Just wished to share the conversation lines with Thane as found in the last leaked script. I know some of you probably read.
I read this script soon after it got out but at the time I was pretty much disppointed about it.
Seeing what we got I am still baffled over that fact that I like what was in the script a lot better. Lack of choice to decide Thane's fate after all the time being led on with tidbits of tweet posts and hints here and there, is still something I can't easily forgive.
I think it'll be rather obvious which lines of the script apply to romanced Thane.
SCRIPT: Context: Thane was supposed to assassinate Udina. There is another version of the leaked script where he can actually survive the coup and another conversation in the hospital (with Kolyat present) where he doesn't die either - or so it would see since the conversation was suddenly cut off.
Thane: {With a little difficulty.] Congratulations are in order. The Council has not been this united since... uhh.{Thane sinks to his knees. Shepard kneels by him.}
Shepard: What's wrong?
Thane:Kepral's. It's aggravated by... exertion.
Thane: I'm sorry, siha. I ran all the way here... couldn't let you fail. Thought I was being a hero.
I'm sorry, Shepard. I ran across the Presidium to... to make it here in time. Tried a little heroism.
Shepard:It's all right. Just catch your breath.
Thane:Doubtful. Oxygen transfer proteins aren't working. Your equivalent would be hemo-- {A coughing fit wracks Thane. Shepard helps out so he's lying in Shepard's arms.}--hemoglobin. Can't get oxygen from the air. Brain is starving.
Shepard:I'll get some medical help.
Thane:[Shakes head.] Don't go.
Shepard: Do you want me to see if I can find Kolyat for you?
Thane:No. But I have taken lives tonight to reach you. There is something I must do.
Shepard: Did I give you permission to die on me?
Thane: Don't make me laugh... breathing... is hard enough.
Shepard:You ran here in your condition? That's... that's suicide.
Thane:[CINEDESIGN: Small smile.] Last time we tried, it worked out. More importantly, I couldn't let you fail.{A coughing fit wracks Thane. Shepard helps out so he's lying in Shepard's arms.}Sorry. Shouldn't talk. Consumes more oxygen.
Shepard:I'll get some medical help.
Thane:I know all the experts on the Citadel. Ran diagnostics two weeks ago. I asked what they recommended at this late stage.They said, "spend time with your family."
Shepard:Looks like I'm all you've got.
Thane: I can think of no one better, siha.Your memory is not like mine, but perhaps you can keep me in it for a little while.
- Shepard: You're not an easy person to forget, Thane.
Thane:The moment will be soon. [Coughing fit.] I shouldn't have run. You did not even need me.
Shepard: You fought for something noble, Thane. As last moments go, it's not a bad one.
Thane:No... there is one I would prefer.[Thane memory flashback.] Fist slams the table. Shame at my cowardice, my fear. Atonement means nothing.Her hand touches mine. Her lips part and I tremble. "Thane, be alive with me tonight."
[His body relaxes. Shepard wipes her eyes. Maybe we see a tear, maybe we don't. The music tells us all we need to know.]
Shepard: Goodbye, Thane. Meet you across the sea.
- Shepard:For someone who just saved the Citadel Council, you seem to think people will forget you pretty fast.
Thane:Fame was the last thing on my mind. You were the first. Without you... well.
Shepard: You fought for something noble, Thane. As last moments go, it's not a bad one.
Thane: I am at peace with that, Commander.There is something I must do before it gets worse. I must-- [Coughing fit.]Kalahira, mistress of inscrutable depths, I ask forgiveness. Kalahira, whose waves wear down stone and sand--{Thane goes into another coughing fit.}
Shepard: Kalahira, wash the sins from this worshipper and set him on the distant shore of the infinite spirit.
Thane: How did you know that?
Shepard: I had to say something if you didn't come back from Omega-4. I had the extranet and a couple nights to think.
Thane:[Coughs.] Say it for me.
Shepard:Kalahira, this one's heart is pure but beset by wickedness and contention.Guide him to where the traveler never tires, the lover never leaves, the hungry never starve. Guide him, Kalahira, and he will be a companion to you as he was to me.
{Thane's body relaxes. Shepard closes his eyes. The music tells us all we need to know.}
{We pan up and out and fade to black.}
Shepard:Goodbye, Thane.
EDIT: This is not the only conversation in the script. Just to let you guys know. Hope I'll find the rest on my pc soon and share it with you, if you'd all like that. Just let me know.
Modifié par Aello89, 12 mars 2012 - 09:44 .