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[Anubis722]

TheWerdna wrote...

Darman wrote...

TheWerdna wrote...

Well, i have finally finished the first chapter of the fanfic series I have been working on for the past month or so. This is my first attempt at writing fanfiction, so any feedback and comments would be greatly appreciated.

Here is a teaser/summery for the overall plot.

Twenty-three years have passed since the Reaper War, a time of well-earned peace for Commander John Shepard.  Now Ria'Shepard, adopted daughter of Shepard and Tali'Zorah, setts off for her pilgrimage and her own journey. Meanwhile a old enemy reemerges, forcing Shepard to take on his first Spectre assignment in over five years to stop them. As both become embroiled in a conflict to control a ancient weapon, can either Shepard  hope to save the galaxy once more?

Link is here

Please tell me what you think, and if you have them any suggestions would be very welcome

Around 50 year old Shepard and Tali?  Naah. That is definitly too far in the future for me.
Its just - a whole new generation, nearly a new galaxy that must have evolved after the reaper war, new tech, new circumstances. Its very much to cover up to make this believable.
And older Shep and Tali - you know Im willing to read fanfics taking place about 5 or 6 years after the events of Mass Effect 3 but 23 years? I'll hardly give it a try. Maybe in 23 years.

Well due to advances in medicine and gene therapy  aging in the Mass Effect universe is a bit different,, in that someone in their 50s will be physically closer to someone in their 30s (with 150 being the new 100).

As for the galazy changing, well one of the books took place over 15 years before  ME1, and everything seemed mostly the same.

Though I completely understand it is not your cup of tea. Honestly, if I was the one reading it as apposed to writing it I would likely be a bit iffy.

I just finshed reading it. it's pretty interesting can't wait to read more.

[Lone Triarii]

TheWerdna wrote...

Well, i have finally finished the first chapter of the fanfic series I have been working on for the past month or so. This is my first attempt at writing fanfiction, so any feedback and comments would be greatly appreciated.

Here is a teaser/summery for the overall plot.

Twenty-three years have passed since the Reaper War, a time of well-earned peace for Commander John Shepard.  Now Ria'Shepard, adopted daughter of Shepard and Tali'Zorah, setts off for her pilgrimage and her own journey. Meanwhile a old enemy reemerges, forcing Shepard to take on his first Spectre assignment in over five years to stop them. As both become embroiled in a conflict to control a ancient weapon, can either Shepard  hope to save the galaxy once more?

Link is here

Please tell me what you think, and if you have them any suggestions would be very welcome

A nice read. I’ll be looking forward to see how it continues.

[Graceyn]

I just wanted to drop off this screenshot manip I posted today, as some of you may like it :


"Vas Normandy" by Graceyn

I expect to have a few more Tali pieces up later this week/this weekend.  They tie into my ongoing femShep fanfic If It Meant Living-60: Virtually Real (Deviant Art Link), as this chapter and the next one cover the Geth/Quarian story arc. 

Hope you enjoy!

[XenoAlbedo]

I'm back from vacation (and with a new PS Vita no less) and it still seems this thread is moving really slow.
I don't think this has been posted in awhile so:

Also... It's summer... So where the hell is my ending DLC?!

Modifié par XenoAlbedo, 18 juin 2012 - 10:18 .

[TheWerdna]

Astrological Summer (which most businesses go by) does not start until June 21st. As such the EC could come out any time from them until September 21st and will be out in summer.

[zizao]

TheWerdna wrote...

Astrological Summer (which most businesses go by) does not start until June 21st. As such the EC could come out any time from them until September 21st and will be out in summer.

T_T that the worst/best news I have heard all day. 

On one hand it means longer until I get to see my Tali again.

On the other it could mean a substantial DLC instead of just 5 min of cutsceens.

[forthary]

zizao wrote...

TheWerdna wrote...

Astrological Summer (which most businesses go by) does not start until June 21st. As such the EC could come out any time from them until September 21st and will be out in summer.

T_T that the worst/best news I have heard all day. 

On one hand it means longer until I get to see my Tali again.

On the other it could mean a substantial DLC instead of just 5 min of cutsceens.

We can only hope.  I would much rather have them make Tali and Shepard's story crystal clear and released on the last day of summer then for them to rush and be released near the end of July.  Tali is totally worth the wait.

Well, on the bright side, at least they will finish the game before the world ends...

Modifié par forthary, 19 juin 2012 - 12:21 .

[exelsis]

forthary wrote...

zizao wrote...

TheWerdna wrote...

