Golden Owl wrote...
Suprisingly not as many as would be thought....I spoke with a great many people before I started, concerned about how to simplify the text and was quickly advised by all not to....so the text remains fairly sophisticated, having really just reduced the number of more complex words. And I know the story type well that I wanted to convey, was already quite familier with it.
I am looking forward to your next installment Cricket...is it going to be related to the narrative you have already posted? An extension of some sort?
That's interesting. What ages are you writing for? I know I always appreciated material that was more complex and themes that were more mature when I was younger.
As for the next short, no it won't be related. The stuff I have now is meant to be a series of unrelated short stories that show Kasumi and Shepard but from an "outer" perspective. Functionally I'd like it to work like the Animatrix- unrelated scenes, possibly with different styles that all show off a different aspect of their common subject matter.
It's really an excercise in exploring the characters. I feel like I need to know Kasumi more before I write her in some epic yarn and these tangential encounters help me pin her character down a lot. I just hope it works to keep readers interested as well. It probably won't work if you're expecting plot continuity. But I hope readers will like what they see in terms of style and the character itself.
Golden Owl wrote...
Hey Cricket....whats your disturbing thought about Kasumi?
Ah... well I probably won't be making any friends here with this one. But it's been tugging at the back of my mind since I thought of it.
Basically I was having a discussion on here (on another thread) that turned to Kasumi, and more specifically Kasumi-Jacob. I'm of the opinion that it's naught but a crush, a distraction to help her deal with the loss of Keiji and (at least in my playthrough) the loss of the last bit of him, the graybox. But the other person pointed out the haikus and the implied stalking, evidence that tends to contradict the "simple crush" theory. Anyway to get to the point, I started thinking what if Kasumi has one of those obsessive disorders? Up to now it's pretty much been assumed that she's the most stable squadmate or at least the one with the least baggage. But, she can't let go of Keiji, she stalks someone she barely knows and writes poetry about them, she willingly steers towards a confrontation with Hock as a result of the former...
I don't like this theory and I'm fighting against it. But it keeps poking at me. What if Kasumi is an emotionally unstable obssessive-type? I don't like this at all:unsure: