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[Ghost Lightning]

kk

[King Gigglez]

Anyway, does anypony want to read any of my stories? I need some more critiquing done and what not. I also wanna know which ones I should continue, if I should continue any of them.

[King Gigglez]

These are on Fim Fiction and password hidden

Competitions: PW = Blue Horizon
http://www.fimfictio.../chapter/126982 (Chapter 1)
http://www.fimfictio.../chapter/127131 (Chapter 2, still not done, but close.)

Commanders: PW = Steel's Arc
http://www.fimfictio.../chapter/138394 (Chapter 1, Hasn't been edited yet)

Hope you like them

Modifié par King Gigglez, 13 août 2012 - 09:06 .

[King Gigglez]

EntropicAngel wrote...

Ah, that stinks, I'm only here on BSN.

Hopefully someone else can give them a look-see.

you don't need to be a member of FimFiction to read them, you just gotta use the password to view it

[Lukeskymac]

http://www.equestria...son-3-soon.html

[Lukeskymac]

Please next week, please next week...

[King Gigglez]

10 Bits says it starts on September 10th, that is when my birthday is!

[LPPrince]

As long as it starts, jeez.

[Valikdu]

I call them combos.

[LPPrince]

I'm dying to write so much that I think I'm just gonna get started with a little something.

Gonna be hard as hell to get in the groove I usually am in when I write(its been a while) but once I get started, phew. Good luck stopping me.

[King Gigglez]

EntropicAngel wrote...

Gigglez, what kind of criticism are you looking for?

Any and All, I also want people to want to read it... I figured that I will publish it once I get a cover art image drawn... but who knows, only a few people who have read it have enjoyed it... but they haven't compelled me to write it so... I haven't

[Volus Warlord]

King Gigglez wrote...

EntropicAngel wrote...

Gigglez, what kind of criticism are you looking for?

Any and All, I also want people to want to read it... I figured that I will publish it once I get a cover art image drawn... but who knows, only a few people who have read it have enjoyed it... but they haven't compelled me to write it so... I haven't

I could give very mean, awful, personal criticisms if you want.

[King Gigglez]

Volus Warlord wrote...

King Gigglez wrote...

EntropicAngel wrote...

Gigglez, what kind of criticism are you looking for?

Any and All, I also want people to want to read it... I figured that I will publish it once I get a cover art image drawn... but who knows, only a few people who have read it have enjoyed it... but they haven't compelled me to write it so... I haven't

I could give very mean, awful, personal criticisms if you want.

Go for it, I don't have anything better to do.

[King Gigglez]

EntropicAngel wrote...

end of first paragraph - "already forgotten the town in which started"

Chapter 2 - about two thirds in: "Applejack chuckles shyly" - wrong tense.

Seems like a lotta vaguely sexual stuff, perhaps that's just me.


Outside of that, it seems fine. First story, anyway.

You forgot the town in which it started? I never gave a town for where it started. 
And Chapter 2 hasn't been fully edited or finished so that is why there are some mistakes.

Also, sexual stuff... perhaps I have never been good with sexual stuff but I wanted to make it slightly humourous. the next story is way different. I hope...

[Lukeskymac]

King Gigglez wrote...

10 Bits says it starts on September 10th, that is when my birthday is!

Don't they air new episodes on saturday mornigns (rethorical, of course they do)? It's either next week, 1st, 8th or 15th

[King Gigglez]

Lukeskymac wrote...

King Gigglez wrote...

10 Bits says it starts on September 10th, that is when my birthday is!

Don't they air new episodes on saturday mornigns (rethorical, of course they do)? It's either next week, 1st, 8th or 15th

Shut Up >.< I was wanting the series to start in prime time! So ... like... Monday at 8 or 9 pm! xD 

[LPPrince]

Getting my story up on EQD is gonna be one hell of an uphill battle.

But I'd be happy just to finish it so we'll see what happens.

Twas an uphill battle for Kkat but look where that went. /FoE

[King Gigglez]

LPPrince wrote...

Getting my story up on EQD is gonna be one hell of an uphill battle.

But I'd be happy just to finish it so we'll see what happens.

Twas an uphill battle for Kkat but look where that went. /FoE

Good luck writing a story of that calibur! Makes me wanna start my Daring Do adventure... Daring Do, and the crazy Nightmare Night Party! Or something, I totally forget the title.

[Volus Warlord]

EntropicAngel wrote...

King Gigglez wrote...

You forgot the town in which it started? I never gave a town for where it started. 
And Chapter 2 hasn't been fully edited or finished so that is why there are some mistakes.

Also, sexual stuff... perhaps I have never been good with sexual stuff but I wanted to make it slightly humourous. the next story is way different. I hope...

No, that very first part is a typo. it should say "the town in which I started."