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[Mr.BlazenGlazen]

Killsteven wrote...

Ok Mr.BlazenGlazen I'll give Perspective a read. After all I've read good things about it.

I've also though about trying Razor's Edge but I hear that one is really depressing,so i'm still thinking about that one.

Just letting you know, perspective can get depressing at times. Not as depressing as razor's edge, but it's dark. That's the point, after a huge galactic war like that, things will seem grim in the short run.

[Apathy1989]

Nozzivix wrote...

http://www.fanfictio...Effect_Pathways 

Just read this. Pretty strange dejavu going on, but I like it. 

[Killsteven]

Oh I'm not saying I don't like Dark in my stories,I just keep hearing Razor's Edge Requiem does it to the point were its not cool any more its just...well depressing... in the bad way.
But i'll check out the first two Razor's Edge Fics. Those I hearing are really good.
This is the most fan fictions i've ever read like this...I guess Talimancers tug a certain heartstring.

Modifié par Killsteven, 18 août 2012 - 08:58 .

[TheWerdna]

Apathy1989 wrote...

Nozzivix wrote...

http://www.fanfictio...Effect_Pathways 

Just read this. Pretty strange dejavu going on, but I like it. 

So someone has noticed that... uhhh ignore any simularites to parts of certain other Mass Effect games

The plots will begin to move away from the very ME1-like start....eventually.

Modifié par TheWerdna, 18 août 2012 - 09:03 .

[Mr.BlazenGlazen]

Killsteven wrote...

Oh I'm not saying I don't like Dark in my stories,I just keep hearing Razor's Edge Requiem does it to the point were its not cool any more its just...well depressing... in the bad way.
But i'll check out the first two Razor's Edge Fics. Those I hearing are really good.
This is the most fan fictions i've ever read like this...I guess Talimancers tug a certain heartstring.

Yeah, in a way it is a bit much. I'm still following it though, because I'm sure he isn't going to always make it depressing. 

For my fic, bioware told me that I should come up with my own conclusion. I'm not only doing that, but I'm expanding the story from my Shepard's point of view. But of course, readers can adopt parts of the story as their own canon. 

[18 Brains]

TheWerdna wrote...
So someone has noticed that... uhhh ignore any simularites to parts of certain other Mass Effect games

The plots will begin to move away from the very ME1-like start....eventually.

Hey, some similarities to ME1 are just fine.  It is a great game, after all.

For whatever reason, I felt the need to try to redo the trilogy for my fan-fic, and having already written 10,000 odd words for the fic I can say that it is a little difficult to change up the dialogue between the characters, specifically with staged interactions as with the Council.  Also, giving Ashley and Kaidan more personality is proving to be a challenge, but a welcome one.

Finally, a question.  What would you guys think of Tali being romanced in ME1?

*Edit: And not necessarily a "sex scene," but a slow build to something more than friendship.

Modifié par 18 Brains, 18 août 2012 - 09:24 .

[Tom80]

Killsteven wrote...

Oh I'm not saying I don't like Dark in my stories,I just keep hearing Razor's Edge Requiem does it to the point were its not cool any more its just...well depressing... in the bad way.

..........

The way Shep is staying away, pushing away Tali........is sad......

[Killsteven]

Mr.BlazenGlazen wrote...
I'm not only doing that, but I'm expanding the story from my Shepard's point of view. But of course, readers can adopt parts of the story as their own canon. 

See,I like that you do that. Thats why I like BrysonC's You came back to me more than Wings of Fire,Its easier me to imagine my Shepard his story. But again i'm not saying Wings of Fire is bad, its very well written and it brought me to this forum were I found EVEN MORE stuff to read.


@Tom80 Yeah I hear thats the saddest part...even thinking about what it might hold it...

Modifié par Killsteven, 18 août 2012 - 09:32 .

[Mr.BlazenGlazen]

Killsteven wrote...

Mr.BlazenGlazen wrote...
I'm not only doing that, but I'm expanding the story from my Shepard's point of view. But of course, readers can adopt parts of the story as their own canon. 

See,I like that you do that. Thats why I like BrysonC's You came back to me more than Wings of Fire,Its easier me to imagine my Shepard his story. But again i'm not saying Wings of Fire is bad, its very well written and it brought me to this forum were I found EVEN MORE stuff to read.

Well, Wings of Fire actually does that too, along with You Came Back to Me. Those two take the uplifting route. My story does that too, sort of. But it's in a grim setting. Cerberus is still out to get him, and there are people who use Shepard as a scapegoat to all the bad things that happened to them. In my opinion, that sort of seems like a more realistic outcome.

[Killsteven]

DON'T SPOIL YOUR STORY FOR ME BlAZEN GlAZEN!! I'm going to read that.(I ment that in a positive tone so don't think I was being harsh)

Modifié par Killsteven, 18 août 2012 - 09:49 .

