JamieCOTC wrote...
OP is good, very reminiscent of the gatekeeper line in the "Thor" movie. I'd like a little bit of tension to linger between the two, not for the whole game, but longer than the first conversation. VS called Shepard a traitor. That cuts pretty deep.
^This.
And nice thread Nightwing.
I was disgruntled after that Horizon hooha. First off, the way it was written, my Shep had no lines even worth saying. Kaidan didn't want to hear it anyway, and was completely prepared to believe all the circumstantial stuff w/out even hearing her side of the story.
I'm not saying he should have hopped on the Normandy and taken off w/Cerberus. But he should have given her the benefit of the doubt, or maybe just stfu and listened. He's got his mind made up.
I know, poor Kaidan was in shock......yeah, well I bet Shep was pretty shocked , too, to wake up from the dead and be working for Cerberus.
So, yes, a lil tension...but laced through the first parts of the game, or so in their convo.s. Not all in one big convo.
And last thing I want is for them to be like it's all good..no biggie, bro. Some good romantic and sexual tension is the heart of a successful romance plot.
PLz BW, gimme more than 2 options that say either..."you had your chance and blew it!" or, "It's okay, honey..derp"
At least a "Lemme think about it..and we'll see" type of option.
Basically Kaidan pulled a Jack.."F. U...but thnx for asking." He's so worried she's being manipulated by Cerberus and in dangerous waters....but then he leaves..saying F.U...and be careful.