started writing again for the first time in years... possibly due to my frustrations with ME3 and its ending, possibly out of boredom while I wait for the Extended Cut to arrive so i can finish the last episode of my ME3 Fanedit video series, or possibly just cause I started reading other fanfics like Tairis Deamhan's "Razor's Edge" series and got interested in writing again... but I started writing some stuff for an ME3 "Shepard/Tali" story based on some ideas/concepts I had on what ME3's plot could contain before the game got released.

Right now, I just have several random scenes from across the story complete, but thought I'd post a preview of one of the finished scenes from later in the story (about 2/3-3/4s into it) just to get others opinion of my writing, see what you all think:

Garrus's gaze becomes fixated on a random hospital intern through the window – a human girl with short
reddish hair and brown eyes, who looked relatively new to her job and was helping an asari with a fractured leg into a mobile-chair, presumably to take her out to the main lobby and give the patient a greater view of the Presidium than what her small room was afforded. Garrus lets out a cough to clear his throat and runs his right hand over his crest absentmindedly, trying to come up something, anything to talk about out loud in order to drown out the silence in the room.

“You know, I was talking with James for a bit early before on the Normandy - initially just really stupid crap about who's the better soldier and seen the most action in our careers,” he continues with an deep exhale, still watching the human intern and her asari patient. “Hah, 'trained a Harvester to fly with me riding it', my blue ass. Somehow from that stupidity, though, we got onto the topic of differing human and turian expressions. He told me there was an old Earth saying that went 'May you be in heaven half an hour before the devil knows you're dead'... though admittedly, I am not sure if turian heaven is anywhere close to human heaven, or whether or not heaven's bureaucrats got it segregated into different alien subsections,” he adds with a brief, bitter chuckle.

“But I want you to know this, Shepard,” he goes on by himself, unable to turn and address the unconscious human in the same room, “If this thing does end up going sideways and we all end up in the same place... if you get there before I do... I'll meet you at the bar and buy you as many rounds as you like when I arrive.”

“Hehh... Vakarian and Shepard conquering the bars of heaven... guess there are worse ways of spending the afterlife...”

Garrus spun around at the abrupt voice, his eyes widening as he sees the ragged Commander in the hospital bed staring back at him with a light smile on his lips. Shepard's blue eyes were gingerly opening themselves, but were having some trouble bringing the room into focus, unaccustomed to having normal sight from being in darkness for several days. Garrus stands silently dumbfounded for several moments, his brain suddenly unable to process a single thought, before he manages to regain control of his limbs and steps over to the sleeping quarian in the chair, nudging her on the the shoulder.

“Tali. Tali, wake up!”

“Nuhh...” she murmured sluggishly.

Garrus shook her arm harder. “Tali, Shepard's awake, get up!”

The mere mention of the words “Shepard” and “awake” was enough to force the doldrums from Tali's exhausted body, her silvery eyes forced themselves wide open and re-illuminating the dark interior of her visor. “John!” she
exclaimed and gently pushes Garrus out of her way, her dulled legs nearly tripping over themselves as she scrabbles to human's bedside.

“Hah, there's my beautiful girl,” Shepard chuckled softly as his hand raises out from under the blankets and reaching for the quarian woman, despite the numerous IVs and tubes attached to his flesh and muscle trying to tug his arm back downward. Tali's hand quickly finds his, a breath of relief escaping her lips as she feels the strength of his digits squeeze her fingers back gently. The glowing orbs from inside her visor quickly scan over the exposed skin of Shepard's body despite having seen it all before - the deep bruises that travel along his chest and left shoulder up to the side of his neck, the covered bandages where the slugs had pierced through his armor and entered his body, the tubes and wires embedded into his veins, the healing scar along his collarbone revealing the hint of his body's cybernetic implants. Finally, her sights settle back onto his face, onto that soft smile that etches his mouth and the warmth illuminating from his deep blues eyes as he peers back up at her.

Shepard's fingers squeezes Tali's hand again as she slowly lowers her head down to his, the cool glass of
her visor coming down to lightly rest against his forehead while the edges of her veil outline the sides of his face. “There's my girl,” he exhales in a subdued whisper, his eyes finally closing themselves from the over-stimulation of light while her glowing silver orbs continue to linger on him and him alone. A deep, long sigh can be heard from the quarian's voice modulator as the stress and tension of her body are released from her lungs.

