Tali'Zorah ME3 Thread *MAJOR SPOILER WARNING!*
#64351
Posté 16 juillet 2012 - 06:01
#64352
Posté 16 juillet 2012 - 06:14
WATCHJonathan Sud wrote...
I made a Tali reunion in ME3's engine. Short but sweet :333
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THIS
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GUYS
#64353
Posté 16 juillet 2012 - 06:17
Nozzivix wrote...
CLEAR!
I might need to have me some fighting words with Garrus. Getting a little too close to mah Tali.
#64354
Posté 16 juillet 2012 - 07:38
AVPen wrote...
As much of a fan as I am of the first "Razor's Edge" fanfic, I can't say I'm enjoying this new series as much unfortunately.... I really don't care for how Shepard developed: reminds me too much of someone with a death wish, a man trying to atone and be a martyr, so he closes everything and everyone that mattered to him completely off (and the Tali/Shepard relationship "break", if you wanna call it that, isn't sitting well with me either).amxstyle wrote...
Next chapter for Razor's Edge just came out!
http://www.fanfictio...t/s/7952484/13/
Just read it now. I enjoyed it, really looking forward to the next chapter.
I feel like i'm the only one not too bothered about Shepard being "sealed off" from everyone else - it's understandable that Shepard would feel the weight of everything and everyone depending on him, and this would naturally effect his behaviour. I'll admit though, that it does seem a bit "much" at times...and that Shepard's purposeful detachment from Tali was pretty irritating. It'll be interesting to see how Tali will manage to break the ice.
The fic itself is only really just getting started, and there's still a lot more to go before it finishes. I eagerly anticipate more.
Modifié par Edolix, 16 juillet 2012 - 07:40 .
#64355
Posté 16 juillet 2012 - 07:58
Edolix wrote...
It'll be interesting to see how Tali will manage to break the ice.
After breaking HER OWN FIRST, of course.
#64356
Guest_Calinstel_*
Posté 16 juillet 2012 - 09:16
Guest_Calinstel_*
Viewed and enjoyed it though, to be honest, some of the words in the music were difficult to make out. The basic beat of it was good.ex_uralsk wrote...
why nobody watched this? :< click
(My hearing, as is my hair, seem to be abandoning me lately.)
#64358
Posté 16 juillet 2012 - 10:10
She's 100% Tali.
#64359
Posté 16 juillet 2012 - 10:58
BrysonC wrote...
I've seen some people sharing Tali/Shepard fanfics in this thread, so I reckon I'll share the first chapter of mine: here
It's only my first ME fanfic so hopefully it doesn't suck too much ass.
Wow. That's impressive. Very impressive. I wish I could write like this.
#64360
Posté 16 juillet 2012 - 11:28
InLoveWithTaliZorah wrote...
BrysonC wrote...
I've seen some people sharing Tali/Shepard fanfics in this thread, so I reckon I'll share the first chapter of mine: here
It's only my first ME fanfic so hopefully it doesn't suck too much ass.
Wow. That's impressive. Very impressive. I wish I could write like this.
Thanks.
Modifié par BrysonC, 16 juillet 2012 - 11:28 .
#64361
Posté 16 juillet 2012 - 11:34
BrysonC wrote...
InLoveWithTaliZorah wrote...
BrysonC wrote...
I've seen some people sharing Tali/Shepard fanfics in this thread, so I reckon I'll share the first chapter of mine: here
It's only my first ME fanfic so hopefully it doesn't suck too much ass.
Wow. That's impressive. Very impressive. I wish I could write like this.
Thanks.You're not exactly a lightweight yourself, though, I enjoyed reading the fics you linked in your sig.
The Tali emotional scenes are hardest for me. I feel as if I need to write with a thesaraus next to me because I don't have the adequate words to describe Tali. (But I have yet to publish the intense Tali relationship scenes. I'm still building up to her in a sense.)
I hope that I am not only a non-lightweight, but that the large volume I write about Tali is good, not just a lot of mediocrity. But you have the words and can use them quite well. Tali was fleshed out (and Raan) very well here.
Also, love the use of the rock.
Modifié par InLoveWithTaliZorah, 16 juillet 2012 - 11:36 .
#64362
Posté 16 juillet 2012 - 11:45
I thought of Tali while I was breathing in the gas. I thought of her standing next to me holding my arm with one of her hands. While I was getting higher and higher, I tried to impose that hallucination on myself because hallucinating about Tali would be the best way to pass the time. I don't remember much, her masked face obviously, and one more thing. I still felt the imposed feeling of her three fingered hand (does she have a thumb?) on my bicep.