[Mr.BlazenGlazen]

Killsteven wrote...


DON'T SPOIL YOUR STORY FOR ME BlAZEN GlAZEN!! I'm going to read that.(I ment that in a positive tone so don't think I was being harsh)

Ah, alright. I'll just let you read for yourself then. 

[SnakeEyes]

Loves interests for ME:
ME1 - Liara (because she pretty much throws herself at you.)
ME2 - Tali
ME3 - Tali

Would romance anyone else, to be honest. And I have no desire to replay as a FemShep (since I've already Platinum'd ME3.)

[SilverEchidna]

18 Brains wrote...

TheWerdna wrote...
So someone has noticed that... uhhh ignore any simularites to parts of certain other Mass Effect games

The plots will begin to move away from the very ME1-like start....eventually.

Hey, some similarities to ME1 are just fine.  It is a great game, after all.

For whatever reason, I felt the need to try to redo the trilogy for my fan-fic, and having already written 10,000 odd words for the fic I can say that it is a little difficult to change up the dialogue between the characters, specifically with staged interactions as with the Council.  Also, giving Ashley and Kaidan more personality is proving to be a challenge, but a welcome one.

Finally, a question.  What would you guys think of Tali being romanced in ME1?

*Edit: And not necessarily a "sex scene," but a slow build to something more than friendship.

Maybe a slow build-up, but definitely not a romance. Remember, by quarian standards, Tali is still a kid

[Nozzivix]

for Manshep
-Pining for Tali
-Tali
-Tali

Femshep (renegade, started recently)
-Liara (to break her heart.)
-Garrus
-Garrus

[Killsteven]

Mr.BlazenGlazen wrote...

Killsteven wrote...


DON'T SPOIL YOUR STORY FOR ME BlAZEN GlAZEN!! I'm going to read that.(I ment that in a positive tone so don't think I was being harsh)

Ah, alright. I'll just let you read for yourself then. 

I read a few chapters earlier and stop cuz now i'm really bothered by the fact that I seem to be the only who shot the bottle during Garrus's Citadel date. Really,why does everyone think that line is so awsome.<_<

Also I like the way Tali and Shep's relationship goes from friends to lovers over the course of ME1-ME3

Modifié par Killsteven, 18 août 2012 - 10:09 .

[Nozzivix]

SilverEchidna wrote...

18 Brains wrote...

TheWerdna wrote...
So someone has noticed that... uhhh ignore any simularites to parts of certain other Mass Effect games

The plots will begin to move away from the very ME1-like start....eventually.

Hey, some similarities to ME1 are just fine.  It is a great game, after all.

For whatever reason, I felt the need to try to redo the trilogy for my fan-fic, and having already written 10,000 odd words for the fic I can say that it is a little difficult to change up the dialogue between the characters, specifically with staged interactions as with the Council.  Also, giving Ashley and Kaidan more personality is proving to be a challenge, but a welcome one.

Finally, a question.  What would you guys think of Tali being romanced in ME1?

*Edit: And not necessarily a "sex scene," but a slow build to something more than friendship.

Maybe a slow build-up, but definitely not a romance. Remember, by quarian standards, Tali is still a kid

Tali is 22. And a Pilgrimage isn't really a coming of age, the way they use it seems more like a 'Prove you were worth the 20 years of us raising your ass and wasting resources'

[Nozzivix]

Killsteven wrote...

Mr.BlazenGlazen wrote...

Killsteven wrote...


DON'T SPOIL YOUR STORY FOR ME BlAZEN GlAZEN!! I'm going to read that.(I ment that in a positive tone so don't think I was being harsh)

Ah, alright. I'll just let you read for yourself then. 

I read a few chapters earlier and stop cuz now i'm really bothered by the fact that I seem to be the only who shot the bottle during Garrus's Citadel date. Really,why does everyone think that line is so awsome.<_<

I'm Garrus Vakarian and THIS IS MY rectum.

 

[Mr.BlazenGlazen]

Killsteven wrote...

Mr.BlazenGlazen wrote...

Killsteven wrote...


DON'T SPOIL YOUR STORY FOR ME BlAZEN GlAZEN!! I'm going to read that.(I ment that in a positive tone so don't think I was being harsh)

Ah, alright. I'll just let you read for yourself then. 

I read a few chapters earlier and stop cuz now i'm really bothered by the fact that I seem to be the only who shot the bottle during Garrus's Citadel date. Really,why does everyone think that line is so awsome.<_<

Sorry to see that you didn't like it. 

[Killsteven]

Its not that Blazen Glazen i'm just pissed cuz it MAKES ME FEEL SO ALONE 

Modifié par Killsteven, 18 août 2012 - 10:23 .

