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ladyvader

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King Zeel wrote...

KainrycKarr wrote...

King Zeel wrote...

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@Raydiva-  You are quite right about the personal stuff.  My Shep is with Liara and both are very famous and would very much like to keep their private life just that private.



FANGIRLS:


Yep, it's totally reasonable of Bioware to listen to this group.


Why are you posting this in a thread about fanfics?


it amuses me to watch them in their habitat.

You are nothing but a sad little man with nothing better to do than to tick people off.  There must be something missing in your life that you get a kick out of annoying others.  You have trolled many threads in the eight short days you've been here.  First I am a sci-fi nerd now I am a fangirl.  Make up your f'en mind.  I didn't create this thread for trolls like yourself now ****** ****ing off.  Many here write fanfic, which you also seem to have a problem with, so again **** OFF!

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King Zeel wrote...

ladyvader wrote...

@Raydiva-  You are quite right about the personal stuff.  My Shep is with Liara and both are very famous and would very much like to keep their private life just that private.



FANGIRLS:


Yep, it's totally reasonable of Bioware to listen to this group.


Do all of your responses need to be this extreme?

You say a lot of hurtful things on these forums, and because of that you are seen as a troll.  Even though you at times and with certain interpretations bring up valid points most of your posts seem to want to incite people instead of contribute to a real discussion.

Back on topic to the OP, probably ask your shepard about her journey through the galaxy, shepard has seen much more of it than almost anyone else human or alien.  probably also ask what her plans are now that the repears are defeated.

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"What do you think about working with aliens?"
"Why did you recommended Anderson/Udina for the Council?"
"What do you know about TIM?"
"Do you really think Reapers are a threat?"

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Anti-troll tip: Ignore em. Let them place their little post and pretend you never saw it. They feed and thrive on flame filled responses.

BTW one more question: What does Shepard expect from all the nay-sayers if and when the Reapers do attack?

I noticed mentioned that the interview is after ME3, but you might want to consider a two part interview. One between ME2 and ME3, with the second one after ME3. Just a thought.

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Raydiva wrote...

Anti-troll tip: Ignore em. Let them place their little post and pretend you never saw it. They feed and thrive on flame filled responses.

BTW one more question: What does Shepard expect from all the nay-sayers if and when the Reapers do attack?

I noticed mentioned that the interview is after ME3, but you might want to consider a two part interview. One between ME2 and ME3, with the second one after ME3. Just a thought.

That is a thought too.  I've started writing the story today, not done yet.  I won't post it for a few weeks though. 

I usually do a good job of staying way from that guy, but him railroading my thread that had nothing to do with his complaints just ticked me off last night.  I was also prepared for  my rant to get me a 24 ban or a warning at least, but didn't get anything. 

I also think he got the banhammer last night too, because I have not seen him at all today.

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"Have you embraced eternity lately?" sorry had to xD

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Morgalne wrote...

"Have you embraced eternity lately?" sorry had to xD

That something Joker would say.  That guy's mind is always in the gutter. 

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ladyvader wrote...
That something Joker would say. That guy's mind is always in the gutter

So is mine, I can't imagine what it would be like to be a guy and having it worse than it is now *sighs*

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"why did you knock out the repoter for the westboro news?"

if you did that i assume every one did she had it coming.

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You probably thought of this yourself; But you can always listen to interviews made of today's War vets , and modify those questions to fit the Mass effect universe.

War documentaries , Frontline , you'd probably find something on You tube as well.

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Morgalne wrote...

ladyvader wrote...
That something Joker would say. That guy's mind is always in the gutter

So is mine, I can't imagine what it would be like to be a guy and having it worse than it is now *sighs*

My mind is down the gutter and into the sewer.  I am that bad at time. :devil:

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If your interview is going to take place after ME3, I would have Emily address the fact that the action may have slowed down for Shepard (most likely he would have some shoreleave to take).

"How are you adjusting in this post-Reaper world?"
"Are you enjoying this much deserved rest?"

Otherwise I'd have her ask about Shepard the man(or woman), instead of Shepard "The Saviour of the citadel," or "The Lion of the Alliance."

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King Zeel wrote...

ladyvader wrote...

@Raydiva-  You are quite right about the personal stuff.  My Shep is with Liara and both are very famous and would very much like to keep their private life just that private.



FANGIRLS:


Yep, it's totally reasonable of Bioware to listen to this group.


Bioware listens more to FANS then to whiners my dear friend. 

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ladyvader wrote...