Modifié par InLoveWithTaliZorah, 16 juillet 2012 - 11:46 .
#64364
Posté 16 juillet 2012 - 11:50
InLoveWithTaliZorah wrote...
On a Tali dream tangent, I was administered Laughing Gas prior to surgery today. I know LG isn't hallucinogenic but I was more than willing to try.
I thought of Tali while I was breathing in the gas. I thought of her standing next to me holding my arm with one of her hands. While I was getting higher and higher, I tried to impose that hallucination on myself because hallucinating about Tali would be the best way to pass the time. I don't remember much, her masked face obviously, and one more thing. I still felt the imposed feeling of her three fingered hand (does she have a thumb?) on my bicep....
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Nitrous made me enjoy a wisdom tooth extraction. Hell of a non-drug.
#64365
Posté 16 juillet 2012 - 11:51
InLoveWithTaliZorah wrote...
BrysonC wrote...
InLoveWithTaliZorah wrote...
BrysonC wrote...
I've seen some people sharing Tali/Shepard fanfics in this thread, so I reckon I'll share the first chapter of mine: here
It's only my first ME fanfic so hopefully it doesn't suck too much ass.
Wow. That's impressive. Very impressive. I wish I could write like this.
Thanks.You're not exactly a lightweight yourself, though, I enjoyed reading the fics you linked in your sig.
The Tali emotional scenes are hardest for me. I feel as if I need to write with a thesaraus next to me because I don't have the adequate words to describe Tali. (But I have yet to publish the intense Tali relationship scenes. I'm still building up to her in a sense.)
I hope that I am not only a non-lightweight, but that the large volume I write about Tali is good, not just a lot of mediocrity. But you have the words and can use them quite well. Tali was fleshed out (and Raan) very well here.
Also, love the use of the rock.
Thank you again. You're doing perfectly fine from where I stand, I never thought to myself "wow, this could use some work" or "this scene was badly done." The fact that I was just enjoying myself the whole way through is the best way for me to tell that it was good.
#64366
Posté 17 juillet 2012 - 12:26

Link to picture
- This is what my wife made me. See, I am only lately come to the wonder that is the Mass Effect Universe. I had started 2, but never finished it - then after two months of listening to my wife discuss the original endings to 3, I managed to pick up the first game in an Origin sale. When I first started Mass Effect 2, I had originally figured to woo Jack, possibly Miranda. Then I played 1, and met Tali'Zorah nar Rayya. Yeah.....I think we all know how the rest of that story goes
Modifié par Tokaki, 17 juillet 2012 - 12:29 .
#64367
Posté 17 juillet 2012 - 12:30
Tokaki wrote...
Link to picture
- This is what my wife made me. See, I am only lately come to the wonder that is the Mass Effect Universe. I had started 2, but never finished it - then after two months of listening to my wife discuss the original endings to 3, I managed to pick up the first game in an Origin sale. When I first started Mass Effect 2, I had originally figured to woo Jack, possibly Miranda. Then I played 1, and met Tali'Zorah nar Rayya. Yeah.....I think we all know how the rest of that story goes
Hope your wife doesn't get jealous.
#64368
Posté 17 juillet 2012 - 12:44
#64369
Posté 17 juillet 2012 - 12:51
BrysonC wrote...
Hope your wife doesn't get jealous.
Yeah.....she's spending all her time right now hanging out on the Kaiden and Garrus threads. >.>
#64370
Posté 17 juillet 2012 - 01:00
Tokaki wrote...
BrysonC wrote...
Hope your wife doesn't get jealous.
Yeah.....she's spending all her time right now hanging out on the Kaiden and Garrus threads. >.>
Hah...well...it's only fair then.
And thanks for your comment on my fic, I hope I finish it too. :x
#64371
Posté 17 juillet 2012 - 01:30
#64372
Posté 17 juillet 2012 - 01:47
zapphoman24 wrote...
Yay writing some more on Two Years Later! This will be the last part on The Rescue Mission. Can't wait for you all to read it.
*pumps(wtf? c o c k s is banned.) Wraith* Hand it over.
Modifié par Nozzivix, 17 juillet 2012 - 01:48 .
#64373
Posté 17 juillet 2012 - 01:55
http://social.biowar...05/blog/216038/
*cough*
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Modifié par Ryuji2, 17 juillet 2012 - 01:59 .
#64374
Posté 17 juillet 2012 - 02:02
#64375
Posté 17 juillet 2012 - 02:03
Ryuji2 wrote...
Speaking of headcanon,
http://social.biowar...05/blog/216038/
*cough*
Edit: Fixed formatting since BSN is terrible at copy-pasting documents.
"Fixed formatting."
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