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[Killsteven]

18 Brains wrote...

Bahoogasmif!  I might be thinking of including Tali's romance slightly early in my story, coming into fruition near the end (if the readers want it).  What do you think?

Hey uh, just my two cents on it but it would prob be ok with the fans. This all depends on how it excuted though. Remeber, its a slow build up so nothing too sudden. I think it would be pretty nice.

Modifié par Killsteven, 29 septembre 2012 - 02:04 .

[Killsteven]

Sorry double post.

Modifié par Killsteven, 29 septembre 2012 - 02:04 .

[TheWerdna]

18 Brains wrote...

Bahoogasmif!  I might be thinking of
including Tali's romance slightly early in my story, coming into
fruition near the end (if the readers want it).  What do you
think?

I am probably one of the few people who likes the idea that Tali is not romanceable untill ME2. To me, it makes it feel more natural, with Tali and Shepard having a longer period to build up to a relationship. Also, I do like the idea that Tali had feeling for Shepard (and perhaps him for her) for a long time, but did not act on them since she thought it would never work out. So when it finally does happen, after so long of watching, it is so much more powerful to me.

Even so, I will continue to read your story no matter which you pick.

Modifié par TheWerdna, 29 septembre 2012 - 02:05 .

[Killsteven]

Modifié par Killsteven, 29 septembre 2012 - 02:13 .

[TheWerdna]

Killsteven wrote...

That is a very excelent point, i did not think of that

[Bahoogasmif]

18 Brains wrote...

Bahoogasmif!  I might be thinking of including Tali's romance slightly early in my story, coming into fruition near the end (if the readers want it).  What do you think?

i think that making it obvious they like each other before ME2  is a great idea, but having them act on it should take longer. like wanting to be with each other and going out of their way to be in the presence of the other, but not in a relationship. brings the tension up dramatically. but thats just my feelings on it.

[Killsteven]

TheWerdna wrote...

Killsteven wrote...

That is a very excelent point, i did not think of that

Sorry I meant to edit but I hit quote instead. It's been a long day, getting tired so...

[18 Brains]

Bahoogasmif wrote...

i think that making it obvious they like each other before ME2  is a great idea, but having them act on it should take longer. like wanting to be with each other and going out of their way to be in the presence of the other, but not in a relationship. brings the tension up dramatically. but thats just my feelings on it.

That's the plan at the moment.  

Thanks guys for the input!

[Mr.BlazenGlazen]

I'm kind of conflicted on whether I should continue the tali fic or not. The ones I'm reading are just so good and satisfying compared to what I'm doing.

[18 Brains]

Mr.BlazenGlazen wrote...

I'm kind of conflicted on whether I should continue the tali fic or not. The ones I'm reading are just so good and satisfying compared to what I'm doing.

A valid concern.  After reading stories such as Razor's Edge and For We are Many, for example, I felt that what I would be writing would be inadequate, as I didn't feel I possessed the same skill at the craft as others have.  However, I do find enjoyment in writing, and while I feel pressured at times by giving myself a deadline for chapters (in trying to please any readers), I wouldn't have it any other way.

If you enjoy what you're doing, then don't get discouraged by others' works.  I enjoy your story, and I'm sure others do as well.  Take your time if you need it!

[Killsteven]

Mr.BlazenGlazen wrote...

I'm kind of conflicted on whether I should continue the tali fic or not. The ones I'm reading are just so good and satisfying compared to what I'm doing.

(gasp) Blazen noooo, don't leave me hangin'. Don't let that illusion get to you, you're doing great. Sure you aren't Bryson in the writing game but thats not shameful at all. Keep it up. For me at least. I was their when you started it and you shouldn't leave somthing like this unfinished.

[Terrorize69]

exelsis wrote...

