BubbleSauce wrote...
Read it all, drawing is a little shaky at parts but it's mostly pretty good, some of the dialogue is fun however a lot of it is lifted straight from mass effect 2, which is kind of missing the point of a fan fic. I had fun reading it though. The line that stood out most to me, namely because it had me laughing for about five minutes was "Lawson! Move that genetically perfect ass over here and do something useful!"
Some lines were taken from ME2 itself, but I think the author did that as a "nod" towards the awesome game.
Most of the dialogue still is fan fic, but in Garrus and FemShep "personality framework" and that makes their dialogue in the comic feel like them, so I consider it a very good balance.
If you ask me, I hope things simillar to those in this comic come up in ME3, like Garus showing, that for him FemShep is is a lot more than just "one time blowing off steam thing" and seeks for something long-term witht her. Anyway, we'll see what BioWare will come up with, since romances are big parts of fan community requests to the developer and - concerning ME3 - he seems to be VERY listening and adhearing to almost all of those requests already.
Modifié par LisuPL, 01 juillet 2011 - 12:37 .