[SilverEchidna]

Nozzivix wrote...

SilverEchidna wrote...

18 Brains wrote...

TheWerdna wrote...
So someone has noticed that... uhhh ignore any simularites to parts of certain other Mass Effect games

The plots will begin to move away from the very ME1-like start....eventually.

Hey, some similarities to ME1 are just fine.  It is a great game, after all.

For whatever reason, I felt the need to try to redo the trilogy for my fan-fic, and having already written 10,000 odd words for the fic I can say that it is a little difficult to change up the dialogue between the characters, specifically with staged interactions as with the Council.  Also, giving Ashley and Kaidan more personality is proving to be a challenge, but a welcome one.

Finally, a question.  What would you guys think of Tali being romanced in ME1?

*Edit: And not necessarily a "sex scene," but a slow build to something more than friendship.

Maybe a slow build-up, but definitely not a romance. Remember, by quarian standards, Tali is still a kid

Tali is 22. And a Pilgrimage isn't really a coming of age, the way they use it seems more like a 'Prove you were worth the 20 years of us raising your ass and wasting resources'

She may be 22, but remember what she said before the final push to the Conduit.
"Shepard, I backed you when I was just a kid on her Pilgrimage."

I also want to point out that when you bring Grunt to Wrex to talk with the latter about Grunt's odd behavior, Wrex answers that he's becoming a full adult. When the other squadmates comment, they point out their forms of puberty (humans: puberty, asari: maiden stage, etc.) and Tali answers that it seems like a Pilgrimage.

So as said, she may be 22, but she isn't a human, and the other races do have their forms of a coming of age.

EDIT: I wrote there instead of their. *mutters* Can't wait for school to start...

Modifié par SilverEchidna, 18 août 2012 - 10:33 .

[Bahoogasmif]

@killsteven, i think it's great you found a story that fits your shepard! since bioware forgot, each shep is different. but Wings Of Fire is just how i wouldve envisoned my own personal Shepards ending, and if other people like it along the way, the more the merrier!
and I certainly agree that "you came back to me" is a great story!

[Mr.BlazenGlazen]

Bahoogasmif wrote...

@killsteven, i think it's great you found a story that fits your shepard! since bioware forgot, each shep is different. but Wings Of Fire is just how i wouldve envisoned my own personal Shepards ending, and if other people like it along the way, the more the merrier!
and I certainly agree that "you came back to me" is a great story!

Ohmegerd Bahoogasmif is back from his hiatus! Quick, someone strap him to a computer keyboard and make him write more chapters!

[Killsteven]

Bahoogasmif wrote...

@killsteven, i think it's great you found a story that fits your shepard! since bioware forgot, each shep is different. but Wings Of Fire is just how i wouldve envisoned my own personal Shepards ending, and if other people like it along the way, the more the merrier!
and I certainly agree that "you came back to me" is a great story!

Oh I understand and again I'm not saying Wings of Fire isn't good, I like and I follow it as well. Hell, some of the things from Wings of Fire I've inserted into my head canon as well(Aria and Zaeed? thats awsome). Also Shepard refering to Tali as "Beautiful" and "Gorgeous" is something new to me(at least were I come from)but it is funny.
I look forward to Chapter 43.

Also I think You'd like to know Wings of Fire is the first fan fic i've EVER read all the way through

Modifié par Killsteven, 18 août 2012 - 11:06 .

[18 Brains]

SilverEchidna wrote...

*quotepyramidsnip*
She may be 22, but remember what she said before the final push to the Conduit.
"Shepard, I backed you when I was just a kid on her Pilgrimage."

I also want to point out that when you bring Grunt to Wrex to talk with the latter about Grunt's odd behavior, Wrex answers that he's becoming a full adult. When the other squadmates comment, they point out their forms of puberty (humans: puberty, asari: maiden stage, etc.) and Tali answers that it seems like a Pilgrimage.

So as said, she may be 22, but she isn't a human, and the other races do have their forms of a coming of age.

EDIT: I wrote there instead of their. *mutters* Can't wait for school to start...

I agree with you on that, and thanks for the feedback!  Personally I felt the ME1 romances were rushed as it was, anyway, and as Tali didn't really show her feelings for Shepard until ME2 (although it was shown that she had them in ME1), I was thinking of something similar, especially as she is still considered a "kid" until she completes her pilgrimage.

As for school starting, I'm about half and half.  I don't want to be taking 17 credits of chemistry, physics, and education courses, but it would be nice to get back into routine.

[Bahoogasmif]

sorry blazen, hiatus begins tomorrow and lasts all of next week. got some business to take care of, as i said.
and @killsteven, im honored you read mine all the way through.