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[-N7-Seeker]

exelsis wrote...

*endingsnip*

That made me lol. But Shepard is alive and he's going to reunite with Tali. I know! I think. I'm not so sure... Maybe...

[exelsis]

-N7-Seeker wrote...

exelsis wrote...
*endingsnip*

That made me lol. But Shepard is alive and he's going to reunite with Tali. I know! I think. I'm not so sure... Maybe...

There won't be in the canon ending without introducing even more plotholes. Good thing we have headcanon!

Modifié par exelsis, 06 mai 2012 - 09:55 .

[Ruby Python]

exelsis wrote...

-N7-Seeker wrote...

exelsis wrote...
*endingsnip*

That made me lol. But Shepard is alive and he's going to reunite with Tali. I know! I think. I'm not so sure... Maybe...

There won't be in the canon ending without introducing even more plotholes. Good thing we have headcanon!

This hurts me.
Also life without my 360 and ME3/Tali has been so lame. Can't wait to remedy that situation. Anyhoo whats the haps mancer's?

[Gen Petitt]

exelsis wrote...

-N7-Seeker wrote...

exelsis wrote...
*endingsnip*

That made me lol. But Shepard is alive and he's going to reunite with Tali. I know! I think. I'm not so sure... Maybe...

There won't be in the canon ending without introducing even more plotholes. Good thing we have headcanon!

Yes I played the ending and even the Arbiter wondered how it makes sense.

[Terrorize69]

*hums innocently* Chapter 17 is just about done.

[Fattness132]

Gaaaaah! why do you torture us, Terror!

[TheWerdna]

So is this the last chapter? Or did you end up returning to the original plan of 18 or 19 chapters?

[Gen Petitt]

Terrorize69 wrote...

*hums innocently* Chapter 17 is just about done.

The Arbiter is angry that it is not ready yet he chocked me for it then realized that I am not you

[Tom80]

TheWerdna wrote...

So is this the last chapter? Or did you end up returning to the original plan of 18 or 19 chapters?

Originally it was the last !
But it got sooooo long that he will cut it and LEAVES US WITH A CLIFFHANGER FOR CHAPTER 18 !!!

[Terrorize69]

TheWerdna wrote...

So is this the last chapter? Or did you end up returning to the original plan of 18 or 19 chapters?

Its double the length of the longest chapter. I may cut it in half and make it into chapter 17 and 18, then post them at the same time. Or I may just make it one chapter.

[Deoku]

Cheese of Borg wrote...

Terrorize69 wrote...

Hmm Chapter 17 will be by far the longest Chapter lol having too much fun writing this :s

Recomendation: Shep confeses his incounter with Tali to Garrus.

lol

Shepard: Garrus I just... I lost all control.  I got so drunk and then she and I ended up wrestling around on the floor.  It had been so long since i was with her and...
Garrus: ...and you had reach and she had flexibility....
Shepard: yeah...I mean..What?!
Garrus: 'clears throat" Ahh nothing.  So you didn't bother to capture her?
Shepard: The booze and desire took over. By the time I was conscious and in the right state of mind again she was long gone.
Garrus: I remember plenty of nights like that back on Palaven.  Now that I think about I didn't need the drinks for that...you know how it is with me and the ladies.
Shepard: 'shakes his head with a slight chuckle trying to stay serious"
Garrus: Look Shepard, it was a mistake we'll get her back but you've got to get your head back in the game and off of other things.
Shepard: I know I let all of this cloud my judgement, but don't worry. It's all out of my system now.
Garrus: Good to hear now let's get out there and kick some ass, Shepard.  You owe Cerberus some long overdue payback. Just save some for me...I have a sniper shell with Illusive Man's name on it.
Shepard: Thanks, Garrus

Modifié par Deoku, 06 mai 2012 - 10:50 .

[TrueMadayar]

Terrorize69 wrote...


Its double the length of the longest chapter. I may cut it in half and make it into chapter 17 and 18, then post them at the same time. Or I may just make it one chapter.

How about you stop right before the conclusion and announce you'll rework every chapter you wrote so far and always write one sentence of the conclusion after you've rewritten one chapter. Also you of course should take a reasonable amount of time for the rewrite and announce frequently that you're almost done.

Alternatively just kill them.

Tell me tomorrow how it worked out. Night!


[edit]Out with a top...well, a good new one:



Master Cyrus on deviantart - "Tali on Rannoch"

Modifié par TrueMadayar, 06 mai 2012 - 10:45 .