Any persisting trace of Liara's bitter words from earlier are wiped clear from Tali's mind, any lingering memory over the lies that Udina had tried to unleash and that Kaiden had foolishly believed are extinguished by the truth that she knows deep in her heart... this man is Commander John Shepard, her Commander John Shepard.

“Always, my hesh'la... always.”

 

EDIT: Damn forum formatting.... 

Modifié par AVPen, 04 mai 2012 - 10:13 .

[Fenrisfil]

Four Quarian team up = Epic. Thanks guys.

[exelsis]

Gen Petitt wrote...

exelsis wrote...

Gen Petitt wrote...
What about light blue and dark green with the dark green eye have a spot of brown in the iris

Are you describing your own eyes? I'm pretty sure tali would be fine with your mutant eye colors. After all, you are both xenophiles.

I can neither conform nor deny this

Yeah. You've got funky eyes. Now you can gaze lovingly at your bright-eyed alien girlfriend with your own wierd eyes.

[Ponei]

 I'm  off for a while, nice MP guys. Tali approves of an all quarian team 

[Deoku]

Gen Petitt wrote...

exelsis wrote...

Gen Petitt wrote...

bazzag wrote...

She probly wouldnt care...unless they were bright red or sumptin

What about light blue and dark green with the dark green eye have a spot of brown in the iris

Are you describing your own eyes? I'm pretty sure tali would be fine with your mutant eye colors. After all, you are both xenophiles.

I can neither conform nor deny this

I agree with what most have said Gen. I don't think it would be something she thinks much of.  Prior to Shepard she has had little to no contact with humans much like Liara, so she is kind of learning as she goes.  Which brings me to another question.

Going off of what Revan said yesterday about Tali and making waffles.  Who do you think would be the family cook; her or Shepard? or would they both learn to make eachothers cultural food or just make meals seperately for themselves?

[exelsis]

Ponei wrote...

 I'm  off for a while, nice MP guys. Tali approves of an all quarian team 

WHERE MAH THIRD TOE AT!?

[darthrevaninlight]

thinking of doing something along these lines..

[Deoku]

darthrevaninlight wrote...



thinking of doing something along these lines..

Hey Revan

[exelsis]

Deoku wrote...

Gen Petitt wrote...

exelsis wrote...

Gen Petitt wrote...

bazzag wrote...

She probly wouldnt care...unless they were bright red or sumptin

What about light blue and dark green with the dark green eye have a spot of brown in the iris

Are you describing your own eyes? I'm pretty sure tali would be fine with your mutant eye colors. After all, you are both xenophiles.

I can neither conform nor deny this

I agree with what most have said Gen. I don't think it would be something she thinks much of.  Prior to Shepard she has had little to no contact with humans much like Liara, so she is kind of learning as she goes.  Which brings me to another question.

Going off of what Revan said yesterday about Tali and making waffles.  Who do you think would be the family cook; her or Shepard? or would they both learn to make eachothers cultural food or just make meals seperately for themselves?

I think they both suck at cooking. Tali has been stuck on the floatilla most of her life, where the food is probably a nutritious bowl of slimy vegetables. Shepard was in the military most of his life, not much room to learn to cook. And being a guy whose top cooking achievement is pasta(not even sauce), I'd say learn how to cook together.

[darthrevaninlight]

SUP DEOKU

tali coat of arms in the works

[Fenrisfil]

@Revan - is the belt bit going to become a straw? That would be the one straw to rule them all.

[darthrevaninlight]

@fenfen

one big straw with the words "totally worth it" writ across

[Deoku]

darthrevaninlight wrote...

SUP DEOKU

tali coat of arms in the works

 Awesome lol  I can't wait to see what it looks like.  Too bad the Quarians really didn't have any cultural items or art on display throughout the series.  Probably would have helped you design it easier if we saw some symbols and patterns on things that they create art related.  Maybe now that they have they're world back we'll get to see some eventually. Well assuming that gets set to canon I guess.

Modifié par Deoku, 04 mai 2012 - 10:28 .