 
Liara Aria pushed the now naked Tali down onto the water bed. The bed wobbled soothingly under Tali's body as she shifted her weight on it and let out a small giggle. She beckoned Liara Aria over to join her. As Liara Aria bent down to lay a tender kiss on Tali's warm cheek, she was surprised as tali fastened her fangs on her soft, blue neck. She let out a soft gasp before tali began to bite down, Tali's sharp fangs easily puncturing her skin, immediately drawing blood. Liara Aria, shocked and confused at this turn of events, attempted to push tali back down and escape, but was thwarted as tali used both her arms and legs to hold Liara Aria tight against her body, her powerful quarian legs preventing any movement from the asari, even to use her biotics. Tali bit deeper into the neck before her, finally able to sate her blood-thirst. As Liara Aria weakened from loss of blood, Tali's liquid feast dripping from her lips and down her elegant neck, she rolled Liara Aria onto her back, and began to gorge herself on blood as the naked asari's struggles became weaker and weaker.

Vampire tali feeds on all asari with equal efficiency, ruler of omega or not.

And then along comes Naomi Shepard, dressed in a tight leather catsuit, showing of her curves which are second to only Talis. She cracks her whip and licks her lips as she offers herself up to the blood sucking Quarian, pushing the dead asari's body of the water bed as she joins Tali. Naomi licks the excess blood of Talis lips and shares a deep passionate kiss..


 
Anywho lol, as to who'd I romance if not Tali, well I've started a romance with just about everyone lol apart from Jacob, Allers, Liara, Steve and Sam lol. Will romance Liara and Sam soon, not sure about the other 3.. May romance Jacob just so I can call him a bastard in ME3 lol

[BrysonC]

Mr.BlazenGlazen wrote...

I'm kind of conflicted on whether I should continue the tali fic or not. The ones I'm reading are just so good and satisfying compared to what I'm doing.

If you stop writing now, I will find you, and I will end you.

And by 'end you,' I am of course referring to delivering an impassioned pep talk.

EDIT: And also, thanks to everyone for the kind words about my fic.

Modifié par BrysonC, 29 septembre 2012 - 01:38 .

[Lokiwithrope]

http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20120424153039/masseffect/fr/images/b/b7/Tali'Zorah.jpg

Modifié par Lokiwithrope, 29 septembre 2012 - 01:45 .

[zapphoman24]

About the "if you couldn't romance Tali question", my Shepard would romance Jack.

[TheWerdna]

Mr.BlazenGlazen wrote...

I'm kind of conflicted on whether I should continue the tali fic or not. The ones I'm reading are just so good and satisfying compared to what I'm doing.

Nooo, your story is awsome, dom't end it.

[exelsis]

Someone dumped a bunch more tali dketches on DA.

[ABN Tali Fan]

Mr.BlazenGlazen wrote...

I'm kind of conflicted on whether I should continue the tali fic or not. The ones I'm reading are just so good and satisfying compared to what I'm doing.

Keep it going man. It's a lot better then your giving yourself credit for. Tali Agrees.

[18 Brains]

exelsis wrote...

Someone dumped a bunch more tali dketches on DA.

Ha, I like how you can see her personality and confidence develop through her posture.  Great work on the artist's part!

[Tom80]

zapphoman24 wrote...

About the "if you couldn't romance Tali question", my Shepard would romance Jack.

Likely....................Liara ?

[ABN Tali Fan]

 ^ how about Xen.

[Nozzivix]

Kasumi.

[BrysonC]

Calinstel wrote...

zapphoman24 wrote...

About the "if you couldn't romance Tali question", my Shepard would romance Jack.

Not able to romance Tali?
Would there even be a reason to play the game?

Would there be a reason to live? 

[exelsis]

BrysonC wrote...

Calinstel wrote...

zapphoman24 wrote...
About the "if you couldn't romance Tali question", my Shepard would romance Jack.

Not able to romance Tali?
Would there even be a reason to play the game?

Would there be a reason to live? 

No reason to play, but reason to live. Just ask yourself, what would tali'zorah do. She'd go out and kick butt, that's what.