Modifié par RShara, 08 avril 2012 - 04:30 .
Modifié par RShara, 08 avril 2012 - 04:30 .
Aislinn Trista wrote...
No porn in my fanfics, just sappy romantic stuff. XD To be honest, I can't bring myself to write anything dirty and publish it on the internet. Even so, I've tried before and I usually get writers block when it comes to sexytimez.
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utaker1988 wrote...
A Family Matter
Shep: I don't know what to do, he's been like this since playing that game.
Kolyat: I get my father back and now I have to watch him fall apart.
Shep: He's obsessed, is there anything you can do to help him?
Kolyat: Like what? I've tried to talk to him but...nevermind.
Shep: But what?
Kolyat: Trust me Shepard, you don't want to know.
Shep: Yes I do. I care about him, I love him, I want my Thane back.
Kolyat: (groans) Don't remind me.
Shep: I'm lost.
Kolyat: I go in there to talk to him about everything. I try to make him happy. I talk about my day, he's happy then starts to mope. I bring you up and well....
Shep: Do you still hate me? Are you still thinking I'm replacing your mother? I am not and I would never.
Kolyat: Yeah I know and I don't hate you but, oh I can't do this.
Shep: I need to know, it could help your father.
Kolyat: No, it won't help him but when he talks about you, he slips into memory sometimes. (look of terror spreads across his face)
Shep: Are you ok?
Kolyat: I get a very detailed and blow by blow account of what you two do when you are alone. I know more about you than I should.
Shep: Oh dear, I'm sorry.
Kolyat: Not your fault but there are things I should never know.
Shep: (reaches out to hug Kolyat)
Thane: Oh this is how it is? BW kills me off and you go gunning for my son.
Shep: WTF??? Are you serious?
Kolyat: Dad, it is not like that. Gross.
Shep: I am gross?
Kolyat: That is not what I meant. I mean you are old....no wait, you are with my Dad.
Thane: So you are saying that if she were not old and with me that you'd go for her?
Kolyat: NOOOOOOO, please you have misunderstood.
Shep: I am old and gross, wonderful
Thane: You are anything but old and gross Siha. You are....(slips into memory) hand runs over my thigh, tongue flicking across my chest, I moan in pleasure, moving my hand upon her....
Kolyat: Oh FFS!! I am getting the hell out of here!!!!
Shep:
Thane: (snaps back) Where did Kolyat go?
Shep: You slipped into what we did last week.
Thane: Oh that time, did he stick around for the whole thing (worried)
Shep: No, he didn't stick around long enough to know it was on his bed.
Kolyat: I heard that!! (loud explosion)
Shep: Huh?
Thane: It appears he has set his bed on fire.
Shep: Crap.
Thane: Nothing compared to how hot we got it. But it's close.
Kolyat: (runs out the door screaming) There isn't enough bleach in the galaxy!!!!!!!!
No, it's not. It's Seryna, the asari who pointed Thane in the direction of Nassana Dantius and later drives Shepard to the Dantium Towers.RShara wrote...
It's Miranda's contact asari from her loyalty mission
utaker1988 wrote...
A Family Matter
Shep: I don't know what to do, he's been like this since playing that game.
Kolyat: I get my father back and now I have to watch him fall apart.
Shep: He's obsessed, is there anything you can do to help him?
Kolyat: Like what? I've tried to talk to him but...nevermind.
Shep: But what?
Kolyat: Trust me Shepard, you don't want to know.
Shep: Yes I do. I care about him, I love him, I want my Thane back.
Kolyat: (groans) Don't remind me.
Shep: I'm lost.
Kolyat: I go in there to talk to him about everything. I try to make him happy. I talk about my day, he's happy then starts to mope. I bring you up and well....
Shep: Do you still hate me? Are you still thinking I'm replacing your mother? I am not and I would never.
Kolyat: Yeah I know and I don't hate you but, oh I can't do this.
Shep: I need to know, it could help your father.
Kolyat: No, it won't help him but when he talks about you, he slips into memory sometimes. (look of terror spreads across his face)
Shep: Are you ok?
Kolyat: I get a very detailed and blow by blow account of what you two do when you are alone. I know more about you than I should.
Shep: Oh dear, I'm sorry.
Kolyat: Not your fault but there are things I should never know.
Shep: (reaches out to hug Kolyat)
Thane: Oh this is how it is? BW kills me off and you go gunning for my son.
Shep: WTF??? Are you serious?
Kolyat: Dad, it is not like that. Gross.