Astrological Summer (which most businesses go by) does not start until June 21st. As such the EC could come out any time from them until September 21st and will be out in summer.

T_T that the worst/best news I have heard all day. 

On one hand it means longer until I get to see my Tali again.

On the other it could mean a substantial DLC instead of just 5 min of cutsceens.

We can only hope.  I would much rather have them make Tali and Shepard's story crystal clear and released on the last day of summer then for them to rush and be released near the end of July.  Tali is totally worth the wait.

Well, on the bright side, at least they will finish the game before the world ends...

Of course we will have enough time to play through the whole game again with the EC before november rolls around. It being any good is another matter entirely.

[XenoAlbedo]

forthary wrote...

zizao wrote...

TheWerdna wrote...

Astrological Summer (which most businesses go by) does not start until June 21st. As such the EC could come out any time from them until September 21st and will be out in summer.

T_T that the worst/best news I have heard all day. 

On one hand it means longer until I get to see my Tali again.

On the other it could mean a substantial DLC instead of just 5 min of cutsceens.

We can only hope.  I would much rather have them make Tali and Shepard's story crystal clear and released on the last day of summer then for them to rush and be released near the end of July.  Tali is totally worth the wait.

Well, on the bright side, at least they will finish the game before the world ends...

On December 21st of this year, we will walk outside. Seemingly out of nowhere, a hundred dollar bill will drop to the ground in front of us. Then more hundred dollars bills start raining down until it's pouring. We look up at the sky. We hear a dubstep fog horn. A giant EA logo comes out of the sky and fires a devestating beam made out of money at the world and obliterates it. The end. 

[Maggot4ever]

Graceyn wrote...

I just wanted to drop off this screenshot manip I posted today, as some of you may like it :


"Vas Normandy" by Graceyn

I expect to have a few more Tali pieces up later this week/this weekend.  They tie into my ongoing femShep fanfic If It Meant Living-60: Virtually Real (Deviant Art Link), as this chapter and the next one cover the Geth/Quarian story arc. 

Hope you enjoy!

I love it. <3<3<3

[Nozzivix]

XenoAlbedo wrote...

forthary wrote...

zizao wrote...

TheWerdna wrote...

Astrological Summer (which most businesses go by) does not start until June 21st. As such the EC could come out any time from them until September 21st and will be out in summer.

T_T that the worst/best news I have heard all day. 

On one hand it means longer until I get to see my Tali again.

On the other it could mean a substantial DLC instead of just 5 min of cutsceens.

We can only hope.  I would much rather have them make Tali and Shepard's story crystal clear and released on the last day of summer then for them to rush and be released near the end of July.  Tali is totally worth the wait.

Well, on the bright side, at least they will finish the game before the world ends...

On December 21st of this year, we will walk outside. Seemingly out of nowhere, a hundred dollar bill will drop to the ground in front of us. Then more hundred dollars bills start raining down until it's pouring. We look up at the sky. We hear a dubstep fog horn. A giant EA logo comes out of the sky and fires a devestating beam made out of money at the world and obliterates it. The end. 

We must stop the rEApers!

[LDSrocker27]

This is my first time posting and i felt like saying Tali is awesome so Tali is awesome support

[zizao]

LDSrocker27 wrote...

This is my first time posting and i felt like saying Tali is awesome so Tali is awesome support

That she is.  

[zapphoman24]

LDSrocker27 wrote...

This is my first time posting and i felt like saying Tali is awesome so Tali is awesome support

I second this claim.

EDIT: I just uploaded the new chapter for Two Years Later. You can find what I have so far in the link below.

Modifié par zapphoman24, 19 juin 2012 - 04:56 .

[Maggot4ever]

zapphoman24 wrote...

LDSrocker27 wrote...

This is my first time posting and i felt like saying Tali is awesome so Tali is awesome support

I second this claim.

EDIT: I just uploaded the new chapter for Two Years Later. You can find what I have so far in the link below.

I third this claim.

[Tom80]

Fourth !

[Neverwinter_Knight77]

As I said, my Xbox is broken, so in absence of the real Tali, I figured I would download this.
http://www.modthesim...=0&page=2&pp=25

But the skin color shows through the suit because of some openings that are not apparent in the screenshot. Those areas should be black, but they're not. Tried contacting the other, but he didn't reply. Oh well. There goes that idea.

[zizao]

Hey, so how would you guys like to read a Tali centered article I'm working on for my website?
Pretty much it deals with how real Tali is and how characters in games are transcending their medium.

[Cheese of Borg]

InLoveWithTaliZorah wrote...

Terrorize69 wrote...

