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[gearseffect]

Yes I support this I will be taking part in this tomorrow too.

Also I'm expecting that by the end of today next chapter to Breaking Points will be finished and up.

I'm in a bit of a pickle on how to handle the next chapter to Awakening, with things I'd like to take care of in it. Given it's the Chapter I've been planing to have Samara meditating/reflecting on events, mainly how she meet her bond mate, (still don't got a name for her), and the loss of her too.

trying to write it the way I'd like to is proving much harder than I'd have liked, dang it Samara why do we have so little to off of to write Samara the person, with feelings and emotions. Samara the Mother, Samara the lover, Samara the widow.

Anyway I'd like to know what your thoughts are on this idea, the more you elaborate hopefully will help me.

Do you think that it would be odd to have the Asari Justicar who over saw Samara's training and conditioning still at the Justicar temple acting as like the senior Justicar, she rarely leaves the Temple and oversees nearly all the training and conditioning?

Thoughts and input please and Thank You?


EDIT Here it is everyone Chapter 5 of Breaking Points is now up, Hope you all enjoy it, yes I know I know not much Samara but that's because it's from Jake's POV,

Writing for Awakening is proving much hard than I'd like, but with luck and hopefully some of your imput on my above part of this post, I'll have the next few chapters of Awakening done, and we'll be closing in on the big meeting point in ME3 i've been building up too.

Modifié par gearseffect, 27 avril 2012 - 10:38 .

[Premier Bromanov]

gearseffect wrote...

Yes I support this I will be taking part in this tomorrow too.

Also I'm expecting that by the end of today next chapter to Breaking Points will be finished and up.

I'm in a bit of a pickle on how to handle the next chapter to Awakening, with things I'd like to take care of in it. Given it's the Chapter I've been planing to have Samara meditating/reflecting on events, mainly how she meet her bond mate, (still don't got a name for her), and the loss of her too.

trying to write it the way I'd like to is proving much harder than I'd have liked, dang it Samara why do we have so little to off of to write Samara the person, with feelings and emotions. Samara the Mother, Samara the lover, Samara the widow.

Anyway I'd like to know what your thoughts are on this idea, the more you elaborate hopefully will help me.

Do you think that it would be odd to have the Asari Justicar who over saw Samara's training and conditioning still at the Justicar temple acting as like the senior Justicar, she rarely leaves the Temple and oversees nearly all the training and conditioning?

Thoughts and input please and Thank You?


EDIT Here it is everyone Chapter 5 of Breaking Points is now up, Hope you all enjoy it, yes I know I know not much Samara but that's because it's from Jake's POV,

Writing for Awakening is proving much hard than I'd like, but with luck and hopefully some of your imput on my above part of this post, I'll have the next few chapters of Awakening done, and we'll be closing in on the big meeting point in ME3 i've been building up too.

Samara's been kicking ass as a Justicar for 400 years, right?  And it's likely that an elder Justicar would be the one who trains Justicar applicants?  If the Justicar who trained Samara was still at a Justicar temple, she'd be around 1000 years old, which is pushing the upper limits of asari lifespan.  Seems to me that asari don't age quite the same, though.  Even if they're 1000, they might still be and look young.  It's the special asari telomeres, you see.

[gearseffect]

After reading your post I think I shall just fallow my gut here. Still not sure of a name for Samara's Bondmate, gonna have to research that some more.


I'm replaying ME3 and I noticed something All Shepards do that The Code may not approve of, They all Rob Credits from all sorts of sources, all Sheps are thieves Oh NO

[warlock22]

gearseffect wrote...

After reading your post I think I shall just fallow my gut here. Still not sure of a name for Samara's Bondmate, gonna have to research that some more.


I'm replaying ME3 and I noticed something All Shepards do that The Code may not approve of, They all Rob Credits from all sorts of sources, all Sheps are thieves Oh NO

It ok all that money is going to a good cause;)

[7Mak]

Samara walks into Purgatory. In one corner is Aria, in the other corner is Renegade Shepard.



Who does she execute first?

[gearseffect]

I think Renegade Shep is so Renagade she has to him, Which I'm never that much of a Renegade. I try and have my My Shep react and do things like I would, So I'm mostly a Paragon. I was however more Renegade in ME2 than in any other game. But that's due to my Shep being a Sole Survivor he wasn't happy about working with Cerberus.

I aslo use quote a few of the renegade interrupts, blowing up the clan Wyloc speaker on Mordin's LM, Shooting Dr. Kenson, and in ME3 I never hesitated to do the Udina Renegade interrupt.

I think Mak is just throwing this out here as more of a creative exercise

Now to answer Mak
Samara puts Ren Shep in stasis than hits Aria with a Reeve, Lift, and Pulls her over the big pit area of the bar. Samara tells everyone to leave the bar. Then she double taps 2 her pistol trigger putting 2 rounds in Aria's chest, then re-aims and double taps again this time putting 2 rounds between Aria's eyes, and lets Aria's lifeless body fall into the giant pit.

Then she turns to Shep, Her Stasis is just starting to wear off. So Samara lifts Shep up over the pit, then hits him/her with Reeve, and Puts 5 rounds in his/her head (making sure his/her kentic barriers are down) then lets Shep's lifeless body fall into the pit.

Samara turns and walks out into the street where all the patrons from the bar fled, and tells them they can now return to the bar and enjoy their evening

[gearseffect]

Hello all, Seems my creative juices have become unblocked MASSIVELY Flooding going here, I expect by Wednesday the next chapter to Awakening will be finished, got a name figured out for Samara's bondmate, got it all figured out and the pieces have fallen into place and it's just spewing fourth fast as I can type

[Cecilia L]

Pretty picture of pretty justicar.