Shep: I am gross?
Kolyat: That is not what I meant. I mean you are old....no wait, you are with my Dad.
Thane: So you are saying that if she were not old and with me that you'd go for her?
Kolyat: NOOOOOOO, please you have misunderstood.
Shep: I am old and gross, wonderful
Thane: You are anything but old and gross Siha. You are....(slips into memory) hand runs over my thigh, tongue flicking across my chest, I moan in pleasure, moving my hand upon her....
Kolyat: Oh FFS!! I am getting the hell out of here!!!!
Shep:
Thane: (snaps back) Where did Kolyat go?
Shep: You slipped into what we did last week.
Thane: Oh that time, did he stick around for the whole thing (worried)
Shep: No, he didn't stick around long enough to know it was on his bed.
Kolyat: I heard that!! (loud explosion)
Shep: Huh?
Thane: It appears he has set his bed on fire.
Shep: Crap.
Thane: Nothing compared to how hot we got it. But it's close.
Kolyat: (runs out the door screaming) There isn't enough bleach in the galaxy!!!!!!!!
utaker1988 wrote...
A Family Matter
Shep: I don't know what to do, he's been like this since playing that game.
Kolyat: I get my father back and now I have to watch him fall apart.
Shep: He's obsessed, is there anything you can do to help him?
Kolyat: Like what? I've tried to talk to him but...nevermind.
Shep: But what?
Kolyat: Trust me Shepard, you don't want to know.
Shep: Yes I do. I care about him, I love him, I want my Thane back.
Kolyat: (groans) Don't remind me.
Shep: I'm lost.
Kolyat: I go in there to talk to him about everything. I try to make him happy. I talk about my day, he's happy then starts to mope. I bring you up and well....
Shep: Do you still hate me? Are you still thinking I'm replacing your mother? I am not and I would never.
Kolyat: Yeah I know and I don't hate you but, oh I can't do this.
Shep: I need to know, it could help your father.
Kolyat: No, it won't help him but when he talks about you, he slips into memory sometimes. (look of terror spreads across his face)
Shep: Are you ok?
Kolyat: I get a very detailed and blow by blow account of what you two do when you are alone. I know more about you than I should.
Shep: Oh dear, I'm sorry.
Kolyat: Not your fault but there are things I should never know.
Shep: (reaches out to hug Kolyat)
Thane: Oh this is how it is? BW kills me off and you go gunning for my son.
Shep: WTF??? Are you serious?
Kolyat: Dad, it is not like that. Gross.
Shep: I am gross?
Kolyat: That is not what I meant. I mean you are old....no wait, you are with my Dad.
Thane: So you are saying that if she were not old and with me that you'd go for her?
Kolyat: NOOOOOOO, please you have misunderstood.
Shep: I am old and gross, wonderful
Thane: You are anything but old and gross Siha. You are....(slips into memory) hand runs over my thigh, tongue flicking across my chest, I moan in pleasure, moving my hand upon her....
Kolyat: Oh FFS!! I am getting the hell out of here!!!!
Shep:
Thane: (snaps back) Where did Kolyat go?
Shep: You slipped into what we did last week.
Thane: Oh that time, did he stick around for the whole thing (worried)
Shep: No, he didn't stick around long enough to know it was on his bed.
Kolyat: I heard that!! (loud explosion)
Shep: Huh?
Thane: It appears he has set his bed on fire.
Shep: Crap.
Thane: Nothing compared to how hot we got it. But it's close.
Kolyat: (runs out the door screaming) There isn't enough bleach in the galaxy!!!!!!!!
Modifié par stwu, 08 avril 2012 - 04:04 .
MisterJB wrote...
No, it's not. It's Seryna, the asari who pointed Thane in the direction of Nassana Dantius and later drives Shepard to the Dantium Towers.RShara wrote...
It's Miranda's contact asari from her loyalty mission
MisterJB wrote...
No, it's not. It's Seryna, the asari who pointed Thane in the direction of Nassana Dantius and later drives Shepard to the Dantium Towers.RShara wrote...
It's Miranda's contact asari from her loyalty mission
Modifié par RShara, 08 avril 2012 - 06:10 .
utaker1988 wrote...
A Family Matter
Shep: I don't know what to do, he's been like this since playing that game.
Kolyat: I get my father back and now I have to watch him fall apart.
Shep: He's obsessed, is there anything you can do to help him?
Kolyat: Like what? I've tried to talk to him but...nevermind.
Shep: But what?