Tali: "..And In the Galaxies darkest hour, when all the stars seemed to dim and all hope was just about lost.. One man shone brighter then any star ever did, shouting out at the darkness he rallied all the worlds together.. he charged.. like a knight in shining armor galloping across the stars with the impossible army at his heels... they struck at the heart of the darkness, such a force of light and hope.. together they achieved the impossible and overcome a fate set in stone, they overthrew the darkness and brought peace to the Galaxy... and it's all down to this one man.. on Tuchanka, his name mean's "Hero".. A hero too all across the stars.. but most importantly.. my hero, my love, my Shepard..."

With the infant now fast asleep in her arms, Tali gently lowered him into his cot. She lent down to kiss him softly on the forehead, she turned around to see Shepard standing in the doorway, leaning against the frame. The light in the background wrapping round his outline, giving him a shining glow.. like a knight in shining armor. Tali smiled and gracefully glided across the room and into his arms.

First off, it is a pleasure to have you come out of the Tali Room to have discourse with us. Second, HOW YOU KEEP WRITING PURE GOLD?

Awww....:innocent:

[Exozze]

zizao wrote...

Hey, so how would you guys like to read a Tali centered article I'm working on for my website?
Pretty much it deals with how real Tali is and how characters in games are transcending their medium.

Yeah, of course! 

[Graceyn]

Maggot4ever wrote...

Graceyn wrote...

I just wanted to drop off this screenshot manip I posted today, as some of you may like it :

/snip
"Vas Normandy" by Graceyn

I expect to have a few more Tali pieces up later this week/this weekend.  They tie into my ongoing femShep fanfic If It Meant Living-60: Virtually Real (Deviant Art Link), as this chapter and the next one cover the Geth/Quarian story arc. 

Hope you enjoy!

I love it. <3<3<3

Thanks so much

[Terrorize69]

Graceyn wrote...

Maggot4ever wrote...

Graceyn wrote...

I just wanted to drop off this screenshot manip I posted today, as some of you may like it :

/snip
"Vas Normandy" by Graceyn

I expect to have a few more Tali pieces up later this week/this weekend.  They tie into my ongoing femShep fanfic If It Meant Living-60: Virtually Real (Deviant Art Link), as this chapter and the next one cover the Geth/Quarian story arc. 

Hope you enjoy!

I love it. <3<3<3

Thanks so much

*See's the words Femshep and Tali... gets hopes up for a Tali/FShep romance... see's Kaidan... dies inside*

But still, great work <3

[N7Kopper]

Terrorize69 wrote...

Graceyn wrote...

Maggot4ever wrote...

Graceyn wrote...

I just wanted to drop off this screenshot manip I posted today, as some of you may like it :

/snip
"Vas Normandy" by Graceyn

I expect to have a few more Tali pieces up later this week/this weekend.  They tie into my ongoing femShep fanfic If It Meant Living-60: Virtually Real (Deviant Art Link), as this chapter and the next one cover the Geth/Quarian story arc. 

Hope you enjoy!

I love it. <3<3<3

Thanks so much

*See's the words Femshep and Tali... gets hopes up for a Tali/FShep romance... see's Kaidan... dies inside*

But still, great work <3

Your fault for trying to forcibly change Tali's sexuality. :happy:

Also, this. Unrelated, but awesome.


And image.



Tali, stop bringing a shotgun to a katana fight. You're going to ge-*ker-SHINK* ... never mind. Let's get some medi-gel over here!

Modifié par N7Kopper, 19 juin 2012 - 02:33 .

[Terrorize69]

N7Kopper wrote...

Your fault for trying to forcibly change Tali's sexuality. :happy:

I don't need to change it it's there for all to see, Tali is bi/gay, or she is in a femshep play through.

In a maleshep play through there's no evidence to say shes gay/bi. It's the complete opposit in a femshep game.

[N7Kopper]

Terrorize69 wrote...

N7Kopper wrote...

Your fault for trying to forcibly change Tali's sexuality. :happy:

I don't need to change it it's there for all to see, Tali is bi/gay, or she is in a femshep play through.

In a maleshep play through there's no evidence to say shes gay/bi. It's the complete opposit in a femshep game.

Not romancable. Therefore not.
Proof of the pudding? In the eating.

Kaidan? Never flirts with any guy other than maleshep. That makes him a fem preferring bi.
Tali is just a quarian who is (understandably, considering your reaction) sorta paranoid that femshep will think "link suits" means "we'll bang, OK?"

Modifié par N7Kopper, 19 juin 2012 - 02:39 .