I am asking for a little help here.  :happy:

I've been posting a long story I wrote last month.  In this story, I have Shepard agreeing to an exclusive interview with Emily Wong.  Shepard is willing to talk about anything but her personal life.  That is off limits and will cause Shepard to walk out of the interview.

What I would like is people input on questions Emily Wong would ask Shepard.  I did not put the actual interview in the story.  I did that to make the interview a one shot story.  

I'm not looking for smartalic type questions or responses here.  But what people think would be some of the questions Wong would ask Shepard.  I will give credit to those that help me with this.  I can come up with them on my own.  I just thought it would be fun to ask others, so I really could write it like an actual interview

Thanks in advance.


I don't know if it's been mentioned, but here's the first thing that comes to my mind:

"Commander, though you are a Spectre you still hold an officer's commission in the Alliance military.  Has this caused any conflict of loyalties for you?  If you ever had to choose between serving the Council and serving the Alliance military, which would you choose?"

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King Zeel wrote...

ladyvader wrote...

@Raydiva-  You are quite right about the personal stuff.  My Shep is with Liara and both are very famous and would very much like to keep their private life just that private.



FANGIRLS:


Yep, it's totally reasonable of Bioware to listen to this group.


Yeah, bro. They should totally listen to your ass instead, since you love the game and the universe so much. I mean, why wouldn't they take your routinely sexist, whiny, and generally unhelpful criticism about anything and everything to do with the universe they created totally to heart?

Gosh, you don't like Garrus and Tali? Make them eat a bullet in your game and get on with your life. That is an option, you know. Unlike many games, you're not "forced" to endure the characters you don't like. Not only can you simply choose not to recruit them most of the time, but failing that you can just leave them on the Normandy and never talk to them, ever. When Mass Effect 3 comes out, you can even ensure that they won't appear in your game! 

What's that? You don't like people who like the same videogames you do, simply because they have a different set of genitals and are thus weird and freaky? 
I certainly do feel sorry for you, "King" Zeel. I hope one day you come to terms with the incredible damage some nerdy girl must have inflicted upon you at some point in your life, and you learn from it and move on.

Let people nerd in peace, dude.

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Don't bait the troll...his trolling is based on movement.

Modifié par Tannerblackbird, 30 juin 2011 - 12:43 .


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Roachbugg wrote...

"why did you knock out the repoter for the westboro news?"

if you did that i assume every one did she had it coming.


answer: Westboro is a word that has gone down in history as a symbol of the reactionary , backward mentality of the USA. teehee.

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you could ask what has been his feelings toward the order of the Justicar , given they are a version of the romantic Knight Errant . And does Shep consider him/herself as also a kind of knight errant ? 

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jamesp81 wrote...

ladyvader wrote...

I am asking for a little help here.  :happy:

I've been posting a long story I wrote last month.  In this story, I have Shepard agreeing to an exclusive interview with Emily Wong.  Shepard is willing to talk about anything but her personal life.  That is off limits and will cause Shepard to walk out of the interview.

What I would like is people input on questions Emily Wong would ask Shepard.  I did not put the actual interview in the story.  I did that to make the interview a one shot story.  

I'm not looking for smartalic type questions or responses here.  But what people think would be some of the questions Wong would ask Shepard.  I will give credit to those that help me with this.  I can come up with them on my own.  I just thought it would be fun to ask others, so I really could write it like an actual interview

Thanks in advance.


I don't know if it's been mentioned, but here's the first thing that comes to my mind:

"Commander, though you are a Spectre you still hold an officer's commission in the Alliance military.  Has this caused any conflict of loyalties for you?  If you ever had to choose between serving the Council and serving the Alliance military, which would you choose?"

That's a good one too.   Might use it, thanks.   But then after reading it again, it seems like a al-Jilani type question that she would use at bait.  I have Wong being the oppisite of our favorite punching bag.  :devil:

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Question 1 (in fact there are a lot of questions about the same thing lol): "What do you feel about the unique experience of dying and getting back to tell the story? Do you think you deserved that chance? Was there a moment in which you thought that it would be better if you just stayed dead?" (I don't think that this one is a personal matter, since it's very relevant to the plot)

Question 2: "Do you have any regrets?"

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ladyvader wrote...

jamesp81 wrote...

ladyvader wrote...

I am asking for a little help here.  :happy:

I've been posting a long story I wrote last month.  In this story, I have Shepard agreeing to an exclusive interview with Emily Wong.  Shepard is willing to talk about anything but her personal life.  That is off limits and will cause Shepard to walk out of the interview.