Kolyat: Trust me Shepard, you don't want to know.
Shep: Yes I do. I care about him, I love him, I want my Thane back.
Kolyat: (groans) Don't remind me.
Shep: I'm lost.
Kolyat: I go in there to talk to him about everything. I try to make him happy. I talk about my day, he's happy then starts to mope. I bring you up and well....
Shep: Do you still hate me? Are you still thinking I'm replacing your mother? I am not and I would never.
Kolyat: Yeah I know and I don't hate you but, oh I can't do this.
Shep: I need to know, it could help your father.
Kolyat: No, it won't help him but when he talks about you, he slips into memory sometimes. (look of terror spreads across his face)
Shep: Are you ok?
Kolyat: I get a very detailed and blow by blow account of what you two do when you are alone. I know more about you than I should.
Shep: Oh dear, I'm sorry.
Kolyat: Not your fault but there are things I should never know.
Shep: (reaches out to hug Kolyat)
Thane: Oh this is how it is? BW kills me off and you go gunning for my son.
Shep: WTF??? Are you serious?
Kolyat: Dad, it is not like that. Gross.
Shep: I am gross?
Kolyat: That is not what I meant. I mean you are old....no wait, you are with my Dad.
Thane: So you are saying that if she were not old and with me that you'd go for her?
Kolyat: NOOOOOOO, please you have misunderstood.
Shep: I am old and gross, wonderful
Thane: You are anything but old and gross Siha. You are....(slips into memory) hand runs over my thigh, tongue flicking across my chest, I moan in pleasure, moving my hand upon her....
Kolyat: Oh FFS!! I am getting the hell out of here!!!!
Shep:
Thane: (snaps back) Where did Kolyat go?
Shep: You slipped into what we did last week.
Thane: Oh that time, did he stick around for the whole thing (worried)
Shep: No, he didn't stick around long enough to know it was on his bed.
Kolyat: I heard that!! (loud explosion)
Shep: Huh?
Thane: It appears he has set his bed on fire.
Shep: Crap.
Thane: Nothing compared to how hot we got it. But it's close.
Kolyat: (runs out the door screaming) There isn't enough bleach in the galaxy!!!!!!!!
LMFAO on Kolyat's bed?! FOR SHAME!sunnie7699 wrote...
utaker1988 wrote...
A Family Matter
Shep: I don't know what to do, he's been like this since playing that game.
Kolyat: I get my father back and now I have to watch him fall apart.
Shep: He's obsessed, is there anything you can do to help him?
Kolyat: Like what? I've tried to talk to him but...nevermind.
Shep: But what?
Kolyat: Trust me Shepard, you don't want to know.
Shep: Yes I do. I care about him, I love him, I want my Thane back.
Kolyat: (groans) Don't remind me.
Shep: I'm lost.
Kolyat: I go in there to talk to him about everything. I try to make him happy. I talk about my day, he's happy then starts to mope. I bring you up and well....
Shep: Do you still hate me? Are you still thinking I'm replacing your mother? I am not and I would never.
Kolyat: Yeah I know and I don't hate you but, oh I can't do this.
Shep: I need to know, it could help your father.
Kolyat: No, it won't help him but when he talks about you, he slips into memory sometimes. (look of terror spreads across his face)
Shep: Are you ok?
Kolyat: I get a very detailed and blow by blow account of what you two do when you are alone. I know more about you than I should.
Shep: Oh dear, I'm sorry.
Kolyat: Not your fault but there are things I should never know.
Shep: (reaches out to hug Kolyat)
Thane: Oh this is how it is? BW kills me off and you go gunning for my son.
Shep: WTF??? Are you serious?
Kolyat: Dad, it is not like that. Gross.
Shep: I am gross?
Kolyat: That is not what I meant. I mean you are old....no wait, you are with my Dad.
Thane: So you are saying that if she were not old and with me that you'd go for her?
Kolyat: NOOOOOOO, please you have misunderstood.
Shep: I am old and gross, wonderful
Thane: You are anything but old and gross Siha. You are....(slips into memory) hand runs over my thigh, tongue flicking across my chest, I moan in pleasure, moving my hand upon her....
Kolyat: Oh FFS!! I am getting the hell out of here!!!!
Shep:
Thane: (snaps back) Where did Kolyat go?
Shep: You slipped into what we did last week.
Thane: Oh that time, did he stick around for the whole thing (worried)
Shep: No, he didn't stick around long enough to know it was on his bed.
Kolyat: I heard that!! (loud explosion)
Shep: Huh?