[Terrorize69]

TrueMadayar wrote...

Terrorize69 wrote...


Its double the length of the longest chapter. I may cut it in half and make it into chapter 17 and 18, then post them at the same time. Or I may just make it one chapter.

How about you stop right before the conclusion and announce you'll rework every chapter you wrote so far and always write one sentence of the conclusion after you've rewritten one chapter. Also you of course should take a reasonable amount of time for the rewrite and announce frequently that you're almost done.

Alternatively just kill them.

Tell me tomorrow how it worked out. Night!

That. Is. Evil.


I'm doing that!  lol

Night Mad! 

[TheWerdna]

Terror, what you need to do is write a really bad ending that is very symbolic and does not fit at all with the rest of the story and feels really tacked on. Then in a few months you release a extended version of that ending the clarifies it, since we obviously just could not understand its genius

Modifié par TheWerdna, 06 mai 2012 - 10:53 .

[Tom80]

TrueMadayar wrote...

How about you stop right before the conclusion and announce you'll rework every chapter you wrote so far and always write one sentence of the conclusion after you've rewritten one chapter. Also you of course should take a reasonable amount of time for the rewrite and announce frequently that you're almost done.

Why did you say that out loud, hm ?

[Deoku]

TheWerdna wrote...

Terror, what you need to do is write a really bad ending that is very symbolic and does not fit at all with the rest of the story and feels really tacks on. Then in a few months you release a extended version of that ending the clarifies it, since we obviously just could not understand its genius

lmao   No one would ever think to do that! Wait a minute....

Modifié par Deoku, 06 mai 2012 - 10:54 .

[TrueMadayar]

Tom80 wrote...

Why did you say that out loud, hm ?

Because I believe he's not gonna turn back from the path of sadistic vile. So I've decided to help him reach its full potential. By the way, just an idea, you can always suggest something even worse.

[18 Brains]

TheWerdna wrote...

Terror, what you need to do is write a really bad ending that is very symbolic and does not fit at all with the rest of the story and feels really tacked on. Then in a few months you release a extended version of that ending the clarifies it, since we obviously just could not understand its genius

Yes, of course!  And if anyone claims to dislike it, flaunt your Artistic Integrity!

I said I'd be on here more often, but I've been doing a full playthrough for ME 3 before the extended cut.  It's still that awesome (except for the ending).

[Tom80]

TrueMadayar wrote...

Tom80 wrote...

Why did you say that out loud, hm ?

Because I believe he's not gonna turn back from the path of sadistic vile. So I've decided to help him reach its full potential. By the way, just an idea, you can always suggest something even worse.

That was a rhetoric question.....

[TrueMadayar]

Tom80 wrote...

That was a rhetoric question.....

Oh. I don't believe those exist. So my other suggestion for him to just state that he lost interest and won't end the story, then two days later agree to post the incomplete chapter seventeen, which just stops before the conclusion, just to taunt you, isn't to your liking either?

[TheWerdna]

TrueMadayar wrote...

Tom80 wrote...

That was a rhetoric question.....

Oh. I don't believe those exist. So my other suggestion for him to just state that he lost interest and won't end the story, then two days later agree to post the incomplete chapter seventeen, which just stops before the conclusion, just to taunt you, isn't to your liking either?

So you are suggesting he post a unfinished, confusing, incomplete mess of a ending....so basically ME3's ending

[Tom80]

TrueMadayar wrote...

Tom80 wrote...

That was a rhetoric question.....

Oh. I don't believe those exist. So my other suggestion for him to just state that he lost interest and won't end the story, then two days later agree to post the incomplete chapter seventeen, which just stops before the conclusion, just to taunt you, isn't to your liking either?

No comment.

[Olueq]

moar tali plox

[TrueMadayar]

TheWerdna wrote...

So you are suggesting he post a unfinished, confusing, incomplete mess of a ending....so basically ME3's ending

What ending? There was an ending? Marauder Shields saved me, I turned back, and Tali and I retired to Rannoch as Private Investigators. Dunno what happened to Earth. Or the reapers.

Also, he should advertise that the chapter will bring everything to a final conclusion.

[Terrorize69]

Ha, we'll you'll be happy to know.. Chapter 17 is now done (and its complete )

Going over it now, seeing if I can snip it into two halfs. And if any areas need expanding on.