What I would like is people input on questions Emily Wong would ask Shepard.  I did not put the actual interview in the story.  I did that to make the interview a one shot story.  

I'm not looking for smartalic type questions or responses here.  But what people think would be some of the questions Wong would ask Shepard.  I will give credit to those that help me with this.  I can come up with them on my own.  I just thought it would be fun to ask others, so I really could write it like an actual interview

Thanks in advance.


I don't know if it's been mentioned, but here's the first thing that comes to my mind:

"Commander, though you are a Spectre you still hold an officer's commission in the Alliance military.  Has this caused any conflict of loyalties for you?  If you ever had to choose between serving the Council and serving the Alliance military, which would you choose?"

That's a good one too.   Might use it, thanks.   But then after reading it again, it seems like a al-Jilani type question that she would use at bait.  I have Wong being the oppisite of our favorite punching bag.  :devil:


Yeah, I was trying to word so it wasn't punch-worthy, but I don't think I accomplished it.  It really is a good question, but I'm not sure how to word so it doesn't come off as an al-Jilani kind of question.

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jamesp81 wrote...

Yeah, I was trying to word so it wasn't punch-worthy, but I don't think I accomplished it.  It really is a good question, but I'm not sure how to word so it doesn't come off as an al-Jilani kind of question.

That is the tricky part.  I have two pages written, but not the actual interview just yet.  Still working on a Q and A, so I can put that down, but I have the ground work in place.  It is a good question, maybe I will rework it some and see if I can get it to fit. 

Like I said in my OP, I will give credit to those that gave questions that I use in the story.  So, if I do use it, you will get the credit.  I just think it's neat to ask for help in this manner and I appreicate the imput I have gotten.  Except for King Zeel's.  Everyone else has been helpful.

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The Questions depend on Emily's motivation for the interview. I she trying to bait Shepard, or is she making a genuine attempt to learn about her?

Anyway, here's a few suggestions off the top of my head:
1. How does it feel to be the greatest hero in the galaxy?

2. In your missions for the Alliance, and for the Citadel Council, you've killed a lot. Machines, AI, aliens but also people. Not to say that we're ungrateful, we wouldn't be alive today if you hadn't defeated Sovereign, and the Reapers. But does all that killing... all those deaths, do they ever weigh on your conscience? If so, how do you deal with it?

or a similar question: In your Mission to defeat the reapers, you've fought, you've killed, and you've made a lot of sacrifices- the destruction of the Batarian colonies strikes me as the biggest example. But, looking back on it all now, tell me... was it worth it?

3. How do you reconcile your work as Commander Shepard the Hero or Soldier, with Shepard, the everyday Woman?

4. There must be some days when you think... I've had it! The Galaxy can look after itself for now, I have my own needs!
Have you reached that point? Or how will you know when you're there?

Not sure if I've breached your "nothing personal" rule for the interview, but I think its important to humanise Shepard.
Also, can you please please... pleeeeeeeeease tell me when you're going to post this?
With your permission, I would love to put part of your interview into my own fanfic.
If you do, I'll send you a copy of my draft. Im hoping to nail it down as part of Nanowrimo.

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As a finisher she should so much ask Shep for a date Image IPB

Modifié par Knight of Dane, 20 août 2011 - 02:34 .


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Wong: So Commander Shepard, whats really your favorite store on the Citadel?
[Shepard-ryuken]

Wong: is that your real hair color?
[Shepard-ryuken]

Wong: is it true you left a human on virmire just to keep your asari g/f happy?
[Shepard-ryuken]

Wong: ?!?
[Shepard-ryuken]

[edit] obviously the answers arent serious [ok, neither are the last 2 questions. or the 2nd one.. ok so maybe im not takin this too seriously] but i do seriously like reading your fanfic. tempted to do the same but i just cant commit, keep up the good work ladyvader

Modifié par Red Son Rising, 20 août 2011 - 03:05 .


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Knight of Dane wrote...

As a finisher she should so much ask Shep for a date Image IPB

Nah, Wong knows Shepard is with someone.  She knows it's an asari, but didn't see who.

FYI-This story is written and posted.  Here's the link.

Thanks to those that helped out.

@Red Son Rising-Thanks.  I glad you're enjoying my writing.  I'm working on something new, but it's turning into a complete cluster of a mess.  I'll keep going with it, but the edit is going to be a pain in the behind.

Modifié par ladyvader, 20 août 2011 - 04:04 .