Thane: It appears he has set his bed on fire.
Shep: Crap.
Thane: Nothing compared to how hot we got it. But it's close.
Kolyat: (runs out the door screaming) There isn't enough bleach in the galaxy!!!!!!!!
So brilliant <3<3
Aislinn Trista wrote...
JECW wrote...
Are you still doing your fanfic?
Yeah, I've just been busy with all this protest stuff, art, writing that monstrous letter for PAX...
I think I need to play ME2 again to kickstart my muses, which I'm planning to do.
As for sexy fanfiction, it's not that I don't like it. I've read many that I adore. I believe it's more so that it has to fit into my story. My Shepard is a Paragon, quite reserved and hesitant about even beginning a relationship (at least so far in my series). She wants to get to know Thane more as a person, unravel the mystery behind him. The attraction is definitely there, but I want to build and deepen the relationship over the course of several stories.
When I do write love scenes, I'd like to plan them out carefully and ensure they're appropriate. I tend to focus on emotion and dialogue more than anything else in my writing.
So yes, I will be writing love scenes. However, I'm gonna try and keep it tasteful. Mostly.:innocent:
mayrabgood wrote...
I found this picture in the old Thane fanclub thread....
Me like it very much
utaker1988 wrote...
A Family Matter
Shep: I don't know what to do, he's been like this since playing that game.
Kolyat: I get my father back and now I have to watch him fall apart.
Shep: He's obsessed, is there anything you can do to help him?
Kolyat: Like what? I've tried to talk to him but...nevermind.
Shep: But what?
Kolyat: Trust me Shepard, you don't want to know.
Shep: Yes I do. I care about him, I love him, I want my Thane back.
Kolyat: (groans) Don't remind me.
Shep: I'm lost.
Kolyat: I go in there to talk to him about everything. I try to make him happy. I talk about my day, he's happy then starts to mope. I bring you up and well....
Shep: Do you still hate me? Are you still thinking I'm replacing your mother? I am not and I would never.
Kolyat: Yeah I know and I don't hate you but, oh I can't do this.
Shep: I need to know, it could help your father.
Kolyat: No, it won't help him but when he talks about you, he slips into memory sometimes. (look of terror spreads across his face)
Shep: Are you ok?
Kolyat: I get a very detailed and blow by blow account of what you two do when you are alone. I know more about you than I should.
Shep: Oh dear, I'm sorry.
Kolyat: Not your fault but there are things I should never know.
Shep: (reaches out to hug Kolyat)
Thane: Oh this is how it is? BW kills me off and you go gunning for my son.
Shep: WTF??? Are you serious?
Kolyat: Dad, it is not like that. Gross.
Shep: I am gross?
Kolyat: That is not what I meant. I mean you are old....no wait, you are with my Dad.
Thane: So you are saying that if she were not old and with me that you'd go for her?
Kolyat: NOOOOOOO, please you have misunderstood.
Shep: I am old and gross, wonderful
Thane: You are anything but old and gross Siha. You are....(slips into memory) hand runs over my thigh, tongue flicking across my chest, I moan in pleasure, moving my hand upon her....
Kolyat: Oh FFS!! I am getting the hell out of here!!!!
Shep:
Thane: (snaps back) Where did Kolyat go?
Shep: You slipped into what we did last week.
Thane: Oh that time, did he stick around for the whole thing (worried)
Shep: No, he didn't stick around long enough to know it was on his bed.
Kolyat: I heard that!! (loud explosion)
Shep: Huh?
Thane: It appears he has set his bed on fire.
Shep: Crap.
Thane: Nothing compared to how hot we got it. But it's close.
Kolyat: (runs out the door screaming) There isn't enough bleach in the galaxy!!!!!!!!
utaker1988 wrote...
A Family Matter
Shep: I don't know what to do, he's been like this since playing that game.
Kolyat: I get my father back and now I have to watch him fall apart.
Shep: He's obsessed, is there anything you can do to help him?
Kolyat: Like what? I've tried to talk to him but...nevermind.
Shep: But what?
Kolyat: Trust me Shepard, you don't want to know.
Shep: Yes I do. I care about him, I love him, I want my Thane back.
Kolyat: (groans) Don't remind me.
Shep: I'm lost.
Kolyat: I go in there to talk to him about everything. I try to make him happy. I talk about my day, he's happy then starts to mope. I bring you up and well....
Shep: Do you still hate me? Are you still thinking I'm replacing your mother? I am not and I would never.