[gearseffect]

Cecilia did you do that pic of Samara? Because man is it great I'm gonna have to look the artist up on dA

[Tyrannosaurus Rex]

Should Shepard have had a option to paragon interupt Samara when she says her goodbye on the Citadel?

[gearseffect]

@ Lizardviking HELLS Yes. Hands down and Shep, should pulled her in close and two should have shared a long deep passionate kiss.

And when Shepard stopped Samara from killing herself when she tilts her head back at Shepard there should have been a Renegade, interrupt to steel a kiss right there in front of her daughter Falere.

Oh before you ask why a Renegade well, because it's symbolic I guess of being fed up with the beating around the bush act. Sometimes ya have to be a little bit daring, roguish, rebel, assertive, ballsy, confident, risky, and know what you want willing to go for it, all a renegade approach to gaining a chicks attention.

SO hells yeah I'd have interrupted the hell out of both of them.

Also I miss Ashira, she was like the life blood of this place, and I'm so sad now that she's MIA. When she comes back I'll give her a big hug. Hopefully all is OK in her RL world.

[Cecilia L]

gearseffect wrote...

Cecilia did you do that pic of Samara? Because man is it great I'm gonna have to look the artist up on dA

I wish.

[Applepie_Svk]

7Mak wrote...

I like Javik.

I think he's more similar to Samara than any other accomplice of Shepard.

Samara live by Code of Asari because she chose it, which means she is honorable warrior leaded by her code ... basíc is punish the wicked and protect the innocents...
Javik is also warrior and his path was from necessity but he is leaded one code, the code of survival which is difference... it means DO WHATHEVER IT TAKES TO SURVIVE or DO WHAT YOU MUST.

The experience through countless battles and their age is sure comparable but their motives are different even if they are leading to one goal: KILL THE REAPERS.
Samara - though always for greater good, innocents and ofc her Justicar code, she can look sometimes ruthless but in her heart she was able to sacrifice herself to save Falere - because code demand it ...
Javik - seek revenge for his death species which is understandable but he is so ruthless in some way that he is easy to forget about this cycle and peoples around him.

[gearseffect]

Cecilia L wrote...

gearseffect wrote...

Cecilia did you do that pic of Samara? Because man is it great I'm gonna have to look the artist up on dA

I wish.

Darn it, I was hoping it was your work.  

Anyway Later today the 4th chapter to Awakening will be published. I've just gotta proof read it a fix any grammer errors I notice. I so agonized writning this chapter, the Author's Notes will detail that all. But as you can clearly see I'm still agonizing over this, and worried about heading into the uncharted areas I go in this chapter, I'm so worried about doing a huge disservice to Samara.

[Ashira Shepard]

I'm sure you've done fine, Gears.

[Tyrannosaurus Rex]

AshiraShepard wrote...

I'm sure you've done fine, Gears.

[Sees Ashira]

[Gasps]

I thought you had left BSN!

[Ashira Shepard]

Nope, I would've left some kind of indication that I had. I'm just a little tired regards mass effect, I'm sure you can understand that

[Tyrannosaurus Rex]

AshiraShepard wrote...

Nope, I would've left some kind of indication that I had. I'm just a little tired regards mass effect, I'm sure you can understand that

Because of the ending and lack of Samara?

[Ashira Shepard]

Both of those, and the manner with which it's being dealt with. I am unfortunately very, very sceptical regards the extended DLC so, there's that.

But I'll try and finish this oneshot so Samara fans have more to read.

[Tyrannosaurus Rex]

AshiraShepard wrote...

Both of those, and the manner with which it's being dealt with. I am unfortunately very, very sceptical regards the extended DLC so, there's that.

But I'll try and finish this oneshot so Samara fans have more to read.

I am already excited for your next one shot.

I know this is a strange thought but I would love to read a oneshot made by you based on this idea. 

[gearseffect]

Lizardviking wrote...

AshiraShepard wrote...

I'm sure you've done fine, Gears.

[Sees Ashira]

[Gasps]

I thought you had left BSN!

Now I'm crying, like really I have tears in my eyes, becuase Lizard's post it, yeah Ashira your like the life blood of this place. You make one post and suddenly every wayword Samaritan is back, why am I crying, maybe it's just hit me that the rot has already set in and the decay runs deep. I don't have high hopes of ME3 being salvaged, it's totally starting to hit me, just how far such a great thing fell.

[Ashira Shepard]

I wouldn't like to think that I'm the "life blood" of the thread. It's only LV that's reacted to me posting anything.

Though I guess give the others time.

*hugs Gears* I know those feels :< at least we have our fanfiction.

Modifié par AshiraShepard, 04 mai 2012 - 04:43 .

[Ashira Shepard]

Lizardviking wrote...
I am already excited for your next one shot.

I know this is a strange thought but I would love to read a oneshot made by you based on this idea. 

Well so much for writer's block.

[Tyrannosaurus Rex]

AshiraShepard wrote...

Lizardviking wrote...
I am already excited for your next one shot.

I know this is a strange thought but I would love to read a oneshot made by you based on this idea. 

Well so much for writer's block.

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That was great! I knew you would pull it off!

And I still can't believe you used my idea! Thank you!

Modifié par Lizardviking, 04 mai 2012 - 09:48 .