Kolyat: Yeah I know and I don't hate you but, oh I can't do this.
Shep: I need to know, it could help your father.
Kolyat: No, it won't help him but when he talks about you, he slips into memory sometimes. (look of terror spreads across his face)
Shep: Are you ok?
Kolyat: I get a very detailed and blow by blow account of what you two do when you are alone. I know more about you than I should.
Shep: Oh dear, I'm sorry.
Kolyat: Not your fault but there are things I should never know.
Shep: (reaches out to hug Kolyat)
Thane: Oh this is how it is? BW kills me off and you go gunning for my son.
Shep: WTF??? Are you serious?
Kolyat: Dad, it is not like that. Gross.
Shep: I am gross?
Kolyat: That is not what I meant. I mean you are old....no wait, you are with my Dad.
Thane: So you are saying that if she were not old and with me that you'd go for her?
Kolyat: NOOOOOOO, please you have misunderstood.
Shep: I am old and gross, wonderful
Thane: You are anything but old and gross Siha. You are....(slips into memory) hand runs over my thigh, tongue flicking across my chest, I moan in pleasure, moving my hand upon her....
Kolyat: Oh FFS!! I am getting the hell out of here!!!!
Shep:
Thane: (snaps back) Where did Kolyat go?
Shep: You slipped into what we did last week.
Thane: Oh that time, did he stick around for the whole thing (worried)
Shep: No, he didn't stick around long enough to know it was on his bed.
Kolyat: I heard that!! (loud explosion)
Shep: Huh?
Thane: It appears he has set his bed on fire.
Shep: Crap.
Thane: Nothing compared to how hot we got it. But it's close.
Kolyat: (runs out the door screaming) There isn't enough bleach in the galaxy!!!!!!!!
Jenlocks wrote...
I worry with the "new" ending dlc that they will forget Thane again
I wonder if they will even think about him for that...since they were horrible monsters to him.
I want Thane cure/romance option AND ending love with him. That seems like a lot to ask
*sigh*
Just want fair LI treatment...Shepard is lonely.
Don't forget ME2 LI's in "new" ending dlc..Thane <3 give him back to us.
Modifié par Cosmochyck, 08 avril 2012 - 02:15 .
Jenlocks wrote...
I worry with the "new" ending dlc that they will forget Thane again
I wonder if they will even think about him for that...since they were horrible monsters to him.
I want Thane cure/romance option AND ending love with him. That seems like a lot to ask
*sigh*
Just want fair LI treatment...Shepard is lonely.
Don't forget ME2 LI's in "new" ending dlc..Thane <3 give him back to us.
Cosmochyck wrote...
Jenlocks wrote...
I worry with the "new" ending dlc that they will forget Thane again
I wonder if they will even think about him for that...since they were horrible monsters to him.
I want Thane cure/romance option AND ending love with him. That seems like a lot to ask
*sigh*
Just want fair LI treatment...Shepard is lonely.
Don't forget ME2 LI's in "new" ending dlc..Thane <3 give him back to us.
I'm not sold on this "new" content for the endings. Considering it's all cinematics and cut scenes, I feel that it really isn't going to change or add anything for me. I'm thinking more like a "better explanation" to the endings then fundamentally changing anything.
PS - Not sure how reliable but found a few things on the interwebs that said that Jennifer Hale hasn't recorded any new dialogue, so can't imagine the "new" endings are great.
Modifié par Jenlocks, 08 avril 2012 - 03:10 .
Visii wrote...
We gathered 130 letters and art of the LI's from fans all over the world over the course of six days and turned it into a 200 page book. We presented it to the BioWare team at PAX, and they have promised to go through it.
Now, a digital edition of The Book, the very same book that is in the DEV's hands, can be yours.
http://k003.kiwi6.co...q2/the_book.pdf
Alternatively, http://kiwi6.com/file/0f67f2raq2.
Thanks for the support everyone! Keep up the questions about the LI's on Twitter and Facebook! Keep up the questions about The Book until we get some feedback on our feedback! And hang around, 'cause we're not done just yet!
Jenlocks wrote...
I worry with the "new" ending dlc that they will forget Thane again
I wonder if they will even think about him for that...since they were horrible monsters to him.
I want Thane cure/romance option AND ending love with him. That seems like a lot to ask
*sigh*
Just want fair LI treatment...Shepard is lonely.
Don't forget ME2 LI's in "new" ending dlc..Thane <3 give him back to us.
Modifié par JECW, 08 avril 2012 - 06:32 .